PLANNED LIFE???(MG)#1 - Page 34

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Maan just dropped Manpreet and Pari to the hotel, today was Saturday Pari's day off, usually Maan took her princess with him; but today MP was going to take her, they climbed out of the car

MP: bye Maan

P: Bye Maan

M: bye sweet heart 2, bye sweetheart 3

And he left, Prem was seeing this from the lobby and as MP went inside he greeted them

Pr: Hi Manpreet

MP: hi Prem

P: she's the little angle

MP: yes, she is Pari, Pari say hi to Prem

Pa: hi Prem

He felt a little odd when Pari called him by his first name, both the girls followed him to his cabin

Once inside curiosity took over him

Pr: hey Manpreet why does Pari call Maan by name

MP: what else shall she call him by then?

Pr: she should be calling him Papa, or Dad etc.

MP: why?

Pr: well this is what daughters call their father

MP: oh like that, but no one minds it

Pr: but then will get use to calling him by name and then later it will look odd

MP: um, you have a point, ok Pari call Maan, not Maan

Pa: then what shall I call him

MP (thinking): call him Maan Dada

Pa: ok, Maan Dada

Pr: no, Manpreet she should call him Papa and certainly should not take his name

MP: what is this with you Prem? It's ok he will not mind,

Pa: Preet why is this Prem fighting with you?

MP: yes I too am thinking so, that why is he so concerned about what you should call Maan

Pr: she calls you also by name?

MP: yes

Pr: why?

MP: she is always been calling us by our names, ok Pari from now you will call me wait let me think

Pr: what there to think, she should be calling to Maa

MP: why?

Pr: because she is your daughter

MP: oh like that, then forget about it Preet is fine

Pr: Manpreet is everything alright between you and Maan

MP: yes

Pr: do you love him; I mean does he love you

MP: yes and no

Pr: means wait he called you sweetheart 2 and her sweet heart 3 then who is this sweetheart 1

MP: his dream girl

Pr: he loves someone else; I mean he has a dream girl

MP: yes, Prem not just stop this questionnaire my head is spinning due to this non stop firing

Pr: hey Manpreet (before he could complete his statement she said)

MP: oh no, where is Pari's bag, I think it is in the car

She called Maan and he said he was on way to give it to her

Prem was confused, Maan loves some girl, Pari does not call either Maan or MP Maa Papa, there is certainly something wrong

Maan comes and gives the bag to MP

Prem: hi Maan

M: hi Prem, nice to meet you, she talks so much about you

Pr: is it? I mean nice to meet you and is it true that she talks about me a lot

M: yes, nonstop, like today Prem wore this, today Prem called the meeting, today Prem said that, today Prem' and so many things

Pr: you don't mind?

M: why should I?

Pr: she is your wife, don't you feel jealous?

M (surprised): Manpreet, you have not told him yet

MP (nods in negative)

M: when will you tell him

MP (shrugs her shoulder and dips her head)

M: well Prem, that's true that we married in 2004 but

MP: Maan you had a meeting

M: oh I just forgot, excuse me Prem I have to leave, nice meeting you

And he left the confused Prem, as soon as he left MP took Pari and before Prem could ask anything she went to her own cabin. Prem resolved to know what was all this, he will very soon solve this mystery and if this Maan is betraying his Manpreet he will not leave him in one piece.

 

At the red light signal

Maan was tapping the steering wheel waiting for the light to turn green, in order to give  Pari's bag to MP he was going to almost miss his meeting, he looked around as he was looking he saw few pedestrians crossing the road, he looked at them and then he saw her.

She was wearing, unlike sari, a long knee length blue skirt and a full sleeved white top, she had a basket in her hand and with her other hand she was helping an elderly lady cross the road, her hair were open into tumbling curls, her eyes were emphasized by a thin eye liner, she was wearing high boots and had a straw hat on her head, she was looking so different. He wanted to sto her, but how, justthen the lights turned green and the cars started honking and he had to drive, he pulled on the side but By the time he managed she disappeared in the crowd and he stood there wondering that was it his imagination or was she really there.

Part 5 (A) see link below

hope you like the part 4(A), is she not a brave lady😊 and now this part 4(B)
poor Prem he is hell confused, so am I ... what I am writing, what was that Maan was saying and Manpreet interferred??????

as this story will proceed in two settings, 4(A) is at her side setting & part 4(B) is about him
wait for the part 5 to know what name did NT choose, though you all know it😉
what do you think wa sthegirl with tumbling curls his imagination or real????😉😆
now tell me which movie she watched ... as for name you all know which name she chooses, you all just tell me which movie she saw?

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago

oye oye . yhaoo yahoo...🥳lalalalalalalallal🥳

Edited by maansee - 12 years ago

hey gr8 part..

Awesome update...well pari calling them by name luks odd, even when she isnt their daughter. Well pari is niece to geet na? Wow...  prem want to hit maan for betraying manpret but when manpret will tell prem that pari is not their daughter and they are just friend then prem want to hug maan ;)hey geet's makeover is awesome. And he again missed her. I dont think he is imagining coz, ie he was imagining he would have seen her in sari, like her usual self. But seeing her make over form means he saw her in real, i think so.Movie is may be jub we met.?Continue soon. Me waitin for more. yar me writing frm mobile and "enter" is not availible so jurt bear it like this.

Maza aa gaya. Prem was so confused. Waise is the movie "Geet gaya patharon ne"

oh..wow!
so prem s still unaware of the fact..but y MP s not telling him?
waiting for maneet's meeting..

awesome update...loved it...

part 4b
alright now my question is 'is Naintara Geet or Geet Naintara'?
nice part...
poor Prem hell confused...
so Maan saw HER again...
cont soon dear...

Awesome update shruti...!!!