This is my first time writing anything, so please bare with me guys J Before I start, I would like to thank chandarani1, AquaBluez17, Zeee, CHIKA784, Anisha_91, littlemoi, and nishi for encouraging me to continue with my idea for this story.
So here we go'
The plot starts where yesterday's episode ended. The plot is the same before this point. I am only continuing the story from here. Consider it a prediction of what I wish to see happen in a way
Enough of me. Here's ArShi + some unwanted but necessary characters (BTW..I will speak from the characters' POVs, so don't think that I personally have any respect for snake'Shyamji is what khushi calls him still)
BTW, I will update from now on in both Hindi and English versions. I realized that not as many people are able to read this FF because it has hindi dialogues. Therefore, i am going to make two versions of each chapter. Both the versions will have the same narration, the only differnce will be that the dialogues and thoughts will be either in a mixture of hindi and english (hindi version) or purely english (english version)
I am sorry if my English dialogues do not do as much justice to the characters..I only know what the characters will say in the way they speak..I did my best to translate into English as per the scene, so there won't be direct translations 😃 I hope this helps 😉
Arnav- jealousy and possessiveness
Khushi- just because
Aakash- cute boyish charms
Payal- adorable girly shyness
Shyam- aag baboola anger and disgust
Anjali- sweet like a plum yet strong and slight tinge of bitterness when need be (slight variation from character in show)
italicized-thoughts
normal-actions/dialogues/narration
Khushi was staring at her hands side-by-side while sitting on her bed in her and jiji's room. She thought, "Kya humari sach me sagai ho gayi hai? Yeh toh khushi ki baat honi chahiye. Toh phir hum Kushi ho kar bhi, kushi kyu nahi hai?" As she looked from the ring that Shyamji placed on her right ring finger to the bandage on the left finger, thoughts of the Arnav and interactions with him flooded her mind'
Arnav lifted her dupatta-wrapped left hand from her side. Despite her attempts at stopping him, he continued to unravel her hand and inspect the cut she received from the broken glass earlier that day. She winced as he pressed his pure white handkerchief against the blood. Why was he so keen to soil the purity with her blood? Why did he seem to care about her so much? But no!
Kushi continued to talk herself out of this dilemma, "Woh to hamesha humme humari aukaad aur haisyat yaad dilate hai. Unko humari koi parwa nahi hai'lekin phir diwali ki raat jo'He Devi Maiya! Yeh hum kya anaap-shanaap sonch rahe hai?"
Unnerved by her thoughts, Khushi slipped under the covers and turned to one side in order to fall into slumber. However, simply 15 minutes later found her tossing and turning, unable to sleep. As she thought, buaji's words came back to her, "Haire Nandkisore! Sasi babua ko in sab davaiyon se kush nahi hone wala. U is baat to sunke pareshan huye rahe ki tohori mangni ka mohurat bit gaya aur agla shub mohurat kaafi samay ke liye nahi aawat hai."
Khushi thought, "buaji ka kya matlab tha ki mohurat nikal gaya? Kahin mohurat us waqt ka to nahi'.hai devi maiya! Raksha karna! Yeh nahi ho sakta. Ab hum kya kareinge?" Jumping out of bed and folding her hands in front of Devi Maiya's idol sitting on the table, she said, "Humne kuch bhi jaan ke nahi kiya. Aap to sab kuch jaanti hai na?"
With that, she gave a final scrutinizing yet longing look at the bandage on her left hand and walked out of the bedroom. She knew what she had to do'well, at least for now.
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Chapter 1- English
Khushi was staring at her hands side-by-side while sitting on her bed in her and sister's room. She thought, "Am I really engaged? This should be a news of joy. Then, why am I not happy?" As she looked from the ring that Shyam placed on her right ring finger to the bandage on the left finger, thoughts of the Arnav and interactions with him flooded her mind'
Arnav lifted her scarf-wrapped left hand from her side. Despite her attempts at stopping him, he continued to unravel her hand and inspect the cut she received from the broken glass earlier that day. She winced as he pressed his pure white handkerchief against the blood. Why was he so keen to soil the purity with her blood? Why did he seem to care about her so much? But no!
Kushi continued to talk herself out of this dilemma, "He always reminds me of my social status and near-empty bank balance. He doesn't care about me..But then, what happenned on Diwali nig-...Oh God! Why am I thinking about all this crap?"
Unnerved by her thoughts, Khushi slipped under the covers and turned to one side in order to fall into slumber. However, simply 15 minutes later found her tossing and turning, unable to sleep. As she thought, buaji's words came back to her, "Haire Nandkisore! None of these medicines will help improve Shashi's health. He got worried sick after hearing that the auspicious time arranged named by the priest for the engagement has passed and the next auspicious time does not occur until next week."
Khushi thought, "What does aunt mean by saying that the auspicious time has passed? Oh god! was the auspicious time when-NO!! (thinking of Arnav back at the temple) This can't be happening. Now what am I supposed to do?" Jumping out of bed and folding her hands in front of Devi Maiya's idol sitting on the table, she said, "You know the truth, right God? I did not do any of this intentionally"
With that, she gave a final scrutinizing yet longing look at the bandage on her left hand and walked out of the bedroom. She knew what she had to do...well, at least for now.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! Let me know what you guys think!As i said, this is the first time I am writing, so please comment and let me know what you think and whether you want me to continue 😊
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INDEX:
chapter 1 (pg1)
chapter 2 (pg2)chapter 3 (pg3)
chapter 4 (pg 5)
IMPORTANT NOTE (PG 6)
chapter 5 (pg 9)
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