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First Love ( just imagination )

This is my first love... i met him ….in school when I was in 4th grade. I was a new kid at that time and I fell for him the minute I saw him! He was a 5th grader so I rarely met him and never had the chance to talk with him...then a year later we were teammates at a school club and so we became friends but then another year passed by he stopped being my friend for no reason...another year later I find out he likes me!

My Love Story

When I first met you
I didn't think twice
in a few seconds I knew I was caught
my heart beats in a thrice
my mind can't think straight
neither of us gave it a thought
but together in love we fell

rarely meeting
never speaking
is it even meant to be
we were still young
my feelings, slowly away they flew
what about you?

a year passes
we change classes
I was in 5th grade then
while you where in 6th
I tell you this is no myth

as friends we start talking
finally joking and fighting
for the very silliest reasons
I grew more fond of you
with every passing season

another year goes by
with me you stop talking
suddenly you start ignoring
and I start wondering
if I'd done something wrong
instead of beginning to cry
I stood up strong
and deciding to do the same thing you do
I began playing your game too

I played this game of ours the best
but in the end from your friends I find out
that you ignored and never talked
because you loved me so

at first I didn't believe
giving you a test
I was finally relieved
to realize it was all true
your love came out of the blue!

slowly everything you've hidden
is beginning to show
everytime you pass by my side
my heart used to glow
and the angels would take me to cloud nine

now time flies by
happy memories unfolded
new facts founded
we grew older
and by each passing minute we became closer
our hearts grew fonder

now that I'm in your class
I get to see you more
you're even clearer than before
you never made me feel like broken glass
boy, you're the best I've ever had

I catch you looking at me
noticing that twinkle in your eye
you make me smile
seriously, I bet my heart would run a mile!

hope u guys ll lyk it...waiting 4r ur rplys😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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mindblowing peom u tell the whole story in ur peom brilliant
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mindblowing..!U should be a poem writer lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely poem piyali its real u r love story yr . tell me hn .but ur fantastic writer yr u describe whole story beautiful .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow piyoo 😳 it was beautiful😳 every word was beautiful to show its purity n innocence 😳 btw is it ur story ?😉 bro was asking may be uski chhoti behen ko pyaar mein padte dekh he feels protective ?😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow beautiful poem piyali...It is beautifully written. But is it ur true story??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

lovely poem piyali its realglad u lyk it bro...n happy to see that it seems real 2 u

u r love story yr . tell me hnno its not my story...n waise bhi i m just a skul going kid ...so😛
.but ur fantastic writer yr u describe whole story beautiful .thanx a lot 4r appreciating me..😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW...!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
It's totally MIND-BLOWING..!!!!👏
Seems u r a VERY good poet...👍🏼
U described it all bit by bit...👏👏
U r truely AMAZING...!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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piyali🤗..it was awesome dear!!!..i luvd it..it looks so real.😉..is it experience !!!!..anyway i luvd d way u explained d luv of two kids which grew up with them.😍..well written.⭐️..n thnx 4 d pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow ur a lovely poet u write it very well fab work girl👏

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