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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_smily

awesome ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating Very SOON 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nothing much to say this time but just wanted to say sorry for taking time to update but was busy as i have to write and essay paper and wanted thank you guys for liking the previous update and here is your next update

-Unforgettable Memories Part 6-

Di saza mujhe kis liye

kya khata mujh se hui
Tota palkon se sapne
Aashk aaknhon se bahne lage


As he turned around after closing the bonnet he didn't knew that a girl was coming from behind so when turned he collided with a girl but before she could have touched the ground he held her by her waist and when his hand touch her waist he felt the same feeling he felt 6 month back, but for now he pushed the thought into back of his head and helped the girl stand on her feet as he did he was shocked to death see her here and that too in such a bad condition, covered with blood and dirt.
"GEET" Maan called to get her attentions but nothing came in as a response "Geet open your eyes, Geet utho" with saying this with his one hand he patted on her cheek and after few mins he saw her trying to open her eyes.
Geet who still had her eyes closed but was listening to the man who was calling her name, she was so happy to hear his voice, in response she slowly opens her drowse eyes only to meet his gaze. They both stared at each other, for them the world just stop there, forgetting the world, the pain which was getting unbearable for her to bear, everything, the only thing Geet knew was her being in his arm and that was all she wanted. "Maan" Geet said which came out as a whisper and hugged him,

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and for Maan it was like a dream come true hearing his name from her mouth holding her this close after 6 months. Maan brought her face to face as the both looked into each other eyes and her saying,
"Mujh ko phir wohi shunana nazara mil gaya
Nazron ko jo deedar tumhara mil gaya
Aur kisi cheez ki tamanna kya karu
Jab mujhe teir bahon main sahara mil gaya"

Saying this she faints in his arm,

"Geettt" Maan screamed as he saw her fainting. the driver who was a little far away from them comes to Maan haring his voice and sees him holding a girl
Driver- Maan sir
Maan without looking and the driver says "Driver start the car" saying this he scooped her in his arm and took her to the back seat

KM
Dev- Vicky I told you na let bro come then I will talk to him
Vicky- Bro won't agree for it, Plz you buys it for me na
Dev- nahi bulkul bhi nahi" he sees Vicky sad face and says "mera matlab hai ki I am sure bro will say yes but still once he says yes I will get you"
Vicky- par bro
Dev- Vicky no more talk on this
NT comes
NT- kua huwa kis baat pe argue ho rahi hai
Dev picked a magazine and says " Kuch nahi bas shabzade ko latest BMW bike chiye"
NT- tu buy him na itna kyun argue kar rahe ho
Vicky- Thank u Bhabzi,(and he showed the bike to heron his i-phone) see bro aab tu bhabzi bhi kah rahi plz haan kardo na
Dev- Kaha na nahi bro ko ane do phir main unse baat karunga" Vicky makes a sad baby face Dev cont "waise bro london se kab a rahe hai I mean unka wahan ke work tu finish ho gaya hai"
NT- he is on his way. bas raste main unki car kharab hogai hai par pata nahi itni deer kyun lagrahi hai
"Why didn't you send another car for him" Dev snaped
NT- main ne thodi na unse baat ki thi ke mujeh pata hoga wo kaha pe hai aur car kahan send karni hai" Dadi Comes
Dm- dev
Dev- Ji dadi ma
DM- beta plz zara Maan ko call kar ke poche ke woh kaha hai
NT- Dadi main ne ki thi par his cell is switched off (Breksss) dadi Lagta hai Veer ji is here"


Khushi Room
"Dada is here " saying the she walks out of her room

Hall
Dm- NT aap nakul se kah kar dinner lage da
NT- Ji dadi" as she turn to leave she sees Maan and Geet. "Daadi Ma Maan veer ji"
everyone looks at the door and seeing him carrying Geet wounded they rush to him

Dev- Bro are you alright, ye sab kaise
Maan- Dev later, Vicky you go and call Kiran and tell her to come here it's an emergency
Vicky- Ji bro
Khushi who was standing on the stair and was waiting for everyone to move so she can go to Maan, but as soon Vicky moves revealing Geet face she comes down shouting "Mama, Mama aagai, Meri Mama aagi" everyone looked at her who was half happy and half crying seeing Geet like this, but for now none of them really paid any attention to her
DM- Maan ise kamre main le chalo
" Ji Dadi Ma" and he takes her to his room followed by everyone
"Dada mama ko kya huwa hai, wo mujhse baat kyun nahi karti" Khushi said as tears roll down her eyes Maan didn't answered her and as he placed Geet on the bed they both sat next to her. "Dada bolo na Mama mujh se kyun nahi bolti" Maan wasn't even listening to Khushi and kept staring at Geet, Dadi and NT looked at Khushi helplessly
NT- Khushi beta aap hamare saath chalo hum,
"Nahi mujhe Mama pass rahna hai" and holds Geet duppata
"Maan" Dadi ma calls him but he didn't respond to anyone, all he did was stare at Geet, the pain he was going through seeing her like this was clearly visible on his face
Soon Kiran came
Kiran- Vicky sab theek tu hai na, Khushi tu theek hai na
Vicky- Haan wo, wo you come with me, Vicky took Kiran to Maan room, seeing Geet laying their unconscious and in blood Kiran goes to her and checks her pulse and the wounds
Kiran- NT could you Plz get me some warm water and soft clothes
NT- Ji
Maan was still lost, he didn't even realized Kiran was here checking Geet
"Maan, Maan" getting no response again Dadi shook him by his shoulder and says' Maan Kiran is here wo inhe deakh legi aap ja kar shower le lo aap ke kapre pe bloods lage hai

Maan- Ji dadi

As he gets up to go he gets pulled back as he was still holding Geet hand which he failed to realize. Maan slowly removes Geet hand not hurting her and goes to bathroom and stood under the cold water for don't know how long. Getting flashback of when he first meet Geet, her talk, her laugh, smile and as he closes his eyes the only things he gets flashback of hers was now her pain, and wounds.

Meanwhile Kiran had cleaned all the dried blood from Geet hands and Face while Khushi sat their quietly next to Geet holding her dupatta watching Kiran doing her work. Maan came out of bathroom and saw Kiran was trying to band aid Geet forehead but she was having difficulty doing so he goes and sit next to Geet and gently lifts Geet head and tells Kiran to put the band aid on her, then she injected her painkiller to put her to sleep. Seeing Kiran puts things back in her bag Khushi goes to her and says "Aunty aap tu doctor ho na" Kiran nod in yes, "Tu phir aap ko tu pata hog na ki meri "MAMA" ko kya huwa hai. This time Maan being in his sense was shocked to hear Khushi calling Geet her mother, he looked at Khushi, tears rolling down her eyes and then he looked at Kiran who seemed a little hurt by Khushi word.

Khushi- Kiran aunty sob bolo na Mama sob ko kya huwa wo sob mujh se baat sob bhi nahi kar ti, Aap Mama ko kaho na ki wo mujh se baat kare"

Maan leaves the room leaving Kiran and Khushi, Seeing tears in Khushi eyes Kiran takes her in her lap, controls her feeling and tears and says "Beta aap ki Ma--Mama ko kuch nahi huwa, unhe bas thodi si chot lagi hai"

Khushi- phir wo mujh se baat kyun nahi karti

Kiran- kyun ki main ne unhe neend ki Injection di hai so she is sleeping right now, acha aap hamein ye bato ki aap ne dinner ki

"Nahi" saying this Khushi bend her head down coz she knew she will be getting scold by Kiran, seeing her like this Kiran lifts her head up and says "Chalo hum aap ko dinner feed kara te hai"

Khushi making a baby face says "Aunty aap humse naraz nahi ho na"

"Nahi, Bulkul bhi nahi" saying this Kiran wipes her tears and they both hug each other and then Kiran took her for dinner.

Precap: FlashBack "Dhust, Gadha, ullu da patta"

Previous:Part 5 Next: Part 7

here is Part 6
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Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.superb update.
love it.
hope geet is okay...
do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update hope to get the next one soon ..
I still couldn't figure it out the connection between Khushi and Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUPERB
NOW GEET IS FINALLY SAFE
MAAN WILL TAKE CARE OF HER
AND THEY KNEW EACH OTHER IN THE PAST
WHY DOES KHUSHI CALL HER MAMA
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Posted: 13 years ago
why did geet leave her
daughter and maan dear
pls reval soon
cant wait more
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear for pm
awesome update
one littel confusion dear is there any relationship between kiran ans maan i mean does kiran have any feelings for maan cuz when Khushi called geet mama kiren felt hurt...please clear this one confusion
waiting for another update
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

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