PLANNED LIFE???(MG)#1 - Page 39

hey

sorry for late comment


aww i'm speechless love the flow of the story
NT went through so now she is geet maan dream girl
so amazing how  maan & maanpreet understand one another
even though they dont love each other
i'm sure prem i'll give her all the love that  she  is longing to have
craving more
thnx di
bless yu

at first i was confuse reading dis

its really very interesting...

Later Prem brought Pari to his cabin, as Manpreet was busy, he looked at the small angle and noticed that she looked a lot like Manpreet, but she had no resemblance with Maan, he got more confused, he decided to talk to the little one

Pr: hi, Pari, you seem to be very busy playing

Pa: do you want to join?

Pr: yes, let's play Family game

Pa: what's that? I mean how do we play it?

Pr: it's simple I will become Father and you will become my daughter

Pa: ok, but you don't look like a father

Pr: now how does a father look like? (Confused)

Pa: like Maan's father, a bit old

Pr: not like Maan?

Pa: no, how can he look like a father?

Pr: why can't he? He is your father

Pa: who said?

Pr: then who is your father?

Pa: IDK

Pr: but

Pa: will you play or just ask questions?

Pr: ok, let's start

They played until Manpreet came and she laughed seeing them, when she came she saw

Pa: Father, well I think I should go out with my friends to play

Pr: daughter, why do you want to go out, when we can play here and rather watch TV?

Pa: Father, first you are too big for me and second you should not watch too much TV?

Pr: daughter you should obey your father

Pa: Father you should also listen to me

Manpreet burst laughing, they turned and asked hr

Pa: Manpreet why are yo laughing

Pr: yes, Manpreet why are you laughing

MP: why are you calling each other father daughter

Pa: because this is the game father daughter

M: stupid you should call him Daddy or Papa and Prem you should call her by name

Pr:  maybe you are right

Pa: oh so one should call father as Daddy, um

Prem wanted to ask MP who Pari was, but he was not able to muster enough courage to ask

In the evening Maan came to take them and on way Manpreet noticed the lost look in his eyes

Later at night she asked him

MP: Maan, you met her?

M: no

MP: you saw her?

M: yes

MP: you are not happy?

M: I think I imagined her

MP: explain

And he told her everything

MP: this was not your imagination

M: how can you be so sure?

MP: because if you have imagined her she would have been wearing a sari and her hair would have been straight, but you saw her in a skirt and curly hair, that means you have seen her for real

M: sach Manpreet

M: sach

M: should I go again tomorrow to that place, maybe I can see her again

MP: you must try.

He was very happy, for next 7 days he daily went there, but she did not come there.

Manpreet kept on cheering him, and meanwhile she came close to Prem; Maan helped her at every move.

One day curiosity took over Prem and he asked Manpreet about Pari, and Manpreet told him that she was Myra's and Yash's daughter.

Pr: that's what I were wondering, she looks so much like you, and not a bit like Maan, and Manpreet you know, she looks a lot like Geet also

MP: Geet who is she?

Pr: the girl whose bakery helps us with arranging the confectioneries and cakes

MP: have I met her?

Pr: no, infact I have also met her once but that day when she approached me, one look at her and her eyes reminded me of Pari, even her smile was like Pari

MP: what is her name?

Pr: Geet

MP: full name

Pr: Geet Handa

MP: oh

Pr: do you know her?

MP: no, how old is she?

Pr: IDK, maybe as old as you or maybe 3-4 years  younger, its difficult to predict a age of a girl

MP: are you being sarcastic

Pr: how dare I?

All the time Manpreet wondered who this girl was, she decided to meet her.

She went to the bakery shop to find when this girl comes with the delivery and was told that she comes on Mondays and Thursdays to take the payment, and rest of the days some boys come to deliver

So Manpreet decided that she will meet Geet on Monday.

 

On the other side Maan was getting restless when he was not able to find her, so he lost all hope thinking that maybe she had left Delhi.

One day, (10 days after) while he was coming out of the managers room in the bank he saw her arguing with the clerk, she was looking heavenly dressed in a faded blue Capri with high boots and black half sleeved top with againa straw hat covering her curly hair which were bundled in a rough knot, he kept looking at her in trance, the manager asked him if he was ok and coming out of the trance he called the clerk,

M: any problem

Clerk: sir, this Madam has only one witness and she wants us to help her open the account here, while we need at least 2 witnesses

M: witness means, account holders

C: yes sir

M: tell me where do the witness sign

C: here

Maan signed there clerk was shocked that there most renowned customer was signing for her

M: is it ok now, go open her account and in near future if she ever has any problem tell me

The clerk left nodding foolishly.

 

At night he told Manpreet about it

MP: so what is her name?

M: I don't know

MP: you signed the paper not even looking at her name

M: it never struck me

MP: you are a real fool in love

M: yes I am (making a baby face)

MANPREET (she is no actoress but our very real Manpreetmann)

 

 Part 6 (A) see link below

hope you like the part 5(A), is she not a smart lady😊
and now you must be liking this part 5(B)
as this story will proceed in two settings, 5(A) is at her side setting & part 5(B) is about him

when you are smart you can find out ways... HIMMATE MARDA/AURTA MADDADE KHUDA😆

so Prem finally knows who Pari is, and he also has seen Geet and the ressemblance she has with Pari, now lets see what will happen when Manpreet will meet her,
meanwhile lets wait to find what was NT aka Geet doing in the bank and how she reacts for the un asked help extended by Maan? and what does she talk when she meets Manpreet?

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part 6(A) page 62.28thNOV.2011

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago

Maan is really an idiot. Form hath me tha and naam nahi dekha.Edited by anuandavi - 12 years ago

Shruti   🤗...thank u for the lovely updates...slowly my confusion is clearing 😳...glad u are updating this so fast...really appreciate it...waiting for Maaneet to meet...plz continue...TC  😊

i love it 

Prem-Pari bonding is Great