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Posted: 13 years ago
dadi didnt lyk prachi..!! she hates her..!! i love dadi..!! awesome updates di..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant ! brilliant all the parts
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

todays previous update
PART 84


He wanted to take her in his arms hug her.. feel her..but her coldness, feared him to death.. like he couldn't have taken her rejection, her denial, he would rather die million times before he sees her not want him. How dreadful it feels to breath the air knowing ur not in it. How suffocating it has become to live his normal happy life. How trapped he feels that he can't even breathe, no matter how hard he has been trying.

She dropped her head down & went straight to the into KC office even a smile to greet in reply hurt. It felt like a burden on her heart to form a curve .. but she did.. just like always though her eyes had a different tale all together. She didn't know wat to do.. she just walked into the wash room after keeping her bag on the desk & sat their cuddled up in the corner. It took her a while to come out of that pain that emptiness that was consuming her with in. how much she had prepared herself for this day since she came back from home, but all her effort just seemed disappear without trace, leaving her in the same juncture where it all started..right their execrable. !!!!

he drove back to Mansion, still trying to come in term with this unbelievable peace just sitting next to her in that car quietly. How he didn't need words anymore to seek his answer, just her being there was unison. cessation to the endless shreds of pain. Just a while go he had felt he would burst ..explode without talking to her... .. & now!!! he had never felt so composed just seeing her, just breathing in her scent, warmth. He took in a deep breath & hugged puchki. He closed his eyes, he could clearly feel Geet in his arms right now. He opened his lids instantly & sat up scaring the dickens out of him... following another sleepless night.. contemplating whether to call her.
Next day he waited for her class to finish. He had no clue how he spend that whole morning until afternoon to waiting for her every min, sec before he could finally see her at the bus stop. He was taken a back when he saw her getting into Karans car. His eyes became blood red. He looked away in disgust, his eyes still didn't stop tracing her every move, it was like a invisible shackles binding her. She could feel her feet trembling without even looking at his direction. She took in a determinant breath & got in. he clenched his fist & glared at her once. She pretended to start a conversation with Karan.. they heard thud sound in the bonnet, at the outset they thought they hit something.. but then key was not even on the ignition yet, thats when they noticed Maan standing in front blocking there way. Karan stepped out wondering wat was it with him.
Maan didn't even bother looking at him. He just kept looking at her
karan ' wat happened maan?
Maan??
he stood their glaring at her. She refused to even look at him. She restlessly crossed her hand.. & looked at karan.. challen.. mujhe late ho raha hain
karan was bit confused with wat was happening.
He sat in the car & tried turned on the car. Maan was still standing there.. karan tried to frighten him.. by pressing the acceleration.. not realizing that would only frighten her.. she shouted crazily... why can't u just revers the car.
Karan sighed & put the car in revrse..
before he could do anything further.. Maan opened the door next to Geet.
She closed her eyes & looked away.
Karan was totally shocked, it was unlike Maan.
Karan ' wat is it Maan??
Maan leaned in opened the seat belt for Geet. Thats it.. Maan karan shouted & came around warning him.. pulling him out holding his collar.
Maan just snapped his hand & continued to open geets seat belt & get her out.
Karan held his collar & punched straight on his face.. Maan she screamed in horror.
She immediately came out to reach Maan. He clenched his fist... Geet immediately held him .. aap kya kar rahen ho?
Wats wrong with u?
Why r u doing this?
He just held her hand & dragged her to his car. Not bothering to answer anyone.. not her.. not karan ..not the crowd that was gathering around. Karan stood totally puzzled with wat exactly was happening.. thats not just maan he knows!!


He pushed her inside the car & slammed the door on her face.
He came around & started the car.. she tried to reach his lips.. he snapped her hand. She flinched her teeth.. & looked away
I am getting late to office.
U have 45mins more
I was supposed to go with karan
he turned car sharp into the side rd & stopped the car at once. Both of them were thrown on the dash board. U will not go anywhere with him he roared
he is my BF.. forgot ..she taunted. He raised his hand to slap her.. hit the dashboard instead.
She turned her face angrily & looked away.
He came around & pulled her out.. angrily.. she pushed him away randomly throwing her hand at him.. he turned his head flinching at the sharp pain that erupted as her fingers scraped his fresh wound from earlier. She couldn't ignore that slight twitch, it came out more as whimper in her lips.. followed an invariable caress..softly. Her heart instantly melted seeing the bluish shade.. around the slight cut. He closed his eyes letting her soft feather like fingers fill him with prurience his soul longed for.
precap
kiss banta hain kya?? muskan confused
-PREV PART 83 NEXT PART 85-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awoh so sweet... geet and mamma was sosweet... dadi not approving of prachi... wow.. hi-fi daadi...
poor raj ko bhi confuse kar diya... yeh maan bhi na... kis kis ko confuse kartha rahtha hai.. aur khud bhi confused hai...
our sherni is doing her level best.. feeling sad for her but she is right here...
maan needs to take a super duper decision soon
thanks for bringing back our armaan... and muski.. we want the craziness back!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow 84...
i have succesfully stalked u muski 2 times...
***adipoli***😉
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wow maan gussa... all the time... we know... but this went out of control... maan is trying to sort out his feelings and when he sees geet with karan... poor guy!!!!
sorry oops... poor poor karan...
kiss bantha hai kya??? ab main bhi confused
Edited by craziekudi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update di
yes di kiss to banta hi hai☺️
wow di aap ne maan character likha kahan se
i love him more then ghsp's msk
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow

Thank u for 1more update

But Plz do something

Plz make them meet at office or let maan burst out his true feelings about Prachi to Prachi

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Posted: 13 years ago
Such confused soules r they, maan giving so much explaination 2 daadi. 1 bar nahin bol sakta tha ki we r just frdz. Maan and prachi r so confused themselves and so irritating 4 us. Plz mg ke patch se pehle want maan 2 c angry avtaar of geet. 4 him 2 realise what wrong he did 2 her and himself. May b she cud blurt out her feelings and insecurities in anger. Or plz bring raj 2 either take g or p away 4m maan. Jab tak 2no ke 7 hoga. He can't think clearly. 1 se door hoga to may b dimaag toda clear hoga munde ka. Ya best geet ka accident karake km bhej do aap. Phir no demands :-) 4 a while;-) misti and puchki r just 2 entertaining 2gether.
Plz
Doracake thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oye Muskan...Kisss ka Muli jula ke bhag gayi ?????? 🥺

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
when will this maan come to know about his mistimia = bootni+dewaani+sexy+wify+...=GEET
eagerly waiting for this

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