SS:mera paas paas part 16at71 Epilogue

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[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t9k22sBGPx8[/YOUTUBE]

part 1https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue

part2https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=4

part 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=11

part4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=16

part 5https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=21

part 6https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=25

part7https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=30

part8https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=35

part9https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=39

part10https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue?pn=45

part11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue

part12https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue

part13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue

part14https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue

part15https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue

part16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2071503/ss-mera-paas-paas-part-16at71-epilogue

Khushi was leaving for after a very long day, LA and Anjali were gone to a wedding with nani and Mami ji ,they have asked her to make something for Arnav as now days he his sugar level was fluctuating as his temper. he was just behaving strange with everyone..


HP came back with the tray ...

Khushi: kya huwa

HP: he is not opening door he just kept the plate on the table.and walk out as he has to go some where.

Khushi: pagal hogai ha subah se kuch khaya nahi ha tabiyat kharab hogai tou ,aur ghar mein koi ha bhi nahi... she just picked up tray and walk upstairs. she knocked at the door.

Arnav shouted " i said leave me alone"

Khushi: " aap ko hum per ghusa ha , khana aur sub per kyun inkal raha ha"

Arnav: Khushi ... he just thought she had left , he was waiting for her since morning .as it was getting late he was losing his temper.as he thought he will not be able to see her. he just open door.

Khushi: yeh la she wave tray in front of him.

Arnav: just pull her in and close the door

Khushi: kya kar raha ha aap.

Arnav: When i said i dont want to eat why you brought ?

Khushi: aap kai tabiyat kharab hojai gi..she placed the tray on the table

Arnav: " tou tum ko kya friaq parta ha " he just hold her arm and twisted her around her back was next to him

Khushi: kya kar raha ha aap

Arnav: jao date per, jao shopping karna, haar waqat baat karo , tum ko kya mein zinda raho ya

Khushi: just turn around .. she just raise her hand but stop" ha aap ka tou sub ehsas(emotions) mara gai ha ,aap sirf do cheezo per apna ghusa nikal sakta ha hum per aur woh bazaara plants ..."

Aranv: mera ehsas mara gai ha (emotions) he just let her go

Khushi: look at him he was sitting on the sofa... she just look at his face it was sweating ..she just gave him water.. "yeh la"

Arnav:look at her "GET OUT"

Khushi: "yeh " he just grab the glass and bang it

Khushi: yeh kya kiya aap na she just hold his hand .

Aranv: bola na jao

Khushi: just try to hold his hand he push her she feel down.. her hand landed on the broken glass small pieces .."aah"

Aranv:look at her it was bleeding " Khushi"

khushi: just got up and try to walk he just hold her hand and pull her back" hum thek ha , aap yeh please "she closed her fist

Arnav: shhh,,he look at her hand where the fist were closed her just hold her hand and open the fist ... there was very tiny drop of bloods on her palm as .he just look at her hand very carefully to check if the there is any glass piece stick on her hand..

Khushi: bola na hum thek ha ...

Arnav: just look at her placed his hand on her shoulder and made her sit on the bed. " i hurt you"

Khushi: look at him his eyes was all red with pain ..

Arnav: was kneeling down and taking out the pieces " wait" walk to wash room and bring first and box...

Khushi: hum thek ha ...

Aranv:look at her as she was not given her his hand " mera ehasa nahi mara " he just took her hands and kissed it " nahi mara ha , i can still feel , i can feel the pain of losing you , as the days coming close i an dying from inside ... if you will go from my life then "

Khushi: look at him he was kissing her palm and saying... "aap"

Arnav: just picked a glass pieces and close in his fist.."see i have "

Khushi: yeh kya kiya aap na aap ka bhi pehla ka zamkham thek nahi huwa aur aap na ..she just force full open his fist..taken out the glass piece ... his hand has cut she was stopping the blood with her hand ...

Arnav: just look at her face her face has pain and her eyes has tears which was running on her face he just suddenly got up cup her face and Kissed her it was so sudden she just fall back on his bed ..she didnot got at first as he kiss was bit rough at the started as he started feeling her soft lips and her shiver it became soft she was too shocked but his emotions took her over . he was running his finger in her hairs opening it .. just to feel her ..just to say he is still alive .. his blood was at her forehead it absorb in her hairs ..he broke "mein nahi mara hoon, how much i need you that only i know"


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wrc3edPifCw&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Apne Ehsaas se chukar mujhe Sandal kardo,
mai ke hun sadyyon se adhura mukammal kardo

he started kissing her neck and face .. he was just going wild over her and she was lost her mind was shell in front of his emotions .. he just became totally crazy ,all his emotions came out of him .he just kissed her madly at every inch of her body

Na tumhe Hosh rahe na mujhe Hosh rahe,
is Qadar toot ke chaho mujhe Paagal kardo,

Khushi :just became weak in front of his love ,and she let him conquer her made her his ...



do comment ..as this is my very first writing which is bold if you guys think i have broken rule of IF do pm me as i dont want to make any one sick here, me waiting for your comments as i dont have time to pm right now


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me 1st

Ha ha yeh dono ko akela chodo tho yehi hoga na... 😆
Awesome Nadz
Edited by MsCeylon - 13 years ago
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lol i added hour back me crying 😭
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loved it...
gr8 writings...ur passion for writing is jus awesome😃
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Originally posted by: naddiya26ipkknd

lol i added hour back me crying 😭


Hey got your PM just couple o mins back yaar...
don't 😭 pls 😊
Love your writing as ever ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 nyc one!!
Edited by paulomi_taAnu - 13 years ago
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wow!!! ❤️ amazing one di! 😳
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Arnav does have feelings...and you have perfectly written it...hope he expresses his feelings to kushi even in the serial...than showing it as anger always...

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loved it..it was really ehsas,,and ya continue with the consequence of it..
The family's reaction..khushi' reaction..???
Edited by sarach - 13 years ago

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