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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nyxx

Completely LOVED it. The entire narration, use of words, and just the whole character build-up in this part was superb! Im sure Arnav is surely going to find the jerk who wants to marry Khushi and i loved how you put forth of how her Bauji wouldnt want Khushi to be unhappy. Uggh but this Buaji is always a haddi! Get rid of her! lol! Update soonn!


aww thank u honey <3 im glad u liked it!! heheeh oh yes he is going to find the jerk!! and how he deals with it...well u have to read on to see šŸ˜‰ I KNOWW!! omg even in the show..like her bauji has been the pillar of strength for her...idk why she didnt say anything about that! like hello he would not want that!!!!!! and lmao...idk what im gonna do with buaji but i will try to do something hahaa!! thanks so much for reading <3

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Loved it and thanks for the PM šŸ˜‰

Do update soon dear šŸ¤—


thank u so much!!! yes updating tonight or tomorrow =)


Originally posted by: harsh42

Hey you are an awesome writer dear 😊
Please do continue and thanks for the PM..😃
Your SS is LEGEN-wait for it-DARY!! šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰


awww thank u so much harsha <3 that means a lot coming from yourself as u are an amazing writer!! and omggg hahahaha thank u! im so glad u liked it =D

Originally posted by: dyhardfan

awesome chapters...šŸ‘

thanks so much... please continue soon
thanks for the pm😃


aww thank u! im glad u liked it =D

Originally posted by: rbarretto

nice one looking forward to the next update


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nitviju

That was a good one, keep writting, waiting for your next one...


aww thank u! updating now =D


thanks!!

Originally posted by: ScatteredCastle

Reserved! :) You are damn good! >D


thanks pebzy hehe!

Originally posted by: Mysticnavya

šŸ‘šŸ¼That was awsm !!!!!!! loved the way u expressed arnav's emotions and feelingz !!!!!!! no wordz for it !!!! update soon and plz pm me !!!!!!! šŸ‘


wow thank u so much! thats very sweet of u! thank u =D

Originally posted by: harshabashpam

Hershi darling!!!šŸ¤—


Nice SS dear... loved it so much!!! continue soon...


omgg hi!!! <333 thank u so much hunn!!! im so glad ur reading my ff!! =D thanks a bunch <333 updating the next part now!

Originally posted by: tinsel

Wow!šŸ‘ Simply loved it,Please PM me,I've added you to the buddy list, Do continue,Thanks😃


aww thank u so much!!! yes will def. PM u!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deeps_92

amazing work...

loved it to the core...
thanks for the pm...


thank u so much! glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: devisridhar

šŸ‘wonderful ss forever mine title holds good and arhi was amazing

wat a writer u r!!!!!!!!!! she left me bewilderedšŸ˜†
plz pm me
next part soon plzzz😃


awww wow this is such a sweet comment! thank u so much i really appreciate it!! hahah yeahh she left me bewildered too LMAO!! thank u once again <3

Originally posted by: malluangel

whew. ok wow.
heshi. i swear to god if you do not update!
i mean come on!
arnav just threw the doors open to invite in a storm the size of hurricane katrina!


heheeh updating now my love! im glad u liked it =D

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awsum ff luv it

cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x


added u! and thank u so much <3


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Lovely Part :) 😳 Can't Wait To Know How Arnav Comes To Know About Shyam. Hope He Don't Hate Her 🄺


haha thank u!! im still working on it!!! and about him hating her...hmm idk havent thought that far LMAO!! but thank u for reading i really appreciate it =D

Originally posted by: Vsc94

" And without a second thought, she went to the one place she knew she would always find shelter. His arms. "

oh just loved that line!!šŸ‘
have so many FFs, OS etc to read...gosh you women write so fast, i can't keep up with all the updates!!!
Next chapter...pretty Polly please!!!😃


hahah thank u so much!!! im so glad u liked it!! that was one of my fav lines too =D <3 and lmaoo i knowww people update so fast yet we cant get enough of it hahaah!!! and yes next chapter is gonna be up now =D thank u for reading!!! <333

Originally posted by: Kritianya

nice ss
plz do pm me whenever u next update
cont soon


thank u so much!! will do =D

Originally posted by: ipkknd8

thanxx a lot 4 da pm😊. i would hav missed dis one if u hadnt. i loved it!!!!waiting 4 da next part. keep on rocking!!!


thank u so much!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww really sorry for the wait you guys!! It really wasn't suppose to be this long but life kinda took over lmao! But i promise to not make you all wait this long next time!! I am really thankful for all the wonderful comments you guys gave! It touched my heart...thank you so much! <3

Before i go on...i wanna show you the siggy i got made for this ff! Isn't it brilliant!! My friend made it. She is so freakin creative! I LOVE IT!! hahah! These two set the screen on fire!!!



ok im done rambling...go ahead and read! I hope i lived up to your expectations! Enjoy!!

Forever Mine



Part 3

"Chote, come on. It's time for dinner!" His Di's voice brought him back as he realized he was here thinking about the encounter with Khushi once again. He put away the spray bottle and the watering can and went inside. Khushi was long gone home, but his decision was still firm as ever. Each time he thought about what happened, his resolve strengthened. And his final decision was made. He was going to stop this wedding. And the first step was to find out who this jerk was that was hell bent on marrying Khushi! With that he strode to the table and joined his family unaware of the storm that was going to come in his life. In their life. Due to his decision!!

Payal stood outside her house looking at her sister who was sitting by herself like every night. Except tonight she seemed different. From the past few days her jovial and always loud Khushi, now looked like a broken doll. As if all the happiness was drained out from her, and all that was left was silence and sorrow. No not even sorrow, because to be sad you needed to feel, and looking at her sister, she saw that there was nothing there except emptiness.

The wedding. Khushi's impending wedding, was the reason why she was like this. It was an understatement to say Payal was unhappy with this wedding. Yes she wanted her sister to get married, she wanted her to feel the happiness of being a wife. Heck, she had spent her whole life listening to Khushi's nonstop chatter about her fairy tale wedding and her prince charming. But this was not how Payal had wanted things to go. Not for her little Khushi. Shyam Ji was a great guy, yes. But somehow the past few weeks she had started getting the creeps whenever she saw him. Something just wasn't right about that man. And then finally when the talk of marriage started, her feeling got stronger. But she had kept quiet, knowing anything she said would not be taken into consideration. Buaji was on a rampage to get Khushi married.

However today, there seemed to be something different about her. The emptiness in her eyes was replaced with hope. Ever since she had come back from the Raizada House, Khushi had started to act differently. She was alive again. As if someone had given her a reason to live again. Whatever the reason was, Payal finally made a decision. She was not going to let her little Khushi go back into that darkness. Even if that meant she had to fight her own family for it. Out of all this, Payal had clearly understood that Khushi was not happy with this wedding. And now no matter what happened, she would not let this wedding take place. All her life she had protected her Khushi, and she was not going to back down this time too. With that resolve and determination, she stepped down and walked towards Khushi to talk to her.

"Khushi what are you doing sitting here alone, why didn't you call me?" Payal walked over and sat down next to Khushi bringing her out of her thoughts. "Oh jiji, you were helping amma, so I thought I would just come out. And plus I knew you would come out sooner or later." Khushi smiled at Payal. A sense of relief passed through Payal as she saw her sister's smile. "So how was your day?" Payal started with some small talk before she went on to ask khushi about the dreading issue on hand.

"It was good Jiji, I taught Lavanya ji how to make jalebis today" Khushi replied but then smirked "well I was making jalebis, I don't know what she was making" And with that the two sisters burst out laughing. After a little bit more of small talk Payal finally got to the point. "Khushi say no to this wedding." Payal felt Khushi freeze next to her. She looked at Khushi and found her shocked. Before Khushi could say something Payal cut her off and went on. "Dekh, mujhe koi jhooth mat bolna. Main achi tarah se jaanti hoon ki tu is shaadi se khush nahi hai! And don't you dare try to tell me otherwise. Maine dekha hai tumhe pichle kuch dino mein. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi laash ke saath jee rahi thi main. Jaise tere liye sab kuch khatam ho gaya hai. Aur yeh sab buaji aur us Shyamji ki vajah se hai. Lekin aaj itne dino baad tere chehre pe maine muskaan dekhi. Ek umeed dekhi. Aur dekh, jaise shaadi ki baat ki maine, yeh khushi tere chehre se phir se chali gayi. Aur main aisa hone nahi doing chahe jo bhi ho jaaye" Payal ended with a tone of disgust and finality. Not caring that she was talking about her own buaji, Payal finally said all that was in her heart to Khushi. She was angry that these people were trying to tie Khushi into a relationship that just didn't seem right! She didn't know where this courage came from, but now that it was there, it would stay. "Main dekh ti hoon kaun cheenta hai teri yeh muskaan" she decided in her head.

Khushi was shocked to see her sister talking like that. Yeah she knew, that when her sister got mad, which was rarely, it meant hell for everyone. Payal was more of the calm one out of the two. She would never say something bad about anyone, and here she was talking about their own buaji. So seeing her like this, it was definitely something Khushi did not expect. The surety, the determination and the finality in her sisters voice made her think. As odd as it was, she thought of the one person who her sister reminded her of currently. The man that always yelled at her and made sure it was either his way or the high way. The man that she tried to run away from, but fate kept on bringing her back to him again and again. The man who had comforted her today and oddly enough, had given her a hope. The man who everyone thinks has an ice box where his heart should be. But she knew, that there definitely was a heart there. As unbelievable as it was, it was true. Arnav Singh Raizada had a heart. Heck she had heard it today!

She had felt that the little encounter with him earlier was a dream. The way he had held her and heard everything she had said. She was surprised at herself as well. She had actually poured her heart out to the one man she couldn't even talk to properly. But more then that she was shocked that he had listened to her and had even went on to comfort her. He had told her everything would be ok and that he was there with her. She never thought she would actually see a day when the great Arnav Singh Raizada would support her. But somehow, she wanted to trust him. In fact she did trust him. She didn't know why, but she believed everything he said to her. She knew he would find a way. And that had given her a new hope. He had given her a new life. But as soon as that hope came, she felt it being pulled away as words of her buaji and amma came in her head. No she wouldn't let anything happen to her bauji. If this wedding would make her bauji happy, then she would go through it. She brushed aside her encounter with Arnav as a moment of weakness and tuned towards her sister. "Jiji, it doesn't matter anymore. What's done is done. The engagement is tomorrow and I have to do this." Payal just looked at her as if she had gone crazy. "Khushi you can't do this! What about your dreams? What about your wishes? You really think that Shyamji can give you that happiness?!" Payal rebuked her as she got angry at Khushi's stupidity. "Nothing matters more to me than bauji. My decision is final" And with that Khushi got up and walked back inside. Payal just sat there by herself for a few minutes before following Khushi inside. She went in to see that Khushi was already asleep. If she would have been awake, she would have seen that sly smile that had crept up on Payal's face as she had decided that she was going to make sure this wedding never happens. With a quick kiss on Khushi's head, Payal fell asleep next to her sister.

Only Arnav knew how he has been sitting through that agonizing dinner and now this family time! He had so many things to deal with but his Di just would not let him go until everyone was finished with dinner! She was in an awfully good mood today and insisted that everyone stay and chat after dinner. As annoyed as he was to be sitting there with everyone, he couldn't help but feel content that his Di was happy. Her smile just made everything a lot better. He hadn't been paying attention to what they were all saying but all of a sudden he snapped back to the conversation when he heard the one name that made something in his chest yearn. "Khushi tried to teach me," Lavanya said excitedly as she put forth a plate in front of Nani. Before Arnav could ask what about Khushi, he saw what she meant. Apparently Lavanya was learning to make those jalebis and from the looks of it he could see she failed miserably. The plate in her hand had the weirdest looking shapes that didn't come close to the shape of a jalebi. "Well no duh, only my khushi can make that the right way." He froze as he realized what he just thought. My Khushi? What the...?! He pretended he didn't say anything and turned to his left because he felt an eerie feeling that someone was staring. And to his shock he saw Akash staring at him with his eyes popped out and mouth open. "What?" He asked as Akash kept staring and then realization dawned on him. "Oh shit! Did I say that out loud?!" He whispered to himself while he saw Akash nod his head up and down. "Yeah you did." Akash whispered. "My khushi?! Really Bhai?! Really?!?! What are you thinking!!" Akash went on to reprimand his brother but stopped as soon as he saw Arnav give him a glare. "I don't know what you are talking about...but if you say a word to anyone just know that I am Arnav Singh Raizada. I know where you go, every few days on the pretext of getting the car serviced. Because believe it or not little brother, only an idiot would not know that a car doesn't need servicing every few days." Arnav smirked, and gave Akash a knowing look as Akash found the newspaper in his hand very interesting. "Yeah that's what I thought, by the way, the paper is upside down. I am sure Khushi's sister would be amused that you can read upside down" And with that he got up, told everyone he was calling it a night and then went upstairs leaving an astounded Akash behind. "Did bhai really just threaten me and then tease me?!" He thought to himself as he saw his brother walk away. "Oh my god everyone is right, the world is coming to an end!" He mumbled to himself and put the paper away and told everyone he was going to bed too.

Arnav paced back and forth in his room as he thought about what he had just said downstairs. How could he possibly do that?! Always in control ASR was totally losing it! Not only did he think about Khushi but he said it out loud! And to top it off Akash heard it!! Akash though he could handle, but what if someone else had heard it!? And really...what was the need to say that in the first place! He scolded himself quietly and then stopped once again. He had just teased his brother. Since when did he start teasing Akash? Yeah he had known that Akash fancied Khushi's sister Payal. Especially the way he had the love sick puppy look on his face whenever she would be near him or when he thought about her. Only a total blind fool wouldn't see it. And he had found out that Akash would go see her every few days while making the excuse of getting the car fixed. But he didn't mind. Yeah the girl had told him off that day when he had took Khushi home after that horrific night when she had fainted in his arms, but he knew she was a good person. He kept telling himself he didn't want to get involved with Akash's life, but somewhere inside him he knew that the only reason he didn't get involved was because he approved of this girl who had made his brothers heart beat. Just like how her crazy sister had stirred something inside him.

"Damn it Arnav, Stop it!" He scolded himself once again as he realized that he was thinking about Khushi again. But thinking about her reminded him of what he had to do. He walked over and sat down on his bed and picked up his phone, turned on his laptop and got to work. He made a few phone calls and sent a few emails. After about an hour, he finally sighed in relief. He had his people in place ready to give him every single information about Khushi Kumari Gupta and her family. He wanted to know every little detail about her. He was going to fix things like he had promised her. And to do that he had to know what was going on. He turned off his laptop and put it to the side. Got up, turned off the lights and got into bed. Now all he had to do was wait. Wait and see who that jerk was who had the nerve to break down Khushi. Just the thought of her brought back the encounter from earlier. It brought back the feeling of being whole, that he had experienced as he had wrapped his arms around her holding her. He fell into deep slumber as thoughts of Khushi enveloped his mind.



Alright guys that was the part! Hope i didn't disappoint you!!! Please press the like button if you liked it and comments and criticisms are welcome!!

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Edited by Smileyface - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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edit!!


So I finally read it!! Yay!!
Did you see? Our team work worked! I am first comment! Damn had to stay up to like 12 30 for this. Ahh it feels good though šŸ˜†šŸ˜ƒ

Soo, You are so silly. You hav portrayed Khushi in such an amazing fashion that I am speechless. She is totally like the way she is on screen! Believe in yourself woman!


Omg!! What does Payal hav in mind?? I wonder!!šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜ƒšŸ˜•

Ahah!! Arnav teasing Akash!?!? 🤣 🤣
HOW CUTEE WUZ THT!?!?!
I think you need a round of applause for that. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

Poor Arnav! So confused yet so focused yet so lost. Hayee. Luv that guy. He is just perfect.

If you make me his daughter I will kill you. Just saying 🤣 🤣

Don't you just luv the length of this awesome comment?? Yes course you do.

Well read it when you are done getting yelled at šŸ˜†

And I finally got Sony Vegas! I know that made your day. It mine too!! 🤣

Soumiā¤ļø

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dayumm😲😲.. i can never beat mya😭.. but i guess i can be the second one to post lolšŸ˜›.. n without any pm 😃.. see.. lolšŸ˜†
feel so jealous of you mya.. šŸ˜²šŸ˜†
oh lemme read!!🤣
EDITED lolšŸ˜†
so i had to read the previous chapter to know what was happening hahašŸ˜†
n i had been thinking about the linešŸ¤” "who was hell bent to marry khushi" for few weeks nowšŸ˜† n i was like where have i read this 🤣 n finally i realized that it was in your update
silly me lol!!šŸ˜†
oh coming to your updatešŸ˜›.. well well!! it was superbā­ļø... brilliant update hun!!šŸ‘šŸ˜³
first of all😃.. i prefer this strong and decision maker payal more than the real one in the showšŸ‘šŸ¼
yeah she is really nice n stuffšŸ˜‰ in the show but i can only see her either thinking about akash,šŸ˜‰ handing water glasses to family members🤣 or tell khushi to sleep lolšŸ˜†
i really liked the determined payal in your story!!😳😃😃😃
n then i felt so glad to see khushi getting betteršŸ˜› just coz Arnav said those calming words to herā˜ŗļø that everything would be allright😳.. just so sweet!!šŸ˜›
omg hahaha 🤣 seriously?😲 arnav said 'my khushi' out loud 😲😲🤣
n i seriously cannot imagine arnav teasing akash about payal šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
that means he was actually stalking [in a wayšŸ˜‰] on akash haha.. 🤣😲
n people call him serious??šŸ¤“ heck no lolšŸ˜†.. he is still that sweet and naughty brother of akash and payalšŸ˜³šŸ˜³šŸ˜›
n i hope that arnav wont misunderstand khushišŸ˜•
pleaseeešŸ˜› i beg you not to make it like that😳
i have been getting tortured enough😭 about that hatred thing in about every other ffšŸ˜• lol
so please make it unique n i know u will.. 😳😳😳
hope you had fun reading my reply oops a letter lolšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
i want an update SOONER this time😃.. n i will make sure to remind you about it everyday😈.. oh not everyday ofcourse 🤣
n oh yeahšŸ˜›.. the siggie is just soo sweet😳.. i really loved the pictures in it.. very creativešŸ‘...
that reminded me that i need to make siggies for my ff's too lolšŸ˜†
thanks to you hahašŸ˜†
aite.. ttyl then..!!😳
Edited by _mahi_ - 13 years ago
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Hello-Hi-bye-bye Hershi darhling!

Daat waaj bee-ooti-phul! Loved da waay Arnav bitwa waaj teajing Aakash bitwa aaand da vole kamaradariee da two bhaiyyaj share! It waaj phun to see da teajing and taanting betpheen the two bhaij and vatever starm ij aabout to shtrike their livej, I want theej two kapals to be haapy and alwayj there far each aaother. Anderstand? It waj great to see that Arnav babuwa keepj some infarmation aabout hij bhai aalso.

And Sankadevi parmeshwari and her sisjter, me loves! Let'j see haaw Nandkisor works hij majik for theej lubly butiphul jodis!

Waant to know vat dee sly smile on Payal jiji'j phace meanj and aalso vaant to see more teajing betpheen da two bhaiyaaj!

Don't dijappoint uj Hershey bar!;)

P.S: Hope you enjoyed reading this comment! 🤣 🤣 🤣
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woww.lovec it..plzz add me to ur pm list and pm me when u nxt update..liked it so,.the convo between siblings..the courage of payal..and bro teasing each other...my khushi..and all that..love that
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Just checked..that im already in ur pm list post..but didnt pm me..
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Fab update
plz next update jaldi karna
& do pm me whenever u next update

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