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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank UUU...😃😃😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

First of all a big THANk U to all who LIKEd and commented on the previous updates!!!!!!!! 😃

If i have to describe in Maan's words,"pehle ap logo ki coments aur likes ki meri aadad ban gayi thi lekin ab zarurat ban gayi he" 😳


With that here we go...


PART 6

Khurana mansion:
Maan was doin his push-ups and tai-chi. He was profusely sweating.But his thots were occupied by the girl whom he met today. Geet..the name kept ringing in his brain. It was so unlike his usual self.For the past few hours,he had been rigoursly workin out just to get rid of her thots but she seems to have possessed his brain.

He had not even known her for a day and he couldn't just stop thinking about her.Awful! How could a girl do this to him? But still,there is something special in everything that she did...her smile,her anger, her voice...it was keeping his hormones high!

He lifted his foot in the air doing yet another move when Yash's voice broke his chain of thots.
Yash: Maan! Seems like u had a great first day!
Maan:wats so special? The place is so girly.
Yash: cmon yaar thats the USP!
Maan glared at him and wiped his face with a towel.As he sat down to relax,
Yash:bata na Maan. How was the xperience?Something special?
As Yash said that again her smiling face came to his mind.
Maan(self-thot):ye mujhe kya ho gaya? Yash ne mujse college ke barey me pucha aur me Geet ke barey me soch rha hu! Ye ladki mujhe paagal kar degi.

Yash: Maan! Kis soch me dubey ho?
Maan: Just stop it Yash. Aisey hi din bhar un ladkiyo ke beech rehna padta he aur upar se tum,yeha bhi chen se jeeney nhe dogey!
Yash: chill Maan! Me to bas ek kaam se aya tha.

Just then Adi knocked at his door.

Maan: come in Adi.
Adi: Gud evening Maan sir. Wo HPwale construction site ka design aur estimate. Ap ek baar dekh ke finalize kar de to..
Maan:sarey details cover kiye?
Adi:yes sir.
Maan:very Good. I will check that.
Yash: Maan,wat abt my work?
Maan rolled his eyes.
Maan:ha batao.

Yash took out a photograph.
Yash: ye..is ladki ko tum jantey ho? Tumhare colg ki he
Maan: Yeah thats Mira.
Adi: Are u goin to propose her?
Yash:arey nhe nhe. Wo..ye ladki mere Lakme fashion week ke ke liye apt model he. I want her to be my show stopper!
Maan: so why r u telling me all these?Wats my role?
Yash: Maan plz tum kisi tarah ussey baat karke mana lo na
Adi:he he he..he he he
Maan gave an angry glare to poor Adi who became silent immediately.
Maan:Yash,tumne samaj kya rakha he mujhe? Tumne soch bhi kaise liya ki Maan Singh Khurana ek ladki paas aise request leke jayega! Aur agar wo ladki interested nhe he to why r u forcing her?
Yash:baat uski nhe he.I know that she is interested but uski ek friend he jo usey 24/7 bodyguard ki tarah protect karti rehti he.
Maan(raising his eye-brow): friend?
Yash: ha! he koi Geet Handa.

Now,how could he keep himself out of this issue?
Maan:umm..tumhe lagta he ki Mira is interested?
Yash:ofcourse!
Maan: then..count me in. I will try but not sure,huh!
Yash:ok! Thats enough! A try by MSK means yes!
Adi: absolutely! He he he..
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Next day,

The MArch class was dispersed for the break. Before Maan could leave, a group of girls marched into the class and surrounded him. He lukd at them with questioning eyes.

Mira: Girls, is female kingdom me aise kayi batey he jo humare ye 'bhai sahb' nhe jantey. To ye humara pharz banta he ki unhe ye sab 'sikhaye'
The crowd cheered up.Suddenly everybody's eyes(including MSK) went to the direction where they heard a voice,'Side please'
Maan luked curiously as Geet Handa made her way to the centre next to him.She was holding some paper. Wats she upto??
Finally she spoke out,
Geet(holding the paper):oye Pinky,zara dekh ke batana ki ye papers kya he?
Pinky:arey ye to humara 'full-slip circular' he
Geet: ohoo..apna 'full-slip circular' zara padke sunana. Aur dhyan rhe kuch bhi na chute, full-stop,coma colon wagera wagera

She glared at Maan.

Pinky: (clears her throat) "All students are supposed to wear a full-slip while in the campus premises"
Geet: translation please!
Mira: matlab is college ke sare students ko campus me full slip pehnna he.
Geet: full slip maney? Arey bata na zara. apney sahb bhi to janey (winks)
Mira: full slip yani yeha pe humari spagetti

All the girls giggled.

Geet: ek minute.. Umm Pinky zara dekh ke batana ki ye rule sirf ladkiyo ke liye he kya?

Pinky:nhe Geet isme likha he 'all students'

Geet:hmm..(circling around Maan)all students!

As she reached behind him,Geet lifted his shirt. Maan almost jumped in shocked and all the girls started laughing.
Geet:haye haye babaji! Is janab ne 'wo' nhe pehna! Maan ne 'wo' nhe pehna! Ab kya kiya jaye?

Suddenly NT sprang out from the crowd to the centre.
NT: Geet ye circular boys ko join karane se pehle ka he

Geet: to kya hua,huh? Ye circular kisi ne withdraw nhe kiya or na he ammend kiya he. Which means its applicable.Ab zara apna bakwaas bandh barkna aur chup-chap tamasha dekho, JAO!
NT: This is ragging. I vl report this.
Geet: Arey jo ukhadna he ukhad le..abhi cut le yeha se..
NT left the place angrily.

Geet turned towards Maan. She took a full-slip from her bag and threw it at him.
Geet:chalo chalo.. ab zyada time waste mat kariye aur isey pehen lijiye.Otherwise it will be a breach of conduct!
Maan takes the slip and luks at it. Its a white cotton material that will reach upto his knee. He smirked.



Maan took a long breath,'ok girls. I am ready to wear this. Well i don't want to 'violate' any 'rule'!

Geet gave her victory smile.
Maan:lekin issey pehle ki me ye pehnu,i wanna make sure ki tum sab ne bhi 'ye' pehna he ya nhe! Akhir rule to rule he!

Geet stood there pale.Just when she thot she had won,he would checkmate her!
Mira(murmured): oye Geet ye wala raita bhi phail gaya!
Maan: to shuru karey? Ummm..(moving closer to Geet while she stepped back in fear) Pinky! Have u worn a spagetti?
Pinky: wat?
She moved back.
Maan: wat abt u Mira?
Mira: i have a class

As Maan approached the girls,all of them ran here and there for life. They got out of the lecture hall and peeped in.

Finally,he came near Geet.Her heartbeats were raising with each of his steps.He stopped as his lips were mere inches away from here.
Maan(in his seductive tone): i trust U Geet.Aj tumne kuch aur pehna ho ya nhe 'ye' zarur pehna hoga!

Geet lukd at him,her jaw dropped. She couldn't utter a word. Embarassement was all that she could feel...



Maan: Ok girls get ready i am gonna wear this.

He ripped off his shirt. Before he got rid of his jeans,all the girls turned around. Geet shut her eyes tight! It was complete darkness in front of her.
After a few minutes she opened her eyes as she heard Maan saying,' Ok girls,the show begins NOW!'

She opened her eyes to find the rarest of the sight in her life.There stood the tall n handsome man of MIT in a knee-length slip!! Any more resistance was impossible and she burst into laughter!

Thats wat he wanted. Her smile! He could do anything to see that. But wait,thats just bcoz he feels gud to see her smile.That doesn't mean it would be all easy for her.After all,she should know how it feels after messing up with Maan Singh Khurana. He waited for her next move.
Geet,on the other hand,had no more urge to play a game which she is losing.She never xpected him to wear that and on top of it he lukd handsome even in a slip.The masculine aura naturally oozed out of him and the way all those girls were eyeing at him,she didn't like that.He is already a star and here she is promoting him even more,better she ends this.
Geet: So,galz ab jo humare pyare dost ne ye slips pehen liya to sab taliya bajao (claps)
Ok now this gentleman will remove the slip and the meeting will be dispersed.
Maan:not yet Ms. Handa!
Geet:k..kyu? Ab kya he?
Maan: i am not goin to change unless something is done with this circular. Otherwise it would be a 'breach of conduct' rite Geet?

Geet forgot to blink her eyes as she stared at him her mouth wide opened.
Pleasure is the word that he felt when he saw her in that state.To give her the taste of victory and then denying it..he felt as if he was denying her an orgasm! Oops way to go to reach there. But how could he ignore the big almond brown eyes staring at him..her plump lips parted in shock...and the blood gushing to her cheek giving it a pink glow...wow! He had never seen anything so cute and beautiful. He had this urge to take her in his lap and seal those lips.But this is war,not love!
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PRECAP:
Juliet:You are suspended from MIT! 😲 😲

How was that? 😉 😆

I dont know how would you react.But here is the similar scene from the movie


http://wabisabi.typepad.com/.a/6a00d8341ce06c53ef014e602b4d44970c-800wi



Do press LIKE and COMMENT!!
I am waiting...😍

PS: You cant help Sachin Tendulkar when he got out at 94 but some of you can help me to get a 100 LIKE and not get stuck at 97...(greedy me...but i dont have a choice ) 😳


Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear

is the precap related to geet or maan ??
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
no words to describe!!!u r juz amazing!!! i cud imagine d whole shot frm d movie while reading dis updt...supprrbb...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
maan is da best
cant wait 4 more
who is suspended
con soon
thanksss
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow just amazing
superb
awesme
wonderful update.
Dnt hav mre words to say. I can just say that iam waitng eagerly 4 newt part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
res madhu u are darling
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...awesome update...waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update yar... 😃
cont soon... 😊
n plz.. do pm me too... so tat i can know wen updatin next part... 😊

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