Live FF - Baby's Day Out - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: HamiSky

Wonderul work Yemi...
very bfully written!!

u both juz rocked... Totally lubbly n lallontop...:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yemi🤗...ur such a brilliant writer👏...loved ur description on KriYa...it was😍☺️...it was sooo romantic☺️😍...loved it alott...wish we had such a KriYa scene on-screen without d camera blurring😉😆...plz do continue like dis next week too😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena.S

YEMIII... 👏👏👏👏👏👏...

no words... 👏👏👏👏👏... lot of hugs n kisses to u for this ...
5senses concept superb lallontop...😉😛😳...👏👏...
Even CVs never give like this Convo for our KRIYA in the show...😕😭...
Yemi , Hami u both just Rocked...👍🏼👏... both of u superb creative imagination...😆😛...
Yemi plz plz come up with a Live FF every weekend... itz really entertaining...😆😆...
i'll try to add more bits frm next time...😊... BTW did u write any FFs previously..., if so plzz give me link... i love to read FFs...😃😛...

sorry... was never brave enough to attempt a FF... to time consuming for me 😳😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wow wow I m speechless☺️U rocked yemi👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yemi3006

Thanks to all who participated and tuned in to the story to take it to 20 pages 👏

I had fun doing it and hope you all enjoyed too 😃

yaa very much enjoyed 👏⭐️sorry forlate rep , me was bit busy 😛now i read it ...
u write soo well , i mean romantic 😳 i love it ☺️by thinking all scenes⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
pls write more 😳😳action.
BTW i love t read FF and i do visit to read my frd' FF TRD 😛Soo romantic 😳
Edited by Mitaly.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yemi3006

K - " hmmm Vision ... alright. I look in the mirror and see a man & a woman. 2 people who until a few years ago had no idea the other existed... yet one day fate played a brilliant trick on them and brought them together on the side on a road.

The man, then a young cocky boy was immediately smitted by the vision before him... the girl on the other hand didn't even notice him.
There and then, he made up his mind that come what may, they would be together for all time
And today, the man that boy became feels very blessed to be standing here in front of this mirror, looking into the eyes of that girl, and see the love he has for her reflected back at him in her eyes.
The man knows that no matter what life throws at him, as long as he can behold his woman's face, all will be well. "
P eyes turn misty on hearing these beautiful words from her Krishna. She leans back into his body and whispers - thank you ❤️
K - you're welcome... now whats # 2
P - # 2 is Hearing


Excellent description...wat an imagination Yemi...😛👏
Sorry i missed this thread..i saw the complete story now😳

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