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Posted: 13 years ago
Continuing my FF

Dakshna in their room

They enter into the house with a happy relax face. all @ PN went to bed... [rem the scene when they came aftr attending Sonakshi's b'day.. at that day they were sad and confused. but now they are happy and in a romantic mood].. Naina puts the pooja things near the pooja room and they both go to the room.
In their room...
Naina has changed the dress. she wears a white (ur choice) satin gown and looks more beautiful now.. she is sitting in front of the mirror lazily but slowly brushing her hair. but her mind is not here.. still in the beautiful evening that her hubby gave 😳... the park, dinner, dance floor.. too happy now😊.. Daksh comes out of the wash room.
have a glance of Naina who sits in front of the mirror.. he goes near the bed and sits... looks Naina again.. he understands she is not here..
D: Naina..
no answer..
Daksh comes near her and looks at her.. she is deep in any thoughts 😍.. yah.. not sad.. but happy...
he bends and holds her upper arms from behind and places his face on her shoulder.
D in soft voice: Kya soch rahi ho... sona nahi hai kya.. ?
Naina wakes up but not tellign anything.. put the comb on the dressign table and loooks at her hubby with lots of love in mirror.. Daksh gets up and looks at naina.

Naina also gets up and puts her arm around his neck.. daksh a lttle surprised.
Naina in husky voice: tumhe neend ate hai kya.. ? 😳
Daksh looks at her a little bit surprised.. stuck on her eyes... he found the love for him in it..
D with very romantic voice.: sona nahi hai to kya... [could not complete]
Naina gently pushes him on the couch... Daksh sits on it.. Daksh absolutely stunned.😲 Naina comes closer with a cute smile.. Daksh looks at her eyes .. intense passionate eye lock... ☺️ Daksh holds naina's hand and pulls towards him.. now naina is too close to him.. the breath of the halt for a while. Daksh holds Naina's waist so that she cannot go far from him.. naina holds Daksh's shoulder... the eyes still stuck in each other.. Naina slowly bends closer... and he closes his eyes... she places a warm kiss on his forehead...☺️ for a while.. she lifts her face a bit and looks at him. daksh's eyes are still closed.. waiting for another one. gives another kiss on his cheek.. then on other cheek.. ❤️❤️❤️ she gets up and looks at him. he slowly opens the eyes as if "y u stopped dear.. aur do na..." Naina downs her eyes with a little bit shy... sits on his lap😳. Daksh lifts her face and loooks into her eyes wt love and love only.. he holds her and makes her lie on the couch... keeps looking at her eyes with deep love... slowly he comes closer to her and looks at her lips ... as if "y don't you give me that special one... if you don't give.. i myself will take..."😉 closer and closer... naina closes her eyes... [camera turns behnd Daksh]... he bends down and slowly twists his head.. ☺️you can see Naina puts her one hand on his head and strokes his hair and the other on his back slowly moves.. the scene fades.. out of focus.. ;)

a beautiful evening ends there...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aish...
wow wow wow... 😳 i loved it.. 👏!!! so cute...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
neetu di...scene fade...out f focus😲...kyu, kyu, kyu😳😆😆😆😆...
loved it di🤗... perfect end 2 an evening so romantic👍🏼...absolutely fab like always👏👏👏...
nd bike wala...thnku🤗...*low bow* bhi😆😆😆...kya hai car ki savari hamesha hoti hai na, cycle ki lucky ne karvadi thi na HM series me, tho bas bike reh gaya tha😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
@aish

Wow..aish..dakshna bike pe saath😍..Hmmm..😛..Ab kaunsa ride bach gaya??😆.Mujhe tho bike black waala chahiye😛

Lovely FF..Absolutely Fab.👏..aur 3 parts ek hi din...bumper bonanaza..👏..loved it..🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
@neetu

So...romantic .😳.😳.perfect way to end an romantic evening..I can imagine the whole scene infront of my eyes.😍.lekin itni jaldi end kardiya.😕..not fair😆😆😆

Superb as usual👏👏👏


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@aish


Wow..aish..dakshna bike pe saath😍..Hmmm..😛..Ab kaunsa ride bach gaya??😆.Mujhe tho bike black waala chahiye😛

Lovely FF..Absolutely Fab.👏..aur 3 parts ek hi din...bumper bonanaza..👏..loved it..🤗🤗

thanku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗...ride...umm speedboat pe bhejte he twilight styl what say😆😆😆 thnx sweety🤗🤗...
vaise ab tho FFs ki barish hogi...neetu di bhi roz do/teen FFs dal rahi hai😳😊😊...tera tho cutenes ka dose daily hai hamare liyeTongue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Aish😊... What a comeback dear😉... Amazing👏.👏... Superb.👏..👏. Dakshna and bike😉...too good bud👏...wow Dakshna ke saat hum ne bhi bike ride bahut enjoy kiya Aish.😳...an what an end superb 👏 dil mast dance kar raha tha while reading the whole FF.😳...smarty dakshu hmmm😆😆... sorry for late reply...
bas abhi lagta hai water pe and hava main ride hi baki hai dakshna ka.😆... land ke sab cover ho gaya hai.😆...
Thank u bud for such a beautiful scene...🤗🤗🤗 Loved it 🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very sweet and romantic scene Neetu with a perfect ending 😳...I enjoyed the Naina in ur FF 😆 superb as usual 👏... Loved it.🤗...
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Posted: 13 years ago
rupu thnx sweethr8🤗🤗🤗🤗 nd u r so right...ab tho bas watr nd air travel left😆😆😆 dekhte hai wat we cn do next😛 apne resident geniuses se bhi pooch lete hai...lucky, neetu di...ideas nyone😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

After done with dinner and cleaning up of kitchen...daksh naina and chintu the teddy come out of kitchen..😛.dakshna decide to have a small walk in lawn... .naina leaves chintu in room..and then.

Daksh; chintu ko kyu chod diya?
Naina; holds his hand and says; main kaha choda..ab bhi chintu mera saath hain...( winks at him)😉
Daksh gives a smile 😛; and both go out in lawn..take a small walk..naina's head on dakshu's shoulder... after few min get settled on bench...😛

Daksh with his head.. in naina's lap , holding her hand and naina strokinh his hair..daksh. kisses her hand and says; naina..main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon.❤️..

Naina bends gives him a kiss on forehead; 😳 main bhi tumse bahut pyar karti hoon(..looking around her)...kitna acha mausam hain na..daksh..dekho ye hawa..aur woh chand..wow..😛

Daksh gets up ;(points at moon) uss chand ka mujhe pata nahi( holding naina's chin)..mere chandini to tum ho...😳😳

Naina mrs cute pink kp banjaati hain😳.and lowers her eyes..

Daksh takes up her face in to his arms..naina slowly lifts up her eyes..passionate eyelock..😍 and brings closer to his...and both get lost in long kiss.☺️..Slowly in this process... dakshna slip into sleeing postion in bench..after few min..getting over with kiss...both open their eyes...😳😳

Daksh; ander chale!( slow husky tone).
Naina nods her head saying yes;


Both get up dakshu picks her up in his arms , naina puts her hands around him hiding her face in hug.🤗.daksh carries her to bed...puts her on bed...naina signals at teddy😉..daksh gives a smile and turns teddy to other side..and. joins her ..😛

Contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago

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