Dhundlae aks
thanks to all the readers ..
sorry I guess the FF is really taking twists & turns thats not really acceptable
but me just scared.. hope u all bare with me..
plz plz
I am trying to type as much as I could so that finish this...FF
but .. yaar there is so much left..
I know it hurts to see all this misunderstanding etc etc..
I will not defend any one of justify anything..
I am trying to write get a plot.. that is dhundlae aks..
people with two similar charaters.. how they don't understand eachother...
like maan misunderstands geet
even geet misunderstands him
but they understand eachother in their own sweet way.
& when they do... then wat happens.. !!!
is a bigger question
????
It is the age they say..
It is the age that makes you so vulnerable
Yet, it is the same age that makes you arrogant, rude and angry
It is the age that makes you do things that go way beyond your control
Yet, it is the same age that forces you to control yourself
It is the age that takes you high on your emotions
And yet it is the age that brings you crashing down the next moment
It is the age when you are getting to know about others around you
Yet, it is the same age when you ignore everything about yourself
It is the age when you see the world only through your eyes
Yet, it is the same age when you fail to see within the other person's soul
It is the age when you love the other person irrevocably
Yet, it is the age when you fail to recognize the other person's love for you
It is the age that burns your soul with deep jealousy
Yet, it is the same age when you want to hurt the other person in your jealousy
It is the age that makes you do all that you desire
Yet, it is the same age which makes you freeze in your fear
It is the age when you say something with your words
Yet, it is the same age which makes you act out the opposite of your words
It is the age that makes you comfort the other person when they are hurting
Yet, it is the same age when you cannot comfort yourself when hurt
It is the age when you wish your love would love you back
Yet, it is the age when you sacrifice your love for someone else
It is the age they say..
It is the age when you act like a child
Yet, it is the age when you act with the maturity of an adult
It is the age..
The age of Maan and Geet
The age of Puchki and Mistimia.
Love
Rachana
Karan was dam sure of their uncooked story but couldn't help using her to jalawophy Maan. He had enough of his continuously snubbing him & Geet was his trump card.
It was a week now. Geet was spending a lot more time doing everything else. Studying hard for the 4th term exams. She really didn't have to but she did. Armaan spend a lot time with her knowing there was something bothering her. Or is it her new relation with Karan he wondered, & never approved of it though. he did every thing to keep her out of Karan's reach😆😆😆
In office things were getting little odd with Nt & Dev.
Even yash realized with all that gossips, that evening was bad when Maan came back home only to hear Yash & Dev having an heated up conversation. It was unlike them.. its always he. Dad could never get angry on Dev. He slowly peeped & was shocked to hear it was abt a girl dad was getting so furious abt. He tiptoed back to daadi's room.. & enquired wat happened.
Daadi sighed... Dev loves some one in office I think
Maan was super excited .. really!!!!???
Daadi was not happy the way things were happening in the office especially yash & Dev last few days.
Maan ' phir problem kya hain?
Daadi ' yash not liking ki office ke staff ke saat aisen
Maan was little confused here ' bro loves her right
Daadi ' yash ko tum jaanthe ho na
Maan was not sure now.. he thought dad & mom had a love marriage then why should he be having problem with devs love marriage.
It was getting really disturbing for Maan with Geet behaving odd & this non- cordial environment at home.. kind of some one disturbing his just perfect life. He got really stressed coming back home to dad & Dev not in terms. Daadi staying disturbed kind of having a tiny miny health issues, this was not his life, everything around him was so rosy & perfect & all of sudden things seem to turn upside down. Ghar main problem, college main problem.. he just hated this. He just wanted to go out.. get drunk..he didn't want to go to his usual place. He just wanted be in a new place.. he had couple of drinks.. called raj & cribbed abt his horriable life.
Rajs first question was how many down
Maan laughed loud.. don't worry I am not drunk today.. waisen bhi wo nahi aayegi mujhe teren ghar drop karne keliyen. ..before he completed that sentence he saw her with karan in the disc.
Dam..
raj smirked I guess she is there
Maan ' she is with her so called BF.. jealousy was in his every breath.
raj was bit confused now.. he knew she can't be with some one..
Maan ' ok bye.. I need to get going
raj ' kyun kya huwa
Maan ' I don't plan to get totally drunk watching her with that jerk Karan, main kuch kar donga us karan ko
raj ' then don't let her
Maan ' wo naraz hain mujhe se
just then karan came around Maan, while Geet was not noticing.. how those pair of eyes were glaring at her.
Karan ' umm I can smell comething burning
Maan said bye to karan finishing his drink.
Karan ' kya huwa? Don't u want to talk to her today
Maan held his collar ' keep her out of all this
karan ' oops ...main dar gaya he mocked
Maan knew karan was pulling him into an argument & he was in no mood for all that. He has already had enough for the week. He just shook his head & decided to leave.
Karan just couldn't let it be.. ' want to see she will be mine tonight he teased
Maan just punched straight into his stomach. The impact was bad.. he almost puked blood. ..
Maan immediately.. made him stand up.. wiping his face with his shirt.. just leave her out
karan flinched his fist angrily..still in pain.. abhi thak tho sab mazak tha Maan .. now u wait & watch
Maan pulled him closer holding his collar groaning into his ear tu use choo bhi nahi sakta.. she won't let u
karan pulled away.. aisen yah.. waisen.. she will be mine aur tu kuch nahi kar payega
Maan hit the table angrily seeing karan walking towards Geet with a drink.
Maan immediately reached to stop Geet from drinking that drink.
Geet looked away angrily.. I told u to stay away from our matters.. Sir!!!
Maan pulled her closer ' tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Geet pulled away ' kya samjh nahi rahi hoon
Maan ' just don't drink that
he couldn't even voice out his intentions, it was so nasty. Geet plz.. he held her arm tightly.
Geet couldn't take him man handling every where just for no reason.. for god sake Maan Sir. He is my BF.. we r adults & we know wat we r doing. U really don't have to embarrass us all the time.
Every one turned to look at them, she was evidently loud. So loud & clear that the bouncers came & dragged Maan out.
All she could do was look away in disgust drinking that drink. Though her heart hated every bit of wat she was doing shouting at him.. humilating him.. .
Well that was a big hit to maan's ego!!! be thrown out of a disc.. oops.. that too every one laughing at him ..calling him a loser. Even then.. all he could do was wait out side the disc.. for her. Make sure she was fine. He didn't know why he was doing this but he had to. He just couldn't let alone there with karan cooking up mean intentions in his mind. he hated himself sitting there & waiting for.. why couldn't he just leave.. dam.. he so much hated himsefl.. & her more to make him so hopelessly helpless.
Precap
oops karan in geets flat
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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