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There is always a new beginning for every thing'.. Till the time you don't find a true love you don't realise the importance of Love'' Once you find that you will always want to keep it to yourself''..

It was a beautiful beach side along a hotel'''.. The place was silent except the noise of the water which was sounding very sweet and there was small place decorated with a beautiful table and a chair''' There was a special attention given for every small thing'' He didn't want to miss out on any thing'' He was taking care of each and every thing'.. He went on thinking whether she will come or not'' I have hurted her so much. I don't want to lose her'' She will come na'' Will Anaya be able to bring her'' He went into his flash back''..

Flash Back

Maan a very famous business tycoon'' He led his life on his own way''. He stays with his parents (Mr and Mrs. Khurana) and her sister (Anaya)'..

Geet a very bubbly girl full of life'' She thinks that enjoying the life to the fullest is her only moto'.. Because of this attitude she is been loved by everyone'' She stays with her Mama and Mami''.. She has no body at her side except her Mama and Mami (Mr and Mrs. Handa)'. Her Mama Mami loves her very much

Geet and her Mama Mami had just shifted near Maan's house'' Geet has also come down for vacation from Shimla as she was doing her further studies''

Mrs Khurana: I can't see Maan this way any more''.. He is always alone'. He doesn't talk to anyone and always angry on some one or other''

Mr. Khurana: That incident has changed Maan so much'. That day he was screaming on one of the employee''

Mrs Khurana: and he screamed on Anaya also that'' She has refused to talk to Maan''.. We need to do something''.

Anaya: Good morning Mom'.. Good Morning Dad'.

Mom - Dad ----- Good morning beta'.. where are you upto????

Anaya: Nothing Dad just thought of having a walk'..

Mrs Khurana: Ok beta come fast'' Where is your bro''

Anaya: I don't know Mom''.. I don't go near him'' He is always ready to be angry on me''..

Mr Khurana: Anaya if we will also start doing this'.. He will never be out of that trauma''

Anaya: But Dad''.. Bhai aaj kal pyar se baat hi nahi karte''.. jab dekho tab gussa hote hai''..

Mrs Khurana: Anaya itna bada hadsa hua hai Maan ke sath to use thoda waqt to lagega na'..

Maan comes and sees everyone talking''.. But couldn't hear what they were talking''

After seeing Maan coming they changed the topic'.

Mr. Khurana: Good morning Maan

Maan: Good Morning Dad, Mom, Anaya

Mr. Khurana: Where are you going so early in the morning

Maan: Dad am going to office''

Mrs Khurana: So early

Maan: Need to complete some work'..

Mrs Khurana: Wait I will ask Nakul to make breakfast for you fast'..

Maan: No mom am not hungry''' Byeee'' He walks of without saying anything''..

Anaya: I will go for walk and come''

At the park'' Anaya meets Geet'' They met and started gelling with each other''

This had become a routine for Maan''.. He spoke very less'. And was always busy in her work''..

Slowly and steadily Anaya and Geet became friends'' They started coming to each other's house'''. When Anaya and Geet became friends Mr. and Mrs Khurana and Mr. and Mrs Handa also started knowing each other and gelling with each other very well''

One day they had gathered at Anaya house

Mr Khurana: Mr. Handa you all have just shifted and we became so good friends'..

Mr. Handa: Ya Mr. Khurana'.. We were totally new to this place'.. We did not know what will we do'' But we were lucky enough to get very nice neighbor like you''

Geet: Excuse me this credit should go to me and Anaya'..

Anaya: Absolutely right''.. agar hum na mile hote to''' aap log kaise milte

Mrs. Handa: But beta neighbors hai to kabhi na kabhi to milna hi tha'..

Geet: Wrong mami'' because of us you all are here together'..

Mrs. Khurana: Ok ok because of you both only we met now fine'' But can I ask you something'..

Mrs Handa: Ya sure why not''..

Mrs Khurana: Why is she calling you Mami????

Mr Handa: Because she is not our child we are her Mama and Mami'..

Mrs Handa: No she is our Baby only''' Actually Mrs Khurana Geet lost her parents when she was very small'.. At the time of delivery Geet lost her mom and in few days she also lost her father in an accident'' bus tab se yeh bacchi humare pass hi rahi hai'.

Geet who was listening everything very quietly had tears in her eyes and goes and hugs her mami and says no aunty (looking at Mrs Khurana) They are my Mom and Dad''.. I have never seen my parents but I can be rest sure that the love and everything what my mama mami has given me even my parents would have not given me''..

Mr. Khurana to lighten the moment''.. tells Anaya: Anaya why don't you to take Geet to your room.

Anaya understood the reason behind it and tells Geet that they will go and see movies in her room'..

They both leave''.. Maan enters

Mr. Khurana: Maan come meet they are new neighbours

Maan greets them and goes to his room''

Mr and Mrs Khurana looks at each other and says Sorry

Mr. Handa: Sorry for what????

Mr. Khurana: He was our elder son Maan''.. He did not even waited here'..

Mrs Handa: aap ke dono bache ek dum alag hai''..

Mrs Khurana: Actually Maan was never like this before''.. On the day of his engagement the girl with whom the marriage was fixed run away and got married to some other person''.. From that day onwards he is being aloof and thinks that girls are not to be trusted at all'' We all tried to make him understand that all girl are not the same'' We also tried telling him to forget that incident but is of no use'..

Mrs Handa: I think he needs some one who will make him realise that all are not the same'.. I think love will change him'' only thing is you will have to find such girl for him who is full of life and love''.. only then she will be able to change him

Mr. Khurana: I think you all are right'''.

They all departed and days also started passing by'' Geet use to come regularly to their house''.. She had become like a member of the family'''. Mr and Mrs Khurana liked Geet from starting but now they started feeling that Geet is the girl who can change Maan''

Even Geet knew Maan's past as she had once asked Anaya that why her bro is like this'.. and Anaya had told everything of Maan to Geet'..

Mr and Mrs Khurana asked Mr and Mrs Handa for Geet once'. They said that if they don't have any problem they would like to make Geet as their daughter in law'' They accepted it but the only problem in front of them was how to tell Maan and Geet'..

Once Geet was going to Anaya's room but by mistakely she went on other side'''

She was just passing through she saw Maan doing his Thai Chi'.. She just kept on staring at the posture of Maan'.. Geet was hiding herself from Maan as she did not wanted him to see her'.. Looking at Maan Geet just ran away from there''




That night Geet couldn't sleep at night''.. She was only imagining Maan''..

From that day as if everything change for Geet'' The change on Geet face was noticed by Mami and one day she finally asked Geet'..

Mrs Handa: Geet whats the matter??? Now a days you look more happy????

Geet: kuch nahi mami'' kush to hamesha hi rehti hu''

Mrs Handa: apni mami ko nahi batogi''' yeh chehare ki ronak ka raaj'.

Geet gets shy and says: Mami sach mai kuch nahi''' Mai aur Anaya shopping ke liye ja rahe hai''

Mrs Handa gives a hint to Mrs Khurana about Geet''

Mrs Khurana sees a point that whenever Maan is home she calls Geet to home for some reason or other''

Geet would look to Maan but Maan always ignored her'' They use to come face to face many times but Maan never ever spoke to her''

Geet use to think kaisa insaan hai humesha gusse mai rehta hai'' kabhi koi smile bhi nahi hoti uske chahare pe'''

One day Maan forgot to carry some papers with himself

Mr. Khurana: Geet beta if you don't have any problem can you please go and give this file to Maan''

Geet: ok uncle''..


Maan Room

Geet enters Maan's room and saw the room was total mess'' Many things were lying down''' and Maan was not to be seen anywhere in the room''..

Geet: Maan Maan'' but no answer'.. There is so much mess in the room'.. I will do one thing will pick up things which are lying down and keep it on the table''..

Geet started picking things and started keeping on the table and Maan who was in the wash room comes out and sees Geet'''

Maan: What hell are you doing in my room?????

Geet: (hearing loud voice) gets scared'. I was only picking up things'..

Maan: Who told you to touch my things???? Why are you in my room'.. I don't like anyone in my room''..

Geet: I just came here to give this file which uncle gave me to give you'. But why are you screaming''' What have I done''..

Maan: I know all girl say the same'' What I have done'' I just hate girls'' They only know how to play with others emotions''' You be out of my room now and no need to come here again and says many things which he is not suppose to say''





Geet (with tears in her eyes): Maan if some girl has ditched you that's not my fault'' You have no right to blame any one for that'' you have to come out of your own situation'' Stop blaming others for that'' All of them are not same'..

Geet runs away from there with tears in her eyes'. Mrs Khurana stops Geet

Mrs Khurana: Geet Beta kya baat hai'.. Why are you crying??? Did Maan say anything to you'''

Anaya: 100% Bhai must have hurt her''..

Geet: Aunty am sorry if I have ever hurted you all'' I will never come here (and she goes away)

Anaya tries to stop her but Geet doesn't listen to anyone''

Mr. Khurana gets very angry on Maan and goes to his room''

Mr. Khurana: Maan Maan what did you say to Geet

Maan: Oh to she came and complained to you'' First of all she came to my room without my permission and then started touching my stuff and now she even complained you'' This girls''..

Mrs Khurana enters : Enough Maan''

Mr. Khurana: She came here not by her wish but because we told her to come'..

On the other side Anaya goes to talk to Geet but Geet refuses but she overhears the conversation of Geet and Mrs Handa''.. Geet tells her mami everything and she cries like a small baby keeping her head on mami's lap

Anaya feels very bad and comes and tells at home what happened between Maan and Geet'..

Mr. Khurana gets more angry and says: Bus Maan bohot ho gaya ab. Us bechari bachi ki koi galti nahi thi aur tumne use itna kuch suna diya''.. and leaves angrily.

Maan self thought: Why did I blame Geet for that'.. I never intended to do that'. I don't know what happened to me''.. I was wrong in saying so many things to Geet'' I will say sorry tomorrow first thing in morning as soon as she comes'''

Mrs Khurana: I am feeling very bad for Geet'' I think we should go and talk to them.

Mr. Khurana: you are right'' Lets go now'.. morning will be too late.

On other side Geet was telling her Mama and Mami that she wants to go back to Shimla''..

Mrs Handa: But Geet the vacation is not over yet'.

Geet: No Mami I just cant stay here I need to go'..

Mr. Handa: Ok Geet we will talk tomorrow'' You go to sleep now'..

Geet in her room but just couldn't sleep thinking about the words which were going on in her mind''.. Sleeping on the bed she was crying''

Mr. and Mrs Khurana comes and says sorry to Handa's for their son's deeds'' but Mr Handa says even Maan is frustrated with his life so you cannot blame him also'' both will be fine'' Let the time pass out'' They asked about Geet''..

1 week passed Geet never use to go to Maan's house after that incident'.. She use to be sad'.. that just couldn't be seen by her mama and Mami'.. Anaya use to come to meet Geet but Geet use to talk very limited to her also'. Geet every now and then use to say to her Mama and Mami that she wants to go back to Shimla'.. Finally they agreed as they could not see her this way''

Geet left to Shimla'''

And here Maan use to wait for Geet but Geet never came afterwards' Maan eyes to search for Geet at his house and also once he went to Geet's house but he was not able to see her once'..he was feeling guilty day by day''.. He use to think of Geet''.. Everyone at home realise it the eagerness in Maan to see Geet though he never said anything''

Finally Maan decided to talk to Anaya''.. so he went to her room

Maan: Anaya''

Anaya: Bhai Aap

Maan: I need to talk to you''..

Anaya: Ya bhai tell me'.

Maan: I need to talk to you about Geet'.. I mean Why she doesn't come here'.. I have not seen her for last 10 days'' She is fine na''..

Anaya was not ready to say anything to Maan but she saw her mom standing and listening to conversation who happened to pass from her room but stopped as Maan asked question to Anaya' Mrs Khurana nodded her head as if telling Anaya to tell everything to Maan

Maan: Anaya am asking you something'''

Anaya: Bhai she is not here''' She is gone back to Shimla''

Maan is shocked to hear this and leaves Anaya room totally upset''

Anaya could see the pain in Maan eyes and that pain was noticed by everyone including Mr and Mrs Handa''..

Mr. Khurana: Maan if you are feeling so guilty why don't you go and meet Geet'..

Maan just couldn't control his emotions and hug his dad

Mr. Khurana: Maan you love her so much''..

Maan: Dad''..

Mr. Khurana: Maan yeh pyaar nahi to kya hai'' Your eyes says it clearly'' Go Maan go and get your Geet back''..

All come there including Mrs Khurana, Mrs Handa and Mr. Handa.

Mr. Handa: No one needs to go anywhere'.. We have called Geet here'. She will be here by night''

Mr. Khurana: But How?????

Mr. Handa: Mrs Khurana told us that Maan has started loving Geet and so we made a plan and called Geet saying that her Mami is not feeling well'' Listening this Geet just said she leaving just now''..

Mr. Handa: Maan Beta aaj keh dena apne Dil ki baat Geet ko...

Maan was waiting for Geet... and makes a plan to make it a special time'... and tells Anaya that he will need her help to bring Geet''

Geet comes back and meets Mama mami and says Mami says she is fine just had fever but wanted to meet you so called her'.. Geet hugs her'..

Anaya comes to Geet house pretending as if she doesn't know that Geet is coming'''

Geet: Anaya tum

Anaya: Aare Geet when did you come??? I came here to ask aunty whether Aunty needs anything as I was going to market'..

Mrs. Handa: Geet why don't you go with Anaya''..

Geet: Yes mami I will go'''

Mrs Handa and Anaya smile looking at each other that their plans was working''.. Geet gets ready and comes down and both goes''

Back to present



They reach the place where Maan was waiting'' Anaya tells Geet that I have some work here if you don't have any problem can she come with her''.. Geet agrees''

Anaya tells Geet that why don't she go near the beach by that time she will go and meet the concern person'..

Geet: ok Anaya I like beach a lot'.. I will wait there'.. You come fast'.

As Geet start walking'.. Anaya calls Maan which brings Maan back to present'' and Anaya tells Maan that Geet is coming''..

Geet reaches the beach and sees this beautiful table''

She was just seeing this

Maan: Geet''..

Geet is shocked to hear her name and sees Maan standing'.. Geet gets scared as if looking to Maan she feels something''.

Geet just turn and was above to move'' Maan holds her hand and bring her near'.. Geet has butterfly in her stomach'.

Geet: Maan please mujhe jane do'.

Maan: Meri baat sune bina nahi Geet'' I am sorry Geet for everything'.. I know I have hurted you a lot'. I should have not said what I have said'' You know the day I said you all those things from that day itself I am not able to sleep''' I just couldn't take you out of my heart, mind''.. You have acquired me totally'' I have become yours''' Geet I Love you, I want to marry you''.. Will you be mine forever''..

Geet was stunned hearing this''.. She did not knew what to say'' She was speechless'' Tears were in her eyes and she just went and hugged Maan''' There was a tight hug between them'''. Maan holded Geet face'' kissed her eyes, kissed her cheeks as if he was wiping her tears'.. Maan reached her lips but before proceeding he looked in the eyes of Geet'.. There was a big yes''.. which could be seen'.. He kissed her lips'' and Moon and waves were their to witness there love''.. Both in the form of purity...

Both of them started their new life'''. They were happy forever'''.





I hope you all like it. Please press Like and do comment... All of your comments means a lot to me... Will be waiting for response

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