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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update!
nupur wants to abort the child, but mayank doesn't. he actually feels attached to the child.
how can nupur be so cruel? she knows she loves mayank, but she doesn't want to admit it. i dont understand whats the problem :/
mayank finally tried to make a deal with her. i dont want her to accept it. she should actually want the baby
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay so no apologies would make up .. all i will say is that .. i didn't update bcz i really couldn't.

Chapter # 16

"I am nupur!!, I want you to give birth to my child and I will pay the price, fair enough?", he said normally but nupur's face was stunned and shocked, "no hurries!, think properly, I am sure you won't leave this tempting offer", he smiled and left.

For the first time nupur felt like slapping him on his smile. She felt like trash, a useless commodity with a price tag. Was she so selfish that she could be made to do anything by money?, any damn thing!!. Was she so selfish that mayank thought she was creating this fiasco only for money?.

She started crying with hiccups and for the first time since morning, actually placed her hand over her stomach and clenched the flesh tight in her hands, "I am sorry baby ' I am so sorry ..", she kept on crying for a long time until she felt sleep coming over.

**

"So, what about the offer"

Mayank asked the moment she came out of the room. He was standing in the kitchen and she could hear the coffee machine as well.

"that was an insult you gave me", she replied coldly and headed towards the door and mayank followed her, "that was something you would want", he said.

"I am getting late mayank", she opened the door and mayank held her hand softly, "please nupur .. please ..", he whispered in her ear and the tears she was controlling flowed down, "please don't kill my child", he crawled his hand around her waist and hugged her tightly from back while nupur took a deep breath, thinking of any way to stop the tears.

"please nupur, I know you are not that stone hearted, I know you love me, you love our child too, please stop running behind your so called persona ' please .. you are a good person nupur, we are a normal couple, we can celebrate the news of our child, we can lead a simple normal life", he kissed her neck softly and crying she closed her eyes and mayank made her face him.

Her eyes were closed tightly and face was wet with tears, he brushed his hand lightly over her face, wiping all tears and then kissed her all over her face. The feeling of his lips was so warm and love filled that nupur felt she would melt down right at the moment. She opened her eyes and shutting her mind from everything, she hugged him and mayank placed his strong arms around her, tightly enclosing her. Her sobs became louder and picking her up, he led her to the sofa and there he sat down pulling her very close to him and stroking. She was crying endlessly and mayank was patiently stroking, he knew he had penetrated into the real nupur.

"I don't want this child mayank", she said with hiccups and mayank kissed her head, "kyun nupur?"

"mujhe dar lagta hai mayank",she said and hugged him even more tight, "I am scared, what if my child will also have to go orphanage?", she looked up, "that life is worse than hell!, I don 't want anyone to go there, not my child !, if something happens to us than what?, I don't want any child .. please mayank ..", she closed her eyes again and mayank made her face him, "the whole world has children nupur, we also have a child, just because of a fear we can't move away from the happiness nupur", he held her hand and again placed it on her stomach, "I love both of you nupur, endless .. please don't behave like this and stay away from your own happiness and ..

"mayank you don't understand .. I am scared, you would never .."

her statement was cut short by a soft kiss on her lips, although she moaned under his touch, but still she kissed back harshly, trying to convey her anger and helplessness.

"trust me nupur ..", he whispered and she closed her eyes, allowing the stream of tears to flow down.

"I don't trust anyone mayank, I am sorry", her voice suddenly turned cold and before she she could jump down his lap, he pulled her more close, "stop lying", he said strictly, "you trust me that is why our shild is still alive"

"stop it mayank please, don't make it more difficult for me .."

"I want you to make it impossible for you nupur, you CANNOT kill our child and that is it!", he held her hand and they both stood up, with nupur blankly staring at mayank, "and now lets go to the doctor, afterall I need to know of my baby needs some extra care or not", he dragged her out to the car and nupur just walked behind blankly.

For once she felt like a stream of water just flowing down without any will, just flowing down the mountain following the force of gravity. Did she became so mindless that she was allowing someone to decide something so big for her?, but then again, this someone was NOT anyone, he was mayank .. but again .. WHO WAS MAYANK? .. her lawyer .. the charmer .. her protectector .. her secret partner .. her friend .. her husband .. her lover .. NO .. these all things didn't matter much .. what made him more important and authoritative was .. he was the father of her child.

Chapter 17 - Page 95

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMGG!!!!
😲
ur back🤗🤗Missed ya🤗

WoW Fantu u haven't at all missed even an inch of grip from ur story...I loved every sentence of the update to say the least😳

Specially the way Mayank stopped her at the door step, that act was so emotional that I cud feel his helplessness n Nupur's submission to his words coming up...⭐️

u play with words absolutely brilliantly Fantu...do good wid exams and update whenever u get time...😃
Edited by Payal-15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
YA ALLAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kinzu
API...
bhttt lambi umar hain apki...
abhi main Mehak Api se apke barein mein hi puchke msg kar rahi thi ke ap kaha hoon...hehe
n yeha akey dekha toh apka PM mila...
missed U lodsss...🤗

awesome update API...
loved it lodsss...
it was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...
i loved it...
d way Mayank stopped her at d door was so beautiful...n emotional..
Mayank loved her a looottt n he evn know dat she loves him too...
it was such a beautiful part...
evn Nupur's part was emotional...
i loved d last lines of dis part lodsss...
hopefully Mayank will remove her every fear totally...
loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG
finally ur back
sooo happy
but plzz next time a longgg wala update pleeshhh
comming back to the update
it was sooo touching
i knew it only mayank can handle her
he won't be harsh
he is a sweetheart and he proved it once again
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice dear loved this one ...great part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

missed you a lot...

that was most awaiting update...
and i am very very happy that you potrayed the feelings of
mayank and nupur so delicately and beautifully...
that was really new side of nupur that we watching that she actuallly
love her child so much that she didn't want him to suffer like she had...
aww... that was so... loveable...
i am happy that nupur had realised this thing that may be mayank is nothing
to her but he is father for her child and this truth can't be ignored.
she can ignore her inner feelings that she too love him ...
. but she can't hide this sweet and yer amazing reality...
yaar aaj aapki iss.. update pe to hum fida ho gaye...
Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

this song is to just cheer up nupur.. about her thinking towards life..

and yes one more thung i like the way mayank hanlde her...
i am happy that... with such.. loveable gestures he could able to handle his wife so stably...
Jeevan Ke Din Chhote Sahi
Hum Bhi Bade Dilwale
Kal Ki Humein Fursat Kahan
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale

Jeevan Ke Din Chhote Sahi
Hum Bhi Bade Dilwale
Kal Ki Humein Fursat Kahan
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale

Jeene Ka Rangeen Mausam
Yeh Khoobsurat Zamana
Jeene Ka Rangeen Mausam
Yeh Khoobsurat Zamana
Apne Yehi Chaar Pal Hain
Aage Hai Kya Kisne Jaana
Jeena Jise Aata Hai Woh
In Mein Hi Mauj Mana Le
Kal Ki Humein Fursat Kahan
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale

Jeevan Ke Din Chhote Sahi
Hum Bhi Bade Dilwale
Kal Ki Humein Fursat Kahan
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale

Yeh Zindagi Dard Bhi Hai
Yeh Zindagi Hai Dava Bhi
Yeh Zindagi Dard Bhi Hai
Yeh Zindagi Hai Dava Bhi
Dil Todna Hi Na Jaane
Jaane Yeh Dil Jodna Bhi
Is Zindagi Ka Shukriya
Sadke Main Uparwale
Kal Ki Humein Fursat Kahan
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale

Kal Ki Humein Fursat Kahan
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale

Jeevan Ke Din Chhote Sahi
Hum Bhi Bade Dilwale
Kal Ki Humein Fursat Kahan
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale
Sochen Jo Hum Matwale
Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i fear ..is things so simple...they arent..hope she belives he is her lover to... beautifully written nupurs feeling...
Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful. u portray the feeling of both mayank and nupur is so touching. continue soon

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