I am Back with part5 may be my last update I will try my level best to come back
part 5
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Warning: pet pakad ke rakho
Gunur were welcomed
Gunjan was waiting in her room she was kind of nervous.
He entered she started to shiver as he was getting closer
He sat beside her and caught her hand
S-tum itna kyun darr rahi ho tumhare paseene kyun chut rahe hain
G-pata nahin kyun sab ajeeb lag raha hain
S-tum is shaadhi se khush toh hona
G-yeh kaisa sawaal hain tum nahin jaante main kabse is din ka wait kar rahi thi
S-phir tum itni koyi hui kyun ho tumhare chehre pe khushi se jyada gabraahat dikh raha hain
G-sam yeh shaadhi sirf ek sapna nayi hamaari ek nayi zindagi ki shuruvaat hain yehaan jo bhi hoga uske liye sirf main hi responsible hun mere upar bahut saari responsibilites hain jaane kyun yeh sab soch ke bahut darr lag raha hain
He cups her face
S-tum darr kyun rahi ho main hun na tumhare saath aaj se tumhari har mushkil meri bhi hain main kabhi tum par koi aanch nahin aane doonga bas tum mujh par barosa karo
G-main tum par khud se jyada barosa karti hun
Both have an eyelock. He kisses her lips
In mayur room nupur was waiting for him no shouting at him
N-sadu badtameez mera dimaag kharaab karke rakh diya thankGod ghar aagaya warna mera pata nahin kya haal hota tab toh thodi der ab saari raat uske saath rehna padega pata nahin subah tak zinda bachoongi bhi ya nahin acha yehi hain ki uske aane se pehle sojao (she slept she remembers kiss incident she getsup with a jerk)agar yeh sadu ne aaj mere saath,
nupur tu kya soch rahi hain woh aisa nahin karega
par us din mere mana karne ke bavjud sabke saamne kiss kiya aaj bhi zabardasti utaya agar ab bhi kuch aisa waisa karega toh main kya karoongi bhagwaan aapne mujhe kaise musibat main phasaaya
nupur tu bhi na kya us sadu se darti hain aaj usne tere saath aisa waisa kuch kiya toh woh zinda nahin rahega
He enters
M-kisse baat kar rahi ho apne dosto se
N-mere dost yehaan tumhein kaun dikh raha hain
M- woh insaano ko nahin dikhte shaitaan sirf shaitaan ko hi dikhte hain aur unse hi baatein karte hain
N-oh woh tumhein dekh kar darr ke bhag gaye
M- kitni achi wife ho khud ko bhi aur apne dosto ko bhi control main rakha
N-thanks for the compliment
M-no need to say thanks tum control main raho wohi kaafi hain
N-main agar tumhare control main rahoongi toh confirmed mujhe mental hospital main seat reserve karna hoga
M-tum wahaan ki regular visitor hona tumhare liye ek seat toh rahege hi
N-haan actually tumhare saath room share karna hain na isiliye pehle se hi wahaan jaakar paagal logo ki aadat laga rahi hun waise tumhaare friends tumhein wahaan bahut yaad kar rahe hain ek baar jaake aao
M-tumhein join karte waqt zaroor jaonga
N-tum recomend karoge toh admission aasaani se milegi tum wahaake puraane patient jo ho
M-mujhe bahut neend aarahi hain hum kal tumhare admit ke baare main sochenge philhaal ke liye
He removes his sherwaani
N-tumne sherwaani kyun utara
M-tumhein nahin pata
N-mayank tum jo soch rahe ho main ache se jaanti hun par woh nahin hoga tum agar mere paas bhi aayena toh tumhein jaan se maar daalungi
M-tum mujhe uksaa rahi ho
N-wat main tumhein kyun uksaongi
M-tumhein kya lagaa mujhe tumhaare iraade samaj nahin aarahe usdin bhi jaanbuz kar mujhe uksaaya taaki main tumhein kiss karoon aaj bhi bidaai ke waqt tumne phir se wohi kiya aur ab had ho gayi tumhare yeh stupid tricks mujh par kaam nahin karne waala tum mere bolepan ki galat faida uta rahi ho
N-chiii tum aur bole wat a joke tumhein main kaise dikh rahi hun mujhe tumhein uksaane ke alawa aur koi kaam nahin hain aagaya sharukh khan ispe main fidaa hun
m-jaanta hun main sharukh se jyada handsome hun par tumhare muh se tareef bhi ache nahin lag rahe hain
N-tum aur sharukh chehra dekha hain aaine main monkey dikhte ho
M-phir se monkey kya zamaana aaya hain aaj kal ke ladiyon ko pati ka respect karna bhi nahin aata actually inhein pada likha ke galti kiya hain padaai main reh kar sanskaar bhul gayi
N-tumne apna muh band nahin kiya na toh dekho(she points finger)
M-kya karogi(he bends the finger suddenly slips and both fall on each other on bed)
Both have eyeloock
She realises and pushes him
M-auch pata nahin kya kaati ho kitne zor se lagaa
N-tumhari himmat kaise hui mujh par girne ki
M-tum par girne ke liye himmat ki zaroorat nahi hain slip hona kaafi hain waise bhi mujhe ab tumse behas karne ka koi shock nahin hain mujhe neend aarahi hain
N-tum bed ke upar so rahe ho
m-haan kyun tumhare upar sojao
N-tum sofa pe so rahe ho
M-tum mujhe order de rahi ho
N-tumhein jo sochna hain sochlo main tumhein apne saath bed pe sone nahin doongi
M-idea tum sofe pe so jao main yehaan sojaata hun
N-nahin tum sofe pe sojaoge
M-nahin tum
N-nahin tum
Atlast both sleep with pllows in between
In sleep both come near there faces meet in morning she opens eyes and finds him near her .She shreiks which wakes him .he opens his eyes and finds her face in front of him
M-subah utte hi shaitaan ka chehra dekha pata nahin aaj kya hoga waise main jaanta hun tumhein chillane ki aadat hain par hum insaan hain humein tumhare aadato se pareshan karna band karo
N-tum mere baaju kya kar rahe ho
M-tum andi toh nahin ho dikhai nahin deta so raha hun yeh poochne ke liye subah subah utaya
N-tum apni stupid intelligence kisi aur ko dikhana tum toh corner main so rahe the na mere itne kharreb kya kar rahe ho
M-(puts hand on her cheek)tumse dur raha nahin gaya isiliye tumhare paas aagaya(gives naughty smile)
N-(she puts finger on his nose as they were so close)tum mujhse jitna dur rahoge utna dono ke liye acha hain
M-mujhe dur rehne ke liye keh rahi ho aur khud mere itne khareeb ho
She realises she is very close to him gets up with a jerk
M-itna gaabraane ki zaroorat nahin hain kabhi kabhi galti ho jaaati hain main bura nahin maanoonga
She stares at him and goes to washroom
N-ye main kahaan fas gayi isse better to umar kaid ki saza hain is sadu ka kuch na kuch toh karna padega
M-apne dosto se baad main baat karna jaldi baahar aao mujhe late ho raha hain
She comes out and gives a killing look
M-hato(he pushes her and goesinside)
she goes out and shilpa and shashank were at dining table waiting for them she rmmbersher family and her eyes get teary
Shashank-goodmorning beta
N-goodmorning uncle
Shashank-uncle nahin dad
She remembers her father
Shilpa goes near her
Shilpa-meri bachi kya hua tu pareshan kyun hain
N-kuch nahin aunty main teek hun
Shilpa-mujhe lagta hain tujhe har ek rishtey ko samjaana hoga tu mujhe mom kahegi aunty nahin
N-sorry mom woh main
Shilpa-samaj sakti hun tujhe yeh sab adjust karne main waqt lagega tujheyehaan koi bhi problemhui na bejijak mujhse kehna main sab sambhal loongi
She hugs shilpa for her affection.
Sajan in ther room
She wakes up and finds herself in his secure arms
She kisses his cheek and goes to get fresh.
She was looking like a petal of rose he was busy admiring her
G-tum ut gaye aise kya dekh rahe ho
S-yehi ki meri biwi itni sundar hain
G-sam tum bhi na acha yeh sab chodo jaake fresh hojao sab hamaara wait kar rahe honge
S-ok jaa raha hun
She goes out
G-goodmorning mom goodmorning dad
Shilpa-goodmorning beta
G- aur tujhe bhi
N-goodmorning di
N-(to herself)yaad aayi mujhe laga bhul gayi yeh koi waqt hain kya utne ka
Gunjan comes and sits beside her
G-tere khud se baatein karne ki aadat gayi nahin abhi tak
N-hum dono kal raat hi mile the na koi sau saal nahin hue hain achanak meri aadat kaise badlegi
G-badalna hoga yeh hamaara ghar nahin hain sab kya sochenge tune apni aadat nahin badli toh mom ko bolungi
N-meri chodiye aap itne late tak so gayi uska kya
G-meri majburi thi
N-aisi kya majburi hain
G-tu aise bacho ki tarah sawaal karna band kar main har cheez tumhein samja nahin sakti
N-mujhe ache se samaj arahaan hain aap jo karenge woh reasonable hain main jo karoon galat hain yehi kehna chahti hain na aap
G-main tujhse behas karne ke mood main nahin hun
Shilpa-dono aapas main kya baatein kar rahi hain
G-kuch nahin mom
Shashank-tum kaisi sawaal kar rahi ho dono kuch secrets baat kar rahe honge tumhein har cheez batayenge kya
N-nahin dad hum aise hi baat kar rahe the
Shilpa-acha yeh sab chodo sam aur mayu ko bulake lao
Gunjan goes to her room
He gets fresh comes out and hugs her from back
S-tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi ho
G-kuch naya hain toh bolo
S-i love you
G-yeh bhi common hain kuch naya kaho
S-hamaari nayi intern kaafi hot hain
G-sam (she beats him)
S-tumhine toh kahaan kuch naya kehne ke liye
G-naya kehne ke liye kahaan kisi aur ki taareef karne ke liye
S-jealousy
G-ise jealousy nahin gussa kehte hain mera pati kisi aur ki tareef kare mujhe acha nahin lagta
S-main mazaak kar raha tha mere life ke sabse sundar hot achi ladki sirf tum ho aur koi nahin
She hugs him
G-love you
S-love you too
Mayank was getting ready
N-iss sadu ko bulaane ke liye main upar kyun aayi hun main iski servant hun pata nahin kahaan fas gayi
M-aagaye
N-kaun
M-tumhare shaitaan dost jisse tum baat kar rahi ho
N-tum(points her finger)
He bends it
N-auch
M-waise tum yehaan kya kar rahi ho
N-tumhein neeche bula rahe hain
M-maa bhi na aawaaz deti toh neeche pahunch jaata bewajah ek maid ko beja
N-tumne mujhe maid kahaan mujhe koi shock nahin hain tumhari kaam waali banne ka main yeha aayi hun toh mom ke liye aana hain toh aao warna chullu br paani main dub maro main jaa rahi bye
M-hamesha ke liye jaane ka irada hain toh batadena
N-meri itni achi naseeb kahaan zaroor pichle janam main koi paap kiye honge isiliye tum mile
M-tum khud ko kitne ache se samajti ho yeh toh tumhara luck hain warna toh kisko itna acha offer milta hain hamesha luck kaam nahin karta hardwork bhi karna padta hain ab atleast mera seva karo agle janam main bhi mere jitna acha nahin toh thoda acha pati zaroor milega
N-mujhe tumse behas karne ka iraada nahin hain
M-phir kya irada hain(moving finger on her cheek)
N-apna haath nikalo
M-nahin nikaalonga
She pinches him
M-auch kamini
N-get lost
She goes down
All six were having breakfast
Shilpa-mayu jaate waqt nupur ko ghar pe drop kardena
M-aap itni jaldi bore hogayi jo use uske ghar bej rahe ho waise good decision
She gives him one on head
Shilpa-tu kabhi toh soch ke bol yeh rasam hain shaam ko tu hi use lekar aayega
M-mom aap bhi na kyun musibat ko dubaara invite kar rahi hai use apne ghar main rehne do main yehaan rahoonga na yehi hamaare liye acha hain yeh baar baar ghumna bewajah petrol waste aur time waste
Shashank in anger-tujhse jo kaha woh kar jyada behas karne ki zaroorat nahin hain
He shuts his mouth
Gunjan was angry at mayank for his stupid words as she was new to all this but nupur was feeling normal she knows his character very well and she even knows to handle him
In sajan room he hugs her from back
S-tum ready ho chale(he kisses her cheek)
She was lost in thoughts
S-kya hua main yehaan hun aur tum kiske baare main soch rahi ho
G-sam main nupur ke baare main soch rahi thi
S-use kya hua
G-use nahin tumhare bhai ko subah kitne badtameezi se baat kar raha tha nupur ke baare main
S-tum mayank ki baaton ko seriously le rahi ho woh kabhi sochke baat nahin karta yeh toh ghar main roz chalta hain
G-pehle chalta hoga ab nahin woh koi bacha nahin hain uski shaadh ho gayi hain mere behen ke baare min koi badmeezi se baat karein toh main chup nahin rahoongi
S-kya tumhari behen nupur ab is parivaar ka hissa hain uski tumhein jitni fikar hain utna hi humein bhi tumne dekha nahin kaise dad us par baras pade uska muh band karne ke liye tum please mayu ke baato ko dil se mat lo hum hain na use sambhalne ke liye waise mujhe hospital ke liye der ho rahi hain chale warna tumare dad aur mere papa mujhe punishment denge
G-acha chalo par nupur bhi hamaare saath chalegi
S-par gunjan
G-sam please
S-jaise tumhari marzi ab ruthna band karo aur haso
They go out
G-mom nupur kahaan hain
Shilpa-woh mayank ko late ho raha tha isiliye chali gayi
S-humein bhi late ho raha hain chale
Mayur in car
N-mayank mujhe tumse baat karni hain
M-mujhe sunne main zara bhi interest nahin hain
N-par mujhe kehna hain tum dining table pe kya bak rahe the
He gets closer to her slowly
M-mere dil ki baat
She pushes him to his seat
N-tum apne aadato se baaz nahin aane waale kya zaroorat thi woh sab bakne ki di ko kitna bura laga hoga mujhe pata hai ki tum kitne teedhe ho par unke liye sab naya hain unhein acha nahin lagega ki koi mujhe kuch kahe toh please unke saamne atleast apna muh band rakho
M-sachai chupaane se nahin chupta
N-lekin dumkiyo se chupta hain main tumhein warn kar rahi hun agar dubaara tumne di ke saamne kuch aisa waisa kahaan toh sar phod dungi
M-main tumhaare dumki se nahin darta
N-mujhe pata hain tum tedhe aise nahin maanoge par mujhe tumhein teek karna ache se aata hain main tumhari mom dad nahin hun jo tumhare in stupid harkato ko bare karoongi
M-kya karlogi
N-mujhe gussa mat dilao tum mujhe nahin jaante
M-jaanna bhi nahin chahta
N-mayank I am serious di ke saamne atleast apna muh band rakho
M-ok I am also serious main kisike bhi saamne main apna muh band nahin rakhoonga
N-tumhare jitna badtameez insaan ko aaj tak nahin dekha
M-mujh main kaafi tameez hain par tumhein dekhte hi apna tameez bhul jaata hun tumhara chehra hi aisa hain koi kya kar sakta hain
She stares at him in anger
He stops the car
M-mujhe sham ko gurna philhaal ke liye utro mujhe late ho raha hain
She tries to open the door but unable to open
He tries to opens door he gets closer which was making her uncomfortable
M-apne dumkiyo se door ko open karke dikhao
She gives a killing look
M- tumhein isse jyada kuch nahin aata
She leaves
M-oh god yeh ladki mera dimaag kharaab kar rahi hain may uteri life hi aisi hainhamesha ache logon ke saath hi bura hota hain
N-ek din main horror movie dikhaya pata nahin aage kya hoga
Gunjan was thinking something he was staring suddenly isses her cheek
G-sam
S-kya soch rahi ho
G-yeh nupur bhi na mayank ke saath jaane ki kya zaroorat hain
S-mayank uska pati hain uske saath nahin jaayegi toh kiske saath jayegi
G-pati tumhare bhai ko uska matlab bhi pata hain
S-gunjan please woh itna bhi bura nahin hain bas uska gussa jyada hain use thoda waqt do everything will be fine
G-mujhe nahin lagta tumhara bhai teek hoga sam tum apne bhai ko samjaoge toh acha rahega warna mujhe use handle karna padega meri behan se koi badtameezi arein main chup nahin rahoongi
S-acha teek hain main usse baat karoonga par please philhaal ke liye shant hojao
G-sam
S-please
His innocence makes her smile
S-yeh teek hain bye apna khayal rahna
She leaves kissing his cheek which brings smile on his face
Precap
G-tujhe mayank ke baato ka bura nahin laga
N-mujhe kya acha acha lagega kya bura isse aap logon ko kya farq padta hain aap logon ke liye main choti hoon na
Nupur was surrounded by some gundas she runs to save herself she collides with someone
hope I was successful in my update hope you liked it
Now say what do you think about sajan and mayur which relation is more strong mayurians mayur ko sajanians sajan ko nahin I need good explanation for your answer my answer and explanation is this ff
Jab main charecters decide kar rahi thi kaafi confused thi kisko kaunsa character doon samaj nahin aarahaan tha kyunki mayur seniors hi ache lagte hain par yehaan mayur ke charecters juniors ko jyada suit karte hain aur sajan ke seniors ko so with lot of confusion I made the decision I hope my decision was correct.
Note:Its not like hurting your favourite characters but i just asked the reason because this kind of stories we see in real life too . I just want to know your opinion on my charecters maine mayur ko specifically chote banane ki wajah they are good at fighting and sajan are good at behaving like matured. its not support to any particular character or against any character this story was written after lot of thinking about charecter sketch. I love both couples but the reason behind these characters you will understand if I update further hamesha ghar main bhi bade aur choto ke beech yehi sab hota hain par end of the day bade sahi hain ya chote yeh samajna bahut mushkil hota hain . parents ka relation bhi bado se ek tarah ka choto se ek tarah ka hota hain that doesnt mean they dont love them equally but there way of thinking about children maturity will vary
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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