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^^A must watch video for all naksh fans! (saru di... had made this video coz it was ur fav hindi song! but when this ff post was decided, i thought i shud introduce the post by this video! njoy the video!)
"In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein," a sweet cute, less romantic but amazingly fantastic ff.. thats how we can describe it! Considering that ILKDM is saru di's only ff, and that too on naksh, it is without a question that the ff will be very very close to her heart😊 So, i thought that why not show her how we, as readers love her ff...😍
(this time probably i shud be last, and sej shud be first! i havent read her extra long analysis... but the lines which i read were awesome! sej rocks at writing and i suck at it👎🏼😆 But thats NOT the reason i shud be last... the main reason is because i m THE EDITOR of her ff, and her hindi🤣 So, i better be last!
Introduction:
This is a short analysis report on the story In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein. This report will consist of the advantages and meaning behind the story. How I personally as a reader view and understand this FF. The purpose of this analysis report is to allow the author and other readers to see how this story means to me and possibly the majority of the people out here. More over, this report will discuss all the emotions, feelings, and concerns I have and feel about In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein.
Results:
From the starting the author has shown the beautiful bond and connection between a husband and wife, in the form of our very own Naitik and Akshara. The honest trust and love that every couple or person wishes in life has been included that in this story. which I feel is very important to show because it allows people to see and learn the importance of relationship especially the relationship of a husband and wife. For any story its highly important that the title be catchy and interesting, in this case I am sure everyone will agree that the title of this FF is very unique and different, it has a greater meaning to it which is tried to explain in the story it self by showing the readers the relationship of the two characters. Just by reading the title readers are attracted because if the title is so beautiful then its surly assured the story will be as beautiful. Talking about the story once again what to say it's very appropriate for the teenage and young adult age groups. Why you ask well simple' one thing we all search in life is for true love and an honest and strong relationship, this FF sets an example of how to carry and keep that one special relationship special, it teaches and shows that even if problems come your way, in the arms of that someone special all problem have to bow down in front of you.
The mood of the story is very romantic so for all the hard core love fans this story is always a treat and joy to read. By reading all the parts one can just imagine how many ways there are to confess and show your love. I must comment on how Saru has left the boring way of love and transferred it in to something totally new. But the question is where you get these ideas, well here is my take on it, as a girl we all have different dreams of how our married life is going to be and how we want it to be, and from your ff I always see that I can find you in the parts, be it in Akshara's teasing, to her mood swings, to her reasoning, and to her love, I can see you, so it feels as if you are writing your future life and sharing it with all of us. Every time you take us or at least me on an adventure of love and full of romance just how I like it. So even when your parts are long I enjoy reading them, from all the many FF's I read im always looking forward to reading yours because I thoroughly enjoy it. So what if im not a heart born fan of naksh I swear to god your FF makes me become their fan, many time I turn the show on but then I keep thinking bout your ff and imagine and pray that I wish you were the writer of the show, but since that doesn't happen I just turn it off and read your FF instead.
Like mentioned before each part is something new something better, there is never a feeling of "I wish this was done better or the last part was better". It's always better and way improved (I don't know how you do that, but you have to teach me) then when you first started writing the story way back in June. Even with Hindi issues if you can write half the part in Hindi and people like me who has never spoken or read Hindi till this year can understand, and if I can understand it then it means something naa. It means that your Hindi is very very good, and I know you get it checked but I think even if you didn't your story would be as awesome as it is now. One thing I must say is that the length of the story has improved and im so happy that you are writing longer parts and at such short notices, I mean I say I will write it but before I post one part you have two already posted and that shows how dedicated you are. Some of my favorite and highlights of this story ( the whole story is awesome but I have my favorite parts as well) are: the part where naksh are playing cricket and akshi winks at Naitik , the last part the whole flower apology thing very beautiful, both naksh going to Europe, them getting stuck on the mountain I'm telling you I felt their pain, it sucks to be stuck in snow, and the best thus far ( im sure you can guess it if you think) the amusement park. There were other parts I liked as well like the constant nok joks between naksh and Naitik always bugging akshi for kisses and romance, as well their cute interactions when they are mad, happy, and frustrated with each other.
Conclusion:
Finally why I love your FF so much hell I already explained' but once again I love your FF is because it just touches the heart yaar I mean I don't know how to explain it in words, I guess only people who read it will understand that there is something in this FF that we can all relate to or want in our lives. Very few people who write FF's can do that (sadly even I cant do that.. I no sad tear tear) but here you are writing as if it's a piece of cake. There is no room for improvements I mean how do you improve things that have been prefect form the start, something I want to see hmm lets see, naksh having a baby but I know you will show that VERY soon I have a feeling (especially after reading the last part). Something I don't want to see THIS is very important I don't want to see this FF to end. I mean I don't care what you do but you best not end this ff anytime soon it MUST I say MUST run until I finish my FF's which is ugh a while, if you take in consideration how slow I write. But forget that this FF is awesome and im sure who ever reads this FF and this analysis/reflection will agree with me. And in conclusion im going to tell all those lovely people out there who don't read Saru's ff, guy please give it a try im sure many of you will not be disappointed (I say many cause I cant speak for the people who are not a fan of romance naa). And I really do hope that you write more FF's in the upcoming time Saru because I know we will all really appreciate stories like these which teach us something in each part. Hope we are blessed with many more parts and much more romance and love.
Sincerely,
Sejal Naik
Ps- Writers note: yeh so I tired to make this as professional and you know from a readers POV so I hope I was consistent and relevant and that I have given the author and the other readers a clear analysis on this story. As well I have tired to make it like the other analysis reports I have come across and saw so ye I hope you enjoyed it!
hai saru🤗
munduga putinaroju shubhakankshalu!!!😃
naku ne ff lo nachna part: part- 3 nvu baga romantic ga rasav a part😳
naku a part ante chala istam nvu inka taravata parts romantic ga raytam improve cheskunav...👏 i dinot expect oka andhra amai rastundi ani first ne ffchadivinappudu... alsalu ala anipichaledu... naku first nvu andhra nunchi ani teledu kada so nenu english lo commemt chesedani...manaki chala days patindi kada idaram same state ani telusukovataniki😆 naku telisinapatinunchi i started commenting in telugu adikuda long comments may be nenu IF lo anta long coments avari FF ke kuda ivaledu...😆 nd i hope u will improve ur hindi as well😛
i love ur ff..u improve ur writing skill lot.i just love ur ff. the part which is i just love it 1. i love naksh anniversary celebration at home n goa n naksh romance. 2.when both know the nk Switzerland trip n their feeling s to each other love to each other.3.their giant wheel n roller caster ride n snow mouton masti.4.most touching when nk found that ak is lost coz of naycy stupidity.i hope u cont...give ur best.
i hope u like it.n once again HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U
Ur FF..I have just no words to describe it..Its really Awesome..!!!Especially the current Switzerland track..I had said u before only I love ur FF..Keep updating it lyk this only..😊😊
About you show In lamho ke daaman:
You know,from the very beginning I have been attached to it. From the very starting i do remember the beautiful moments that have captured my heart by you. Your writing is absolutely beautiful!!
As of every PM i receive from you, i always get excited, From till now the Picnic get together where the cricket scene,the bus scene..the chup chup ke milna has been my favorite scene.. Remembering this have made me imagine it. You have written it so beautifully that the image is right in my face. I always look forward for your PMs and in future i look forward for the same.Thank You for writing such a beautiful FF.
Razia
what to say abt ur FF its really awesome though ur weak in hindi still ur FF is gr8 awesome imagination and coming to romance in ur FF is not over romantic as i know u are not able to write(hum bhi aise hi hai lolzz)😆its really awesome :)))))
Now coming to your FF...😊
Saru u told us that you don't know how to write but the way u writes is super fantablous and each and every line is just wow...👏👏👏
the way you present Naksh in your FF is just mindblowing...how naitik takes cares of akshara and how akshara wants to be with naitik all the time is just fantastic...⭐️⭐️
I really like your way to take all of us in Nakshland...😳😳😳
The way you describe that roller coater ride,how akshara wants to spend tym with naitik...
each and every line written by you for Naksh is just giving us an imagination that we all are truly watching this scene...😃
In Lamho ke Daaman Mein is truly a Great FF And you are a great FF writer...👏
u are a wonderful ff( in lamhon ke daman mein-mindblowing name)writer...👍🏼all ur parts are just amazing ...👏i love each of them very much...😃although i havenot started reading from the very first but in my last holidays i read all parts...😛they are so interesting that i cannot stop reading myself one after the other...😉i liked ur parts so much i think u are too gud writer that from ur parts something yrkkh writer should also use in the serial...😊all parts are the best but if i have to choose bestest then one was that when whole family went for picnic that part was so funny with lots of romantic scenes of naksh...😳also the parts which u are writing now naksh away from family we can see their more scenes love for each other...😍how they are both caring for each other...😛all parts are great in every part there is something new different from other...😃love all of them!!!!!!!!!!🤗
ur FF " In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein" ek toh ur title is just fantastic title hi kitna romantis feeling deti hai & story ke baare me kya kehna right from ut first part til now its just awesome 😃😃weekends ban jaayega mera tumhari FF padke phir chahe naksh ke chpte mote jagda ho unka ruthna manaana pyar smp wowww 😳😳Tune naksh ko siwtzz bhej diya dino's se dor isse acchi baat mere liye aur kuch ho hi nhi sakta hai 🤗🤗Naksh ko wahi basado taaki hum hamesha kush reh sake...😆 😆 At last me tumhe ek gift dena chahti hu taaki tujhe aage kisiki madad nhi leni pade...🤣
It was just by chance that I started reading your Fan fiction on Naksh. I read the first part then second...in this way I read 20 parts in a day...😃 It takes skillful writing to hold a reader like me for too long and you have those skills...😃 You are an awesome writer Saru...👏 as they say there is always place for improvements so some suggestions...you need to improve on your romantic writing 😳 and of-course hindi grammar...😆
Though not so familiar with Hindi language, you are doing an awesome job with your FF which really needs to be appreciated...👏
time 4 my special wish continue ur ff as long as u can as i luv reading it, beautiful story line just superbbb almost perfect (almost coz u don't write romantic scenes😉).
he first part of your ff which I read was part 13th one...i didnot know about ur ff before but after reading that part i just became a fan of urs🤗🤗🤗...You r really a very fantastic,awesome,fab and fantabulous writer👍🏼.After that i read all the parts of ur ff and wait for it eagerly ...i know after reading i become lazy and forget to unres my comment😡😡...and i am sorry for it😳😳 but i love ur ff frm the core of my heart...aur do teen part cvs ko bhi post kar do ..unhain bhi thori inspiration mile..😆😆😆
wanted to write more but i am vy bad writer...😉😆...at end thanks alot for such a lovely and beautiful ff and keep writing more parts for us.
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Well i hav nt talked much 2any of my frndz on if' Bt still i m a continuous reader of her ff "in lamhoo ke damaan me" nd showzz how she is by nature'Der has been nt much romance in her ff bt still der is somethin wich tells me 2 read it again' Nd i do it' Der is somthin wich showzz connection b/w yr nd her ff ilkdm'
u wait for my review😛 or can i say.. "i didnt send the review to stuti on time, so i cant include 😆it"
ok ok.. i m editing this!🤣
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In lamhon Ke Daaman Mein,
Baaki Jase Rishte Hain...
Koi kalma muhabbat ka..
doharaate farishte hai...
Nagmein hi nagmein hai jaagti soti fizaayon mein,
husn hai saari adaayon mein,
ishq hai jaise hawaayon mein❤️
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U made me fall in love with this song, as i told u.. after u wrote ur ff on it😃
with every part, u became better...
i know i complain so much while editing.. 😆 but just to pull ur leg!
u know, this editor is very mean...
that is coz, i want to read the part first! and edit it!
I guess i m the only one who knows what ur ff is bout.. the full part.. the future track too! So, i would first like to say... ur storyline is AMAZING! lovely ff parts are gonna be up for the readers.. and even though i know the story,.. i m looking forward to the way u execute it😃
but haan... i do get angry when the part is extra long😳 u no that i hate reading and when u write sooo long parts, i m like khatm karo di! kitna likhoge!
Ok.. now about ur ff... jitna yaad hai.. utna i will write!
Romance is less.. but these days ur improving😉
When it comes to ideas, u r the best.. u know what is my favourite part...?
when that foreigner(naam yaad nai) described naksh's love...
i mean it touched me so much... i really wish for such a caring and loving husband,
U dont show romance, but the understanding, nok-jhoks roothna-manana u show, its simply mindblowing! Ur ff tells me what true love is...
it isnt just a hug or a smooch... it is understanding and reading each other's mind.. capturing each others heart.. gifting someone, before that person asks u for the gift!
Love, i now see, is much beyond togetherness...
When people are far away, they can still be deeply in love..the trust needs to be der.
And i see the trust in ur naksh, and i admire ur naksh, more than mine... 😍
Now, comes the main part.. HINDI... u know u are'nt good at hindi, and the best thing is u admit it.. I will always correct ur hindi, and help u master the language! Dont worry.. just dont repeat ur mistakes!
Now, i dont know what all i have typed.. i guess its long enough!
Waiting for a romantic update..
ur chotu
Shiv Shakti
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