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Posted: 13 years ago

geet knows maan is the one helping her

and she is good for Mr. Buns business
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great...Amazing part...i am now thoroughly enjoying it and eagerlly waiting for the next part. Both parts are becoming very intersting...
about this part, Geet has learnt the b'ness tacts from bhel. And happy that she got to know who helped her for opening the account.
Very fab update..pl update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

thnks for sharing maanpreet's picture... she is really beautiful and i loved her smile very much she is a lead part in your ff...

loved the update,,,,... and nt strong will power to over come from all the problems...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nt has become independent n hard working. she has become a businesswoman. waiting for mp n nt to meet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
read only after part 6
Character Photos


MANPREET (she is no actress but our very real Manpreetmann)


Maan Singh Khurana


Dev Behl

Naintara Behl


Prem


Geet Handa


Myra


Yash



Part 6 (B) see link below

hope you like them, the character sketch, will add some more

this is to remove the confusion about how they look like
please read it
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Posted: 13 years ago
till evening i was cursing the day. you all make my day by updating thanks. love the pics. and waiting for update..😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks confusion queen ab mere jase readers ko kuch to story samj aa jayegi varna nt aur geet ke beech hi ltka ke rakha tha vaise geet ko nt ka naam dene ka amazing idea tumhe aya kahan se😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd

thanks confusion queen ab mere jase readers ko kuch to story samj aa jayegi varna nt aur geet ke beech hi ltka ke rakha tha vaise geet ko nt ka naam dene ka amazing idea tumhe aya kahan se😆



after writing the whole story when I started typing part one it struck me that it would be cool if Geet is initially NT😉
is it not cool???😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti



after writing the whole story when I started typing part one it struck me that it would be cool if Geet is initially NT😉
is it not cool???😆



it was shockingly surprising 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 6(B)

At night he told Manpreet about it

MP: so what is her name?

M: I don't know

MP: you signed the paper not even looking at her name

M: it never struck me

MP: you are a real fool in love

M: yes I am (making a baby face)

They both laughed heartily and after some time

M: how about I go and ask them her name?

MP: and prove that you area fool

M: that I am

MP: stupid, hope I too find some one who loves me as much as you love her

M: does he not love you and he is not foolish also

MP: who?

M: Prem

MP: no (hesitantly) we are just friends

M: who are you fooling Manpreet? I may be a fool in love but otherwise I am quite sharp

MP: I know

M: so answer me

MP: I don't know

M: but I know, he loves you

MP: how can you be so sure?

M: I suppose everyone at your hotel knows it

MP: what????

M: yes

MP: but he never told me? Or even hinted it

M: if you want him to tell you, first you will have to tell him the truth between us

MP: but

M: look Manpreet, he has a right to know your status.

MP: will think about it

M: better fast, or I will tell him

MP: no ways.

M: Manpreet!!!

MP: hey Maan, I wanted to tell you something

M: about him

MP: no

M: then

MP: there's a girl who delivers bakery items to the hotel

M: she bakes very well, I should think about giving her a chance at Khurana's

MP: stupid, big mouth Mr. MSK, first listen

M (making baby face): ok sweetheart 2

MP: Prem says

M: he likes her

MP: Maan, listen first

M (putting his finger on his lips): sorry

MP: he says that her eyes are exactly like Pari and her smile is also like her

M: I think Prem has fallen for her, Manpreet you are late

MP: Maan, I will kill you

M: you are welcome

MP: you are impossible

M: that I am, I mean I 'm possible

MP: chup bilkul chup

M: um

MP: I were wondering if she is Mrya's relative

M: um

MP: I will meet her and find out

M: um

MP: but her last name is different

M: um

MP: Maan what is this um um

M: you only said chup bilkul chup

MP: Maan you better get out beforeI kill you

And she threw a pillow in his direction he caught it and ran she picked another and threw it, he ran out of the room laughing his head out.

It was Monday but Geet did not turn out, Manpreet asked the staff to inform when ever she comes, but Geet was very busy so she did not come for another month and on the phone requested Prem to deposit the amount in the bank and gave him her account number.

It has been 4 months since Maan had helped that unknown girl open her account, the bank Manager called Maan,

BM: hello is it Mr. MSK?

M: yes

BM: sir, Bank Manager here

M: yes

BM: sir do you remember that 4 months back you signed the witness paper of a girl to help her open the account

M (skipped a beat): yes, any problem?

BM: no sir, she is a good customer

M: then

BM: sir she needs a loan

M: how much amount?

BM: not much, just about 25 lacs

M: for what?

BM: she does some business and she wants to extend it

M: so what is the problem?

BM: sir, she does not have any guarantor (when you take a loan, someone has to guarantee that you will return the amount on time)

M: so

BM: sir, actually

M: what?

BM: sir, can you become a guarantor

M: no problem, send the papers

BM: sir you know you will have to present there in person

M: ok, when

BM: I have asked her to come on Wednesday, at 10 am

M: ok, I'll be there, will you need any papers

BM: sir your presence will be enough

M: ok

At night he told Manpreet about it and she teased him to death, he was very happy that finally he will not only know her name but will also be able to meet her face to face.

Part 7 (A) see link below

hope you liked the part 6(A), 😊
and now you must be liking this part 6(B)
as this story will proceed in two settings, 6(A) is at her side setting & part 6(B) is about him

when you are smart you can find out ways... HIMMATE MARDA/AURTA MADDADE KHUDA😆

so Manpreet was not able to meet her, and Maan is going to meet her, let's see what happens in the next update.
From now the parts will start merging...

please read it
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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago

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