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Posted: 13 years ago
hayyee tune meri pic bhi attach kardi😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

hayyee tune meri pic bhi attach kardi😳

luv u


with your permission
😉 I wanted to edit one of the pictures and post yours and Prem's together as a couple, am trying to
if you can get help do this for me
after all you are the main lead


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next update kab mile gi...
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Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


with your permission
😉 I wanted to edit one of the pictures and post yours and Prem's together as a couple, am trying to
if you can get help do this for me
after all you are the main lead



me toh laal ho gayi☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

next update kab mile gi...

me waiting...


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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wowww
manuuu ur also part of d ff
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 6(A)

She informed Brij and in a couple of days she had an account number, with money in it, a flat near the basti, PAN NUMBER and an application to apply for UID card.

She brought herself a second hand laptop and mobile connection with internet

But the problem was that her account had a large sum of money and to start she needed a account that had a smaller sum, so she decided to open a account with 10,000/- in a nationalized bank.

She went to the bank with her pan card address proof and the form duly filled, but the problem was that she was not able to arrange two witnesses as the basti had only one account holder and that was Mr. Buns, she thought that the bank people will help her, but after much of argument the clerk did not listen to her pleas, he said

C: madam, you don't understand if anyone one of us signs and later you will do spme crime we will be arrested

G: do I look like a criminal

C: madam I am sorry but for security issues we can't do this

G: but sir, see I already have an account in a private bank

C: madam rules I can't mold them

G: but

As she argued with him, he was called inside, he went and after some time came back and took her form and asked her to wait, after about 30 mins he came back

G: sir

C: madam, here sign here

G: what is this?

C: madam your account has been opened

G: how?

C: this is your passbook, your user ID, password, ATM cum Debit card and do you want the credit card also

G: thank you but you said that I needed 2 witnesses

C: yes, madam we got the second one

G: who? The manager

C: no

G: then

C: here read it (he gave her the form)

She read Maan Singh Khurana and she smiled; so you were not my imagination you are very much in Delhi

G: can I thank him, where is he?

C: sorry madam but he left

G: ok, I'll thank him later (so the great MSK left without meeting me, why not after all he is a married man, he has hi sown life, thank you Maan Singh Khurana)

Mean while NT/ Geet worked at the sweet tooth and learned the way of their working; at nights she would surf the net to find the market; at afternoons she would explore the city and possible potentials of business. She soon found that chocolates especially home made were in demand throughout, youngsters preferred to order online and wanted home delivery.

She opened a website SWEETTOOTH.com and invited online orders, she posted the link in various sites used by students, she wrote a clause which she thought will attract them "ORDER 48 HRS. PRIOR TO DELIVERY TO GET THE BEST PIECE OF CHOCOLATE & DROWN YOURSELF IN ITS ESCATCY" she also posted attractive photographs and mind-blowing descriptions.

In today's fast world her 48 hrs notice attracted attention and she started receiving inquiries, and finally after a wait of 55 days she got her first order; 90 pieces of choconut raisin chocolate dipped in cream of strawberry, it was 3"x1"x0.5" up down chocolate with chocolate inside and strawberry outside. It had to be delivered in Connaught place in the coffee shop at 6:00pm at table no. 12. Though it looked like a prank still she went there half an hour before the time.

She waited feeling a little scared consoling herself that if it were a prank she will get to eat them, at precise 6 a boy came in and sat at table no 6. she sighed and approached him, he too was very nervous

G: hi, I am from sweet tooth, you ordered

B(interrupted): yes, have you brought them

G: yes, here they are, will you like to check

B: no its ok here's the money

And her took the box and handed her the full payment of 9,000/- in cash, she handed him a piece

G: taste it, its not from the 90 pieces of your order

He ate it and was delighted

B: wow, it tastes heavenly, she will sure like it

G: your girl friend

B: no, my sister tomorrow is her birthday and I waned to give them to her at sharp 12 midnight, she just loves chocolates and strawberry is her favorite ice-cream

She smiled and as she was leaving he called her

B: next month is my girl friend's birthday and I wanted to order chocolates and cake for her

G: you are welcome, I'll just write tell me the date and time and flavor

He explained her what he wanted and also gave her advance 2,000/-

She was quite happy or say on cloud 7

The chocolate the boy ordered were distributed in his sisters class of 60 students and among 20 teachers, and to Geet's surprise within next 7 days she had 35 orders, 27 for the same piece and 8 for other flavors. By the end of 30 days sweet tooth got 4, 00,000/- in cash out of which 1, 50,000/- was net profit. Mr. Buns was like near fainting.

She used to deliver the ordered pieces along with them always gave a complimentary piece of other flavor; it again increased her customer base.

By the end of month, Mr. Buns suggested that now she needs hands and few delivery boys, she applied for the small scale industry loan, as she wanted every thing to start fresh, she approached the bank and they asked her to come after a week.

Meanwhile she also started supplying some new hotels, and Prem was their first co-operate customer, she once met Prem and was surprised by the way he looked at her, but she shrugged as his gaze was not impolite just surprised. Later one day she was told that his business partner Manpreet wanted to meet her, she went to her cabin and waited for the lady.


MANPREET (she is no actoress but our very real Manpreetmann)

Character Photos see link below

link of 6(B) in that page

hope you like this part 6(A), is she not a smart lady😊
and now wait for part 6(B)
as this story will proceed in two settings, 6(A) is at her side setting & part 6(B) is about him

NT established herself
meanwhile lets wait to find what was NT aka Geet does s when she meets Manpreet?

please read it
and tell me how you find it

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope again meets her and comes to know her name.
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet mein seriously bohot dimaag hai...👏👍🏼
n now m seriously n eagerly waiting for d next part coz geet aur mai milne wale hai *bitting teeth*
haye what will gonna happen now...*nervous*
hope u'll make me n geet good friends😳 in first meet only, aur fir mai maan ko apni nayi frnd ke baare mein batungi...😉😆
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 6 a
OMG that was fantabulous...
she has got a knack in Business...
will go heights...
cont soon dear...

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