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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
continue soon waiting for next installment...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey everyone

First of all wishing you all Eid Mubarak😃
Then here is my first OS THE FIRST RAIN
I hope you guys will like it especially MARIA
Please press the like button and comment:)
THE FIRST RAIN
AR version - part 1

A girl was sitting in on the bench in the rain all alone, crying for herself in the middle of the night. Everyone around her was busy with their own work and wanted to reach home as soon as possible, tired from all the work they had done from morning until now. No one actually noticed her, it was like she didn't existed and people who noticed her had enough with their own problems and didn't really had any time to solve other people's problems.

Like all the other people a guy was also trying to run away from the first rain in Mumbai, when his eyes cough a girl sitting on the bench wearing a blue jeans and a white top, crying.

Well he was Armaan Malik, 24 year fun loving boy, who had just graduated and wanted to have some fun with friends before he joined his dad's business and all the boring work, or it could be interesting at times.

Armaan looked around her and saw no one beside her and as he had guessed he was right she was alone. Standing there he looked at her for a while and the same time wondered if he should go and see what has happened or just go like all the other people. He started walking towards her and knew that the first opinion was better than the second one.

"Hey, what's up? " Armaan said cheerfully like he didn't saw her tears. The girl just ignored him and continued with her own work, sobbing and leaking her big tears. Not getting any answer from her, he tried again "ooh, boyfriend ki saat break up hogaya?" the girl looked at him with her big and angry green eyes, but yet it was loneliness and pain in them, "just shut up" she answered him giving him a glare and then looking back on the ground like there was a very interesting thing she had to look at. Armaan sat a little closer to her and then looked at her, seeing no reaction from her he sat more closely and then more, until his body could touch hers, but still there was no reaction from her side. Thinking for a while he slowly took his hand around her shoulder. "What the hell is wrong with you?...I said shut up and leave me alone" the girl said to him as he was getting gin her nerves, why couldn't he just leave her alone. "Eeh correction you said just shut up, the leave me alone part ko nahi kaha" Armaan said with naughtiness in his eyes. The girl rolled her eyes and decided that the best thing to do was to just ignore him and was pretty sure that he would leave himself after some time, but she couldn't be more wrong. "No, pehle batao why are you crying? " Armaan said, but seeing the girl not replaying him he acted like a small kid "please batao na, please'batao 'bataooo pleaseee" the girl could see that he wasn't going to give up so easily and got very irritated by his childish behavior.

LOVE FROM MISS93

Edited by miss93 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey everyone

First of all wishing you all Eid Mubarak😃
Then here is my first OS THE FIRST RAIN
I hope you guys will like it especially MARIA
Please press the like button and comment:)
THE FIRST RAIN
ARSH version - part 1

A girl was sitting in on the bench in the rain all alone, crying for herself in the middle of the night. Everyone around her was busy with their own work and wanted to reach home as soon as possible, tired from all the work they had done from morning until now. No one actually noticed her, it was like she didn't existed and people who noticed her had enough with their own problems and didn't really had any time to solve other people's problems.

Like all the other people a guy was also trying to run away from the first rain in Mumbai, when his eyes cough a girl sitting on the bench wearing a blue jeans and a white top, crying.

Well he was Armaan Malik, 24 year fun loving boy, who had just graduated and wanted to have some fun with friends before he joined his dad's business and all the boring work, or it could be interesting at times.

Armaan looked around her and saw no one beside her and as he had guessed he was right she was alone. Standing there he looked at her for a while and the same time wondered if he should go and see what has happened or just go like all the other people. He started walking towards her and knew that the first opinion was better than the second one.

"Hey, what's up? " Armaan said cheerfully like he didn't saw her tears. The girl just ignored him and continued with her own work, sobbing and leaking her big tears. Not getting any answer from her, he tried again "ooh, boyfriend ki saat break up hogaya?" the girl looked at him with her big and angry green eyes, but yet it was loneliness and pain in them, "just shut up" she answered him giving him a glare and then looking back on the ground like there was a very interesting thing she had to look at. Armaan sat a little closer to her and then looked at her, seeing no reaction from her he sat more closely and then more, until his body could touch hers, but still there was no reaction from her side. Thinking for a while he slowly took his hand around her shoulder. "What the hell is wrong with you?...I said shut up and leave me alone" the girl said to him as he was getting gin her nerves, why couldn't he just leave her alone. "Eeh correction you said just shut up, the leave me alone part ko nahi kaha" Armaan said with naughtiness in his eyes. The girl rolled her eyes and decided that the best thing to do was to just ignore him and was pretty sure that he would leave himself after some time, but she couldn't be more wrong. "No, pehle batao why are you crying? " Armaan said, but seeing the girl not replaying him he acted like a small kid "please batao na, please'batao 'bataooo pleaseee" the girl could see that he wasn't going to give up so easily and got very irritated by his childish behavior.

LOVE FROM MISS93

Edited by miss93 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

api nice concept:)
i like it
it is sounding swweet and cute
plz update soon:)
thankx for pm inadvance
maria
Edited by Riarai2346 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Riarai2346

res
ha me 1 one api:)))

cheating abhi tak meine post bhi nahi kiya😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: miss93

cheating abhi tak meine post bhi nahi kiya😆



mai na kkia cheating ki meri marzi mai post karo ya na karo😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice and cute!
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update...loved it. Loved the concept. Armaan is so sweet. Update next part super soon, eagerly waiting 4 the next part.
Thanks 4 the pm, take care.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello sweetie well as always interesting plus awesome wonderful concept
plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
is it finished????????????/

nice one

awww armaan so cute


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