A Cinderella Story???...MG ff part 8 updated - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 6 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
really romantic...
maan hv to really learn romance... otherwise geet ll jst kick his ass n throw hm outta hr lf... he he he he
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Posted: 13 years ago
Veryyy Funnyyy 😆😎 and cool 👏
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Waiting...
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😊 Sweet 👏
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Hey galz here s d 7th part of Cinderella... i know i'm updating me aftr ages.. but wat 2 do? i was busy wd my xams.. hope u lyk it.. plz do hit d like button n post a cmnt...

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part 7: a day with Romeo n Juliet



Recap: Armaan and Ridhima are still luking into each other's eyes. Geet and Maan looked at each other.. Maan was thinking Huh What The Hell??? Geet was thinking How Romantic...

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Geet: skip the introduction part. Tell us how you met?

Armaan: mai Basket ball khel raha tha' then I saw her in a pink track suit.. aur usse'

Maan: aur usse paheli baar dekhte hi tumhe pyar ho gaya.. are you guys teenagers?

Geet: pyar me aisa hota hai' tum to bilkul '. Uff jane do'

Ridhima: ha' pyar me to chamatkar hota hai.. hai na Amaan dear.. my kuchi ki.[she pulled Armaan's cheek]

Armaan: ha meri puchi ku.. [he pulled her cheek too] and in our case it wasn't love at first site. I saw her from behind first' n I feel it from then Ridhima is my janam janam ka saathi'

Ridhima: n when I heard his voice calling me "hey miss" I felt my knight has came in shining armor to save me from this cruel world.

She said in a super nautanki way.

Maan buried his face in his hands.

Maan: kisike paas sar dard ka goli hai kya?

Geet elbowed him.. "kitni pyari love story hai' hai na?" she forced a smile. Now she is also feeling the same as Maan. Maan forced a smile back. Now they know why Samrat and Dev ran away like this.

After a looong 3 years which seemed to them 3 years their love story ended. But sadly next 2 more days were waiting for them.

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Next Day

Four of them went for a short Delhi tour.

Armaan and Ridhima were glued to each other all the day. Both wore green top a big red heart was painted on the shirt. At the back of Ridhima's shirt was written he is my boyfriend and at the back of Armaan's shirt was written she is my girlfriend.

Armaan and Ridhima were lost in their own world. Maan and Geet didn't see a man who didn't notice Armaan and Ridhima's super romantic attitude and stopped to see the drama.

Bechara Maan and Geet what could they do except pretending they don't know them. But their tries go in vane.

At Red Fort:

Ridhima: wow ye red forthai' bahot khub surat hai..

Armaan: ye to kuch bhi nahi Ridhima.. mai tumhare liye isse bhi khub surat ek fortbana dunga' Ridhima Fort.

Ridhima: Aw' sachme?

Armaan: tumhare liye kuch bhi meri jaan..

Ridhima: aur uss fortke samne ek bada sa gate bhi hoga.. The Armaan Gate..

Maan and Geet looked at each other helplessly and sighed.

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Maan and Geet were walking..

Geet: Now I know Samrat and Dev bhag kyu gaya' wo bhi in speed of tornado.. wo log to pitega'mujhe pehle se bataya kyun nahi

Maan: next time se mai bhi bhaag raha hoon'

Geet: are tum sirf dust danav hi nahi selfish danav bhi ho..

Maan: Kyu? Ab maine kya kia?

Geet: akele hi bhag jaoge? Mujhe chod kar?

Maan: maaf kar do princess.. main apko sabse chupa ke bhaga ke le jaunga..

Geet looked at her. For a moment they were lost in each other but came back to their sense soon.

Geet: bas bas drama bandh karo' aise baat kar rahe ho jaise mai Cinderella n u r Prince Charming..

They both smiled..

Geet[self thot]: jitna khadus sochti thi utna bhi nahi hai'

Maan[self thot]: utni bhi ziddi nahi hai.. she is sweet'

They were lost in their own thaught they heard Armaan and Ridhima shouting "GEEET'. MAAAN"

Geet: ab ye bhagne ka time hai'

But they were too late.. they caught them'

Armaan: main Ridhima ko jo ki duniya ki sabse khub surat ladki hgai usse yeh red roses de raha hoon kyu ki usse red roses bahot pasand hai..

He handed Ridhima the brunch of Roses he was carrying..

Ridhima: Armaan jo ki duniya k sabse aacha admi hai usne mujhe ye roses di.. Geet.. Maan you are witness of this'

Maan n Geetwanted to burry them in earth then n there.

Geet: I'm hungry.. lets go to the hotel nearby..

Maanand Geet almost ran from the place.. Cause so many people were watching them weirdly.

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At Hotel

Armaan and Ridhima took the same dish..

Ridhima: wow noodles' I love it'

Armaan: really? Toh phir ajse noodles ka naam mere liye Ridhima hai..

Ridhima: Armaan open ur mouth.. aaa

Armaan: aaa

Ridhima put noodles into his mouth..

Armaan: now my turn' open your mouth aaa'

They were going on..

Maan: please stop' don't do this' it's so embarrassing. Sab log ghum ghum ke dekh rahe hai'

Armaan: itni himmat ke meri Ridhima ko ghum ghum ke dekhe.. kaun hai wo?

Ridhima: aur hum log aisa kya kar rahe hai?

Geet: let me show u.. [she turned to Maan with the fork in her handand drag Maan close by his left arm]' mu kholo Maan aaa

She was just going to make Maan eat a sound stopped her..

"Geet didi'."

She turned back to see Pariand Gunjan were standing there with shocking expression on their faces..

Pari: Geet didi ye ap kya kar rahe hai?

Geet: are Pari Gunjan tum log yaha' y don't u join us?

GUnjan: No Geet didi not today.. we are in hurry'

They had a strange expression on their face. Geet got it clearly what they are thinking.

Geet: suno jot tum dono soch rahe ho waisa.. [Geet realized they have gone] waisa kuch bhi nahi hai [she sighed]

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Finally the day arrived when Armaan and Ridhima left Delhi.. Maan was going to drop Geet to her home after their flight took off'

Geet: Tired?

Maan bring out his laptop' "I always watch this whenever I feel tired and bore.."

Maan smiled..

Geet: Oh! Shinchan I loved it' well u r not khadus at all..

Maan: really? U think so? [Maan smiled]

Geet: hmm. Khadus ppl can't like Shinchan...[Geet smiled]...Sinchan is the cutest kid ever... you know maine to thik kar liya hai I will name my 1st baby 'Sinchan'... accha hai na??

She asked enthusiastically and innocently. Maan couldn't stop smiling.. He nodded in yes.

They again concentrated in the show.There were two characters named Mitchi and Yoshorin were blinking there eyes and doing romance in front of public..

Yoshirin: tum duniya ki sabse khub surat ladki ho..

Mitchi: tum duniya ki sabse acha admi ho..

Maan looked at Geet "kisika yaad araha hai?" Geet nodded and hey laughed."ye haste hue kitni pyari lagti hai' just like a doll."Maan thought.

At the moment they arrived Geet's home'

Geet: Bye' take care..

Geet exited from the car.

Maan waited a few seconds to watch her go inside. Before entering the home she turned back and smiled to Maan and waved her hand.. Maan replied waving his hand.. then she entered the home. It was strange just before three days he was annoyed to see her in his place and now he is thinking he is gonna miss her.

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To Armaan and Ridhima fans.. don't take it personally... i love them too it's just 4 d stry...😉

To all of my readers I'm fan of Gunjan not Khushi... i hate Khushi.. shud i chng d name Gunjan???😕

N srry if this part is boring... my mood was totally off today.. i read GOSSIP GIRL is ending after an hour i read GEET is ending... 😭

soch rahi hoon IF chod doon... whnever i come here i got bad news..

Edited by princess_mimi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am all sad sad today...just hate SO and 4 Lions...

Gunjan was sweet...well no comments abt Khushi kumari Gupta...I guess this is her name...haina...??

Uff...Riddhima n Arman...so chipkoo...lol
Poor maaneet.

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