MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69 - Page 2

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Wow congrats for another new FF seems awesome concept
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very nice story.
awesome start.
continue soon
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gandi bachi abhi tak baki Ff ku update nahi kia
Chalo maf kar dati ho because i really loved this New concept bohat maza ay ga
jaldi sa update karna bhol mat jana .

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cont soon
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wao nice concept sounds really intresting and great intro jaldi jaldi update karu itna acha intro parha kar gayab hu gayi
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nice concept plzz in your story plzz do nt seprate sajan pretty plzzz
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Nice Cs looking forward for part 1 ...thnx for the Pm dear
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desperately waiting for the update

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Hi Guys atlast I am back with my updates lots of confusions were left in last updates I am sorry for late updates but I was busy in some important work but as i told I updated I hope ki isbaar atleast aapko mere updates pasand aaye

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Part 1

In abusy city mumbai starts the story. In sanjeevani hospital everyone are rushing to their duties because shashank sharma can be there anytime and if he sees anyone doing timepass they will be fired.

A girl was walking her hair was flying in air , she was busy looking at case file suddenly her duppatta flies and falls on aboy who was busy staring her . She was standing shy he smiles and goes near her puts dupatta on her she blushes

Boy-tum sharmaate hue aur bhi sundar lagti ho

Girl-sam please abhi nahin mujhe kaam hain

S-maine kuch nahin kiya ab tak ab jab tum chahti ho toh

He moves near her

G-please chodo sir aate hi honge aur sab kya sochenge

S-sab ko pata hain ki main tumhara kya hun

She blushes

S-haaye main mar jaawa

G-sam please chodo sham ko uncle aate honge please chodona

S-teek hain abhi chod raha hun par sham ko punishment bhi lena padega

G-acha teek hain par please jao

(she closes her eyes he leaves kissing her cheek which makes her feel embarrased)

In the court girl was rushing with papers suddenly she hits a boy and all her papers fall down

He helps her in rearranging them he gives a paper in hand

Boy-papers nahin sambhal paa rahi ho case kya ladogi tumhare liye ghar hi teek hain (she stares at hm angrily she gets up and moves forward)

Boy-manners bhi nahin hain thanks bhi nahin kahaan

Girl-maine tumhein help ke liye nahin poocha

She was leaving finds temple and prays to god

Boy-bhagwan ke dua se case nahin jeetogi uske liye case ladna padta hain

She looks at him in anger

Girl-tum mera peecha kyun kar rahe ho apna kaam sambhalo na

Boy-tum par nazar rakh raha hun woh kya hain aap merri hone waali biwi hain main aapka khayal nahin rakhoonga toh aapke dad yane mere sasur ji ko bura lagega

Gal –main tumse shaadhi nahin karne waali

Boy-tum zabaan ki chahe kitni kadvi kyun na ho yeh ek baat bahut sureela lag raha hain

She goes from there

In the court it was divorce case and mayur were fighting the same people who fought before indono ladne ke naye naye tareeke milte hain

N-your honour mere client Miss Ranjitha

M-objection my lord divorce abhi tak hua nahin so aap unhe mrs ranjitha kahengi toh acha rahega

N-abhi ho jayega my lord Mr Ranjit ne shaadhi shudah hote hue kisi aur ladki ke saath rishta rakha hain unhone mere client Mrs Ranjitha ko dokha diya hain main aapse request karoongi ki mere clent ko MrRanjith se divorce de kar unhein is dokebaaz se bachaiye

M-aap kehte hain ki aapke ati ka kisi aur ladki ke saath affair hain

Ranjitha- haan maine apne aanko se unhein kisi aur ladki ke saath dekha hain

M-oh toh aap kehti hain ki aapne unhein kisi aur ladki ke saath dekha hain toh undono ka affair hain aapki vakeel mere saath khadi hain toh kya hum dono ka bhi affair hain

N-tum mujhe beech main kyun laarahe ho

M-kyunki client tumhara hain

Ranjitha –main paagal hodi hun saath main kade rehne ka matlab affair thodi hota hain mere pati mujhse jooth bolkar usse milne gaye

M-unhone kya kaha

Ranjitha-unhone mujhse nahin kahaan ki woh wahaan usse milne jaarahe hain

M-aap jahaan bhi jaati hain apne pati ko batake jaati hain

Ranjitha-batake nahin jaati par jooth toh nahin kehti maine undono ko ek saah dekha tha unhone mujhse jooth kahaan ki woh kuch important kaam main busy hain baad main pata chala imortant kaam kya hain

M-aap wahaan apne pati ka peecha kar rahi thi

Ranjitha-nahin main apne dost ke saath gayi thi aur unexpectingly undono ko dekha

M-dono kya kar rahe the

Ranjitha-dono kaafi close the

M-close malab main samja nahin

Ranjitha-usne kiss bhi kiya tha

M-kisne kisko kiss kiya

Ranjitha-iska kya matlab us ladki ne mere pati ko kiss kiya tha

M-toh ismain aapke pati ki kya galti hain

Ranjitha-aap kehna kya chahte hain mere pati ko koi baahar waali ladki kiss kare ismein meere pati ki galti kaise nahin hogi

Nupur was busy reading paprs mayank kisses her cheek shocking everyone

N-yeh kaise badtameezi hain

Judge-Mr mayank Sharma aap court main sabke saamne aise badtameezi kaise kar rahe hain aapko main suspend karta hun

M-aapko suspend sirf mujhe nahin nupur bhushan ko bhi karna hoga

N-mujhe kyun suspend karenge galti tumhari thi meri nahin

M-nahin galti hum dono ki thi right ranjitaji

Ranjitha-yeh kaise ho sakta hain

M-aap agar aapke pat ko galat keh rahe hain toh nupur bhi galat hain yehaan bhi wohi hua jo wahaan hua aapke pati ne aapse jooth isliye kahaan tha kyunki woh aapko suprise dena chahte the lekin usse pehle hi yeh ladki mili aurusne sab kuch kharab kiya aapko jo hua woh ek misunderstanding thi

He tries to explain her incident the girlunderstands her mistake and takes back the case but nupur uska gussa toh dekhne laayak tha

outside the court

N-tumhari himmaat kaise hui sabke saamne kiss karne ki tumhein zara bhi sharam nahin aayi

m-ismein sharmaane waalli kya baat hain main toh bas unka misunderstanding clear kar raha tha

N-jooth mat bolo mujhe pata hain tumhare dimaag main kya chal raha hain tumne jaanbuz kar kiss kiya tha tumne situation ka advantage liya

M-itni si baat ke liye tum itna over react kyun karrahi ho kahaana unhein samjaane ke liye karna pada waise bhi sirf cheek pe tha kahin aur nahin tha

N-tumhara irada irada kya hain kahin tum karke toh dikhao jaan se maar daaloongi

He kisses her lips infront of everyone

M-tumhari wish main poora kyun nahin karoonga ab tumhein jo karna hain karo bye

He leaves leaving her stunned shashi was irritated with all this

In the evening sam takes gunjan out they spend some time together he leaves gunjan late night seeing all this shashi takes a dcision

Next day morning

Shashi-mujhe tum dono se zaroori baat karni hain

Nupur was busy in her papers

Shashi-nupur main tumse hi keh raha hun

N-mujhse mujhe laga important baat hain na aap mujhse baat nahin karenge kyunki aapke hisaab se main choti hun na

Shoba-nupur zabaan sambalo toh acha hoga

N-maine kya kahaan aa log hi kehte hain

G-nupur chup chap bait

N-tum teeno se baat karna bekar hain (sshe keeps silent)

G-dad aap kuch keh rahe the

Shashi-main tum dono ki shaadhi jald se jald karwa dena chahta hun

Gunjan blushes butterflies were moving in her stomach

N-mujhe yeh shaadhi nahin karni

Shobha-kyun nahin karni tum koi bachi nahin ho shaadhi ka umar ho gaya hain

N-mujhe shaadhi se nahin aapke dulhe se problem hain main us sadu se marke bhi shaadhi nahin karoongi

Shobha-tameez se baat kar tujhe yeh saadhi karni hogi hain tujhe ache se pata hain teri shaadhi bachpan main hi tay ho gayi hain phir ab kyun naatak kar rahi hain

N-mom yeh koi bacho ka khel nahin hain woh mere liye teek nahin hain

Shobha -tu itni badi ho gayi hain ki yeh jaanne ke liye tere liye kya sahi hain kya galat tujhse badi hainteri di kaise chup baiti hain teri tarah beha nahin kar rahi

N-di ka dimaag kharaab hain mera abhi tak nahin hua

Shashi-bas baht ho gaya tu baatein bahut jyada kar rahi hain tumhari wajah se kal sabke saamne mujhe sharminda hona pada ab yeh shaadi ke liye inkaar karke aur tamasha mat kada kar chup chap shaadhi kar warna acha nahin hoga

N-usne jo kiya usmain meri galti kahaan e aayi aa jo chahe kar lijiye main yeh shaadhi nahin karne waali

She leaves from there

Shobha-tujhe jo samja sakta hain usi se samjaongi mujhe ache se pata hain tu kiski baat sunegi

Gunjan leaves with sam

S-ka baat hain aaj bahut khush lag rahi ho

G-kuch nahin

S-jooth mat bolo main tumhare bina kahe hi tumhare dil ki baat jaan sakta hun

G-oh realy th bolo kya hain mere dil main

S-zaroor uncle ne hamaare shaadhi ke baare main kahaan hoga

G-tumhein kaise pata uncle ne bhi baat ki kya

S-nahin par maine kaha na main bina kahe hi tmhare dil ki baat jaan sakta hun

She blushes

G-bas ab mujhe shaadhi ke din ka intezaar hain

S-tum ladki ho zara toh sharmao

G-ismein sharmane waali kya baat hain yeh toh hum bachpan se jaante hain tum bhi toh wohi chahte ho na

S-haan par ladkiya sharmate hue ache lagte hain

G-sharmana tumhare family main hain right Mr Sharma

S-tum bhi bahut jald wohi banogi Mrs Sharma

G-tab seek lungi

She smiles and hugs him

He kisses her cheek

In hospital

Rahul-aagaye hamaare love birds aaj itni jaldi date pe nahin gaye

S-tere permission ka wait kar rahe the

Rahul-koi love birds ko kaise rok sakte woh mauka dekh kar ud jaate hain kisi ke nahin sunte

S-stupid joke

Rahul-jaanta hun

Shashi takes nupur to sharma house

N-hum yehaan kya kar rahe hain

Shashi-mujhe shashank se kaam tha

Nupur goes inside

Shashank-hello beta kaise ho

N-main teek hun uncle aunty kahaan hain

Shashank –ofcourse kitchen main hogi

She goes into kitchen and hugs her from back

N-aunty aap darr gayi

Shilpa-tu itni badi hogayi hain par harqatein bacho ki karti hain

M-sahi kahaan mom

Mayank at door

N-tum ab tak court nahin gaye

M-yeh question main tume bhi pooch sakta hun

N-aunty aapka laadl bete ko ladkiyon sebehave karna bhi nahin aata kal isne sabke saamne mujhe kiss kiya aur iski wajah se dad mujh par baras rahe the

M-mujhe encourage tumne kiya tha

Shilpa-mayu (she stares at him he already gt a class last night)

MM-acha baba sorry phir nahin karoonga promise

Shilpa-mujhe nahin nupur ko

M-sorry

N-sorry bolke kya faida tumhari wajah se dad ne shaadhi ka decision leliya hain jald se jald hamaari shaadhi karwaana chahte hain

M-kya

Shilpa-yeh toh bahut acha hua ab tu jald se jald dulhan bankar hamaare ghar aajaa mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye

Both-aap bhi

Shilpa-main bhi ka kya matlab tum dono ek dusre ke liye perfect ho

M-aisa aapko lagta hain humein nahin hum dono do minute ek saath nahin reh sakte life long saath rehna impossible hain dekhna shaadhi ke dusre din hi yeh merimurder karegi

Nupur stares at him

N-aunty hum dono ke beech nafrt ke alawa aur kuch nahin hain hum donosaath main kaise reh sakte hain shaadhi ke liye pyar zaroori hain

Shilpa-kisne kahaan shaadhi ke liye pyar ki zaroorat hain main aur tumhare uncle ek dusre ko jaante bhi nahin the phir bhi aaj hum dono khush hain na

N-aunty hamaari baat alg hain hum ek dusre se nafrat karte hain saath kaise reh sakte hain

Shilpa-oh toh tum dono ek dusre se nafrat karte ho

Both-haan

Shilpa-kya main iski wajah jaan sakti hun

Both look at each other

M-mom aapko nahin pata hm ek dusre se nafrat kyun karte hain

Shilpa-nahin pata isiliye toh pooch rahi hun beta

N-anty nafrat ki koi wajah nahin hoti nafrat karte hain toh bas karte hain

Shilpa-tu yeh filmy dialogues kisi aur ko suna mujhe nahin tum dono ko kal tak waqt de rahi hun proper reason do uske baad sochungi warna main kuch nahin kar sakti

Both were confused

Shilpa-bahut soch liya chalo breakfast karlo

N-main karke aayi hun

Shilpa-tujhe dekh kar nahin lagta chup chap chal

At table

N-dad aur uncle kahaan hain

Shilpa-lagta hain chale gaye

N-phir main

Shilpa-mayu hain na woh tujhe lejayega

Both-par

Shilpa-pehle mujhe mere question ka answer do uske baad tumhare reasons sunoongi philhaal ke liye tum dono saath main jaa rahe ho

In hospital sam was on rounds he was checking some patient suddenly his eyes fall on gunjan he was busy staring at her. tina sees them

tina-sam gunjan ko baad main dekhna pehle patient ko dekho

he gets back to his senses

S-haan woh main kya keh raha tha

Patient-kuch nahin aap madam ko dekh rahe the

All laugh sajan feel embarrased

At bhushan house sam comes to drop gunjan

Shobha-bahut din baad ghar aaya hain

S-woh main gunjan ko drop karne aaya tha

Shobha-jaanti hoon thodi dr baito main dinner lagati hun dinner karne ke baad jaana

S-lekin aunty woh mom

Shobha-main baat karloongi tu chup chap bait

Nupur comes inside shouting

N-mom aapne kya kiya dad aur aapne mujhe sharma house main chod diya us sadu ke saath jaane ke liye subah toh bada class le rahe the sanskar yeh woh bolke aapne jo kiya woh kya tha

Shobha-tu apna muh band karegi

She was embarrased as sam was there she takes nupu inside

G-sorry woh nupur bhi na bina soche samje bolti hain

S-i understand mayank bhi aisa hi hain

G-yeh dono bhi na pata nahin kab life ko seriously lenge

S-agar yeh dono life ko seriously lenge toh life funny hojayega

G-tum sahi kh rahe ho dono ke dono paagal hain isiliye ek dusre ke liye correct hain inhein ek dusre ke alawa koi bare nahin kar sakta

S-mujhe bhi tumhare alawa aur koi bare nahin kar sakta

(she blushes)

Shobha-tujhe zara bhi akal hain kya bina soche amje bakti jaa rahi hain baahar samrat tha pata nahin kya soch raha hoga

N-use josochna hain sochne do agar usne yeh shaadhi cancel ki toh acha hi hoga

Shobha-bas bahut hogaya tujhe samja samja ke tak gayi hun ab aur nahin tu maane ya na maane terishaadhi mayank se hi hogi

N-par mom

Shobha- chup chap chal mere saath dining table pe yeh sab lagaane main meri help kar

N-naahin main aapki help karoongi naahin mujhe khana kaaongi main apne room main jaarahi hun aap aur aapki beti apne laadle damaad ko khud khana khilana mujhe in stupid cheezo main interest nahin

She gives a tight slap nupur goes to her room crying

At dining table

S-nupur kahaan hain

Shobha-lagta hain baahar khake aayi hain isiliye apne room main gayi hain sone ke liye uski baato ka bura mat maanna beta thodi naadaan hain

S-mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahin lagaa mayank bhi aisa hi hain mom ko toh jab dekho tang karta rehta hain kyunki sirf mom uski naatak bardaash karti hain

In sharma house

Shashank-sam kahaan hain

Shilpa-woh shobha ka phone aaya tha sam wohi hain aaj dinner wohi karega

M-kyun unhein yehaan khana nahin milta

Shilpa asks him to keep silent

Shashank-mayank woh tujhse bada hain tameez se baat kar

M-aap mujh pargussa kyun kar rahe hain bhai shaadhi se pehle hi ghar jamaaiban gaye aapko uske baare main sochna chahiye

Shilpa-mayu chup chap muh band karke apne kamre main ja

M-par mom

Shilpa-jo kahaan woh kar

He leaves in anger

Shashank-dekha tumhare laad ka asar tune hi ise sar pe chadaake use bigaada hain bado se baat karne ka tameez bhi bhul gaya

Shilpa-naadaan hain main usse baat karoongi

Shashank-mujhe nahin lagta yeh sudrega pata hain na isne kal kya kiya iskiwajah se mujhe shashi ke saamne sharminda hona pada ab toh iski shaadhi jald se jald karke rahoonga uske baad ise jo karna hain kare

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Precap : mayur and sajan engagement

Hope you like it

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