Maya my love (completed)l MG//FF - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww d love between maan and maya 😳 Nish gal .. ur doing super 👍🏼 ur my fav for now daa ❤️ between gal ... kadhal.com suits u tannai finally 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
right nisha neraiya kelvi kekanum eve varen😉
melai erukurathu ponnu nishaaa ponnuuu

Roses for you
Edited by vanadhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 18
nice part...
poor Geet...
idiot Maan...
he could have talked to her and cleared his thoughts and assumptions...
did he doubt Geet's fidelity?
why is not happy but gets stunned or uncomfortable when anyone mentions the bay is the replica of Maan?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful one

ippo enna sandai nu than theriyalai 😕

continue soon before i get more confused
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: niticool

beautiful one


ippo enna sandai nu than theriyalai 😕

continue soon before i get more confused



will continue soon for you kutty... but on monday ok.😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i am really sure that maya will bring maaneet close
sry for the late reply
awesome update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear loved your ff 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry dearies for updating latter...

i completed writting next part but not able to post it as it consists of more mistakes my mind is not willing to post that update along with that mistakes...i need some time to edit those things and post to make it more interesting...so please wait with patients i will try to do it with in this week along with another part which is going to be some what interesting...😉😉

am totally fed up with this part which is not getting any idea how to take the story further to make it interesting for you all...😃

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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sorry yaar i need to edit a lot so took the update will post tomorrow again...😕
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Part 18

Part 19

The same way geet to hold is tie when ever he about to move to office in the morning... .which take him to there past
where geet holds maan's tie and asked him not to leave her...

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Flash back

Before he going to London in that restaurant he just came out of the restaurant seeing geet and sanjay talking ..after that he got idea to propose geet in front of sanjay ' he went inside and didn't seen geet's face from back side he just confirmed that the girl who is sitting in front of sanjay is geet.. he is not known to the fact that anjana is before sanjay he fails to differentiate anjana and geet.. where as already in his mind fixed that there is some thing between geet and sanjay so his mind can't change its vision but his heart always tells him that geet is still his at last seeing sanjay proposing her his heart and mind stopped to function and he thought that the girl before him is geet and left the place thinking that geet and sanjay is in love with each other''his mind forgets to think and his eyes didn't notice his geet who is in front of him behind the wall.. fate also played a major role in them as geet is fully hided by the wall where he can't see her clearly' this is the main reason where maan misunderstood there friendship...

after he return from London when dadi and meera talk to him about geet is very much worried and all his mind didn't in the state to accept.. he thought geet is acting before them to make them believe that she is love with him where she is in really in love with sanjay...

which is not true..

as they already planned to act before dadi he thought its the part of acting...

so he immediately decided to apply for divorce so that she can feel independent to choose her life with out knowing the fact that she is in love with him and want to spend her rest of life with him..

This the reason for maan to give divorce to geet he want her to be happy for ever for her happiness he give her divorce but inside the feeling is killing him that geet is no more his'every day in his mind and hearts fights took place..so he any ways avoid meeting her in home but her thoughts and her image is not just went away from his thoughts..

Where he is dying inside with the thoughts of geet so he decided to keep himself busy with his work..so that he won't get time to think about geet but he fails what ever comes his mind and heart didn't forget her.. this avoidance game continue between them...

till he meets geet again but not in KM..

#Why still I can't able to forget her??what's in her??she is in love with sanjay and decided to pursue her life with him i know that well I seen that on my eyes(but his heart rejects this) then why my heart always saying that she is mine... which I know very well that this wont happen but yet why the thought keep on going on my mind that she is mine for ever.. what about the question she posed to me "It means you didn't like me from the beginning??what she mean by that is she thinks that I didn't like her am here dying in her love and she is speaking about likes' Is that means she likes me or she loves me..why maan why you thinking about her as you already knows that she is love with sanjay then why you again feeling that she is in love with you may be she want to continue our friend ship after her marriage the real marriage'#

That word real marriage hurts him some where in his heart'at a sudden driver came down and open the door where body guards are already ready in there position and waiting for maan to come out of his car after a while of thinking about his wife he came to sense and get down from his car and enter in to office at the entrance.. he got an another shock where he bumps into a girl none other than geet who is coming out of the building with a huge file and bumps in to maan in the entrance and drop her files where it got messed up and all the papers are flying in air..First maan got shocked to see geet latter he found that sanjay is coming behind her calling out her name'

Maan didn't get any idea of what geet doing there with files but the thing which hurts him is sanjay she came with sanjay he is with her now helping her to pick papers which is lying down where maan simply seeing them with out moving from there he found from geet's face that itsa shock for her too to see him there' she about to talk but some thing stops her and kept mum where as maan about to ask her.. sanjay came near them and said..

Geet its too much please stop these nonsense fight now.. saying that he glanced maan and said oh Mr.Khurana..and dad is waiting for you in his cabin.. we are really sorry for all these mess..

With out a word just nodding his head as its ok he went where shasa who is behind maan just seen the entire scene and walked behind him glaring at geet'

Before coming out of that varma's construction his eyes where searching for geet..But she is not there where he get a chance to meet sanjay once again but not geet.. where there is only a official introduction between them and also they discussed about there future project which Khurana and varma construction is going to work together..

As it's a big project Rahulvarma(sanjay's dad) want to do this project with khurana construction to make it perfect and through which he wants his son to learn about perfection in work where as KC is well know for its perfection..Where sanjay and maan going to work together in that project..

Where maan came to know that geet is also going to work in that project along with the sanjay his happiness has no bounds.. there is two team going to work in that huge project as varma construction team and KC team... maan is head for the KC team.. Geet, yash and pari are in the sanjay team where sanjay is heat... where as shasa, thasa and adithiya(adi) are in the maan's team'

They discuss about there designs in both the groups they divide the work in to parts and work in team where as the decisions will be taken by both the team leaders maan and sanjay as what should be included and the problem how could be it solved all will be discussed by them in a whole group..

This way they planned there work..more over there discussions are like a gang wars where there is a different of opinions between all where as maan is perfectionist and sanjay wont believes that every thing in the world is done perfectly.So there is a wars and different of opinions and also some quarrels happen during there discussions'At a some exceeding limit they take that issue to Mr.Rahul varma who will give the best solution with his experience.. This way there group discussion ends when ever the both group met.. In the mean while maan and geet didn't speak any thing about personal they remains very professional in there office and in home same situation continues as avoiding each others...

In maan's office as the project is in final state there is no time for any one to take a breath each and every one working hardly with out rest to complete the project' s design work.. after these work end there is only site work and small remaining works in office which should be done latter now clients will come tomorrow to see the entire design and there is presentation by both the groups they need to present in front of client for there approval.. very heavy work on each and every one as client coming tomorrow to see there work... they said that they will come to khurana construction both teams gathered there in KC and working with there projects as in teams'

Every thing is finalize and both teams are now ready with there presentations sketches and charts..Where its evening so geet and others are ready to move out of KC by giving all the details clearly to adi'Before every thing should be hand over geet decide to check all the details at last once..where every one is left expect geet shasa,adi and maan where adi and maan are busily discussing about another project'

Its almost 9 pm Maan is working with his current project file and discussing about that file with adi where as shasa already made an excuse and went out after a few minutes they heard a loud voice its seems to be a quarrel between two women's..

adi and maan run out immediately to see whats happening.. they see geet and shasha shouting at each other where shasa telling sorry to geet and geet is in very anger and shouting at her

don't act smart shasa I know you didn't it intensely..

no geet I promise why should I should do it to you believe me its all happen with out my knowledge.

Before he came down there quarrels is grown strongly.. after he reached the scene in geets room was a coffee is split all over the charts which geet and her team prepared'yet there shout didn't over both are busy with there points...and shouting..

What's happening here?? A voice echoed the whole office like a lions roar..

Precap: Geet slept on maans shoulder in the KC..

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Part 20



Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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