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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gill123

Nice Who is the mystery man please add me




thanks for liking the udpate dear
he is Geet college Mate
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: amalu123

nice update well iam waiting when maan and geet meet so plz do continue soon 😊



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they will meet soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutizlyf

khushi is sameera's daughter...how will mg meet?

dis is interesting...



yes khushi is sameera daughter
u will have toread the next part to find out how MG meet😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

AWESOME CHAPTER

WONDER WHO THE CREEP IS
GETTING THE JITTERS



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

nice one

do continue




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

ossum parts dear

is it maan dear
who is searching
then how he knows her
frm where he loves her dear?
ossum part dear
pls add me and send me the pm



thanks for liking the udpate dear
and its not maan dear who is searching for geet
will for now he doesn't love her it will be just an attraction between them
will send u the buddy request and send u pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

just read the parts 1, 2 , 3 n 4 ...

loved it all ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...


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Posted: 13 years ago

first of thank u all for liking me previous update
can't believe it i got 47 likes hope its goes up more and more
and second of all I am reallyyy veryyy sorry for update this late
we were out of power for like 6-7 days and wasn't at home due to the snow but now i am back to my home but i am still busy with my guest as they still don't have power at their home so they are staying at my house, but i really missed u all and IF so badly, i will like Home and IF sick
and last but not least before i give the update i just wanted to say about the psycho guy who is after geet lots of people is asking me who is he and i really don't want to revel his name right now coz he will be in just in 2 parts i guess and then he will vanished from the ff and will return later, it will be his memory that will bother geet that all and i want to make his entry after everything is fine between Maaneet which won't be till the end so hope u ok with it just for u guys to know is that he is Geet college mate + school mate. hope this will make ur confusion clear because if i revel his name now it will just mess up my other parts of this ff so that is why i am not reveling his name

Anyway enough on my Bak Bak, before u all get bored reading all this
here is your update

Part 5

"uth gai aap" Raj said as he sees geet opening her eyes

"Raj tum yeha", as geet looks at the clock "aur wo bi is waqt din ke 12 baje"

Raj- Geet dara sal baat yu hui ke mujhe pata chal ki meri one and only one best friend in not feeling well tu main use deakh ne chala aya, Raj hold geet and says "aab kaisa feel kar rahi ho"

Geet- Mujhe huwa hi kya tha jo main

Pinky comes their and says "aree haan tujhe kaha kuch huwa tha job hi huwa tha na wo tere saaye ko huwa tha hain na, aab jaldi ja aur ja kar fresh ho ga aur kuch kha le nahi tu phir se faint ho jaygi

Geet- Raj Pinky tum dono ko office nahi jana kya

Raj- Nahi mera tu aaj office band hai

Geet looks at him giving him an angry gale then looks at Pinky and said "aur tu kyun nahi gai"

Pinky- Mera bhi off hai, aab tu ye sawal jawab chod aur ja kar fresh ho ga

Geet- ja rahi hoon

As she leaves Raj tell pinky to get ready also as he will take them out, Geet comes and sees Raj was sitting and looking over magazines "Raj pinky kaha hai" asked Geet as she brushed her hair

Raj- wo ready hone gai haiaur aab tum bhi jao ready hone

G- Kyun

Raj- kyun ki we are all going out aab tum jao jaldi se

-is everything ready

-Yes, let's go

-this way, soon they were in one of the room filled with files "you look over there and i will look here" said one man as they started to throw the files on the floor

-"Found it, MISS GEET HANDA JUHU ROAD SHANTI NAGAR Apartment # 130" he closes the file and says "lets go"

-Sir we have found where she lives

-Good what is it

-JUHU ROAD SHANTI NAGAR apartment #130

-Get everything read we are going today

-Yes sir

"Yaar geet you should get sick once in a month" said Pinky as she eat he rice cream

Geet- Kyun

Pinky- yaar is bahane kam se kam thoda outing ka chance mila jata hai

"haha very funny, geet said and as she turn she sees raj looking tense "Raj kya baat hai tum tense lag rahe ho"

Raj- Kuch nahi geet bas office main thodi si problem ho gai hai mujhe jana hoga

Geet- sab theek tu hai na

Raj- Hain sab theek hai bas choti si problem hai, tum ek kaam karo tum pinky ke saath gha rchali jana, I will meet you in the office tomorrow

Geet- Theek hai

Raj- ok bye and he leaves

Pinky- Geet chal hum koi movie deakh ne chalte hai

Geet- chal, but before that call uncle ji and tell him we will be late, nahi tu wo worried honge hamare liye

Pinky- Ok and she call Rajinder and tell him about their plan.

XYZ Company

"What is the problem Akshy" Raj asked as he came to his cabin

Akshy- Sir someone was in Employ detail room

Raj- Whattt, how is that possible

Akshy- Sir I was passing by the room and there I heard two men voice and by the time I got the key for it they were gone and the "H" section files were all over the floor

Raj- lets go to the control room and call the police

Akshy- Ok sir

They went in the control room and looked at the videos that were captured but unfortunately those guys were clever they cut the wire of the camera before they came in, the police tried to find some evidence but they failed also.

KM

"Khushi come na beta I'm tired" said NT as she walked to the couch

Khushi- no you catch me first, NT ignored her talk and sat and says " I'm tired Khushi i can't run anymore aap bhi thak gahi hogi aap bhi thoda rest karlo" khushi comes to NT and sits on her lap and Says "Choti Ma Khushi hungry"

NT- I am also hungry, what do want to eat, i will just order it

"Pizza" Vicky said as he came in, NT& khushi looked at him "Hmm Pizza kaisa rahe ga"

Khushi- Yummy, and they started to eat but then phone ring "Dad ka hoga" said khushi and pick the calls

"Hello Dada"

Maan- Hello mera bacha, how did you know it was me calling?

Khushi- Dada aap kaha hoon, Khushi missing you

Maan-apni princess ke bauth pass, i am on my way to home beta, Dada will there in a while.

Khushi- Sachi

Maan- Muchi

"Choti Ma Dad is coming" saying this she hands her the phone and goes to her room

NT- Maan veer JI aap sachi main aaj arahe ho

Maan- Haan bas thodi deer main

NT-Theek hai

After the talk NT tells Nakul to cook some Maan fav food

"Pinky chal na aab buath deer hogai hai, deakh aab aur late ki na tu hamein taxi bhi nahi mile gi" said Geet as she looked at the wrist watch

Pinky- Geet thodi deer aur plz

Geet- Pinky your saying this from past 30 mins aab tu chup chap se chal rahi hai ya main akele chali jaon,

Pink- nahi ruk main bhi chalti hoon

Door Bell

hearing the bell Rajinder looks at the watch and says "is waqt kaun ho sakta hai, shayad Pinky aur Geet honge" saying this he gets up to open the door and as soon as he opes the door the person at the door step in pushing Rajinder making him almost trip and soon like 5 to 6 people came in the house and started searching the rooms

Rajinder came after them seeing them going in each room and Says "kaun hai aap log kya chiya aap logo ko, aap, aap log yeha se chale jao is se pahle ki main" before he could finish one of the guys comes and holds him by his neck and says "shhh, zidya bolne ka nahi samjhe, agar itni jaldi uppar nahi jane ka hai tu"

Soon all the other guys came to the hall sand says to his boss who was holding Rajinder that Geet is not here. he turn toward Rajinder pressing his neck harder and says "Geet Kaha hai"

"mujhe nahi pata, ma, main kisi Geeet ko nahi janta" as he said Rajinder chocked at his word due to the pressure from his grip. Hearing this he just drags Rajinder and shoves him to the wall and punches him in his stomach and then his face, "Bata Geet kaha hai, Kaha chupa kar rakha hai use Bata" and again hits him in his stomach

"Main----ne----kaha na----main----kisi-----Ge----Geeet ko nahi----janta" Rajinder replied holding his stomach

as he was about to punch him again he hears pinky and Geet laughing voice "GEET" hearing this he turns to look at the door and could see Geet coming toward this house but then she stopped. Rajinder also saw them coming and by now he knew Geet life is in danger and seeing them stopped a little far from their house he rush to the door and Shouts "GEET" name which made both Geet and Pinky look at Rajinder, Pinky came running to Rajinder but Geet stood at her place as she had seen him in the house

Pinky- Daddy Ji ye sab kaise huwa aur ye log kaun hai

Rajinder ignored Pinky question and shout "Geet run Beta Run"

Geet looked at Rajinder who was beaten badly and lying next to the front door, soon she started taking her steps back as she saw him coming toward her and the only thing echoed in her ear and mind was "RUN" she once more looked at Rajinder and Pinky for the last time before she started running, she wanted to go there and help Pinky but she ran away from their dropping everything that was in her hand. "GEET" she heard him calling and when she looked back she saw him and his men running after her, she ran as fast she could and then soon she found herself surrounded by trees, she was in jungle all alone. She hid behind one of the rock to catch up her breath after running for nonstop but soon she heard him saying "Geet, Geet main janta hoon tum yeahi kahi hon, tum mujh se aab aur nahi bach sakti Geet, Tum sun rahi ho geet you can't escape from me now"

Geet knew he was close to her as she could hear their foot step noise and before he and his men could get her she tried to move away from their without making noise not giving any chance to let them know where she is, but not for too long as she tripped over a rock "Aahhh" Geet screamed not being able to bear the pain. she knew they must have heard her scream and will be here any moment but she also knew its now or never she has to escape from him, she can't let herself get caught by him and his men so she stood up not caring about her cut and pain and starts to run again.

As he came to the rock where Geet fell seeing the blood on the rock his heart sank, he knew she has hurts herself badly, but for now he didn't care about it he just wanted her so he just followed the blood mark, which were slowly getting vanished.

Geet looked up at the sky, the bright moon that spread the lightness all around and says "baba ji aap aakhir mere saath aisa kyon kar rahe, main ne kisi ka kya bigara hai, kyun ye mujhe akela nahi chor deta kyun ise ye baat nahi samajh nahi aati ke main is se pyar nahi, NAFARAT kari hoon nafarat"

"Pyar na sahi chalo nafrat tu kar ti ho na" Geet who was standing holding the tree turn hearing his voice and finds herself surrounded by him and his men. He was like few feet away from her. she looked around to find a way to escape but to her bad luck his men were surrounding her, in the next moment she saw him taking his step closer to her, seeing him coming toward she started taking her step back and as she tried to say something to him but she couldn't find any word coming out of her mouth, she tried to scream but it went in vain too, she was looking straight at him and failed to realize that there was a rock behind her as she took a step back she tripped over it and went against the tree and got scratches on her bare hands. as she got scratches blood started coming out and soon her hands were covered in blood, but she didn't felt the pain the only thing she had in her mind was to escape from here from him and his men. soon she found herself picking up a rock which wasn't big enough to hurt someone badly but to distract his mean it was enough and in the next moment as she stood up she throws the rock on him hitting on his forehead, his men rushed to him and getting this chance Geet ran away from there.

"Is car ko bhi abhi hi kharab hona tha" Maan said as he came out of the car "driver how long will it take you to fix the car"

Driver- Sir it will take about half an hour

"OK" saying this Maan went back and sat in his car and started to work on his laptop. After almost 15 to 20 mins the driver came to Maan and tells him that he is going to get some water as the engine was hot and driver leaves. After few mins Maan decided to call at KM to let them know he will be late so he get out of the car and at KM Khushi had strictly told everyone not to receive any call she will receive all the calls

"Khushi pick up the call beta" dadi ma said as she heard the not stop ringing of the phone " ye ladki bhi na har waqt apni manmani karti rah ti hai"

MaanShi Convo

Khuhi- Dada are you here

Maan- No beta dada is stuck, Dada ki ar kharab ho gai

Khushi making a baby face says "oh no aab Dada aapni Khushi ke pass kaise aaenge"

Maan- Hamesha ki tarha par is baar i will be little late tu aap Dada ke ache bacha banke Dadi se bolna ki dada will be late

Khushi- OK love u Dada

"love u too beta" Maan said and as soon they hung up Khushi came running and shouting Nt name "Choti ma Dadi, Chot ma" dadi who was sitting on the couch reading magazine stands up seeing khushi run like this and NT also comes out of kitchen hearing her voice

'Khushi dheere beta stairs hai aap gir jao ge" said NT as she went to get hold of khushi

As Khushi came to Nt she said "Nahi girungi huff, Dada huff, will be LATE, Huff"

Nt- Nakul bring a glas of water for khushi

Nakul brings the water for her and after khushi drinks is Dadi says "haan now tell us why Maan will be late"

"Dadi, Dada ki car kharab ho gai hai, he told me tell you, acha aab main jaon" said khushi as she got off the couch
NT- Khushi first have your dinner then you can go to your room
"Nahi, main Dada ke saath dinner karungi" said khushi as she ran up the stair

" Ye dirver bhi kahan chala gaya, chalu jab tak woh ata hai main hi car fix karne ki koshish krata hoon." Maan said as he took off his vest and shirt.

-Sir we can't ifnd her
-Idoit go and look for her again, she must be hding somewhere here around, zidya dor nahi gai hogi, GO" and his man left

Geet looked up at the sky and folded her hand and said "God ji, plz meri madad karo, plz mujhe koi rasta dikhao yehan se bahar jane ka plz, AHHH" geet screamed as she fell hting her head on the ground, as she stood up her head spin making everything look haziness for her, after few mins when she was able to get rid of her haziness she sees the road and car oncoming and going, before she started runing she touched her head and could tell the blood was coming out as her fingers got wet, but for now that pain was nothing campared to the happiness she got by finding the way out of this jungle, witht this thinking she ran toward the road and soon was on the road, and satrted walking to the right. she tried to ask for help but none of the car stoped so she kept on walking with her drowse eyes till she bumped into someone and was about to touch the ground when she felt two muscular hand holding her by the waist preventing her from falling
Aaye Khuda mujhk ko bata kya hai meri khata
Kyun hai mujh ko Mili ye Saza
Maut milti hai na Zindagi milti
Zindagi ki Rahon main bas Bebasi milti hai (by ME😆)

Precap: "Mama, Mama, Mama" Khushi said as she came down

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