MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
OMG another beautiful update
hehehehehehe this is one of my fav FF's

i really enjoyed it a lot
by GOD date pe client- lol lol lol GOD bachaye in dono ko

they r really unique and adorable couple
lol ..romance tou door door ki baat - jhagra se fursat milegi tab tou do char acche baatein karegi na ye dono..lol
oh GOD i dont know howthey will fall in love with eah other- na mumkin laagta hai
fav update
loved it so much
do update soon



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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
great upadate both parts was fantastic bechara sajan mayur koa kareeb lahna kah liya itna kch kar raha hai par nakaam mayur kah aga kabi kisi kii chali hai by god kya and the dates were awesome sajan room scene was also gud ur song selection is awesome and the engagement ceremony and haldi were both great the precap sounds really intresting ab shadi tu hu gayi 4 koa ki ab asli story start hu gii lets see what happen nxt in their life and really sorry for late comment tori busy thii and we all will pray for u kah god tmaha tmari prob sort out karna mai help kare aur tm bhout jaldi apni prob sah nikal jao AMEEN and we can understand aur hm wait kare gha tmari continuation kah whenever u do that so dont worry
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Nice update :-) waiting for shadi :-) continue soon & thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Hi friends I am back actually this update consists of two parts one I will update today other tommorow or saturday hope I am not boring you
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part4

Mayank was in his room

M-kitna overacting karti hain oh God jaise duniya ki pehli ladki hain jiski shaadhi ho rahi hain pata nahin ise life long bare kaise karoonga

Something strucks

M-tu bhi na ek lawyer hote hue kaise baat kar raha hain life long bare kaun karega tujhe toh bas 1 saal bare karna hain uske baad woh uske ghar aur tu apne ghar yeh tik hain

Whole night nupur was thinking she recieves a call

N-aadi raat ko kiska call hain hello

Adhi-hello nupur main adhi

N-adhi tum achanak kaise call kiya

Adhi-suna hain tumhari shaadhi tay ho gayi hain tum paagal ho gayi ho us idiot se kaise shaadhi kar rahi ho

N-main majbur hun adhi meri family mujhe force kar rahi hain

Adhi-tumhari family ne force kiya tum maan gayi yeh do din ka khel nahin hain tumhari zindagi ka sawaal hain tumhein lifelong use bare karna padega

N-main jaanthi hun maine samjaane ki bahut koshish ki par woh nahin maan rahe hain

Adhi -tum ghar se bhag jao

N-tumhara dimaag toh teek hain parso meri shaadhi hain aur tum keh rahe ho main ghar se bhag jao shaadhi sirf meri hi nahin di ki bhi hain main jaanthi hun meri di is shaadhi ke liye kitna intezaar kar rahi hain meri ek galti mere shaadhi ke saath unki shaadhi bhi tod sakti hain woh sam ke bina jee nahin sakti aur mere parents unke liye main aur di hi sab kuch hain agar kuch bhi galat hua woh dono zinda nahin rahenge main apne liye unteeno ko sazza nahin de sakti

He says something to nupur

N-main abhi kuch nahin keh sakti mujhe thoda waqt chahiye

Adhi-main tumhaare jawaab ka wait karoonga

Atlast marriage day has come

Gunur were coming down both wore same red color jodas. Nupur eyes were blank and gunjan eyes were filled with lot of dreams

Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Shehnaaiyon Ki Sada Keh Rahi Hai Khushi Ki Mubaarak Ghadi Aa Gayi Hai Saji Surkh Jodi Mein Chaand Si Dulhan Zameen Pe Falak Se Pari Aa Gayi Hai
They were made to sit beside sayank
Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah - 2 Aah Aah Aah, Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah Aah - 2
sayank wore same white sherwaani
Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Sam's face was hidden inside sehra he was staring at gunjan
Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai - 2
She was blushing knowing that he was staring at her
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai
Mayank was irritated to see her beside him
Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai
Nupur was confused about her future
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai
Gunjan sees at her house feels like she is leaving something while nupur she has nothing more than tears
Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte - 2
Ab To Har Apna Begaana Lagta Hai
(Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai) - 2
Both couples were asked to stand for pheras knot was tied Couples were asked to catch each others hand Sajan were feeling some kind of happiness they were feeling embarrased he was excited she was blushing both have eyelock
(Saat Pheron Se Bandha Janmon Ka Yeh Bandhan Pyaar Se Joda Hai Rab Ne Preet Ka Daaman) - 2
Mayur were confused both want to backout but they were forced there heart was saying not to do this other wise everything will be lost . they were puzzled
Hain Nayi Rasmein, Nayi Kasmein, Nayi Uljhan Honth Hai Khaamosh, Lekin Keh Rahi Dhadkan
Atlast they catch and take pheras

Swasti na indro vridhashravaah
Swasti nah pooshaa vishwavedaah

Each phera was creating a tension in mayur while sajan were feeling the are near to there destiny

Swasti nastaarkshyo arishtanemih
Swasti no brihaspatir dadhaatu.

Shanta Karam Bhujaga Shayanam

Padmanabham Suresham

Vande Vishnum Bhava Bhaya Haram

Sarva Lokaiaka Natham

Mayur stand in front of each other its time for the main ritual

This mangalsutra will tie them together and they have to stay together rrespective of their wish there dreams there life everything will change the life which they hated the most is in front of them . her eyes were pleading not to do this but his eyes replied that nothing was in his hand

Sam was looking at it with a kind of happiness this mangalsutra will make herhis forever no one can seperate her from him after this. She was happy butat some corner of heart worried about future she knows her future is bright but the fact of loosing her arents feared her

Sayank put mangalsutra and sindoor

Sarva mangala mangalye
shive sarvartha sadhike


sharanye tryambake gouri
narayani namostute

S-jise maine hamesha se sabse jyada chaha aaj se wh hamesha ke liye meri hainmujhe isse jyada kuch nahin chahiye. Thankyou God for making her mine forever

G-mujhe toh khush hona chahiye ki maine jo chaha woh mujhe mila ab iske baad main sam se alag se nahin hongi par jaane kyun dil main ajeeb si dard hain kya yeh mere parivaar ko khone ka dard toh nahin bhagwan please sab teek kardena

M-shaadhi toh ho gayi ab aage ka socchna hain main darr kyun raha hun mera plan toh clear hain ek saal baad divorce fir kya problem hain shayad ek saal isko kaise bare karoonga yeh soch kar darr raha hun bhagwan please is musibat ko jald se jald mere life se baahar karna

N-hey bhagwaan maine jo decision liya hain usmein mera saath dena sab kuch waisa hi ho jasa maine socha hain

Destiny is planning something else

A tear comes from her eye

Mushkil Mushkil Ashkon Ko Chhupaana Lagta Hai - 2
They catch each others hand
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai
Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte
Ab To Har Apna Begaana Lagta Hai
(Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai) - 2
They get aashirwaad from elders they hug there parents and cry as they now belong to a new family. Even there parents were unable to control there tears as there life there daughters are leaving them forever they remember each and every moment they spend with there daughters. One small feeling might be what they were seeing was a dream there daughters are still with them
Main Teri Baahon Ke Jhule Mein Pali Babul
Jaa Rahi Hoon Chhodke Teri Gali Babul
Main Teri Baahon Ke Jhule Mein Pali Babul - 3 Jaa Rahi Hoon Chhodke Teri Gali Babul
Khoobsurat Yeh Zamaane Yaad Aayeenge
Chaahke Bhi Hum Tumhe Na Bhool Paayenge
Muskhil
Mushkil, Mushkil Daaman Ko Churaana Lagta Hai
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai
Mushkil Daaman Ko Churaana Lagta Hai
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai
Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte
Ab To Har Apna Begaana Lagta Hai
(Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai) - 6
Dhadkan Dhadkan, Dhadkan Dhadkan - 4

Atlast they come outside for bidaai

M-oh god yeh ladki bhi na kabse ro rahi hain actually rona toh mujhe chahiye ek saal tak ise bare karna hain iske saare karche mujhe utaane hoge actually bidaai ke waqt ladkiyon ko nahin ladko ko rona chahiye kyunki usdin se ladko ka bad time shuru hota hain inki responsibility inke bacho ki responsibilities oh god resposibilities hi responsibilities par yehaan toh ulta ho raha hain yeh ladkiyan bhi na aaj ye royengi lifelong humein rulayengi waise mayu tu toh lucky hain sirf ek saal lifelong nahin yaar ye shaadhi ka band mere dimaag main kyun baj raha hain

M-tum itna kyun ro rahi ho koi tumhein force nahin karega tum apne ghar main raho main apne ghar main rahoonga mera sar dard bhi kam hoga

Shilpa-mayu chup

M-main toh iske achai ke liye keh raha hain

Sam-humein pata hain tujhe nupur ki kitni fikar hain apna muh band kar warna dad ka gussa yaad hain na

Gunjan was still crying sam lifts her in arms to make her happy

M-sochna bhi mat main aisa karoonga

N-agar mujhe chua bhi na toh tumhari kair nahin

M-kya karlogi

He lifts her in arms she was struggling like a small kid to get out of his hands but no use he makes her sit in car she gives him killing look but mayank sharma in stupid cheezon se nahin darta

M-aise kya dekh rahi ho tum yeh looks kisi aur pe try karna main tumhare in stupid looks se nahin darta mujhe lagta hain tumhein rona chod kar khane pe dhyan dena chahiye tumhara wajan dekha hain tumhein utana mere liye bahut aasaan tha

N-tum apna muh band rakhoge toh acha rahega warna mujhse bura koi nahin hoga

M-tumse bura koi ho hi nahin sakta

N-tum hona mujhe competition deneke liye monkey

M-sharam nahin aati pati ko monkey kehte hue tumhare parents ne tumhein yehi sanskaar diye hain

N-mere parents ka naam liya na toh jaan se maar daalongi

M-shayad tumhein apna mangalsutra nikaalne ka bada shock hain par main yeh hone nahin doonga jhansi ki rani shadhi hoke aada din bhi nahin hua pati ko maarne ke baare main soch rahe hain tumhein lawyer nahin criminal banna chahiye tha

N-mujhe tumse behas karke apna dimaag nahin kharaab karna

M-tumhare paas hoga toh kharaab hoga na par shayad upar waale ne tumhein banate waqt hi tum main dimaag rakhna bhul gaya

N-pata nahin kaise musibat hain

M-musibat ko musibat yeh ho nahin sakta (he laughs)

N-tumhare aage haat jodti hun bhagwan ke liye thodi der apna muh band karo warna mera sar phat jayega

M-main chup nahin rehne waala mujhe bahut mazaa aaraha hain itna acha mauka mila hain main chup kyun rahoon

Car stops

M-tumne gaadi kyun rokha

Driver-saab ghar aagaya

N-thankgod

Sajan in car

S-tum ladkiyan bhi na kitna roti ho

G-main apne parents ko chod rahi hun rona toh aayega na

S-haan par tum rone lagogi toh mujhe acha nahin lagega mujhe guilty feel hoga ki tumhare aasuon ki wajah main hun maine hi tumhein tumhar parents se alag kiya

G-tum kitne ache ho tum mujhe kabhi rula nahiin sakte I am lucky jo mujhe tum mile

S-I love you gunjan more than anything

G-I love you too

They reach home

precap ; just wait and watch

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am Back with part5 may be my last update I will try my level best to come back

part 5

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Warning: pet pakad ke rakho

Gunur were welcomed

Gunjan was waiting in her room she was kind of nervous.

He entered she started to shiver as he was getting closer

He sat beside her and caught her hand

S-tum itna kyun darr rahi ho tumhare paseene kyun chut rahe hain

G-pata nahin kyun sab ajeeb lag raha hain

S-tum is shaadhi se khush toh hona

G-yeh kaisa sawaal hain tum nahin jaante main kabse is din ka wait kar rahi thi

S-phir tum itni koyi hui kyun ho tumhare chehre pe khushi se jyada gabraahat dikh raha hain

G-sam yeh shaadhi sirf ek sapna nayi hamaari ek nayi zindagi ki shuruvaat hain yehaan jo bhi hoga uske liye sirf main hi responsible hun mere upar bahut saari responsibilites hain jaane kyun yeh sab soch ke bahut darr lag raha hain

He cups her face

S-tum darr kyun rahi ho main hun na tumhare saath aaj se tumhari har mushkil meri bhi hain main kabhi tum par koi aanch nahin aane doonga bas tum mujh par barosa karo

G-main tum par khud se jyada barosa karti hun

Both have an eyelock. He kisses her lips

In mayur room nupur was waiting for him no shouting at him

N-sadu badtameez mera dimaag kharaab karke rakh diya thankGod ghar aagaya warna mera pata nahin kya haal hota tab toh thodi der ab saari raat uske saath rehna padega pata nahin subah tak zinda bachoongi bhi ya nahin acha yehi hain ki uske aane se pehle sojao (she slept she remembers kiss incident she getsup with a jerk)agar yeh sadu ne aaj mere saath,

nupur tu kya soch rahi hain woh aisa nahin karega

par us din mere mana karne ke bavjud sabke saamne kiss kiya aaj bhi zabardasti utaya agar ab bhi kuch aisa waisa karega toh main kya karoongi bhagwaan aapne mujhe kaise musibat main phasaaya

nupur tu bhi na kya us sadu se darti hain aaj usne tere saath aisa waisa kuch kiya toh woh zinda nahin rahega

He enters

M-kisse baat kar rahi ho apne dosto se

N-mere dost yehaan tumhein kaun dikh raha hain

M- woh insaano ko nahin dikhte shaitaan sirf shaitaan ko hi dikhte hain aur unse hi baatein karte hain

N-oh woh tumhein dekh kar darr ke bhag gaye

M- kitni achi wife ho khud ko bhi aur apne dosto ko bhi control main rakha

N-thanks for the compliment

M-no need to say thanks tum control main raho wohi kaafi hain

N-main agar tumhare control main rahoongi toh confirmed mujhe mental hospital main seat reserve karna hoga

M-tum wahaan ki regular visitor hona tumhare liye ek seat toh rahege hi

N-haan actually tumhare saath room share karna hain na isiliye pehle se hi wahaan jaakar paagal logo ki aadat laga rahi hun waise tumhaare friends tumhein wahaan bahut yaad kar rahe hain ek baar jaake aao

M-tumhein join karte waqt zaroor jaonga

N-tum recomend karoge toh admission aasaani se milegi tum wahaake puraane patient jo ho

M-mujhe bahut neend aarahi hain hum kal tumhare admit ke baare main sochenge philhaal ke liye

He removes his sherwaani

N-tumne sherwaani kyun utara

M-tumhein nahin pata

N-mayank tum jo soch rahe ho main ache se jaanti hun par woh nahin hoga tum agar mere paas bhi aayena toh tumhein jaan se maar daalungi

M-tum mujhe uksaa rahi ho

N-wat main tumhein kyun uksaongi

M-tumhein kya lagaa mujhe tumhaare iraade samaj nahin aarahe usdin bhi jaanbuz kar mujhe uksaaya taaki main tumhein kiss karoon aaj bhi bidaai ke waqt tumne phir se wohi kiya aur ab had ho gayi tumhare yeh stupid tricks mujh par kaam nahin karne waala tum mere bolepan ki galat faida uta rahi ho

N-chiii tum aur bole wat a joke tumhein main kaise dikh rahi hun mujhe tumhein uksaane ke alawa aur koi kaam nahin hain aagaya sharukh khan ispe main fidaa hun

m-jaanta hun main sharukh se jyada handsome hun par tumhare muh se tareef bhi ache nahin lag rahe hain

N-tum aur sharukh chehra dekha hain aaine main monkey dikhte ho

M-phir se monkey kya zamaana aaya hain aaj kal ke ladiyon ko pati ka respect karna bhi nahin aata actually inhein pada likha ke galti kiya hain padaai main reh kar sanskaar bhul gayi

N-tumne apna muh band nahin kiya na toh dekho(she points finger)

M-kya karogi(he bends the finger suddenly slips and both fall on each other on bed)

Both have eyeloock

She realises and pushes him

M-auch pata nahin kya kaati ho kitne zor se lagaa

N-tumhari himmat kaise hui mujh par girne ki

M-tum par girne ke liye himmat ki zaroorat nahi hain slip hona kaafi hain waise bhi mujhe ab tumse behas karne ka koi shock nahin hain mujhe neend aarahi hain

N-tum bed ke upar so rahe ho

m-haan kyun tumhare upar sojao

N-tum sofa pe so rahe ho

M-tum mujhe order de rahi ho

N-tumhein jo sochna hain sochlo main tumhein apne saath bed pe sone nahin doongi

M-idea tum sofe pe so jao main yehaan sojaata hun

N-nahin tum sofe pe sojaoge

M-nahin tum

N-nahin tum

Atlast both sleep with pllows in between

In sleep both come near there faces meet in morning she opens eyes and finds him near her .She shreiks which wakes him .he opens his eyes and finds her face in front of him

M-subah utte hi shaitaan ka chehra dekha pata nahin aaj kya hoga waise main jaanta hun tumhein chillane ki aadat hain par hum insaan hain humein tumhare aadato se pareshan karna band karo

N-tum mere baaju kya kar rahe ho

M-tum andi toh nahin ho dikhai nahin deta so raha hun yeh poochne ke liye subah subah utaya

N-tum apni stupid intelligence kisi aur ko dikhana tum toh corner main so rahe the na mere itne kharreb kya kar rahe ho

M-(puts hand on her cheek)tumse dur raha nahin gaya isiliye tumhare paas aagaya(gives naughty smile)

N-(she puts finger on his nose as they were so close)tum mujhse jitna dur rahoge utna dono ke liye acha hain

M-mujhe dur rehne ke liye keh rahi ho aur khud mere itne khareeb ho

She realises she is very close to him gets up with a jerk

M-itna gaabraane ki zaroorat nahin hain kabhi kabhi galti ho jaaati hain main bura nahin maanoonga

She stares at him and goes to washroom

N-ye main kahaan fas gayi isse better to umar kaid ki saza hain is sadu ka kuch na kuch toh karna padega

M-apne dosto se baad main baat karna jaldi baahar aao mujhe late ho raha hain

She comes out and gives a killing look

M-hato(he pushes her and goesinside)

she goes out and shilpa and shashank were at dining table waiting for them she rmmbersher family and her eyes get teary

Shashank-goodmorning beta

N-goodmorning uncle

Shashank-uncle nahin dad

She remembers her father

Shilpa goes near her

Shilpa-meri bachi kya hua tu pareshan kyun hain

N-kuch nahin aunty main teek hun

Shilpa-mujhe lagta hain tujhe har ek rishtey ko samjaana hoga tu mujhe mom kahegi aunty nahin

N-sorry mom woh main

Shilpa-samaj sakti hun tujhe yeh sab adjust karne main waqt lagega tujheyehaan koi bhi problemhui na bejijak mujhse kehna main sab sambhal loongi

She hugs shilpa for her affection.

Sajan in ther room

She wakes up and finds herself in his secure arms

She kisses his cheek and goes to get fresh.

She was looking like a petal of rose he was busy admiring her

G-tum ut gaye aise kya dekh rahe ho

S-yehi ki meri biwi itni sundar hain

G-sam tum bhi na acha yeh sab chodo jaake fresh hojao sab hamaara wait kar rahe honge

S-ok jaa raha hun

She goes out

G-goodmorning mom goodmorning dad

Shilpa-goodmorning beta

G- aur tujhe bhi

N-goodmorning di

N-(to herself)yaad aayi mujhe laga bhul gayi yeh koi waqt hain kya utne ka

Gunjan comes and sits beside her

G-tere khud se baatein karne ki aadat gayi nahin abhi tak

N-hum dono kal raat hi mile the na koi sau saal nahin hue hain achanak meri aadat kaise badlegi

G-badalna hoga yeh hamaara ghar nahin hain sab kya sochenge tune apni aadat nahin badli toh mom ko bolungi

N-meri chodiye aap itne late tak so gayi uska kya

G-meri majburi thi

N-aisi kya majburi hain

G-tu aise bacho ki tarah sawaal karna band kar main har cheez tumhein samja nahin sakti

N-mujhe ache se samaj arahaan hain aap jo karenge woh reasonable hain main jo karoon galat hain yehi kehna chahti hain na aap

G-main tujhse behas karne ke mood main nahin hun

Shilpa-dono aapas main kya baatein kar rahi hain

G-kuch nahin mom

Shashank-tum kaisi sawaal kar rahi ho dono kuch secrets baat kar rahe honge tumhein har cheez batayenge kya

N-nahin dad hum aise hi baat kar rahe the

Shilpa-acha yeh sab chodo sam aur mayu ko bulake lao

Gunjan goes to her room

He gets fresh comes out and hugs her from back

S-tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi ho

G-kuch naya hain toh bolo

S-i love you

G-yeh bhi common hain kuch naya kaho

S-hamaari nayi intern kaafi hot hain

G-sam (she beats him)

S-tumhine toh kahaan kuch naya kehne ke liye

G-naya kehne ke liye kahaan kisi aur ki taareef karne ke liye

S-jealousy

G-ise jealousy nahin gussa kehte hain mera pati kisi aur ki tareef kare mujhe acha nahin lagta

S-main mazaak kar raha tha mere life ke sabse sundar hot achi ladki sirf tum ho aur koi nahin

She hugs him

G-love you

S-love you too

Mayank was getting ready

N-iss sadu ko bulaane ke liye main upar kyun aayi hun main iski servant hun pata nahin kahaan fas gayi

M-aagaye

N-kaun

M-tumhare shaitaan dost jisse tum baat kar rahi ho

N-tum(points her finger)

He bends it

N-auch

M-waise tum yehaan kya kar rahi ho

N-tumhein neeche bula rahe hain

M-maa bhi na aawaaz deti toh neeche pahunch jaata bewajah ek maid ko beja

N-tumne mujhe maid kahaan mujhe koi shock nahin hain tumhari kaam waali banne ka main yeha aayi hun toh mom ke liye aana hain toh aao warna chullu br paani main dub maro main jaa rahi bye

M-hamesha ke liye jaane ka irada hain toh batadena

N-meri itni achi naseeb kahaan zaroor pichle janam main koi paap kiye honge isiliye tum mile

M-tum khud ko kitne ache se samajti ho yeh toh tumhara luck hain warna toh kisko itna acha offer milta hain hamesha luck kaam nahin karta hardwork bhi karna padta hain ab atleast mera seva karo agle janam main bhi mere jitna acha nahin toh thoda acha pati zaroor milega

N-mujhe tumse behas karne ka iraada nahin hain

M-phir kya irada hain(moving finger on her cheek)

N-apna haath nikalo

M-nahin nikaalonga

She pinches him

M-auch kamini

N-get lost

She goes down

All six were having breakfast

Shilpa-mayu jaate waqt nupur ko ghar pe drop kardena

M-aap itni jaldi bore hogayi jo use uske ghar bej rahe ho waise good decision

She gives him one on head

Shilpa-tu kabhi toh soch ke bol yeh rasam hain shaam ko tu hi use lekar aayega

M-mom aap bhi na kyun musibat ko dubaara invite kar rahi hai use apne ghar main rehne do main yehaan rahoonga na yehi hamaare liye acha hain yeh baar baar ghumna bewajah petrol waste aur time waste

Shashank in anger-tujhse jo kaha woh kar jyada behas karne ki zaroorat nahin hain

He shuts his mouth

Gunjan was angry at mayank for his stupid words as she was new to all this but nupur was feeling normal she knows his character very well and she even knows to handle him

In sajan room he hugs her from back

S-tum ready ho chale(he kisses her cheek)

She was lost in thoughts

S-kya hua main yehaan hun aur tum kiske baare main soch rahi ho

G-sam main nupur ke baare main soch rahi thi

S-use kya hua

G-use nahin tumhare bhai ko subah kitne badtameezi se baat kar raha tha nupur ke baare main

S-tum mayank ki baaton ko seriously le rahi ho woh kabhi sochke baat nahin karta yeh toh ghar main roz chalta hain

G-pehle chalta hoga ab nahin woh koi bacha nahin hain uski shaadh ho gayi hain mere behen ke baare min koi badmeezi se baat karein toh main chup nahin rahoongi

S-kya tumhari behen nupur ab is parivaar ka hissa hain uski tumhein jitni fikar hain utna hi humein bhi tumne dekha nahin kaise dad us par baras pade uska muh band karne ke liye tum please mayu ke baato ko dil se mat lo hum hain na use sambhalne ke liye waise mujhe hospital ke liye der ho rahi hain chale warna tumare dad aur mere papa mujhe punishment denge

G-acha chalo par nupur bhi hamaare saath chalegi

S-par gunjan

G-sam please

S-jaise tumhari marzi ab ruthna band karo aur haso

They go out

G-mom nupur kahaan hain

Shilpa-woh mayank ko late ho raha tha isiliye chali gayi

S-humein bhi late ho raha hain chale

Mayur in car

N-mayank mujhe tumse baat karni hain

M-mujhe sunne main zara bhi interest nahin hain

N-par mujhe kehna hain tum dining table pe kya bak rahe the

He gets closer to her slowly

M-mere dil ki baat

She pushes him to his seat

N-tum apne aadato se baaz nahin aane waale kya zaroorat thi woh sab bakne ki di ko kitna bura laga hoga mujhe pata hai ki tum kitne teedhe ho par unke liye sab naya hain unhein acha nahin lagega ki koi mujhe kuch kahe toh please unke saamne atleast apna muh band rakho

M-sachai chupaane se nahin chupta

N-lekin dumkiyo se chupta hain main tumhein warn kar rahi hun agar dubaara tumne di ke saamne kuch aisa waisa kahaan toh sar phod dungi

M-main tumhaare dumki se nahin darta

N-mujhe pata hain tum tedhe aise nahin maanoge par mujhe tumhein teek karna ache se aata hain main tumhari mom dad nahin hun jo tumhare in stupid harkato ko bare karoongi

M-kya karlogi

N-mujhe gussa mat dilao tum mujhe nahin jaante

M-jaanna bhi nahin chahta

N-mayank I am serious di ke saamne atleast apna muh band rakho

M-ok I am also serious main kisike bhi saamne main apna muh band nahin rakhoonga

N-tumhare jitna badtameez insaan ko aaj tak nahin dekha

M-mujh main kaafi tameez hain par tumhein dekhte hi apna tameez bhul jaata hun tumhara chehra hi aisa hain koi kya kar sakta hain

She stares at him in anger

He stops the car

M-mujhe sham ko gurna philhaal ke liye utro mujhe late ho raha hain

She tries to open the door but unable to open

He tries to opens door he gets closer which was making her uncomfortable

M-apne dumkiyo se door ko open karke dikhao

She gives a killing look

M- tumhein isse jyada kuch nahin aata

She leaves

M-oh god yeh ladki mera dimaag kharaab kar rahi hain may uteri life hi aisi hainhamesha ache logon ke saath hi bura hota hain

N-ek din main horror movie dikhaya pata nahin aage kya hoga

Gunjan was thinking something he was staring suddenly isses her cheek

G-sam

S-kya soch rahi ho

G-yeh nupur bhi na mayank ke saath jaane ki kya zaroorat hain

S-mayank uska pati hain uske saath nahin jaayegi toh kiske saath jayegi

G-pati tumhare bhai ko uska matlab bhi pata hain

S-gunjan please woh itna bhi bura nahin hain bas uska gussa jyada hain use thoda waqt do everything will be fine

G-mujhe nahin lagta tumhara bhai teek hoga sam tum apne bhai ko samjaoge toh acha rahega warna mujhe use handle karna padega meri behan se koi badtameezi arein main chup nahin rahoongi

S-acha teek hain main usse baat karoonga par please philhaal ke liye shant hojao

G-sam

S-please

His innocence makes her smile

S-yeh teek hain bye apna khayal rahna

She leaves kissing his cheek which brings smile on his face

Precap

G-tujhe mayank ke baato ka bura nahin laga

N-mujhe kya acha acha lagega kya bura isse aap logon ko kya farq padta hain aap logon ke liye main choti hoon na

Nupur was surrounded by some gundas she runs to save herself she collides with someone

hope I was successful in my update hope you liked it

Now say what do you think about sajan and mayur which relation is more strong mayurians mayur ko sajanians sajan ko nahin I need good explanation for your answer my answer and explanation is this ff

Jab main charecters decide kar rahi thi kaafi confused thi kisko kaunsa character doon samaj nahin aarahaan tha kyunki mayur seniors hi ache lagte hain par yehaan mayur ke charecters juniors ko jyada suit karte hain aur sajan ke seniors ko so with lot of confusion I made the decision I hope my decision was correct.

Note:Its not like hurting your favourite characters but i just asked the reason because this kind of stories we see in real life too . I just want to know your opinion on my charecters maine mayur ko specifically chote banane ki wajah they are good at fighting and sajan are good at behaving like matured. its not support to any particular character or against any character this story was written after lot of thinking about charecter sketch. I love both couples but the reason behind these characters you will understand if I update further hamesha ghar main bhi bade aur choto ke beech yehi sab hota hain par end of the day bade sahi hain ya chote yeh samajna bahut mushkil hota hain . parents ka relation bhi bado se ek tarah ka choto se ek tarah ka hota hain that doesnt mean they dont love them equally but there way of thinking about children maturity will vary
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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so intesting update waiting for precap
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ok all of we know what mayank is planing eager to know mayank side . sajan are good but waiting for story to unfold...
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hehehehe loved mayur fight as usual.So cute part bt too short.Plz next time i want a super long part.Very nice update.Do update soon
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MAYUR'S CUTE NOKJOKH IS JUST A PLEASURE TO READ...
THANX FR D PM...🤗
CONTINUE SOON

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