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Posted: 13 years ago
she is again online
time for update 😍 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Oye... wasnt shruti enough for making us wait...
ab Manpreet bhi...
wo to waise bhi buhat wait kerwati hai...


lolz bechari shruti toh fir jaldi jaldi update karti hai aur mai🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting Again...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 7(A)

It has been 8 months since she stepped in Delhi, and here she was establishing her own bakery, she never had thought that day that she will end up as a working woman, she was clueless, she thanked Arjun who forced her to change her identity, else she would still have been drowned deep in here past, and here she makes others drown others drown in the chocolate sea'.

It has been 6 months since she joined SWEET TOOTH, and now they run in full capacity. They have hired 20 helpers and 16 delivery boys. Mr. & Mrs. Buns were very happy as after many years they have paid income tax also. NT was particular to handle all accounts on her own,.

She was now planning to expand her business and after surveying she thought that she would employ at least 2 people from the 100 families that resided in the basti, Mr. Buns now readily agreed to whatever she said. And after talking to the residents she decided to ask a loan and start a small scale industry

She called the manager and he asked her to come on Wednesday, and today was Monday she still was not able to find any guarantor, though the manager has not mentioned it but she knew the procedures. She thought about it and decided to approach Prem

So she went to the hotel and was told that Prem had gone out of Delhi and will be back on Wednesday, as she was leaving the manager called her

M: Geet

G: yes

M: madam wanted to meet you

G: madam

M: yes, Manpreet madam,

G: why?

M: don't know she just said that she wants to meet you whenever you come

G: when did she ask?

M: months back

G: oh, is she here?

M: yes

G: ok tell her I am here

M: come I have told her, she is waiting

G" um

Geet knocks the door

G: may I come it madam?

MP: come in

G: madam you called me

Manpreet stood there watching her, she was surprised how familiar she looked

MP: have a seat

Geet became conscious seeing the way MP was looking at her

G: you called me

MP: who are you?

G: pardon

MP: are you really Geet Handa

G (uncomfortable): yes

MP: are you related to Myra?

G(scared): but why are you asking?

MP: you look so much like Pari

G: who is Pari?

MP: my niece, Myra's daughter

G: you are Yash's sister?

MP: yes, and you are NT

G: I was

MP: means

G: now I am Geet Handa

MP: you were married to Dev Behl right

G: what do you want madam?

MP: I am Mnapreet Yash's sister

G:hello

MP: I know you are divorced but your maiden name is'

G: please Manpreet I am glad to meet you but please I am no longer that woman

MP: anything wrong

And after 8 months she broke down she poured her heart to her caring one, she cried and MP hugged her and cried with her.

Later after Geet was composed, she called Pari and even NT was surprised ti see her

Pa: hi I am Pari, and you are

G: your Maasi

PA: your name

MP was about to say when Geet silenced her

G: for you my name is Maasi

Pa: ok Maasi, nice name

G: friends

Pa: friends

After a hearty talk with Pari and Manpreet Geet left, she completely forgot about the loan.

Later at night MP told Maan about her

MP: Maan I met her today

M: who?

MP: that girl

M: my sweetheart 1

MP: stupid, that bakery girl

M: oh

MP: she is Pari's Maasi

M: you mean Myra's sister

MP: yes

M; then you better stay away from her, she also will be as poisonous as Myra

MP: no she is sweet

M: may be poison is also sweet

MP: Maan

M: Manpreet it's your wish but don't get much friendly to her, she may ditch

M: ok


Part 7 (B) see link below

hope you liked the part 7(A), 😊
and now part 7(B) will be maaneet meeting😆
as this story will proceed in two settings, 7(A) is at her side setting & part 7(B) is about him

when you are smart you can find out ways... HIMMATE MARDA/AURTA MADDADE KHUDA😆

so Manpreet was not able to meet her, and Maan is going to meet her, let's see what happens in the next update.
From now the parts will start merging...

please read it
and tell me how you find it

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part 7(B) page82.30thNOV.2011

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i thought geet will not reveal her real identity t o MP but she did 😲 😳

budhu maan your sweetheart 1 & bakery girl are the same & you are asking MP to stay away from her while you yourself is going crazy for her🤪 😆

can't wait for next part when maan- geet will face each other 😍 😍

Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i'm reading this update again n again n again...😳
kya mast update kiya yaar👏... loved geet-nt n massi-pari talk...😊
yes maan i met ur swthrt 1, but unfortunately i'm ablivious to the fact😒
maan asking me to stay away from his own swthrt 1😆lol

waiting for part 7(B)
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

oo teri... shruti dhokebaaz toh offline ho gayi😡 aur hum yahan update ke liye ro rahe hain



dear kya karoo
kal se exams start ho rahe hain
i was sitting here alone after the staff meeting so decided to type... I just posted typing
then few students came ... Madam doubts clear akr deejiye
so I have to attend them

and typed as soon as they went
just was able to type half... so so many waitngs sp decided to incorporate Maaneet part in next part & (B)
so this is jjust half part ...
sorry
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sigh...releif...i thought you will make miss their face off as geet was asking loan from prem...thank god that prem was not in delhi...why maan is not liking of myra...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

i'm reading this update again n again n again...😳

kya mast update kiya yaar👏... loved geet-nt n massi-pari talk...😊
yes maan i met ur swthrt 1, but unfortunately i'm ablivious to the fact😒
maan asking me to stay away from his own swthrt 1😆lol

waiting for part 7(B)


hey I wil not let Manpreet know that Maan's sweetheart is Geet and let Maan know that NT is Geet
is it ok
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

sigh...releif...i thought you will make miss their face off as geet was asking loan from prem...thank god that prem was not in delhi...why maan is not liking of myra...


remeber Myra was Maan's classmate and flirted wtith him
and marrie dYash
and Pari is her daughter

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