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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

oh god.. that was .. that was.. .. molten.

crazy, and raw, and just without dimensions.

like red heat running in your veins that scorches the skin from the inside. The feelings that they suppress for one another.

they are getting battered and drained with their wars waging inside muskii.. and then they loose control this violently.

I am obsessed with this ff.

Thank you soo much for indulging us all and writing so many parts in a day!

So damn eagerly looking forward to more tomorrow..

(PS: muskaan, dont ask for suggestions... nah. do exactly as you feel please. please.)

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maaneet23

@maaneet23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

part 81

ufffs maan introduces prachi to dadi... even i sighed in relief but these frd of his... oppps dost se acche to dusman hain...

didi calling raj
dadi is super cool man...

she is all cared abt her kity party...n mid night masala movie... oppps i like dadi a lot...she imagined prachi in ghungat n thought she will touch her feet... n when she didn't do tht she sighed in relief...

bechari geet ye maan bhi na kya karata rahata hain...usake itane pass jata hain ki she can;t control her feelings... wht can she do then...her mama is 2 cool... she understood her feelings n consoled her...

loved part 81

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Arre why did you end it here...????
Now you wont updt today na...
Aaahhh...

Aur nahi to kya...we have'nt got a kissi for so long...plzzz...ek achi si kissi...thodi passionate vali...plzzz

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pop77

@pop77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Wow!! Muskan are U going to update more?

Congrats for new thread..Maan can't take it her ignorance..I hope Geet & Maan talk..

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sumusumu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

I loved it i loved it i loved it...

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sweetie_flowers

@sweetie_flowers

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

dii lovely update

loved maans anger...

diii make them confess to eachother pleaseee

yes di kiss banta hain naaa☺️

but diii please make them to meet in office atleast pleaseee

cant see both of them like this

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

OMG di tat was awesome... come wat may he can't see her with any other nor she can see him hurt by others or by herself...

hope they soon understand what the bonding they are sharing with each other...

expected Maan's anger...as we knw how he'll be possessive...on his things.. and its Geet wat can anyone do wat can Geet do however she avoids him she is forgetting tat she belongs to him forever...

me waiting for the day...when they'll come to knw tat he is her puchki and she his her misthi...

i so wanted to see their reaction...

Edited by aarthirajendran - 13 years ago

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

I was taken aback with the pure intensity of one part muskan. When at night he hugs Puchki, and he so vividly feels Geet in his arms, .. his need for her so great, it actually coalesced the memory of her essence and her sensation so perfectly , as if on command ..

and that jolted him right out of any hope of sleep, scared him .. I could almost feel his heart thud backwards as if falling , before jolting right back at top speed..

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: nitya
Such confused soules r they, maan giving so much explaination 2 daadi. 1 bar nahin bol sakta tha ki we r just frdz. Maan and prachi r so confused themselves and so irritating 4 us. Plz mg ke patch se pehle want maan 2 c angry avtaar of geet. 4 him 2 realise what wrong he did 2 her and himself. May b she cud blurt out her feelings and insecurities in anger. Or plz bring raj 2 either take g or p away 4m maan. Jab tak 2no ke 7 hoga. He can't think clearly. 1 se door hoga to may b dimaag toda clear hoga munde ka. Ya best geet ka accident karake km bhej do aap. Phir no demands :-) 4 a while;-) misti and puchki r just 2 entertaining 2gether.
Plz

no di plz no mastima aur puchki ek saath yeh maan ko aur bi cunfuse kardega

haan maan ko yeh pata lag jaye ke geet hi mastima hai phir to maan geet ko leke aur bi protective ho jayega plz plz phir to karan ko maan geet ke aas pass bi ghumne nahi dega plz

Edited by muraadlovesdd - 13 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

awesome update...
magar muskan abb bahut ho gaya...dono ke dimag mein thodasa roshni dalo k dono ekdoosre k bina adhure hain...nd first of all...maan k dimag mein yeh dalo k woh prachise pyaar nehi karta nd make him clear it to geet...aur dono ko puchki aur mishtimia k hisaab se bhi milwa do...
both r mad...dont knw d depth of deir feelings...do something muskan...
nd my one n only most important request...prachi out frm deir lives nd frm d story...atleast frm deir lives if not frm d story...

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