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Posted: 13 years ago
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He looked as if he was blushing.. He was wearing bright pink. He entered the room and went to the washroom to wash his hands. He glanced at the mirror and saw his chest. His button was opened but he didnt mind. It was only a chest. He wanted to break the button so that Gopi can stitch it back up, but he knew she won't as she blushes like a 5 year old. Aham came outside to the room and saw her putting the saris in the cupboard but couldnt. He told her to switch the wardrobes. He told her to put all her saris in his wardrobe and his clothes to the wardrobe with one door.

Gopi had blushed. He didnt know what with her, and why she was like this. Aham left the room and walked past Kinjals room and heard her talking to someone on the phone. He stopped and listened to her.

He was shocked to hear about what she was speaking. The letter, Necklace, Elesh, Pregnant incident, and how she framed all the Modis in her hands and made them dance to her tunes. He walked inside with a anger. He took her phone and smashed it on the ground like the last time he did with the telephone. He dragged her downstairs and told everyone her deeds about what she had done. The necklace and how she made him slap Gopi that time made him feel embarassed.

After chucking kinjal out of the house, he went upstairs and saw Gopi trying to read that letter. He took it off her and noticed it was really Kinjals writing. He told her to forget all this, and told her o forgive him of what he had done to her, about the slap and latop incident. He now realized that all what has happened was due to kinjal and urshi.

Gopi forgave him and both began their life afresh. He closed the doors, Picked her up and put her into bed and switched the lights off.








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Well hope u all liked the wee oneshot.This is my final piece of oneshot am giving in. I logged on after ageees, wrote this and now heading back to my sparrow life. Sparrow left the forum from 21/11/11
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So sweeet,love this oneshot,Ahemji when are you going to make love to Gopiji😳

Btw missed u Ayesha!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A nice OS that got our GoHem together.

I liked hearing your Ahem's inner thoughts!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this really was a nice os .loved it to bits
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice OS...meaningful. Great job, dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS... Ahem really as changed as he smashed the phone instead of Smashing kinjal with a slap that he would normally do 😕 Preferred him throwing her out the house 😆 but why didn't he throw urshi out as well ? 🤢
Maybe he didn't have the patience as he was more interested in running uptsairs and closing the door 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one ayesha. the best part was the closing of the door and switching off of the light.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Enjoyed ur os , loved the last the most, well written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice OS!!enjoyed the last part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey really nice OS! continue soon!

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