MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69 - Page 4

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part 2

Nupur goes to her room and falls on bed

N-kisiko meri parvah nahin hain choti hone ka matlab yeh thodi hain ki main jo bhi sochti hun woh galat hain kya main apne life ke decision lena bhi nahin jaanti mujhe itna freedom bhi nahin hain

She sleeps crying on bed after sam leaves gunjan and shobha go to her room find her sleeping she puts hand on her head

Shobha-bina kuch khaye hi so gayi

G-mom aapko use tappad maarna nahinchahiye tha

Shobha-phir main kya karti itna zid karti hain kabhi kabhi darr lagta hain iska shaadhi ke baad kya hoga main toh iska bachpana bardaash karloongi par woh log kya sochenge

G-mom aap chinta kyun karti hain aunty nupur ko bahut pasand karti hain woh nupur ko kabhi kuch nahin kahegi

Shobha-main jaanti hun tu aur shilpa ke hote hue ise wahaan koi takleef nahin hogi isiliye main yeh rishta karna chahti hun tere saath rahegi toh mera darr bhi kam hoga par ise kaise samjao samaj nahin aarrahaan mai niski dushman thodi hun jo iska bura chahungi main jo bhi kar rahi hun iske balai ke liye kar rahi hun tum dono se jyada mujhe kuch bhi important nahin hain(she has tears)

G-jaanti hun mom aap kabhi hamara bura nahin soch sakti use thoda waqt chahiye insab baato ko samajne ke liye dekhna shaadhi ke baad yeha na aane ke liye bhi reasons bolegi bahut badi paagal hain

Sam-mom aap ab tak soyi nahin

Shilpa-neend nahin aarahi thi tu jaake soja kaafi raat hogaya hain

He sits on knees infront of her catches her hand

S-kya hua mom bahut pareshan lag rahi hain sab teek hain na

Shilpa-samaj nahin aaraha is ladke ka kya karun

S-usne phir kya kiya

Shilpa- aaj dinner pe tere baare main bala bura keh raha tha dad ko ulta jawaab de raha tha woh bacha nahin hain jo use maar ke teek karun par bado ki tarah meri baat samajta bhi nahin main kuch bhi seh sakti hun par tum dono ke beech ye doori bardaash nahin karsakti tum dono main se kisi ko kuch bhi hua toh main jee nahin paongi

S-mom hum dono dur thodi hain woh kuch bhi kahe mujhe bura nahin lagta woh mera chota bhai hain hamesha chota bhai hi rahega uski baatein mujhe kabhi hurt nahin karegi kyunki jitna aap use jaanti hain utna main bhi jaanta hun aur dad bhi

Shilpa-par beta jaane kyun bahut darr lag raa han

S-aap bewajah darr rahihain sab teek hojayega main hunna main sab sambhal loonga aako mujh par barosa nahin hain

Shilpa-hain par

S-par var kuch nahin raat bahut hogayi aap jaake sojaiye uske nakre toh roz chalte rehte hain aap bewajah stress lena band kijiye warna bp high hogi aur

Shilpa-bas bas maan gayi mera beta doctor hain main jaake sorahi hun ab khush

He smiles and hugs her

S-love you mom

Shilpa-love you too beta

Sam reaches room and finds mayu sleeping

S-aaj janab bade jaldi sogay e hey bhagwan pata nahin is ghar ka kya haal hoga jab meri saali aur bhai ki shaadhi hogi yeh dono ghar ko circus banadenge

Next day morning in gunur room

Shoba-goodmorning yeh rahi teri coffee subah subah books leke baiti hain itna padegi toh chasme ka number badega

She gives angry look and gets back to her books

Gunjan comes there and takes coffee

G-mom aap world ki best coffee banati ho aa yeh sab mujhe kab siikhaogi sam ne already order de diya hain shaadhi ke baad ghar ki saari responsibilities mujhe dega woh aunty ko rest dena chahta hain

Shoba-tu ghar pe rahegi toh sikhaogi na jab dekho hospital ka kaam bolke bhagti rehti hain tujhe khud ke kaam bhi karna nahin aata sab kuch mujhe aur ise sambhalna padta hain tujhse choti hain par saare kaam aate hain isse kuch seekh

G-shaadhi ke baad isse seekh loongi pehle aap mujhe sikhaiye

She was fuming with anger

N-(to herself)jab dekho shaadi shaadhi inlogo ko aur koi kaam nahin hain inke saath meri life bhi barbaad kar rahe hain meri toh yehaan kisko padi hain

G-khud se kya baatein kar rahi hain aise baatein karegi toh log paagal samjenge

Shobha-yeh paagal hi hain

She wanted to interrupt but she kept silent becoz of anger

G-oh shit pata nahin maine apna chain kahaan rakha raat se dund rahi hun mil hi nahin raha aapne dekha kya mom

Shobha-tu bhi na apna chain nahin sambhal paarahi ghar kya khaas sambhalegi dundo yehi kahin hoga

Nupur silently gets up brings the chain lying in the washroom and gives it to gunjan

G-thanks tu nahin hoti toh pata nahin mera kya hota

She stares angrily and goes out

Shobha-kahaan jaa rahi hain

She takes her black coat to indicate she is going to court

Shobha-khana nahin kayegi kya raat ko bhi bhuka pet so gayi ab bhi aise jaogi toh behosh hoke gir jaogi

She doesnt say anything silently goes and sits in car and cries she feels like noone cares her

Shobha-yeh ladki bhi na gussa naak pe chada rehta hain pata nahin kab samjegi

Shashi-uska tiffin mujhe do main use dekhta hun

While going to court he stops car in front of restaurant

N-mujhe bhukh nahin hain

Shashi-chup chap chal mere saath

N-par

He stares angrily she follows him

He makes her eat something and takes her to court

In sharma house at breakfast

S-suna hain kal tu mera bada tareef kar raha tha

He stares at shilpa

S-mom ko kya dekh raha hain mom ne hi bataya jab tujhe kehte hue koi problem nahin hain toh mujhe discuss karne main problem nahin haim

m-bhai mujhe iske baare main koi discussion nahin karni us waqt main gusse main tha

S-tu toh hamesha gusse main rehta hain nupur ne tujhe correct naam diya sadu

M-bhai uska naam lena bhi mat i just hate her mere saare problems ki jad wohi hain aur aap sabko bi mujhse jyada wohi important hain aap log isiliye naa chahte hue bhi us musibat ko mere gale baandna chahte ho

S-mayu nupur bahut achi ladki hain woh dil ki buri nahin hain bas teri tarah uska bhi gussa naak pe chada rehta hain

M-aap toh usi ka side lenge aakhir woh gunjan ki behan hain aapke liye mujhse jyada wohi log important hain mera kya hain aap chahe ya na chahe main yehi rahoonga par agar unki side nahin lenge toh woh shaadhi nahin karegi shaadhi se pehle hi usne aapko khub control main rakha hain mere parivaar ke liye mujhse jyada baahar waale important hain yehaan meri koi value nahin hain

He leaves from there in anger

Shilpa sits there in tears

S-mom aap teek hain

Shilpa-pata nahin yeh aise kyun soch raha hain

s-mom uske baato kodil se mat lijiye naraaz hain jab gussa kam hoga use apne galti ka ehsaas hoga

in car sajan were silent thinking about mayur sam realises he is with gunjan

S-aaj tumhara dress acha hain

G-haan woh main kal washroom main rakh kar bhul gayi nupsi ne dund ke diya nupsi ko har cheez ka pata hota hain isiliye lawyer ban gayi

S-mayu bhi aisa hi hain bachpan main use detective movies dekhna jyada pasand tha main toh use jr detective kehta tha

G-kya hua sab teek toh hain

S-wohi problem jab se shaadhi ki baat aayi uska gussa bad gaya hain mom aur dad usi ke liye pareshan hain samaj nahin aaraha kya karoon

G-ghar main bhi same problem hain kal raat ko kuch nahin kaayi subah bhi aise hi chali gayi mom toh kal se ro rahi hain main chah kar bhi kuch nahin kar paa rahi agar maine kuch kahaan toh mujh par bhi barsegi ya phir rona shuru karegi pata nahin is problem ka solution kya hain

In the night in sharma house both families gather

S-dad sab teek hain na achanak yeh meeting kisliye

Shashank-tum logo ke engagement dates aur marriage dates aagayi hain do din baad engagement aur dus din baad shaadhi

Shobha-par itni jaldi yeh sab kuch kaise hoga

Shashi-tum chinta kyun karti ho saare arrangements ho jayenge

M-dad mujhe aapse baat karni hain

Shashank-shaadi rokhne ke alawa tu kuch aur pooch sunoonga shaadhi toh hoke rahega

M-par dad mujhe shaadi nahin karni koi intelligent ladka is paagal se shaadhi nahin karega

N-tum khud ko jitna inteligent samajte ho utna ho nahin chehra dekha hain aaine main bilkul monkey ki tarah lagte ho

M-tum toh rajkumari hona mere peeche kyun padi ho koi paagal rajkumar dundo wohi tumhare liye sahi hain tumhara swayamvar mental assylum main rakhna chahiiye

N-tumse woh log hi better hain tumhein toh logon se baat karne ka bhi tameez nahin hain

M-tumhein rokha kisine jao us mental asylum chaho toh address dun atleast mera sar dard kam hoga

N-mujhe tumhare ghar ka address nahin chahiye

Shashank-bas baht ho gaya tum dono bache nahin ho tum dono chaho ya na chaho yeh shaadhi hokar rahegi hum logone decision leliya hain

Nupur goes from there crying to her house

Shobha tries to follow but shashi stops

Shashi-ab woh bachi nahin hain rone do use uske naatak main aur nahin bardaash karne waala

Mayank throws all things in his room outside

Shilpa-mayu yeh kya kar raha hain ek baar meri baat sun

M-mujhe kuch nahin sunna

S-mayu do minute ke liye apna gussa baaju rakh aur hamaari baat sun

M-kya sunu aapki tarah main bhi us family ka ghar jamai banu acha tareeka hain betiyon ka use karke ghar ke liye servant dund rahe

Shashank slaps him

Shashank-bas bahut hogaya ek aur word nahin tune badtameezi ke saare hadh paar kar diye

Mayank leaves from there in anger shilpa was worried where he left inthe night but sam brings him back

Next day they go for shopping

Shobha-aaj tu di ke saath jaakar apna engagement ring choose karegi warna baad main complaint karega ki ring acha nahin hain

M-pehnane waali pasand nahin aayi use badal do ring jaise bhi ho chalega

Shilpa-tu zid kyun kar raha hain kal raat jo hua kaafi nahin tha kya

N-zid main kar rahi hun ya aap log

M-zabardasti us musibat ko mere gale baand rahe hain

N-ab jab baandna confirm hain toh ring jaise bhi ho koi faraq nahin padne waala

M-waise bhi mujhe bahut kaam hain in faltu cheezo ke liye mere paas time nahin hain

Shashank-tik hain mat jaana

Shashi-gunjan tu iski ring bhi khud select karna

S-ok dad jaise aapki marzi

Mayur leave from dining table in anger. Sajan at shopping

S-nupur nahin aayi

G-mayank bhi toh nahin aaya

S-pata nahhin yeh dono life ko kab seriously lenge life ka itna important part yeh dono muh mod kar baite hain

G-dont worry bahut jald sab teek ho jayega

S-kaise hoga

G-pata nahin par hoga mera dil kehta hain

S-agar tumhara dil kehta hain toh zaroor hoga

She blushes

They go inside and select rings

S-yeh bahut sundar hain

G-haan nupur pe bahut acha lagega

S-yeh maine tumhare liye select kiya nupur ke liye nahin

G-sorry nupur ka bhi ring kareedna tha na isiliye aise kahaan agar tumhein itna pasand hain toh main yehi loongi

Gunjan selects a ring

G-sam yeh dekho

S-mayu ko suit karega

She starts laughing

S-aise kyun has rahi ho maine kuch galat kahaan

G-tum bhi bilkul meri tarah ho ring mayank ke liye nahin tumhare liye

S'oh sorry ab jab hamaare rings select ho gaye inke bhi select karenge

G-nupur ko white stones jyada pasand hain usi main lenge

S-mayank ko pearls pasand hain toh uske liye usi style main lenge

G-idea nupur ke taste main mayank ko mayank ke taste main nupur ko rings select karenge

S-dono rings phek denge

G-no way unhein thodi pata hain ki humne opposite taste main liye hain unhein ek dusre ke taste ke baare main bilkul bhi idea nahin hoga

S-you are smart

G-jaanthi hun

Both smile

After shopping

S-aaj sham baahar chale

G-sam kal sagai hain is waqt ghumenge toh acha nahin lagega

S-toh parso pucca please maan jao

G-acha baba teek hain

In court

Suraj-congrats yaar suna hain kal teri engagement hain humein invite bhi nahin kiya

M-suicide karte waqt invitation nahin dete (looking at nupur)

Suraj-aisa kyun keh raha hain nupur bahut achi ladki hain tu bahut lucky hain

M-agar itni achi hain toh tuu usse shaadi kar

Suraj-har koi tere jitna khush kismat nahin hota

M-usne tum sab logon ka dimaag kharaab kar diya hain isiliye aise stupidly baat kar rahe hain

suraj leaves from there broken heart. Suraj loves nupur from college but he never proposed becoz he knows that she was mayanks property but mayur they cant understand anyones feelings as they dont know there own feelings.

Next day evening

Sam wore blue color and mayank wore marun colour sherwaani

S-aaj mera bhai bahut handsome lag raha hain pata nahin saare ladkiyon ka kya hoga

M-aapko nahin lagta aap bewajah mujhe chida ke apna time waste kar rahe hain

Shashank-ise teek karna na mumkin hain

In Bhushan house

Gunjan wore white lehenga and nupur light pink she was looking like barbie doll

Shobha-haye mere bachiyan kitni pyari lag rahi hain dono ko kisiki nazar na lage

G-haan mom nupur bilkul pari ki tarah lag rahi hain pata nahin mayank ka kya hoga

She gives angry look and leaves from there

Both give oh God look to each other

Sharmas arrive they were given grand welcome but mayur dont even look at each other they were forced to stand together

Both were looking like a prince and princess together

Sajan were busy exchanging looks while mayur were passing angry glares

Music starts sajan dance on the song with full enthusiasm and mayur were silently standing

O ladke deewaane, kahan se aaya tu

Dulhan ko le jaane kahan se aaya tu) - 2

Chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji

Mere saath chalegi

Na ji na ji

Ho chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji

O mere saath chalegi

Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye

Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge

Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge

Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Ho, chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji

Mere saath chalegi

Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye

Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge

Arre doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge

Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji

O gore gore mukhde waali, o kaale kaale nainon waali

Maan mera ehsaan ke maine haan kar di

(Tu varna kunwaari reh jaati

Yeh shaadi hamaari reh jaati) - 2

Chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji

Mere saath chalegi

Na ji na ji

Jaa main nahin karti shaadi vaadi

Mujhko pyaari hai yeh aazaadi

Main to apne baabul ke baagon ki bulbul hoon

Bas tujhse mujhe yeh kehna hai

Pinjre mein mujhe nahin rehna hai

Bas tujhse mujhe yeh kehna hai

Pinjre mein mujhe nahin rehna hai

Chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji

O mere saath chalegi

Na ji na ji

Aankhon se kaajal le jaayenge

Zulfon ke baadal le jaayenge

Arre hum aaye hain door se yun vaapas na jaayenge

(Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge

Arre hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge) - 2

Hey, chal pyaar karegi

Haan ji haan ji

Mere saath chalegi

Na ji na ji

Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye

Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge

Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge

Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

Someone pushes nupur while dancing she was about to fall mayank holds her mayur eyelock flowers shower on them sam lifts gunjan in arms

Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge

Hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge, haan

Hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge

Arre hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge

Music was over mayank was still holding nupur both lost in each other all were busy staring at them sam leaves gunjan looking at mayur. Sajan smile looking at them

G-kitne cute lag rahe hain na dono ek saath

S-haan just perfect made for each other jaise hum dono

She blushes

Mayur suddenly get back to senses and notice all were watching them mayank leaves nupur she falls on floor

N-tumne mujhe neeche giraya

M-mujhe tumhein pakadne ke alawa aur koi kaam nahin hain kya

Shilpa-tum dono baad main ladna sagai ka waqt ho gaya hain

Sajan and mayur were given rings to exchange

Sajan exchange rings with lots of happiness mayur exchange in anger

Nupurs ring was tight he wantedly pushes to hurt her she gets tears in eyes all feel she was sad because she will leave her family soon but mayank was smiling

In the night

S-pehle toh sagai ke iye nakhush tha ab kyun has raha hain

M-sagai ke liye nahin nupur ko rulaane ke liye has aha hun

S-kya hua kya kiya tune kahin tune phirse use tang toh nahin kiya na woh bhi sagai ke waqt ro rahi thi

M-maine kuch nahin kiya aapka ring kaafi tightt tha isiliye ro rahi thi

S-tu pehle hi bol sakta tha na hum samaj nahin paaye

M-agar kehta toh itna acha entertainment miss karta

S-tu bhi na din ba din villian ban raha hain

G-tu rona band kar wahaan tu akeli thodi rahegi main rahoongi na tere saath

Shobha-aise sagai ke waqt rona apshagun kehte hain rona band kar beta

G-tu royegi toh mujhe bhi rona padega please chup ho jaa

Shobha-koi bhi ladki shaadhi ke baad ghar chod kar jaati hain tu pehli ladki nahin hain bacho ki tarah rona band kar

She catches her finger to show them that she was crying because she was hurt

G-yeh kab hua tu bhi na pehle bol sakti thi na hum kuch aur samaj rahe the actually meri hi galti thi ring acha hain bolke size nahin dekha bahut dard ho raha hain kya

She takes cream and applies it to nupurs finger

G-yeh tablet leke soja dard kam hoga

Shobha bring food and feeds her even gunjan gunjan remebers her child hood and her eyes fill she wipes her tears and hugs gunur

Precap sajan date

Mayur ka date ko date nahin kahe toh acha hain

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nice part uff ye mayur

jo bhi problem ho dear we are with you...
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thanks dear kabhi kabhi choti si problem bhi bahut badi dikhti hain par jab face karte hain uska solution bahut aasaan dikhta hain shayad main darr gayi thi par jab use face kar rahi hun I think i can solve it
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nice part dear..loved it sooo much...evrything will be fine soon..v all r der with u...
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hi di
very nice update aur dekna apki sari prob solve ho jayegi aur ap aise hi hume ache ache update dengi
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very nice part plzzz update soon
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Beautiful part dear!! Hope evrythng will b fine soon. Our prayers r always with u
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superb part ...👏
i liked it...😊

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