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Its 2 weeks after rashmi's marriage is completed.. All the singhania's came out frm the busy preparations of wedding.. Naitik has his plaster removed and starts going to ofc.. Its friday mrng.. akshara asks naitik to take her for shopping.. Naitik agrees.. so they both starts to shopping frm home.. Akshara is by naitik's side in d car.. Akshara sees something..

Akshara: naitik.. please gaadi rukiye naa..

Naitik: kya hua??

Akshara: please naitik.. rukiye.. mein batati hu..

Naitik stops d car.. he is confused as y akshara asked to stop d car in d middle of the way.. akshara immediately gets down frm d car..

Akshara: naitik.. aap bhi bahar aayiye.. jaldi.. (akshara is soo exited..)

Naitik gets out of the car confusingly..

Akshara: Naitik dekhiye naa.. amle ka pedh..😃

Naitik: toh???😲 yeh dikhane keliye gaadi rukhwayi aap??😕

Akshara: naitik.. meri poori baat toh suniyee..

Naitik: akshara.. is pedh mein naya kya hai.. aap bhi naa.. chaliye.. andar baithiye.. mujhe jaldi ofc bhi jaana hai..

Akshara: Naitik.. us pedh ko bahut saare aamle hai.. mujhe naa woh khane ka man kar rahe hai..

Naitik: kya??😲

Akshara: haa naitik.. please mujhe woh aamle dijiye naa..

Naitik: abhi?? waise bhi woh pedh ke bahut upar hai.. mein unhe kaise todu??😲

Akshara: kuch bhi kijiyee.. mujhe aamla chahiyee..

Naitik: yeh kya zidh hai akshara?? hum shopping chalte hai.. mein sham ko market jakar aapkeliye aame le aaungaa..

Akshara: nahi.. mujhe abhi yahi aamle chahiyee..

Naitik is confused but still decides to get them for akshara as akshara is willing to eat them.. with very difficult he climbs aamla tree.. he collects good aamlas for akshara which r little bit mixture of yellow n green in color.. he picks one one aamla for her n keeps in his pocket.. akshara sees him very excitingly frm down.. naitik collects a big bunch of aamla n finally gets down.. akshara is very exited to eat them.. so she runs towards him to take them.. naitik takes all the aamlas from his pockets n keep it in the hands for akshara.. akshara eats them soo lovingly.. naitik loves to see her eating like a kid..

Akshara: thanku so much naitik.. I love u.. yeh kithnaa khatta hai.. aap bhi khayiye naa.. (she brings one aamla near his mouth)..

Naitik: mujhe khatta khane ka ithne bhi shouk nahi hai.. phir bhi aap khila rahi naa.. toh mein ise khaleta hu.. (he eats one)

Akshara: aapko nahi chahiye toh yeh sab mein hi khaloongi.. bahut ache hai..

Naitik: khayiye.. khayiyee.. aapko is tarah dekhne ke baad pedh chadne ka saara takaan door hagaya.. aapko khatta ithni pasand hai??

Akshara: haa naitik.. mujhe khatta pasand hai.. lekin uthna nahi jithna aaj hai.. pata nahi kyu aamle ko dekhne ke baad mein rukh hi nahi paayi..

after dat both goes for shopping n returns home.. after another 1 week.. akshara is feeling little bit dizzyness.. her desire for eating khatta is increased..

Akshara: kya hua mujhe??😕 khatta khane ka ithna man kar rahi hai.. aur upar se yeh chakkar.. kahi.. 😕

she takes out the calendar n then starts thinking..she has little bit of happyness.. little bit of confusion.. little bit of tension n worry.. she has mixed feelings

Akshara: lagta hai wahi hai.. doctor ko dikhana acha rahegaa.. lekin is baar mein akeli nahi naitik ke saat jaaungaa.. agar aisa kuch nahi toh mere saat saat naitik bhi disappoint hojayegaa.. nai nai.. mein akele jaana hi theek rahegaa..

she immediately takes appointment frm doctor n meets d doctor.. she gets the pregnancy test to be done..

doctor: congratulations.. aapka doubt sahi hai.. aap maa banne wali hai..😃

Akshara: sach??? (she is soo happy that she is gifted with the child again.. her eyes r filled with tears..) thanku so much doctor.. mein bahut khush hu..

Doctor: u r welcome mrs.singhania.. aap jaldi jaldi yeh good news apne pati aur ghar walon ko dedijiye..

suddenly akshara remembers abt her mis carriage..

Akshara: doctor.. pichli baar..

Doctor: akshara.. dont worry.. ek baar aisa hogaya lekin yeh mat sochiye ki baar baar waise hi hoga.. aap ka pregnancy bilkul normal hai.. aur aapka bacha aapke andar safe hai.. koyi complications nahi hai.. is baar aisa kuch nahi hoga.. bas aap khane peene ka thoda aur dhyan rakhiye.. achese sab kuch khayiye.. bacha keliye acha rahegaa.. aap bilkul chita mat kariyee..

akshara gets little bit confidence after hearing this.. she gets out of doctors cabin..

Akshara: ab mein yeh good news jaldi naitik ko dena hai..(she takes out d cell phone).. nai.. aise nai.. jab mein good news doongi tab mein unke chehra dekhna hai.. isiliye mein woh aane tak intazaar karna theek rahegaa..😳

she starts waiting for naitik frm d afternoon itself.. she is feeling that each minute is too long to wait.. she is not able to keep the news within her heart itself.. she wants to burst out everything infront of naitik.. but time is moving very slowly.. she calls naitik to say him to come early.. but naitik is busy in d meeting to pickup d call..

Akshara(thinking): yeh pal keliye mein aur naitik kithna intazaar kiyaa.. aakhir woh ghadi aahi gaya hai.. kuch hi dher me yeh good news mein naitik ko batane wali hu.. lekin yeh pal toh beethna bahut mushkil ho rahi hai.. naitik.. please jaldi aayiye naa..

she spends each each minute looking for him.. its 7 in d evng.. finally naitik comes.. akshara hears d car sound n comes down immediately.. she feels so happy seeing naitik.. she immediately want to spill d news.. but stops as everyone is der.. Naitik goes inside to change his clothes.. akshara wants to follow him.. but G3 stops n asks her to make arrangements for the dinner.. akshara is disappointed.. but she thinks to arrange the food on dining table soon n then go near naitik.. but by the time she makes everything ready at the dining table, naitik comes back..

All r having dinner.. DJ asks Naitik to come to his room after dinner to discuss abt their new project.. akshara tries to convey naitik that she has to speak something to him.. but naitik fails to understand what akshara is trying to say.. Men completes having dinner.. Naitik follows DJ to his room to discuss abt their new project.. akshara is disappointed to see this..

Akshara(thinking): ab mein naitik keliye aur intazaar karna padega.. jaldi aajayiyee naitik..

Now the singhania ladies sit for dinner.. she keeps her usual amount of food in her plate.. but then she remembers what doctor told n thinks that she should take care of baby n shouldn't let anything happen this time.. so she keeps one more roti in her plate..

G3: arrey wah.. roz toh mein ithna kehne par bhi tu ek roti zyada nahi khauoogi.. aaj toh tu khud paros rahi ho.. 😲😊

Akshara: haa maa.. mujhe naa zyada bhook lag rahi hai.. (she gives an uncomfortable look as she is hiding the truth from dem)

G3: acha.. tu ek aur roti khaloo.. (she keeps one more in her plate).. yahi toh khane umar hai beta.. achese khaoo..😊

Akshara completes the dinner n starts waiting for naitik in her room.. its already 10.. so she msgs naitik..

Akshara msg: naitik.. jaldi aayiyee naa.. mein hamare kamre me aapka intazaar kar rahi hu.. (naitik feels happy)

Naitik (thinking): lagta hai aaj madam bahut achi mood me hai.. mujhe jaldi jaana hai..😳

So he acts as if he is yawning infront of DJ..

Naitik: DJ mujhe bahut neend aa raha hai.. mein jaake sohaungaa.. hum kal subah iske baare mein baat karenge..

DJ: is zamane ki bache bahut laparwah hai😡.. jaa.. jaake soh jaa.. aur subah jaldi uth ke mere saat sair paa aaja..

Naitik: theek hai Daddaji..😊

Naitik leaves from der.. Akshara is looking at the starts standing near their room window.. Naitik comes into the room.. he closes the door.. n comes silently from her back n hugs frm her back..

Naitik: dekhiyee.. aap bulaya.. aur mein turanth aapke saamne khade hu.. (she gets out herself frm naitik n turns towards him)

Akshara: mein aapkeliye kab se intazaar kar rahi hu.. aap hai ki daddaji se baate karne baith gaye hai..

Naitik: mujhe todi na pata hai ki aap mera intazaar kar rahi hai.. acha chodiyee.. ab hume zyada time waste nahi karni hai..(he drags her towards him)..😳

Akshara: Naitik.. thoda sambhalge.. lag jaaye toh.. (she keeps her hands near her stomach)..

Naitik is confused..

Naitik: akshara.. kya hua??? kyu lag jayegi??😕

Akshara: kyu ki.. (she is feeling shy but naitik mis understands as some other thing)

Naitik: acha.. ab meri akshara aur komal ban gayi hai.. theek hai madam.. 😳

he comes near her n looks into her eyes.. Akshara understands what naitik is trying.. she immediately movies back n turns d other side..

Akshara: naitik.. abhi yeh sab nahi hoga..😳

Naitik: matlab (he is confused..)😕

Akshara: matlab yeh hai ki..

she turns towards naitik.. catches her stomach n looks down blushingly.. first naitik doesn't understand what is trying to say.. but then he understands finally..

Naitik: akshara.. sach????😲

Akshara nods saying yes..

Naitik: really??? I'm so happy.. aur aap ithna bada good news ithne dher se keh rahi hai..

Akshara: mujhe aaj hi pata chala..

Naitik: toh mujhe subah hi bata deti.. mein ithni khush hu ki kya batau.. (akshara is so happy seeing the happiness in naitik's eyes..)

He lifts akshara n turns her round n round in the happiness..

Akshara: naitik.. chodiye mujhee.. mein bachi todi naa hu.. (naitik doesn't stop).. naitik.. mujhe chakkar aa rahe hai... chodiyee..

He finally places her on the bed..

Naitik: akshara ab hum celebrate karna chahiye.. pehle mein aapko meetha khilaoongaa.. yahi rukhiye..

He immediately goes into kitchen n he searches in the shelves for sweets.. but he couldn't find anything.. so he takes the sugar dabba n comes to their room.. he feeds akshara a spoon of sugar.. akshara also feeds him back.. Both hug each other n both r happy.. suddenly akshara's face gets tensed.. naitik understands y she is like that..

Naitik: akshara.. is baar kuch nahi hogaa.. mein aap dono ka khyal rakoonga.. aap chinta mat kariye.. aap is tarah chinta karna hamara bacha keliye theek nahi hai.. aap bas muskiraati rahiye.. aur hamara bacha bhi appke peth me khush rahega.. (he gently touches her stomach)..

Akshara is little bit relieved now..

Naitik: akshara yeh dekhiye.. mein aapkeliye kya laaya hu..

Akshara: wooww.. aam ki achaar..

Naitik: haa aapko khatta khane ka man kar rahe hai na.. isiliye mein kitchen se yeh laaya hai.. aap ek hafte se keh rahi the ki aapko khatta khane ka man kar rahi hai.. phir bhi mein budhu hu.. abhi tak samajh nahi payaa..

Akshara: aap kya.. mujhe bhi aaj tak samajh me nahi aaya..😳

Naitik: haa hum dono budhu hai.. aap no 1 budhu hai aur mein no 2..

Both laughss..😆😆
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A rainy start to the day with thunder and heavy rain, one could just imagine and predict that today was not going to be a good day. Many people considered rain and thunder to be unlucky that brings sorrow and misery. Akshara was thinking exactly on those lines, here she was waiting to get her reports back from the Gynac. She didn't know what the reports would tell her, nor did she want to guess, her mind wanted something else when her heart was running in the opposite direction. Only if there was a way to shorten this tedious waiting time she would give anything for it. From the beginning she hated to wait why couldn't things just happen at an impulse? As Akshara waited in the waiting room only one thing was going on in her head how will she face her family when she gets back home? Even if the reports are positive or negative she had to face them how will she do it? And what if her reports turns out positive will she be strong enough to carry the child or will the same thing happen to her. A lone tear slips down her cheek thinking about last time, how happy she was with the coming of their child and in one moment all was lost. After a battle between her mind and her heart she decided that no matter what the reports say she will accept the decision, she will not fall weak because she doesn't want her family to worry about her. More over, she doesn't want Naitik to worry about her, memories of his sufferings still linger in her eyes, how hopeless both felt at that moment, who would support who. Yet, Naitik took her and supported her and forgot his own sufferings just so she would be ok, so this time it's up to her to return the favor.

Mrs. Singhania' here are your reports the nurse says while handing the reports to Akshara. With cold and shivering hands Akshara takes the file in her hands. This is it she thinks this will decide everyone's future. Akshara leaves the hospital and goes straight to the temple she prays to her dear Kanha-ji to make everything aright and make her confusion fade. She walks inside the house disturbed and to her luck or bad luck she was all alone in the house, Ma and bhabhi Ma have gone out for shopping while the men are at office. She goes to her room keeps the file on her bed and sits beside the file looking and trying to read it from its covers. She reaches for the file but doesn't have the courage to open it. Who would after all that has happened; this file could either make her or break her down even more. Akshara decides she will open the file and read what it says because being hesitant like this will not get her anywhere. She slowly opens the file to analyze it and reads the reports, with a thudding heart, increasing anxiety, and building emotions she scans down to the place where it is boldly written POSTIVE. At once her eyes well up with tears, tears of joy or sorrow only she knew, the funny thing was that she thought after reading the reposts her heart and mind will be at peace but now they were putting her in a new dilemma. How in the world will she be able to tell Naitik? How is he going to react? The anxiety was quickly replaced by fear, fear of lost and losing; no matter how many times she tired she just couldn't forget the words that echoed in her ears, "You have lost your child". Tears were running down her cheeks and burning her eyes, she was so stress and preoccupied that she didn't even notice Naitik entering and calling her name.

Akshara what happened? Why are you crying? What did the doctor say? Are you ok? Naitik showers her with question after question. And the only answer Akshara gave was her tears. She at once ran in to Naitik 's arms and let loose all those burdens, let her self free, cried her soul out. Naitik was very upset that his Akshara is crying like this so he assumes that the reposts were negative. He says soothing words to her but she is in no mood to listen. After what seemed like an eternity for Naitik his Akshara finally stopped crying. Akshara you don't have to worry, I mean if the reports are negative this time then we can always try next time, but please don't cry like this you know I can't see you crying yet you cry and hurt me. Akshara realizes that in her sudden out break she gave the wrong impression to Naitik about the reports. Feeling guilty she looks down and whispers Naitik the reports are Positive. Naitik didn't quite register that in his head so he keeps soothing Akshara. Akshara looks up at him and says Naitik I said the reports are positive, once those words left Akshara's mouth it felt as if someone had taken the floor under Naitik's feet, he says what are you saying, the reports are positive, by this time Akshara has turned her back to Naitik. She thinks that Naitik is not happy with the news so once again her eyes well up. I knew it Naitik that you wouldn't be happy, you think that I won't be able to carry this child either and that I will' and she breaks down again. Naitik walks up to Akshara and hugs her calling her a sweet idiot. Akshara app bhi naa. How can you think im not happy, im thrilled, I was just shocked because I didn't know that we were so lucky to be given a second chance. He makes Akshara sit on the bed and sits on the floor in front of her. Akshara, I know that what has happened last time is still haunting you and this is all too soon, but don't worry this time nothing will go wrong. Naitik we thought that last time to right but what happened what if this time it happens again, what if I loose (Naitik keeps his fingers on her lips) Akshara nothing of that sort will happen, and I also know this was the reason why you were crying when I came inside but Akshara why are you thinking negatively. You're the one who tells me naa that everything happens for a reason so then? And maybe Kahna-ji took the 1st baby away because it may have gotten problems later in life, and look at this he has once again given us this joy of becoming parents. How many people get a second chance in life Akshara? Not many and so if we have this chance then we shouldn't waste it by thinking about the negatives and the reasons; we should just accept it and move on with it. Because if we live in the past then we wont be able to move in our present and think about our future, right? Akshara smiles (whole heartily) and says right she asks Naitik if he is truly happy and Naitik assures Akshara that she has made him the happiest person in this world not once but for the second time.

Yes they will always feel the emptiness of their first child but they are very sure that their second child will reduce that emptiness with its arrival. Both Naitik and Akshara walk down stairs to share this delightful news with the family, and as expected everyone gets thrilled and excited for a new arrival in the family. They start to make perpetrations for all the customs and celebrations that will be conducted before the baby's arrival and even start to think of names.

It's the night of Akshara's baby shower that both Naitik and Akshara are in their room sitting on the bed talking about the days left for the new guest to come. Naitik I can't believe it that today was my baby shower I remember the time when others used to have them and I used to think and dream of this day. But what happened last time I had lost all hope that I would even see this day, but thanks too you I got all the happiness in the world. I love you and place's a soft kiss on his cheeks.

Naitik is very happy to get the kiss and so he decides to tease Akshara a bit so he asks. Kyun? Why do you love me Akshara?... Naitik what kind of question is that' app bhi naa.. No Akshara im genuinely asking why do you love me?... well Naitik ji there are many reasons to why I love you but you know half of them already so I will just give you a few reasons I have just added to the list.. She giggles and starts telling her dear husband. First of all you always stand by me and know exactly what I want without even asking, when I had lost all the hope in the world you understood me and took care of me, you support me and you always looking after me. And it was you who said that I should look at the positive side and not the negative side, you change my whole perspective on this pregnancy which I am highly grateful of. That's all bus you only love me for those reason, Akshara what about all the late night craving runs I did, and all the moods swings I dealt with and all the stories and medications I gave you. You totally forgot that in your list, nahi this is not done you have to make some major adjustments in that newly refined list. By now Akshara is shell shocked' Naitik??? I don't get it.. What' huh?... poor Akshara is totally confused on how to react to Naitik 's out burst. She thought he would be happy to hear her reasons but boy was she wrong. Naitik snaps his fingers in front of her face, Akshara ji' don't look to stressed I am just joking, and now I know you will start hitting me with a pillow but before you do that, I love you as well' even if you are a little over weight. He winks at her and gives a cute smile. Akshara fumes hearing she is fat and starts to hit Naitik with a pillow, Naitik runs away from the bed but that doesn't stop Akshara from throwing the pillows, after a lot of fun and masti, Naitik comes and sits beside Akshara who is pouting like a 2 year old. Akshara I was joking and so what if you are over weight I still love you, and you still look as beautiful as before. So I don't mind, Akshara is not pleased at all with Naitik's words, so Naitik tries another way. You see its good you gained a bit of weight ask why? Why Naitik ' arre simple now no one will force me to exercise and cut out my food supply to make me loose weight. Now we both are equal so there is no problem. Akshara tries very hard to keep her laughter in but she can't so she starts laughing out loud. Naitik when will you grow up, at least stop your silly jokes now you're going to be a father. Nahi Akshara I don't want to grow up because if I grow up then who will play with my baby, I know you will only make my baby cry so I will have to be a child to make her smile naa. I will not make our baby cry.. you.. you I don't want to talk to you and turns around and goes to sleep. Naitik kisses her cheek and wishes her good night while hugging her. Both sleep dreaming of their child and the cute small family that is soon to come'.. From all the happening Akshara learned one thing and that is' Never be discouraged by rain and thunder because it may not be an end to something but the welcoming of something amazing. As well never underestimate the powers of god and love because they are always with you even if you realize it or not.


Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 13 years ago
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The scene starts of with naksh's room; Akshara is sitting in front of the video cam and talking to it. She is planning a special surprise gift for Naitik on his birthday and this year it will be a bigger occasion since their baby will be joining them. Akshara is in her last month of pregnancy and she is trying hard to cope with the changes in her body and life style. Akshara talks to her baby when ever she is alone telling it everything that happens to her till everything she does and today she is going to tell the baby how the baby itself came in to their life.

With the camera set and pressed on record she starts of' hmm so baby this is your papa's first birthday after you came in our lives and since this year you are also with us we need to celebrate at a grater level right? And she feels a kick in her belly. She smiles and says see, Naitik even our baby is smart like me it agrees to everything I say. So baby let me tell you and your dear papa how I feel about both of you. Long before you came in the picture it was just me and your papa, we were very happy with our lives we felt we had everything, a loving family, friends, and each other. With everything in our favor we never thought that we could be happier, but we were wrong because with each passing day since waiting for your arrival we are even happier. Naitik do you still remember that day when I told you the arrival of this joy? (She touches her belly)You were out of your mind, I really thought you were going to go crazy?...

***Flash back start***

Akshara is coming home from the hospital with the reports in her hand, she is very nervous to finding out what will be in the reports but her heart tells her that the reports will change her life. Upon reaching home she opens the file and reads and to her surprise she is shining away a million dollar smile, with tears of joy in both eyes. She calls up Naitik and calls him home immediately.

N: Akshara, what happened? You called me so urgently is something wrong? Akshara doesn't give Naitik a chance and hugs him and says im so happy Naitik, this is the best day of my life. But Akshara at least tell me what happened?

A: Naitik, the reports they are not normal. Naitik gets serious and ask what? Akshara the reports are not normal and you're happy? Akshara tries to hide her smile and continues to tease Naitik. Akshara what do the reports say? Nothing much Naitik only that I'm pregnant! Naitik exclaims and says KYA???????? Akshara what are you saying?.. I mean you pregnant? Kyun Naitik are you not happy asks with worry filled in her eyes. Akshara are you crazy I'm so happy; this is indeed the best day of our lives. But I can't believe you would tell me this news this way I mean you nearly gave me a heart attack. Haan I know, but now Naitik we will always remember this day. With out you trying to kill me I would have still remembered Akshara (and brings her in a hug).

The past few months zoom by as if they didn't exist, but one night is very interesting. Its 3'O clock in the morning and Akshara just can't sleep she is heavily craving for ice cream and that to mint ice cream. She wakes Naitik up' Naitik wake up wake up naa'. Naitik at once wakes up' kya hua Akshara' is everything alright?... is the baby fine? No Naitik its not fine.. Naitik is tensed and asks what happened to which Akshara very casually replies that it's craving ice cream and wont let me sleep. KYA? Akshara it's 3 in the morning I'm not going to go buy you anything go to sleep. But Naitik it's not for me it's for our baby. Stop blaming the baby Akshara I know it's you who wants the ice cream but im not going. Kyun? Naitik please.. and she makes a cute face which does not melt Naitik 's heart. Akshara it's late what store will be open, and if ddj catches me leaving at this hour then you know how much problem we will get in to?... Naitik nothing will happen all I know is you will get me ice cream and that to MINT one and you will go now. And if you don't go then I won't talk to you nor eat or sleep till you get it for me (and stubbornly walks to the window). Poor Naitik has no other choice but to listen to Akshara and so he says he will be back in a bit. Akshara at once smiles and claps her hands yay' I love you Naitik and gives him a hug. Ok ok go fast and don't take to long. Jee huzoor of course I won't take long since all the shops are open naa so it will take me just 10 mins. Akshara sticks her tongue out at Naitik and pushes him out the room. After a very hard time Naitik found an ice cream store open praying to god he walks in and gets the ice cream Akshara has asked for, he goes home to find Akshara sitting and waiting impatiently for the ice cream. Naitik your back good good now give me my ice cream, she grabs it and starts digging in to it like a little girl,,, yummm Naitik its soo good do you want to try some, she turns around to find Naitik sleeping peacefully so she smile and kisses his forehead saying thank you and love you. After finishing her ice cream Akshara sleeps as well.

*** flash back end****

see baby I told you naa your papa is very nice and he takes care of your mama so well, so on this day all we want to wish papa is to have a very happy birthday and to always love and care for us. Akshara finishes the video in time and gives it to Naitik who is very excited and touched to see the video and hear all the talks that Akshara does with their baby and the only thing he wants is the baby to come soon so they can all be a happy family.

***After 5 years***

Both Naitik and Akshara have a beautiful baby girl she is cute and chubby just like Naitik and her eyes and smile exactly resemble Akshara's the baby's name is Jia. Jia is running around her dear papa asking for ice cream' papa.. I want ice cream' nahi Jia you had ice cream the other day and sweet heart its not good to eat to much sweets, its very very bad, how about papa gives you milk instead. Ewww milky Jia makes a cute disgusting face and runs to Akshara. Mama papa won't buy me ice cream and pouts. Kya hai Natik why are you being so mean to my daughter why can't you buy her ice cream ( she asks in a angry voice). Akshara she had it the other day. So? Naitik I'm ordering you to go and buy some ice cream for her right this minute no more arguments. Walks up and picks Jia up and kisses her cheeks. Once again Naitik is hopeless and goes and buys ice cream for his Jia.. But before he leaves 'papa.. Make sure you buy the MINT flavor one, or else mama will be mad at you and giggles and hides behind Akshara. Both Naitik and Akshara smile when Jia says that because both remember the night when Akshara woke him up to buy the mint wala ice cream. He walks up to Akshara and whispers will you also like that MINT wala ice cream? And winks at her while Akshara blushes and hits his chest saying dhatt. Naitik goes and buys both the love of his life the MINT wala ice cream, and all three enjoy it with great fun and joy. Within these five year both Naitik and Akshara have learned valuable lessons of love, family, trust, and true happiness. They are so grateful to god that he gave them Jia.

Akshara doesn't it feel like just yesterday we were so excited to have Jia and look at today she already so grown up and soon she will get married and we will become grandparents. Naitik you are right time does fly bye so fast it feels like just yesterday that we were griefing losing our first child and then happy to get Jia and today she is already running around and filling everyone's lives with happiness. Maa pe gayi hai naa isi liye says Naitik and hugs Akshara. Akshara smiles and says of course, jaisi maa wasi beti.. both Naitik and Akshara burst out laughing and hug each other promising to never let go and always to love and be their for each other and their Jia.

4

OS continues from where Akshara takes the tests and leave the doctor along with Naitik.. BUT the tests are taken on a Friday and before she lefts, the Nurse tells her that she won't receive the results until after the weekend i.e. Monday.

Akshara reaches home and Naitik reassures her that everything will be fine and it is not like they have planned for a child and not to worry much as he don't like it.

Rajbanna comes home and tells Naitik that there is a very important meeting held in Delhi and he must attend as it is his project. Naitik agrees with a little push from Akshara. He lefts unwillingly and Akshara is still worried. Before leaving Naitik insists to G3 that she allows Akshara to stay at her Maayka as her mind will feel fresh. G3 remains unknown about the pregnancy test along with the other family members.

G3: bahu tu ab maayke chali jana haan

Ak: Maa leken..mein kaise…mien thik hu

G3: Mujhe pata tha ke aap aisa hi kahegi..leken…yeh orders hai…Munn aka orders…ab mana nahi karsakthi beta…tu chali jaa…

Ak: blushingly (STILL) thik hai Maa..

Akshara packs her bags she feels happy that Naitik thought for her in such a way and takes ashiwaad and leaves before evening.

Akshara reaches her Maayka..They are aware as both Naitik and G3 told them….Now Varsha knows that Akshara is worried and takes her to the bedroom

Var: Acha.Akshara ab bolo kya huwa??

Ak: Kuch bhi toh nahi..mein..kuch nahi

Var: Acha thik hai..apko pata hai………..talking more n more…finally comes to the point..ab sach sach bata..Naitik ji ne saaf kaha hai…ke Varsha Bhabhi… aap meri Akshara ka khayal rakna..Ab Bata…what is bothering you?? Kyun itna pareshaan hai??

Ak: kuch bhi toh nahi…who…Varsha..Mujhe lagta hai that I'm pregnant…leken I don't know…Bohot dar lagra haa hai..

Varsha Stops a little..as Akshara..blurts it out not in her usual way.

Var: Kya aap ne Naitik ji ko bataya??

AK:Haan..hum do no ne Doctor ke pass gaye the..in no ne zidd kiya pregnancy ka test lena…leken jab ghar aye..toh Bauji ne isse bhej dia…I don't know Varsha.

Var:Acha..Monday tak test keliye rukhna bohot time lagega nah???

Ak:Haan..ab aur intezaar nahi hora hai hai…Positive hi hona hai..mujhe yehi lagta…tab ka feeling..pehla pregnancy ka..bohot alag tha..ab im feeling so different aur mujhe pata nahi kyun aisi feel kar rahi hoon..i don't understand.

Var: Akshara sach sach batarahi hoon…I am the wrong one…mein galat hoon…I forced you..to leak info from you..I am Sorry..Leken yeh sab kuch mujhse nahi Naitik ji se kehna chahiye tha…nahi kehna chahiye..

Ak: haan leken..woh toh Delhi chalegaye…mein apna feelings kisi aur ke saath share karni thi..ab..

Var: Acha..ab ka kya..results Monday tak nahi aayega..ab kya?

Ak: haan woh toh hai..leken..jab aap pregnant thi..tab apko kaise pata chala?

Var: Haan doctor ke paas test liya tha..leken who home pregnancy ka test liya tha wahan..aur results bhi bohot jaldi aaye the..

Ak: Acha…mien bhi check karun Varsha..ab mein nahi rukh sakthi..please..kal chalenge nah

Var: Acha thik hai

They go the next day and returns home with it..No one else knows besides Akshara and Varsha, the make up the excuse of going to the park with Ananya.

Akshara goes to the bathroom :

She is very nervous and is feeling awkward as its her first time using such thing. She opens the box and read the instructions and takes the test (sry not so detailed here). The box states that if there is two pink lines then its positive and if its one line it is negative, and the test results would be in two minutes. She closes her eyes and waits for two minutes..She opens her eyes, for the first time with a little confidence and checks the pregnancy test. The test shows two line. Akshara begins to have a huge smile on her face.

Ak: Oh My God, I cannot believe this..I am pregnant..Results are positive..She smiles..and is exaggerating…I cannot believe this.

She places the test strip back into the box and keeps it with her..

Outside Varsha is waiting for her. She apologizes to Varsha and tells her that what ever her results are she will tell no one besides Naitik First.

Meanwhile Naitik texts Akshara

Nt: Hello, Akshara aap kaisi hai?..Aap plz chinta karna chordo

Ak: Haan Naitik..Mein ab thik hu…Apko bohot miss karrahi hoon, plz jaldi aajayi ye..plz..Naitik I love you

Nt: Arrey waah..good..i miss you too Akshara. And I love you <3

Ak: ab Naitik aap kab aajaayenge..jaldi laut aay

She goes to sleep. Akshara is very happy but doesn't let anyone get a clue why. Saturday goes by as the usual MM does. Meanwhile Akshara thinks of a good way in telling Naitik as Naitik is returning on Sunday instead of Monday. Naitik is completely clueless about Akshara taking a pregnancy test

Akshara leaves the very morning for SS House. Naitik arrives an hour late. Akshara changes the curtains into lighter "baby" colors and moves minor things to hint at Naitik. She takes an envelope from her bag and places it in the drawer kissing it.

Naitik reaches home tired and miserable reaches the room:

The cool colors in the room changes the atmosphere. Akshara goes to Naitik and hugs him from behind tightly. He senses this and hugs her back placing his hands on hers.

Ak: Naitik I missed you so Much

Nt: I missed you too Akshara..aur Akshara..aaj aapne pehle gale lagaya…kuch toh baat hai…yeh tight hug batara ha hein..ke aap bohot excited hai..huwa kya??

Ak: Hmmm aisa nahi Naitik..

She goes to the draw and places the envelope in his hands..and tells him to read it privately and she goes. Before Naitik could even ask she leaves.

Naitik slowly opens the envelope and in comes out a letter

The letter reads:

My dear Naitik,

I have something to tell you, I don't know how to say this in your face and I also think that just like how I found this out in privacy, I expect the same of you. Naitik I can no longer wait anymore. I have always trusted you and today your trust has win my heart again. Remember when you took me out for my birthday,I had asked you for something, and you assured me..No you promised me by my nest birthday I will get it..Exactly my love, Today my wish…uh huh Hamara wish Pura huwa hai…Naitik aap papa banne wale hein..aur mien Mama..I am pregnant Naitik..and maybe today I have so much confidence and support because of how you have handled me after the miscarriage..What can I say Naitik..I have found such a Jem to be my Husband..I love you Naitik.

Yours and Yours Always

Akshara

Xoxoxo

Naitik's misery has completely vanished..A sudden smile has entered on his face.He folds the letter, puts it back in the envelope and places it in the cupboard safely. He is very happy. He goes running and Shouts Akshara, Maa..Akshara…

Nt: Akshara…He sees her in the balcony and this time goes and hug her tightly from the back..but easing on her stomach. Akshara is acting very shy,like she never had such feeling before..

Nt: Akshara..I love you..tumne toh sab kuch likhliya hai..mere liye kuch chor dena chahiye tha..

Ak: hmm..

Nt: Kyaa hmm hmm…Ab sharmana chordo, hamara bacha anewala hai..

Ak: Naitik pachaass saal baad mein aisi hi sharmaungi..koi problem hai..toh solve it alone..Both Laugh and they hug properly.

Akshara tells him she wants to show him something and takes him to the room. She opens her bag,takes out the box and tells Naitik, this is how she found out, She didn't had any sabr and had to take home pregnancy test…both look at the pregnancy test for a while and goes to tell the family.

5
Its 6 months after akshara's miscarriage... though she is fine now some where she always had the sadness of not having a child n somewhere she also had d fear dat she may not conceive again... but when she is with naitik she doesn't have all these fears... n naitik knows abt all these very well... so he always makes sure that he spends much of his time with her... On the other hand akshara's pressure increases when G3 and BM starts doing special pooja's for having varas for their family... On one night, Naitik n akshara r sitting together on their bed... akshara rests her head on naitik's shoulder n holds his hand...

Akshara: Naitik...

Naitik: haa...

Akshara: mein aapse ek baat kahu??

Naitik: isme poochne ki kya baat hai... kahiye naa...

Akshara: agar mein kabhi maa nahi ban sakti toh..

Naitik: akshara... aap kyu aise sochti hai... doctor ne kaha naa, aap phir se maa ban sakti hai... aapke man se yeh dar nikaldijiyee...

Akshara: mein bhi yahi umeed se hu... lekin agar nahi ban sakti toh aap... (naitik stops in the middle)

Naitik: mujhe koyi farak nahi padta... aapse zyada koyi nahi hai... agar bache nahi hai toh theek hai... mujhe toh meri pyari si akshara hai naa... aur aap bhi kehte hai naa mein kisi bache se kam nahi hu... 😳

Akshara: haa... woh toh hai...

Naitik: hai naa... isiliyee pehle aap is bache ko sambhalijiye... uske baad aap doosre bache ke baare mein sochiye...😳

He gives a naughty look... akshara understands n blushes... naitik gently kisses on her cheek n comes to neck... piyaa bawari... hayee bawari...❤️❤️❤️

5 to 6 weeks later, akshara suddenly faints in d mrng when she is doing pooja... All gets shocked and worried for akshara... Naitik lifts her n takes her to their room n immediately calls d doctor... he remembers doctors words when she had miscarriage where the doctor said she shouldn't be stressed at any situation... he thinks that she fainted due to stress... BM n G3 thinks d same...

BM: choti dulhan lagta hai hum baar baar bache ke baare me hum pareshan kar ke bahu ko bhi pareshan kardiya...

Naitik: kyaa... aap akshara se bache ke baare me pressurize kar rahe hai??? mein pehle hi kaha naa aap koyi bhi unhe bache ke baare me koyi bhi baat karne se mana kiya naa... unki tabhyath par asar padegaa...

G3: haa beta... tu toh keh raha tha... lekin hum ruk nahi paaya...

Naitik: maa... aap thoda sa unke tabhyath aur man ki bhavno ko bhi samjhna chahiye thaa... aise bacha bacha keh kar pareshan kiya toh bacha todi naa aajata hai... bache keliye uthni jaldi bhi kya hai... kya akshara se zyada hai bache??😡

G3: hume maaf karo beta...

Jst den the doctor arrives... Naitik immediately takes her to akshara's room... All r waiting outside the room... After sometimes the doctor comes out...

Naitik: doctor... kya hua?? akshara theek toh hai na?? woh achanak se kyu behosh hogayi... abhi bhi khoon ki kami hai kya...

Doctor: Mr. Singhania... please relax... akshara ji ko kuch nahi hua hai... aap uthna pareshan mat hoyiyee... kyu ki yeh pareshan karne wali baat nahi... balki khushi ki baat hai...

Naitik: kyaa???😲

Doctor: haa... aap sab muh meetha karlijiyee... kyu ki aap papa banne wale hai...

Naitik is so delighted to hear the news... he can't believe what he jst heared... he is out of the world as he didn't expect dis n also he knows dat akshara is going to be so happy when she gets the news... he is on cloud 9...

Naitik: doctor... sach???😃🥳🥳🥳
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Doctor: haa yeh sach hai...

Naitik: kahi yeh sapna toh nahi hai naa...(G3 pinches him strongly)

Naitik: aaah... maaa... aap kya kar rahe hai...

G3: ab toh laga naa.😆.. yeh sach hai... mein dadi banne wali hu aur tu papa... bhabhimaa bahu nee hume varas denewali hai...😃

Bhabhima: haa choti dulhan... bhagwan ki krupa hai hum par...

All r very very happy...

Naitik: doctor, akshara ko pata hai ki woh maa banne wali hai??

Doctor: woh abhi hosh me nahi hai... mein injection dedi... thodi dher me woh hosh me aajayegi... aap log hi unhe khush khabar sunadijiye...

Naitik: Thanku so much for the gud news doctor...

Doctor: u r welcome... aur haa.. aap sab akshara ka khoob khyal rakhiye... pehla teen mahine unhe aaram ki zaroorath hai aur koyi bi baat par woh pareshan hona yaa stress nahi hona chahiye... aur kal akshara ko hospital le aayiye... kuch tests karni hai...

The doctor leaves... G3, BM and Naitik sit by akshara's side on her bed waiting for her to wake up... G3 wants her to say d good news... but naitik wants to say it to akshara by himself... but he dont know what to say to G3 n BM...

Naitik: Maa... aap log jayiyee naa... aapko ghar ka kaam bhi hogi... mein hu naa akshara ke paas...

G3: ghar ka kaam toh hota rehta hai munna... bahu ko khush khabari jaldi dena hai... jab iske baare me suna naa toh yeh bahut khush hojayegi...😃

Naitik (think): mujhe akshara ka reaction dekhna hai jab woh yeh sunegi ki woh maa banne wali hai... agar sab log hai toh woh kuch nahi keh payegi...mujhe hi kuch sochna padega...

Naitik: maa... akshara ko thodi dher aaram karne chahiye... agar hum sab yaha hai toh woh disturb hojayegi...

G3: nahi munna... hum toh...

BM (saying slowly to G3 in very low voice): choti dulhan... tu samajhte nahi hai... munna akshara ko khud khush khabar dena chahta hai... hum unhe akela chodna chahiye... bechare is din kaa woh log kabse intazaar kar rahe hai... jab woh ghadi aayi toh hum unhe aise beech me aana acha nahi hai...

G3: haa bhabhimaa... aap theel keh rahe hai...

G3: munnaa... tu bahu ka khyal rakhna... hum rasoyi me jakar bahu khane keliye kuch banayengee... jab woh hosh me aajati toh hume bula lenaa... theek hai??

Naitik: theek hai...😃

G3 n BM leaves frm der... Natik closes d door n sits by akshara side... he caresses her hair... he remembers the previous memories... he remembers how akshara told him first time dat is she is pregnant...

Naitik: aapko theek se khush khabari dena bhi nahi aati... pagli...😆

He remembers the moments where he comes to know that their first baby is no more n how akshara was devasted when she got d news...

Naitik: mein is baar aisa nahi hone detaa... aapki bahut khyal rakhoonga... aapko har vakth khush rakhne ki khoshish karoongaa... aapko kisi ki baare me pareshan nahi karne dega... aapki har haal me mein aapke saath hi rahoongaa... (he keeps on caressing her n talks to akshara though she is not yet conscious... after some time akshara comes to conscious)

Akshara: naitik... aap... is vakth?? 😲ofc nahi gaye the kya??😲 aur mein kyu is vakth so rahi hu... kuch hua kya??😕

Naitik: akshara... pehle aap relax kariyee... ek saath ithni saari sawal...

Akshara: mein yaha?? mujhe kuch hua?? 😲mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa rahi hai... jab mein pooja kar rahi thi... mujhe kuch ajeeb sa laga...

Naitik: haa aap behosh hogayi thi... aur doctor aake aapko check kar ke gaye the...

Akshara: ohh...kya kaha doctor ne... mein normal toh hu naa..

Naitik: nahi akshara... aap normal nahi the... doctor bhi yaha kehke gaye the...😉

Akshara: kya hua mujhe?? kuch serious baat hai kyaa??

Naitik: haa akshara... yeh bahut serious baat hai... mein iske baare me toh bilkul expect hi nahi kiya... mein toh chouk gaya...

Akshara: uthna kya kaha doctor ne?? 😕mujhme koyi problem hai kya?? jaldi batayiye naa...

Naitik: doctor ne kaha ki... mein promote hone wala hu...

Akshara: kya?? 😲😲aapka promotion..??😲😲 kya promotion??😕 hamara toh khud ka business hai... waise bhi yeh baat doctor ne kaha?? woh kaise?? mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa rahi hai...😕

Naitik: aap kab kuch theek se samjhi???😆 aap bahut badi budhu hai... acha... sirf mein hi nahi... mere saat saat aap bhi promote hone wali hai... ab samjhi??😳😉
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Akshara: mein bhi promote hone wali hu??😲 woh kaise?? (jst den akshara's minds clicks... but at the same time she had the fear dat what she is thinking is right or not... because she can't get disappointed again n again... naitik understands her hesitation)

Naitik: akshara... aap bilkul sahi soch rahi hai... yeh sach hai... humare khushiya aane wali hai... mein papa banne wala hu aur aap mammaa...😃

Akshara's eyes r filled with tears of happiness... even naitik's eyes r filled with tears of happiness which came seeing akshara's happiness... he hugs her...

Naitik (still hugging akshara): mein isi muh se aise hi aapko zindagi ki bahut buri khabar suna diyaa... ab mein bahut khush hu ki mein ab hamare zindigi ki sab se khoobsoorath aur khush khabar aapko sunane wala hu... aap pregnant hai... aap maa banne wali hai... humare zindagi me ab nayi khushiya aane wali hai...😃

Akshara bursts into tears of happiness...

Akshara: mein is khush khabar ka kabse intazaar kar rahi hu... mujhe bahut dar hai ki kabhi mujhe maa banne ka sukh milegi yaa nahi... aakhir bhagwan meri baat sunli... pehle mujhe ithna acha pati diya jo mujhe har baat me mere saat dete hai... mera khyal rakhte hai... bas sirf humare zindagi me ab ek bacha ki kami hai... aaj bhagwan use bhi poori karne wali hai... is baar theek se hoga naa??

Naitik comes out of her hug... wipes her tears... he holds her face with hands...

Naitik: akshara... is baar sab kuch acha hi hoga... baar baar humare saat aisa nahi ho sakta... chahe kuch bhi hojayee, mein hamesha aapke saath hi rahoonga... mein aapki aankhon me aansu nahi dekh sakta... bas aap aisa muskuratee rahiyee... sab kuch acha hi hogaa...

He takes a choclate n feeds akshara... akshara also feeds him back... both smiles at each other with tears in their eyes... Naitik kisses on her forehead... n akshara hugss him...

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It's a bright morning, Akshara wakes up and looks at Naitik, she remembers the talks last night of whether she would be positive or negative.

Akshara: home pregnancy ka test lenahi chahiye tha..leken nahi,mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai. Naitik uthiya nah..Naitik..

Naitik: Akshara doh minute aur please

Akshara: Naitik..mujhe bohot dar lagra ha hai'please uthiya nah..please.

Naitik immediately wakes up, he asks her the problem. He knows that Akshara now has been now only able to take on the past Miscarriage, and that naturally she will be frightened. But he also knows that Akshara wants a baby to complete their little family.

Akshara: Naitik, mujhe nahi pata, leken aik taraf bohot dar lagraha hai..aur ek taraf '

Naitik: Khushi??..

Akshara: '.Haan..leken

Naitik:leken veken nahi Akshara,''Akshara mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai'I think reports positive hi hoga'

Akshara..Smiling and a bit worried faced : Acha..

Naitik: Acha ji Akshara,chalo tayar hojayye, reports lene keliye,mein bhi aapke saath chaloonga..thik?,Is bahane se..aapko comfort bhi lagega'thik?

Akshara: Acha thik hai.

Naitik is unable to go due to business issues,he asks her to go alone. She receives a call from the clinic that the reports are instead posted and not to worry to come to collect them. Naitik leaves for office.

Akshara impatiently wait. Gayatri and Bma leaves for shopping.

Gulabo tells Akshara something has come for her,and gives her the package.Akshara opens it.

Akshara reads carefully and actually she rushes her fingers and turns the pages quickly to see the actual pregnancy reports. As she sees POSITIVE, Akshara has a huge smile on her lips, and a few tears drops from her eyes, She remembers everyones talks on MC and her thinking of never to get pregnant again. She smiles brightly and become relived again.

Akshara: Mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi hai..I can't believe this..Mujhe toh laga tha ke Maa banne mien aur time lagega..Oh my..cheerfully and brightly smiling.Mujhe Naitik ko phone karlena chahiye.

She picks up the phone to call Naitik,

Akshara:Nahi..aisa nahi..itni bari baat aur who bhi phone pe..nahi yeh theek nahi hoga'kuch special hona chahiye

Insteads she sends a text..knowing that no one will return till after 5pm

Text Message: Sent to Naitik

Naitik aaj aap please ghar jaldi laut aye please..

Mujhe toh bohot dar lagraha hai'aur koi ghar pe bhi nahi hai L

Please Jadli ajaiye'aur haan..jab aap ahirahehein toh mere liye pista kulfi leke aa plz,bohot maan hai

Naitik receives the message and is worried for Akshara even though he wants to know whats up with the pista wala kulfi,He asks Rb to leave early and goes,And gets the kulfi.

On the other hand Akshara waits silently in her room. She goes back in the storeroom for the baby books and places them on the shelf.She eagerly waits for Naitik.

Naitik arrives and quickly goes to his room.He opens the door to find Akshara there

Naitik : Akshara aap theek toh hai?

Akshara: Haan Naitik,in a worried way..mujhe toh esey hi lagraha hai

Naitik : Toh Message mein kyat ha?? Reports agaye?

Akshara :Acha Naitik,excitedly'Kulfi kahan hai?

Naitik : Yeh kya hai Akshara'Reports aya ke nahi..??

Akshara: Acha Naitik,apse kuch kehna hai'woh mien woh hum..

Naitik: Who kya..kaho nah Akshara..reports ka kuch??

Akshara: Haan..she starts crying a little,Naitik

Naitik: Akshara reports kahan hai?..irritatingly

Akshara: Nahi Naitik aik Minute..woh apse kuch kehna hai..rukiye toh'.Naitik Aap papa banne wale hai aur mein Maa,I am Pregnant

Naitik: A huge smile on his face,he has/had a complete different expression from Akshara on his face.KYA..Mein Papa??..Kal ke baat..dekha meine kya kaha..himmat rakho..aur ab hum sach mein maa aur papa banrahe hein??I cannot believe it..and Aap ne mujhe darahi diya Akshara..

Akshara smiles

Naitik: Reports kahan hai?

He immediately hugs her very tightly and gives a kiss on her forehead.She is also very happy and kisses him on the right cheek..both are staring at the positive reports for a while.

She gives it to him.Both are really very happy. Both forget about the kulfi completely.

Both start discussing about their loss of the first baby

Naitik: Akshara..this is great..ab yeh zimmadari keliya..mein bilkul tyaar ho

Akshara: Haan Naitik..leken mujhe abhi dar lagraha hai..pehla pregnancy mei,mien bohot khush thi..Aaj bhi hu..leken..khushi ke saath saath..bohot dar lagraha hai..i don't know Naitik.

Naitik reassures her that nothing in such sort will happen this time

Naitik: Acha Akshara purani bato ko buljao..itni bari kuch kabri aur no celebrations??

Akshara : mein kya karoo Naitik..im feeling so lazy..sone ka mann hai

Naitik: Achaa??(he thinks to his self),Ab yeh sona chati hai..ab hum kya kare?Thik hai..mein bhi dekhta hu who kaise sothi hai.., Akshara kulfi??(suddenly remembers)

Akshara: Ab nahi chahiye

Naitik: KYA??..Acha thik hai

Not to make her sleep: He completely annoys her by typing hard and rough just to get her more miserable so that she can't sleep. Finally he gets an idea, he searches on google the first months of pregnancy and what to expect from women. He begins to laugh continuously,what finally makes Akshara to get up.

Akshara: Yeh kya hai Naitik?

Naitik: kuch bhi toh nahi,hahaha

Akshara: Kya dekhra he hein aap haan?Mujhe toh dikhoy,aap has kyun rahe hein?

Naitik: This source is so true..Pregnancy mein larkiya bohot jaldi gussa hojathe hien'Hahaha'dekhiye, aap bhi.. Miss Miserable Akshara

Akshara tends to get more miserable..but she understands that Naitik is just bothering her purposefully, on such she pretends to hide her misery and goes close to Naitik wraps her hands around his left arm and she tells him that he can't be just enjoying all by himself and that she will also look with him.

They laugh and joke around each other..While teasing each other'Taking the steps on by one Happily. Akshara finally goes to sleep after Naitik puts away the laptop.

Naitik is up and is thinking of how he will handle this responsibility and whether he will be a good father or not. Naitik is very elated and turns on the laptop again and begins to search baby photos and "How to be a GOOD Father".

The Family finds out in the morning.

The End.

7
Akshara knows about her pregnancy and feels very overwhelmed. She just walks out of doctors room all excited. Akshara is walking lost in her thoughts. She is walking on the hallway of the hospital when suddenly a kid runs towards her showing "Maa". Akshara is surprised and her eyes fill with tears. She just look at the kid running towards her. She is about to hold the kid, but the kid passes by and hugs his mother who is walking behind Akshara. Akshara is amazed and laughs at herself for thinking him to be her kid as her kid is still to come. She walks towards the car and almost bumps into her car but the driver opens the door for her. Akshara sits into the carefully making herself comfortable and thinks to herself now there is nothing going to be wrong. She puts her hand on her stomach and says assuring that she will not let anything happen to her baby this time.
Akshara returns home and finds Naitik waiting for her in their room.
Naitik: Aksharaji. where were you? I called you so many times but you never answered my call.
Akshara is confused and looks at her phone and finds 15 missed calls from Naitik. She realises that in her excitement she did not notice her phone ringing. Akshara excitedly starts to tell him about her pregnancy but stops herself as she is not sure of his reaction.
Akshara: Naitikji. I went to meet a friend.
Naitik: Which friend?
Akshara: I will tell you later. Did you have tea?
Naitik: No. I was worried about you.
Akshara: I will just get you tea.
Naitik goes to get fresh and Akshara leaves to get tea and is all nervous how to handle the situation and reveal things to Naitik. Naitik comes out of washroom and wonders why Akshara ignored his question. Akshara walks in with tea. Akshara serves tea to Naitik.
Naitik: Aksharaji. you did not answer my question.
Akshara: Have tea first.
Naitik is getting restless with her avoiding his question, but stays calm and waits for her response. Akshara looks at Naitik nervous.
Akshara: Naitikji. I have something to tell you..
Naitik looks at her as saying go on.
Akshara: Actually...I didnt go to see a friend but went to doctor today.

Naitik is concerned: Is everything alright. Why did you go alone. You should have told me, I would have come along with you.

Akshara; No everthing is fine, but...
Naitik: Whaat..
Akshara: Naitikji. You are gonna be father.
Akshara who was looking down looks at Naitik who gives a serious look. Naitik just gets and walks out of room. Akshara is shocked with this response and she takes time to react to the situation. she thinks to herself that she will talk to Naitik properly and everything will back to normal.. She waits for Naitik for long but he does not return. Akshara calls him on his phone but he does not pick up. Akshara keeps waiting for Naitik but falls asleep.
She wakes up in the morning and finds Naitik has not returned. She gets concerned and goes out when she hears her sasuma wondering what Naitik is doing in a room since yesterday. Akshara is like which room. She searches all the rooms and does not find Naitik. she is about to go to her room when she finds it locked. Akshara feels happy that Naitik has returned. She knocks it and she hears lock open after sometime.
Akshara walks in and is surprised to see the room all decorated and the bed filled with toys.
Akshara looks around and tries to make clear she is not day dreaming. Naitik walks from behind and lifts her up and takes squirls. He puts her down and hugs her tight.
Akshara: Naitikji. I thought you got angry.
Naitik: Yes. I got angry that you took so long to tell such a good news.
Akshara: Naitikji.
Akshara is all happy and they both hug. Naitik kisses her forehead and assures her in all situations he is gonna be with her.
Life is not bed of roses.
To have roses in your life you have to face the thorns😉😛

8
NANHE SE KADMO KI AAHAT AATI HAI! :D

Aankhon mein neendein, neendon mein sapna,

Ik nanha sa mehmaan hai..

Roshan hoga, kab vo deepak,

sabke dilon mein ye armaan hai..

sach hone wala hai, ik sapna..

chehakne wala hai, ghar anganaa..

Nanhe se kadmo ki aahat aati hai!



Nurse : Naitik ji, congratulations! Aap papa ban gaye.. aapke ghar Baal Gopal padhaare hain!

Naitik : Holi ke paawan avsar par mere ghar Baal Gopal! Nurse, kya main mil sakta hu Akshara aur mere bacche se?

Nurse : ha.. ha.. jaiye.. aapki wife to kabse aapke baare mein pooch rahi hai!

Naitik rushes to Akshara!


Naitik : Akshara, aap thik to hai na? Kaha hai humara baccha? Vo kaisa dikhta hai? Aapki tarah ya meri tarah? Uska rang kaise? Mujhe dijiye, main use apni god mein uthana chahta hu!

Akshara : Naitik, shaant ho jaaiye! Vo raha humara baccha! (directions to the cot nearby)

Naitik runs to the cot, holds the baby in his hands! Tears of happiness flowing out of his eyes!

Naitik : Akshara, kya ye sach mein humara baccha hai? Mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai!

Nurse : Mr. Singhania, apni wife ko bhi dikhaiye apne baccho ko.. vo kabse keh rahi thi, baccha dekhengi to apne husband ke saath!

Naitik : akshara, aapne abhi tak nahi dekha ise? Kyon?

Akshara : pehle aapke chehre ki khushi dekhna chahti thi main!


Naitik comes to Akshara, and they both look at their own child, Akshara crying while holding her own baby! The dream which she saw on her last birthday was finally fulfilled.. her own baby had arrived! Her bunch of happiness had finally arrived! She's into her world of imagination when her husband, Mr. Naitik Singhania asks her..


Naitik : kya hua akshara? Kaha kho gayi aap? Dekhiye, ye kitna cute hai. Par ye aankhen kyon nahi khol raha? Ye to bilkul aap par gaya hai.. naak naksh sab aapki tarah hai, bus rang mera hai! Akshara, dijiye na, ye mera bhi beta hai!

Akshara : ha, lijiye na naitik.. aap hi ki god mein ye accha lagta hai! Vaise pata hai, main vo din yaad kar rahi hu, jis din mujhe iss pregnancy ka pata chala tha..

Naitik : vo din? Ha Akshara, vo din bhulaya hi nahi jaa sakta!



FLASHBACK :

Doctor : Congratulations Mrs. Singhania, you're pregnant!

Akshara : kya? Sach mein doctor?

Doctor : yess Mrs. Singhania.. it's time for celebrations..

Akshara : thank you doctor.. thank you so much!

Doctor : Mrs. Singhania, I just want to say one thing to you.. jo kuch bhi pehle hua, use ek bura sapna samajh ke bhool jaayiga.. there's no point dwelling into the past!

Akshara : Ha doctor.. jo kuch bhi pichli baar hua, I just hope iss baar vaisa kuch na ho..

Doctor : kuch nahi hoga Mrs. Singhania.. stay positive, and everything will be positive! Ab jaaiye, aur apne husband ko ye good news dijiye! Vo bhot khush honge im sure!

Akshara : ha doctor.. main jaanti hu, unhe iss bacche ke aane ki khabar se mujhse bhi zada khushi hogi!

Doctor : I know mrs. singhania.. jaaiye aur apne husband ko ye khush khabri sunaiye.. and please, no need to cry.. baby ko bilkul accha nahi lagega agar use pata chalega ki uski itni sweet si mumma roengi to!

Akshara : thank u doctor!


In the office : naitik busy in some meeting.. his fne flashes 'Akshara calling' time and again but he doesn't seem to notice.. akshara is soo excited to share this news with her husband that she makes it a point not to go home before telling the good news to Naitik.. she knew once she enters her house, she'd spill the beans to someone else and she didn't want that to happen! :P she goes in to an ice cream parlour, has her favourite chocolate ice cream and in the mean while texts naitik to meet her at so and so ice cream parlour.. singhania's keep calling akshara but she doesn't pick it up, knowing that she's not be able to say a lie to them!

It's 10 in the night.. naitik still in office, oblivious to the fact that her beloved wife had called her at least 25 times in the last 4 hours and sent around 12 texts.. when suddenly he remembers akshara.. he picks up the fne, sees all the missed calls and texts and immediately calls akshara.. akshara who met her childhood friend in the parlour picks up her fne n asks naitik to come to the parlour as quickly as he can!

Naitik worried ' what would have happened that akshara called me at the parlour? Is everything ok? She looked quite bubbly when I called her? Oh God, hope everything is fine..

he reaches the parlour.. opens the door, only to find akshara sitting very cutely and waiting for her beloved husband.. when suddenly -

Manager : Madam, 4 ghante ho gaye hai aap yaha baithi hui hai.. ab parlour band karne ka time ho raha hai, please uthiye.. humein close karna hai..

Akshara : bhaisaab, please thodi der ruk jaaiye, mere husband aate hi honge..

Manager : madam aap unhe le kar kahi aur chale jaaiye, par please yaha se uth jaaiye varna humein zabardasti karni padegi..

Naitik like a true hero, comes in to protect his lady..

Naitik : tameez se baat kijiye bhaisaab, biwi hai vo meri.. aapko nahi bithana mat bithaiye, par ye kya bole jaa rahe hai aap?

Akshara : naitik, please bhadakiye mat, shaant ho jaaiye.. chaliye kahi aur chalte hai hum..

in the car

naitik red with anger.. how dare someone talk ill with my wife? Akshara pacifies him.. kisses him on his left cheek to calm him down..

Naitik (finally relaxed) : akshara, aap itni der yaha kyo wait kar rahi thi? Aisa kya tha jo aapne mujhe yaha bulaya?

Akshara : kuch btana tha aapko..

Naitik : akshara aisa bhi kya btana tha aapko jo aap ghar mein nahi keh sakti thi? Itni raat gaye aap uss parlour mein akeli baithi thi.. accha lagta hai kya?

Akshara : naitik, dekhiye aaj mera mood bhot accha hai, aap please use bigadiye mat..

she says it with so much innocence that naitik melts, and asks her to blurt out everything..


Akshara : naitik, aapko thanks bolna chahti hu.. aapko btana chahti hu ki I love u soo much for everything u have done for me.. u have stood by me through thick and thin and I wish u never ever leave..

Naitik : akshara, ye kya keh rahi hai aap? Koi kehne wali baat hai kya ye sab? Agar main aapke liye nahi khada rahuga to kaun rahega? Btaiye? Aapne ye kehne ke liye mujhe yaha bulaya hai?

Akshara : nahi naitik.. iske saath kuch aur bhi kehna tha..

Naitik : to kahiye na akshara! Main yahi aapke pas khada sun raha hu..

Akshara : koi hai naitik, jisse main aapse zada pyar karne wali hu.. jise main aapse zada time dene wali hu.. jise main duniya ki har khushi dene wali hu.. jise main...

Naitik : ye kya keh rahi hai aap akshara? Aap mujhe chod ke jaane wali hai kya kahi?

Akshara : nahi nahi naitik, aisa to main aapne sapne mein bhi kabhi nahi soch sakti.. bus ye hai ki main aapko aane wale competition ke liye tayar kar rahi hu!

Naitik : competition? Kaisa compeition? Akshara aap kya keh rahi hai mujhe kuch... AKSHARA? Kya ye sach hai? Aap doctor ke pas gayi thi? Unhone kaha ki aap maa... aur main papa? Kya sach mein akshara? Oh my God mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai... thank u akshara! Thank u for giving me the biggest happiness of my life! I love u sooo much!

Wohoo.. humara baccha aane wala hai akshara.. humara baccha!


Tears of happiness fill in naitik's eyes.. akshara is shocked to see naitik like this.. in the two years of her marriage, she had never seen naitik soo happy, soo content, and soo full! She thanked God for making her the most complete woman in the world ' with such a loving and a beautiful husband by her side, and her bundle of joy in her tummy! Our naksh seemed complete that moment.. both crying out of happiness and both trying to thanks each other for what all they had done! Naitik in his utter excitement kissed akshara on her lips and thanked her for giving him such a good news on a tension filled day at the office!


PRESENT :

Naitik : uss din itna kaam office me, aur uske baad vo khushi! Sach akshara, ur the best wife in the world!

Akshara : and naitik, aap duniya ke sabse acche husband hai.. aur main jaanti hu, utne hi accha aap pita bhi banenge!

With the baby in their arms, naitik and akshara sit close with their head touching each other.. both seem complete with each other, and with the baby!


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Finally read them all.. Had great time reading them..:P
its really difficult to chose 2.. I loved them all n got stuck with 4 of them..:s
finally made a decision.. Its 1 and 8..
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These are SO good...i mean the others...i dont know what to choose from😕
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pheww finally read all the 8 all are awesome k se badhkar ek gr8 we hv so many writters and awesome one wish i too participted anyways my votes will go to???
1 & 4 :) its was difficult to choose 😃
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Bohat maza aane wala hai...😳😆 So many one shots to read...I'm in heaven...😍
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Originally posted by: Asawari_naksh


Bohat maza aane wala hai...😳😆 So many one shots to read...I'm in heaven...😍

i know one more reason y u shud be in heaven🤣
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Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

i know one more reason y u shud be in heaven🤣


which reason baba? And why are u laughing...😕
I'm getting scared what do u know that I don't know...🤣

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