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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello hello Nandakisor' another attempt for an OS... Precap se Promo tak ... he he😆

I am assuming that the engagement is tomorrow.. that makes it easier for me.. nahin to OS nahin SS ban jata 😃

So the scene starts from the precap of course...😛

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Arnav : Sorry... meri vajah se aapki shadi tooti'. 😭

Payal : It's ok Arnav Ji' lekin aapko sorry Khushi ko bolna chahiye' kyunki hamari shadi tootne ke liye sabhi ne yahan tak ki Amma aur Buaji ne bhi ussi ko zimmedaar theharaya tha .. aur to aur jab aapne who photos TV pe diye' tab to uss bechari pe musibat hi toot padi.. kuchh gundo ne uss ke sath badtamizi bhi ki' 😭

Arnav : KYA !!!! (*he is angry on himself and closes his eyes*)😡

Payal : Agar wahan Snake Ji nahin aate to pata nahin kya ho jata (* I will continue to call him Snake😛😆*)

Arnav: Lekin Khushi ne to kabhi kuchh...😕

Payal : ...kuch nahin bataya...aisi hi hai hamari Khushi... apni hasi ke peeche bade se bada dukh chhupa leti hai... lekin hum jante hain.. who apni Sagaai se bhi Khush nahin hai... 😭

Arnav : (*batti jali😉*) Agar khush nahin hai to kyun sagaai ki (*Arnav Babu back to same question😆*)

Payal : Buaji ne zabardasti karwayi ye kehkar ki Babuji bhi yahin chahte hain (*another tight slap on her rotund face😡*)...Diwali ke agle din Babuji ki tabiyat bahut kharab ho gayi thi.. aur issi dabav mein aakar Khushi ne haan ki... !😭

Arnav leaves the place but with a strange happiness in his heart'😳

He sees Khushi waiting for an auto (*before leaving Anjali asked her to come to RM to get back to the engagement preps as it's just tomorrow*)

Arnav: Khushi mere sath chalo.😳

Khushi: nahin hum chale jayenge.

Arnav: Main keh raha hoon na main ghar hi ja raha hoon .. mere sath chalo .. (*slight irritated tone*)

Khushi: Aap ek "praamise" kijiye... hum tabhi chalenge aapke sath...

Arnav: WHAT.. what promise..?

Khushi: Yahi ki agar aapko raste mein humpe gussa aa jaaye.. tab aap humein aisi jagah GET OUT karenge.. jahan humein aasani se auto mil jaye' 🤣

Arnav: SHUT UP AND SIT IN THE CAR (*hawtie with SEXY accent😳😳*)

Khushi giggles and they both go to RM.

In RM... they see an over enthusiastic and over excited LA and Anjali ... and immediately Khushi starts feeling bad and starts avoiding Arnav. Arnav tries hard to talk to her but fails !!!

WOH DIN

Next day .. Arnav is pacing furiously in his room as he could not talk to Khushi at all. And he is not able to understand what he should do now!

All RM family is gathered in the living room all set for engagement and waiting for the guests. Anjali realizes something and pats her forehead...

Anjali : Hey Bhagwan ! Hum rings to room mein hi bhool gaye. Who dresser pe padi hain.. hum leke aate hain'!

Khushi: Anjali Ji ... hum le aate hain...!

Anjali's room... Khushi enters and looks for the dresser. She spots the rings but even before that she sees a photo of SNAKE AND ANJALI behind the door (*I noticed this photo on the diwali epi when Snake was hiding under the red blanket🤢*) .. She is stunned and not able to process this info.. Just then the Bathroom door opens and Snake comes out. Both are dumb-founded seeing each other. But Khushi soon regains her senses and slaps him hard across his face...😡

Khushi: Aapne shadi-shuda hoke bhi humse rishta joda' aur do parivaron ko dhokha diya.. (*throws her engagement ring*)

She runs away from there.. runs away from RM.. she just wants to run away from all this.. she wants desperately someone to tell her that all this was a dream... A VERY BAD DREAM !!!😭

Snake follows her... !!!

Few minutes after Khushi leaves RM.. Guptas come to RM.

Payal : Anjali Ji.. Khushi kahan hai'?

Anjali: Pata nahin .. who rings lene gayi thi.. lekin achanak kahin chali gayi.. apna phone bhi yahi chhod gayi hain.. !!!😕

In the meantime.. Arnav decides to call off the engagement👍🏼 and comes down... but sees everyone worried about Khushi.

Arnav: Don't worry..! I will go and look out for her and bring her back. 😉

Khushi reaches home and cries in front of her DM. Suddenly lights are gone (*delhi has power failure yaar😃*) .. She gets scared and lightens as many candles as possible and in the candle lights she sees the person who she is going to hate from the core of her heart for the rest of her life.. SNAKE with all his psycho looks...🤢🤢🤢 !

Snake : Khushi ji.. aapne humein kuch kehne hi nahin diya... (*with an evil snare*)

Khushi: Aap.. aap yahan kya kar rahe hain... chale jaiye yahan se.. humein aapki shakal se bhi nafrat hai.. !!!

Snake: tch tch.. Khushi ji... aapko paane ke liye humne kya kuch nahin kiya.. aur aap humein jane ke liye keh rahi hain.. ! Shadi na huyi to na sahi.. hum aapko abhi apna bana lenge.. !!!

Khushi: KYA BAKWAAS KAR RAHE HAIN AAP ...HOSH MEIN TO HAIN... ABHI AUR ISSI WAQT YAHA SE DAFAA HO JAIYE... !!!

Snake : (*evilly laughs*) and advances towards her...

Arnav is driving frantically. He is not able to understand why Khushi left RM so abruptly !!! He reaches at Khushi's place and sees the whole place is dark.😲

Arnav : Ye lights ko kya hua... DAMN IT... Khushi is scared of darkness.. (*he is DAMN WORRIED NOW*)

He reaches on the main door only to hear few muffled noises followed by a loud "BACHAO"'

Arnav : WHAT THE F%^$ !!! Ye to Khushi ki aawaz hai... 😕

And then within fraction of a second he breaks open the door. He sees a man on top of a struggling and crying Khushi. He pounces upon the man.. grabs his collar... spins him around .. LIGHTS ARE BACK!!! He comes face 2 face with NONE OTHER THAN his SNAKE Jijaji !!!😲

Both are flabbergasted!!! Seeing Snake... Arnav's grip slackens... Snake takes advantage of this , pushes Arnav and flees from there!!!

Before Arnav could understand this whole thing.. Khushi comes running to him and HUGs him tightly.. she is crying inconsolably..😭 she is visibly shaken with this incident !!!

Arnav is trying to comfort her while hugging her tightly (*yeah.. thankfully this time he hugs her back😳😳*). But at the same time his head is spinning with all sorts of questions'😕

  • Did he really see his Jijaji???
  • Was his Jijaji trying to molest Khushi???
  • Was he the same person who his sister worships???
  • Was he the same person who he respects truly???
  • What is the meaning of all this???

Before he could blurt out any of these questions at Khushi.. he finds Khushi's body go limp...Khushi faints in his arms... !!!!!!!

******************************THE END************************************************

Chalo chalo... itna paisa mein itnaich milenga... 😆

Sorry for this long torture... please press LIKE and comment too... For the first time I am so happy that we do not have a DISLIKE button... heee heee...🤣

Cheers,

Monsi

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Khushi: Yahi ki agar aapko raste mein humpe gussa aa jaaye.. tab aap humein aisi jagah GET OUT karenge.. jahan humein aasani se auto mil jaye' 🤣

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL I hope the creatives use this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Way to go Monsi!!
Loved it.
Brilliantly written dear!
⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I wish at least the first part about Payal telling Arnav about Khushi happens in the show 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dii.. Loved the OS!!
Arnav to the rescue!!
Yippeee!!😃

Snakeji goes down down down!😆
Edited by pinky0902 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sankeji yeh aap kya kardiya?!? 🤣 aap toh yamraj ke saath hona chahiye tha 🤣

too hilarious monsiji & fabulous too 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A complaint first - pm kyun nahi kiya

Now to d os itne paise mein bahut kuch mil gaya.😆

Nice to see u r intact wid d characters d way dey r. Snakeji was at his best. (i mean worst)

Arnavji came to know d whole truth. Khushi slapping snakeji, best part. Yeh feeling hi hatke hai.

Arnav rescue mission, mind blowing. Keep dem coming.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mysterygirl123

Khushi: Yahi ki agar aapko raste mein humpe gussa aa jaaye.. tab aap humein aisi jagah GET OUT karenge.. jahan humein aasani se auto mil jaye' 🤣

🤣 I hope the creatives use this



Thanks for your comments MysteryGirl123 😃
Trying to keep Khushi's wittiness intact 😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Khushi faints in his arms..Arnav gazes at her , lost in her glowing face * Power cut jo hai, tho isski chamaktha chehra is lighting up the room** ..he brushes off few hairs from her face , which was preventing him from properly ogling... continues to hold her...then realizing that he may get spinal problems if he continued to hold n stand ..

Arnav lifts her in his arms..The Dupatta has grown miraculously... Arnav walks slooowly..MM by MM to wards Khushi's star bhari bed ... all the while * Rub away, rub away beats playing in the BG**..he gently places Khushi on the bed and moves back only to come to sudden halt as Khushi has firmly held onto Arnav's shirt ...** Bechari ko iss skinny hunk main bharosa nahi hai ** ...A smiling Arnav unclasps her hand, holds it briefly in his hand, kisses it and leaves for Kitchen ...


Arnav soon is prepping Jalebies..the surefire way of reviving Khushi ..sure enuf Khushi awakens ..and narrates her ordeal to Arnav ..A seething Arnav decides that Shyam shud be punished ..he takes out his shafari and chases Shyamu on the deserted streets of Delhi..while escaping from the wrath of Arnav, shyamu comes in front of the Auto and is injured ...

Shyam is taken to Hospital where he is diagnosed as having gone into Sabzi state .. Cry baby anjali breaksdown and begins to flood..the hosp uses her tears to replenish their water tanks ...and decide to keep Shyam in permanent veggie state to ensure never ending water supply !!


Sorry..could not help but add to it..😆😆


Lovely..Mon Jaan.. enjoyed the OS very much..
Edited by tanthya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks 😛

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Way to go Monsi!!

Loved it.
Brilliantly written dear!
⭐️



Thanks FebruaryFlower... I really like your UserId 😊

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