hi swetha...thanx a lot...😃Originally posted by: sweetySweetu
I just loved Virat's concern for Manvi.And u have put emotions of Manvi sooo...good after Jeevika's bidaai and how she missed her sister.I was reading that part again and again.Loved ur work ashred12(BTW can I know ur name?I am swetha)
Virat attended the call wondering why Manvi called him. " Hel..." but was cut midway.
" Main tumhare saath kal nahi aa rahi hoon. Main koi bacchi nahi hoon, apni decisions khud le sakti hoon. Mujhe tumhari madad ki zaroorat nahi hai."
Virat shook his head. Here he was thinking that she was sad about leaving her sister, and she was fighting with him about going to doctor !!
" Tumhe apni di se juda hone ki koi dukh nahi hai ? " he asked curiously.
" Kisne kaha mujhe dukh nahi hai ?! Tum topic change mat karo. Main nahi aavungi."
" Ms.Manvi.. Its not a topic for discussion. Tum aa rahi ho and that's it. Aur kuch ? "
" Nahi toh ? " Manvi couldn't resist challenging him.
" You know what will happen. Main seedha jaake bhabhi ko sab kuch batavunga. Ab choice tumhari."
Silence was the reply.
" I thought so." He commented.
Then he asked gently, " Waise, iss waqt kyu call ki ? Neend nahi aa rahi hai ? "
Manvi debated whether to reply or not. But at last the urge to talk to someone, who understood her just like her di, won. " Nahi, woh..."
" Bhabhi ki yaad aa rahi hai ? "
" Woh meri di hai, tumhari bhabhi abhi tak bani..." She replied fiercely, out of habit, but trailed off when she suddenly remembered that her di had become his bhabhi officially few hours back.
Virat chose not to tease her on that.
" Woh pehle meri di hai, phir tumhari bhabhi." Manvi was back to her fighting form, after few moments of silence.
" Meri bhabhi ya tumhari di, baat toh ek hi hai." Virat replied sagely.
Manvi couldn't think of a comeback. She hated it when he was right. " Whatever."
Virat chuckled. He always enjoyed making her run out of words. " Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki tumhari di mere bhai ke saath bahut khush rahegi."
" Pata hai. Phir bhi.. Aaj tak main di ke bina nahi rahi hai." Manvi confessed.
" Dheere dheere aadat ho jayengi."
" Is this how you console someone ? So insensitive ? " questioned Manvi, regretting her decision to talk to him.
" Maine wahi kaha jo sach hai. Ab, tumhari di ki jaga toh koi le nahi sakte. Par woh ab tumhare saath reh bhi nahi sakti. Toh tumhe ab unke bina rehne ki aadat dalni padengi."
" Yeh sab mujhe pata hai. Tumhe kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai." Manvi got irritated.
" Listen. Bas kuch ghantein baaki hai subah hone keliye. Phir tum apne di se mil sakti hoon."
" Lekin hum toh kal wapas jaa rahe hai."
" Beeji ne nahi batayi ?! Tum log kuch din aur yaha ruk rahe hai."
" Kya ?! "
" Wahi jo tumne suna."
" Mujhe aise kyu lag rahi hai ki iske peeche tumhare kaale haath hai ? "
" Mere kaale haath ?! Main itna gora munda aur tum mujhe kaala keh rahi ho ?! Woh bhi aadhi raat mein mere neendh kharab karke ?! "
" Tum so rahe the ? "
" Tumhe kya laga, sab tumhare tarah ullu bangaye ? "
" Emm...Sorry for disturbing your sleep."
" Ek toh neendh se jagate ho, aur upar se jagada karte ho !!"
" Maine kaha na sorry !!" Manvi raised her voice.
" Acha baba theek hai. Ab jaldi se so jao aur kal theek 10 am, bhoolna mat."
" Jaise ki mujhe neendh aayengi." murmured Manvi.
" Tum bas yeh socho ki kuch ghantein baad tum apni di se milengi. Aur agar usne tumhe tired dhekhli toh..."
" Acha theek hai, main sone ki koshish karungi."
" Good. See you tomorrow. Good night."
" Good night."
Talking to Virat didn't chase away her loneliness but it helped her to relax and look forward for the morning to meet her di.
Talking to Manvi always made him smile. Tonight was no different. He looked forward for the morning to meet her. ' For more fun, and to check her health,' he told himself. ' Nothing more.' He added as if trying to convince himself that she didn't mean anything more, when he remembered her question.
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