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Posted: 13 years ago
in this story i'm just writing all those things i want or wanted to happen...
looks like we all wanted the same.😉

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! I'm so happy that Abhay will finally take initiative and get close to Piya! I loved it when Abhay said "Kabir your time is out...Piya is mine!" 😳 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
@shivanirajput
@tisa07
@arians
@piyabhay4ever
@peehu24
& all others...

Thank you for your words.. thank you for waiting for the update and forgiving my time lag...
I'll try my best to be soon with another tale of the wonderful love..❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow dear! 👏👏
Agn long time..but, i'm so loved ur update yaar.
AbhIya's lonely scenes r fantastic & adorable.
Specially, now i lov so much Abhay's craziness.
"Kabir your times out Piya is mine"..i jst lov d dialog yaar.
Now, i'm so so so excited & eager 2 read ur nxt update.
Gud gong dear..waiting 4 d ur nxt update..continue soon..😛
All d bst wid lots of lov & God alwys bless u! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
plz pm me when u update plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
The Say of Love

The next day was special for Abhay. From the time he returned from Piya's room he was cherishing the chance of being with Piya. Abhay now was planning not only his meeting but many things after that, as one was of hiding Piya from Chand and Haseena, till yesterday he did not want them to see Piya as he did not want them to worry for him but now Piya was Abhay's and this truth has to be a secret. He realized that he trusted Piya with every truth of his and also believed that Piya would accept Abhay. This relief surprised Abhay, he felt he always felt this trust factor for Piya. The little problem was that Abhay had a hard time behaving casual around Chand and Haseena. Next day Abhay was the first one in college and was waiting for Piya. Piya on entering had not noticed him which made him a bit angry but he found that Piya was busy with her assignment of ancient history, which had to be submitted yesterday; but as she was working on two other assignments at the same time couldn't complete hers (other two being Misha's and Tracker's).


Abhay had clearly concoct his steps. He did not intend to meet her in the morning sessions when she would be crowded with Misha, Angad, Tracker and worst of all Kabir. He would meet Piya in the library when she is all alone. Looked like some heavenly power wanted Abhay to get to Piya, after the first class the other classes where canceled. Misha Kabir and other wanted to attend a far away newly started disk and asked Piya to join up, but Piya rejected it and wished to sit back to complete her work. As it was because of them Piya's work stayed incomplete others did not force her and after an hour Piya was all alone in the library.


Abhay entered the library to find the place competely empty apart from Piya. He just moved a bit acting like searching for a book. Looking at this Piya called him -


Piya : "Abhay, Didn't you find what you wanted?"


These words hit Abhay by a shock, what did she mean by it...


Piya : "I mean didn't you find the book you wanted, normally you pick your choice very easily."

Abhay : (in his mind) 'No Piya i don't get it that easily for one i haden't realized i wanted you!' "No Piya its nothing like that. I think you find your roads with ease over here. What are you doing now? You are done with all your works then why stay back... you could go out with your friends and have fun."

Piya : "Looks like you do notice me. I thought after the other day i turned invisible to you.. you told we would talk but just forgot it right.!"

Abhay : 'come on girl from that day you have turned to be my primary vision point.' "Its nothing like that Piya. I haven't forgotten anything but i don't know how to tell you.. i don't know how would you react after knowing about it..."

Piya : "Oho Abhay. What's it all about? You can trust me, i won't spill it to anyone."

Abhay : "Its not about telling other and i trust you more than you assume. Its not any beautiful story you are asking – its more dangerous and i don't want you to be hurt. You mean a lot to me Piya."


Only after telling it Abhay realized he had spoken more that what he had planned and started moving out. Piya stopped him and asked -


Piya : "No Abhay. You can't run away now. You can't leave me with confusing words. I need to know." (she calmed and after few minutes) "Abhay." (that voice of Piya caught Abhay by surprise and he looked into her eyes, in there Abhay could see only care love and acceptance) "Abhay, you don't need to tell me anything about you. I know you are different. Just tell me what i mean to you?"

Abhay : (for a long time they were caught in tight eye-lock. Later..) "Piya I'm a monster. Destined to struggle in the darkness and you are the fire-fly. You have bought light into my dark life. I don't know which eternal devil got me close to you but now i want you. I love you Piya. I do know i will never be forgiven for what i'm telling you now, the fact is from now on i can't live without you."


Abhay couldn't take anymore. He couldn't look into her eyes. He knew it was his biggest mistake, he was risking the life of the only human who trusted him and loved him beyond all odds; but he couldn't stop himself. If Piya asks Abhay anything he can't restrain from giving her that thing in-spite of knowing its wrong to her. But Piya was over joyed. She felt like she was in the 9th cloud.


Piya : "Abhay Oho Abhay! I love you too. I always did. I knew you belonged to me, i could feel it. Your my angel. I love you Abhay. I Love You!" (and she hugged him)


For a very long time Abhay and Piya were lost in eachother. The college outside the library was empty but inside time had stopped when they found eachother. Piya felt like she had reached her world and Abhay felt happy and complete after innumerable time and space.


Abhay : "Piya we should be very careful. I have reached you after struggling centuries in dark valleys. I can't lose you. We should be careful. Nobody should know about our relationship."

Piya : "Abhay no-one will never know anything about us. Your my world and i don't want to share you with the people around."


Saying this they lost eachother in deep eyelock.


Piya : "Abhay its late. We need to go" (and started moving but, Abhay caught her and said-)

Abhay : "The whole place is empty. I can walk with you now. Even your hostel is empty of any human. I'll rarely get such time and i don't wanna miss this."


Abhay and Piya hand-in-hand walked to Piya's room. Abhay settled in a corner couch and let Piya to change-up. When Piya asked him if he wished to freshen Abhay said No ('Just looking at you gives me energy and freshness i don't want anything more.') After 10 minutes Piya sat in her bed with an apple in her hand. All the way Abhay hadn't moved and inch, he couldn't believe his luck; till yesterday night he had entered this very room as a chiseler to have a look on her and today he was sitting with Piya.


Piya : "What are you laughing at?"

Abhay : "Nothing. Tell me, why didn't you go out with others. That's a cool disk. You would enjoy it."

Piya : "Anhan! When did "YOU" go there and with whom?"


Abhay started laughing loudly.


Piya : "Ab Kya hua?"

Abhay : "I don't believe you gave me that look (of jealous) and you should know how i hated when-ever that Kabir gets close to you. Anyway i didn't go, just heard about it and i don't have anyone... Its just you.. I'm Yours Piya!"


So thus Abhay and Piya truly found eachother. From them they camouflaged their love and life from their surroundings. Both living and the dead were un-aware of it. Their love amplified with ever setting sun in the dark. They spent the evenings in the jungle and at nights Abhay was in Piya's room. The budding love was blossoming now. But how would be the odyssey of this demure love. Will the nature favor this love of Blood and Poison?

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey that was such a cute update
abhay told pia about him and she accepted him
really awesome
please add some more abhiya moments in the next update
thanks for the pm and update son

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..loved it...abhiya were really cute..finally abhiya are 2gether...wanna read more abhiya moments...continue soon..thanks for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! fabulous 👏👏
Liked it..full of AbhIya scenes 😛
Now, love is in d air 😃
Gud gong! 👍🏼
Continue soon! 😊
God bless u! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear after so long u posted but wht an update.Gud finally Abhiya confessed their love but as always danger love Abhiya.But me as of now 2 c Abhiya 2gether in their own bubble.Plzz continue😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! So finally Abhay and Piya are together in a relationship! 😳 I can sense that some dangers/hurdles might be in their way now , though I know they will overcome them! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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