IPKKND FF - Hunters and Gatherer (note P96)

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Hey there! That's a very interesting concept you've got going. I like it a lot. The original story, with a twist. Very nice. Kinda like a Bloody Mary...tomato juice, with a dash of vodka😊! I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it going.

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Incredible. Stunningly magnificient. Phenomenally remarkable...and i can probably go on and on with this, but to sum it all up, Im Stupendously gripped and addicted to youre writing. How you manage to not only bring out the characterization so wonderfully, but with such a strong plot along with a twist is out of my understanding, but you surely have the talent and creativity to write down mere words which can so easily express the entire part. I loved the entire analogy and history factor youve constructed of Hunters and Gatherers 😉 I personally enjoy the entire suspense of the story, along with the excitement it brings with it...it does make my brain go bonkers with all the thinking, but for this one, Im going sit back and relax while you continue too write. Cant wait to read moree and in the last part, you brought back the memories of the initial episodes of ArHi..they were just so innocent and clueless of each other back then, but i like how you expressed the feelings between each dialogue for them...i probably missed out such details in the actual episode...lol But nonetheless, im enjoying youre writing =) Update soon!

(I hope i didnt blab too much, i just get all excited and hyper when i read something soo good lol)

- Dee

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

@guncha, Zeba, Dee: REPLIED VIA AWESOME SEXY PMs! 😃 😳

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz
Awesome! Ur angle to what happened sure gives such a kick to the story. Loving it.

thank youuu! i hope my efforts dont go to waste! i am taking a LOT of time to just plan out each chapter. 😭

Originally posted by: savvz
suspense is building.. good going... :)

thank you!

Originally posted by: madmaxine
Hey there! That's a very interesting concept you've got going. I like it a lot. The original story, with a twist. Very nice. Kinda like a Bloody Mary...tomato juice, with a dash of vodka😊! I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it going.

Vidhya! I'm glad this has caught ur eyes! I know what a great writer you are, and i'm glad you are pleased. 😳 and i love the analogy! Bloody Mary. and what Irony! THE STORY IS BLOODY! 😆 i hope i dont let you down with the rest of my updates! 😳

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

@Zeba- Actually I don't need to 😆 her condition is pretty much the same like us at the moment ->

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

PHEW! that was a HUGE chapter!

and I apologise a million times for updating so late when I was supposed to update the previous saturday! I'm so sorry! I was in China for the weekend, visiting some place, and I didn't even have the energy to type out anything cos I had soo much fun! I did take my laptop there, but couldn't write anything! My mind was overflowing with memories of pandas, white tigers, royal Bengal tigers, gorgeous lions (I love lions! And Leos!😉 i have a feeling that my future HONEWALA [if i'm ever so lucky] would be a Leo. LOL), and koala bears and kanagaroos. yes. they have Australian animals there too! LOL. The safari trip was awesome! I HAD BREAKFAST WITH THEM! it was like a glass room, and outside there were wild animals running amok! 😃 it was the coolest of all experience! anyways. i hope you liked this chapter. i think it lacked something. maybe i'll come back to edit it again. i dont know. 😕

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

superb and thrilling!!😳

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mary78613

@mary78613

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Awesomeee Shalu!
This was completely mindblowing!!!
And Thanku sooo much for the dedication! I feel so loved!😳😃

Edited by mary78613 - 13 years ago

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Yash141

@Yash141

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Wow! Just finished reading.. That was a novel experience shalu.. And I 'super like' it..👍🏼 Anyways, I'm a freak when it comes to books n stories..😉 Hey, and isn't this a cool piece of literature..? I mean, ts so fresh.. 😊

I like how u unravel the story in a thrilling way.. So, this creep is not Shyam bum..? Nw I'm curious..😕 And I love the part where u described how Khushi was welcomed.. The plants n all.. 😳 Awesome!
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Waiting for the next chappi.. Jaldi laana my HC!! 😳 Love you.. 🤗