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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing loved it. I just read all the parts of this FF and loved it. Plsss add me in your PM list and plsss PM the next updates.continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow! nice ff! read all parts in one go!
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A big Thank you to all those people who liked it 🤗 But me wondering...10 less! last time 35 people and this time only 25...not fair guys...I want both comments and likes. So dont forget it this time 😃

CHAPTER 9 The matured kid

As Savitri Khurana was wondering what would happen to her grandson, she remembered a fond memory of her Maan as a kid...

(Flashback)

Parvati was running helter skelter in order to get a 6 year old Maan get ready for his school. But Maan being a tantrum kid was proving to be very difficult. Rajashekar was sitting in the living room, reading a business paper while Daadi was having her morning tea and having her share of fun looking at the mother son morning leela. She was grinning from ear to ear as she saw her Maan running all around the living room, shouting while his mother ran behind him so that she could feed him and get him ready to go to school. 'Maanu...idhar aao beta aur khana khao...please...school keliye der horahi hai...' said Parvati exasperatedly but Maan just stuck out his tongue at his mother and continued to run around, with one sock in his leg and the other clutched in his hand while he had worn his shoe to the leg without a sock and the other shoe was left unattended in a corner. Daadi laughed at his antics while Parvati shrank on the couch unable to match the speed of her extremely naughty kid. 'Rajashekar...aaphi samjhayiye usse...school keliye der horaha hai aur yeh ghar mein fire in the mountain run...run...run...laga rakha hai' said Parvati to her husband but he just shrugged his shoulders and continued to read his newspaper. Parvati groaned in irritation and Maan started laughing from the corner looking at his mother. Daadi finally felt that she should do something otherwise her naughty grandson would bunk the school. She slowly went to him and asked 'Maanu...apni mumma ko koi is tarah pareshan karte hai...hmm?' and Maan just looked at her, confused but then realized that he was actually troubling his mum. He pouted his lips cutely and went to his mother, walking as quickly as his little legs would carry him and stood in front of her. He smiled and said 'sholly...' and parvati hugged him and fed him the food, got all his school accessories in the right place and took him to school. Daadi waved her hand and said 'jaldi aajana beta...phir hum dono milkar khelenge'to which her Maan nodded vigourously and disappeared out of sight.

After a while, Parvati came back leaving Maan at school. She was posistively beaming about something. Daadi noticed and asked 'Parvati, aap itne khush kyun lag rahe hai?'

'Maa ji main to hairan hogayi hoon, itni kam umar mein Maan itna sab kuch sochta hai iski ummeed bhi nahi thi mujhe. Aaj usse dekh kar sach mein bohot khushi hui' she replied.

'Arre batayiye to sahi, kya hua?'

'Aaj raaste mein hume ek bachcha mila tha, kisi ghareeb parivaar ki. Woh humse paise maangne aaya tha aur Maan usse dekhte hi uski bag mein jo pocket money rakha tha na sab kuch uss bachche ko dediya aur mujhe kaha kyun na hum uss bachche ko school mein dakhila karwade. Mujhe bohot khushi hui maa ji hamare Maan itna matured hai woh bhi itni kam umar mein. Maine issliye uss bachche ki maa baap se baat karke usse Maan ke school mein hi dakhila karwadi. Uss bachche ki saari karchaye ab Khurana Trust sambhalega. Kyun maa ji?'

Daadi was overwhelmed and she heartily said 'haan parvati, zaroor. Hamari khushi ki to koi seema hi nahi hai aaj. Hamare Maan koi mamooli sa bachcha nahi hai bete, dekhiye woh aage jaakar khoob tarakki kharenge aur hum sab ka naam roshan karenge...'

'Bilkul maa ji...'

(Flashback ends)

Daadi smiled thinking about her extraordinary grandson and she realized he would succeed in everything, even LOVE!

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Here, Maan was all ready to be back home today. His stuff had been packed, his private jet was ready (which had the abbreviation KE stamped on it), his work had been completed and his collection was ready to be show cased the coming month. Now, all he had to do was select some super models who would display his magnificent collection in the biggest fashion week he was planning to host. He called his Daadi and informed her that he would be coming today. Adi had called him to tell that the dates of the fashion week had now been confirmed and also told him that MK should select the final venue out of the places Annie had chosen for the event to be hosted. Maan told him that he would select the venue in a day's time and also gave him instructions to call for interview of the best models among whom he would select the best to display his collection in the largest ever event of fashion hosted. This was the dream project of Maan and he had been working for this for past a year and he wouldnt let anything or anyone to mess up this event. He had planned everything perfectly and now it was time to step-by-step execute his perfect plan. He put on his sunglasses and went down to the car parking where his 2 crore, black Audi was waiting for him. He was escorted to the Heathrow airport where the security check took just moments and he boarded his sexy black jet to go back home.

PRECAP:

When two similar individuals meet each other!

You would have heard many love stories where opposites are attracted to each other but in this love story both Maan and Geet are of similar thoughts. Let's see how their love story blossoms.

Edited by bharadwajrad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u guys 😃 love u 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Excellent update...loved it ...but little short...😛...
waiting for their meeting...
please update soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update n thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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excellent update..
at an early age itself maan has been such a luvable kid..
luvd to c a diff side of maan..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
part 9
lovely part...
the kid Maan was so adorable...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
awesome part
i loved it
precap is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
SHORT BUT GIVES AN INSIGHT INTO MAAN

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