Hey Shalu 🤗 Sorry i am late again :( onto the chap..
Amazing update as always! I Never imagined that the entire family is going to be involved! What a pleasant surprise! 😳
as if it was one of the major additions to the story; the turning point in his story; in his life.
Yeah Gory and poetic, and He is right, although not completely aware, that she is one of the major additions in his story, his life. However when he speaks of the reports and the hunter's consistency, i am a little surprised. It was just a series of scratches, and her kidneys pulled out. It doesn't really fit in the term 'precision' I will put my trust in you and wait for you to elaborate further in your story, maybe that's exactly the way he killed the others.
I am kind of surprised at the way Arnav kept on talking, like 3 paras mahn! And Khushi let him 😆
Family's intro was awesome, what do u mean by field work exactly? On the search i gather. HP, OP and JP- bodyguards 🤣 that srly cracked me up bcoz i rem HP with the titanic pose evrytime 🤣 Imagine him trying to protect Khushi that way 🤣
Khushi shook her head, dumbly staring at this weirdest family she has ever come across.
I understand that! really, suddenly you come to know there's an entire family which works as SIF, and even CID comes here for help, to gather all of it at once! crazy it is! 😆 I thought she would ask, 'You kidding?' 'Is it 1st April?' 🤣
No kidding Arnav meant serious business in this chap, but for Khushi too, he mentioned literally uprooting her family once again. He is the reason she had to come all the way from Lucknow to Delhi and Now, she had to shift Into this house with her jiji on his orders, coz she and everyone she loves is in danger because of Him! I would like to see the next interaction taking place between these two, will Khushi back out and tell Arnav to clear the rumours or will she stick through overcome by fear and possible Anger towards him. Interesting scenario Shalu, i am loving this FF! :D
Congrats on acing all your modules, So proud of you momma 😎🤣
Precap- Interesting! And the scariest, Creep's mind. Ooh this is gonna be fun! :D
Criticisms, yeah considering the update- it's your worst Haha kidding, it was fab Shalu, u worry a lot, Keep going okie, you are doing a gr8 job. I told you after the very first chap that this is One of my Favest FF not only on IF but the whole of fanfiction world and it's living upto that, i am luvin it! though ya i would have liked a narrative for Khushi when Arnav was explaining the scenario to her But that's just me greedy reader 🤣
Yeah am Shining in all your posts :P 😆 But in the chappie, what abt my feet? Okay that sounds crazy :P I just checked, u mentioned scratches, but then it's something in the report, why didn't you reveal it to us? Or am i missing something...again :P
Thanks for bearing my ramblings :P
Loads of Love
Zara 🤗
PS: Khurana's important?
PPS: You know, U Rock! ⭐️
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