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Posted: 13 years ago
Seriously yaar neetu!

Kitna acha scene hain 👏perfectly apt for current sitaution.👍🏼.👍🏼.actually this should happen in SSBN...atleast this way we will get some cute dakshna moments...

So simple and super cute..awesome👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

After showing his possessive angle to naina...😡

Daksh; naina I am sorry..woh..
Naina;puts afinger on his lips shhh😛😳

An eye lock...

Naina; lovingly puts hand on his cheek; I am sorry daksh..subha se bahut tang kiyana maine tumhe iss teddy ko lekar..I am sorry..

Daksh,,; haan tang tho bahut kiya tumne mujhe..lekin ..(puts his hand on her cheek)sry tho mujhe kehna chahiye...tumhare saath muje iss tarah baat nahi karna chahiye tha...

Naina;(hugs him) 🤗sab tumhari wajah se ..agar tumne pehle admit karliya ho tha ki tum jalte ho..😉

Daksh; puts his hands around her..;🤗 acha..tho mam ne ye sab hamse jealousy admit karvane ke liye kiya.😆.ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi swt hr8❤️.( stroking her cheek)...agar tumhne do teen baar pyar se poochliya hotha tho..😉...

Naina; poochliya ho tha tho tumhara ye angle dekhne ko nahi milta.😆😆.( looking at him)..😍daksh mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhe lekar itna possesive ho..itna jyada...bahut pyar karte hona mujhse..😍

Daksh; hugs her tightly; nahi. tho..🤗🤗

Naina ne mooh pulaliya.😕.; kya..??( looks at him)

daksh; bahut pyar tho nahi...bahut bahut bahut jyada pyar karta hoon.😛.aur tum soch bhi nahi sakthi main tumhe lekar aur kitna possessive ho sakta hoon; ( kiss on fore head)

Naina;.acha ! kahi daar main SRK ki tarah nahi.( laughs)😆😆😆
Daksh; usse se kahi jyada!😉lekin apni biwi ko lekar, 😆... aur wajah sirf pyar nahi hain iss ke peeche..
Naina lil surprised; tho?😲😲
Daksh; bahut lamba story.hain iske peeche...abhi nahi baad main batavunga..aur tum pls pls mat karna..samjhi.😆

.Leaves her and is about to get down bed..naina holds his hand;

Naina; kaha jaa rahe ho?😲
Daksh silently gets down bed; goes picks up teddy bear..brings it back to naina, naina holds it in her arms .😛

daksh says; sry chintu ji..( kaan pakad ke)😛
Naina moves teddy's head as if its saying no; sirf ek sorry!😆
Daksh; sry sry sry...ab tho maan jayiye chintu ji😛
Naina; (as if teddy is speaking); hamne tumhe maaf kiya ..kyunki naina ne kaha iss liye...😉

Daksh; thank u chintu ji...so swt of u😳..comes near teddy to give it a kiss..just then naina takes way teddy from b/w them aur kiss milgaya naina ko...😳😳( smartie naina)😉

Both stare at each other...few min😍.😍.Daksh slowly takes off teddy from her hand and keeps it aside.😛..cute eyelock...

Naina; pushes him down to bed and says; mr daksh patwardan, shayad aap ko yaad dilana padega ki..aap ke kiss par sirf mera haq hain.😉. cute smile on both faces😛😛

Daksh; acha!

Naina; nods her head yes; tho phir?😛
Daksh; tho phir kya?( naughty exp)😉
Naina; parcel ki aane se pehle hum kuch.😉stroking his hair...( lil shy smile)😳
Daksh; pehle . abhi nahi( lil attitude)..😆
Naina; acha...( oh really exp)😉
Daksh nods his head and pulls her closer, naina bends down for her kiss 😳😳

...,aur phir kya.??..😲

calling bell se Disturb hua romance phir se shuru hogaya.☺️..aur lunch ka kya hua ? dnt ask me😆

Contd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
me tho soch rahi thi, cute FF padke chain se so jayenge aaj, subhe se dimag overtime pe tha...ulta neend udane ke ideas diye lucky tu ne...calling bell ke pehle ka resume karva diya😳😆😆😆 chalo acha hai, @ lst dakshu s @ peace now...lucky thnku dear🤗🤗🤗neend udane ke liye😛, aur ek aur cutie FF ke liye🤗🤗
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

me tho soch rahi thi, cute FF padke chain se so jayenge aaj, subhe se dimag overtime pe tha...ulta neend udane ke ideas diye lucky tu ne...calling bell ke pehle ka resume karva diya😆 chalo acha hai, @ lst dakshu s @ peace now...lucky thnku dear🤗🤗🤗neend udane ke liye😛, aur ek aur cutie FF ke liye🤗🤗


Ditto Ditto...
Aur maine to tujhe Chintu already PM kar diya hai na 😉
Thank u Thank u Lucky🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 Naina bhi kam possessive nahi hai.😉... chalo dakshu ko tho shanti mil gayi😉... aur hume bhi.😆...
A jadu ki jhappi for u dear 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 for such a beautiful and cute cute FF 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky, sweet aish.. what i say.. now i cannot stay without reading ur FF.. so sweet..!!! 😳 superb yaar.. superb!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

Evening...Dakshna bed room😛

Daksh and naina on bed..in embarce..naina on dakhs's chest.😳...daksh palying with naina's hair😉

Daksh; naina..
Naina; hmmm..( lifts up her head and looks at him)
Daksh; Dinner ka kya plan hai?..ya phir(.pulls her face closer to his).dinner bhi cancel karde...😆😉

Naina; (sharmaake)..😳. koi zaroorat nahi...ab chalo uto...( gets up and is about to get down..daksh pulls her back)

Eyelock...😍

Daksh; aise hi jaane doonga kya?...nods his head no..😆
Naina; pata hain. nahi jaanedoge...and comes closer... (both share a long...sweet kiss)...☺️

After few min..naina gets up..apne baal aur kapde teek karke( noon romance hain so clothes still on).😉...gets down bed...but dakshu is still in trance🤣.🤣..slowly he comes back into reality..and goes into kitchen looking for his swt hr8.Naina already started her work.😛

Naina; roti bana rahi hoon..sabji kya banavu? jaldi se batavo daksh.😛..( looks at him)..
Daksh kitchen ki entrance par khada hain with ragged hair and aur shirts ka buttons poora open😳😆😳

Naina laughs and says; 😆ye kya haalat bana rakha hain..apna baal teek karo aur buttons lagavo...
Daksh; main kyu karu? comes inside kitchen... naina atta bowl main daal rahi hain..takes away the atta dabba from her hand...😛

Naina; daksh..

.turns towards his side...

Daksh; naughty look; mere ye haalat ki wajah tum ho..tho phir teek bhi tumhi karoge..😍.( head butt).😍.bhool gayi..shirt ke buttons main ne nahi nikala.😆.😆😉..aur baal tho
Naina; chup...😊😆

Both share cute smile...😛

Daksh bends his head and naina straightens his hair.😍..aur uska buttons wapas laga rahi hain with shy smile.😳.bech beech main aankhon ki gustakiyaan..😍...daksh puts his hands around her aur uska kareeb se site maar raha hain...😉


Naina looks at him..with a cute smile; hogaya..ab chodoge tho...😛
Daksh; nahi. chodunga...bends for a kiss...

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Posted: 13 years ago
beech beech main aankhon ki gustakiyaan..😍...mera fav part😍. 2nd only 2 u-kno-wat😳😆😆 thnx lucky🤗🤗🤗...short, sweet nd too, too cute...hamesha ki tarah...nd hamesha ki tarah i ws smilin so much ki sneakin in gaya bhad me(yep;got caught😳)😆😆😆...
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Posted: 13 years ago
So sweet Lucky 😛 I am just loving naina in ur FF's 😉 Daksh is enjoying each and every moment with her 😛 and thanks for using the head butt Bahut din ek baad use Kiya hai na 😉
Dakshu ko tho vaise bhi naina uske Baal bana ke de tho he just loves it... Remember the Karjat shopping and the mandir ke bahar ka scene how he enjoys it...
Thank u thank u so much 🤗 🤗 🤗 for the cute scene... Atleast Tere FF main Naina can cook something good for dakshu 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ aish & rupu

Thanks a lot buddies.😛...A bmain thak gayi hoon thank u thank u kehte huye...😆..Itne ache comments dete ho ki...Jaadu ki jappi for u both...🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

oh.. it is being a long time i have written a FF. in my last FF i was telling the story that Daksh wants to take Naina for an outing and Naina also wants to give such a change in Daksh also. Ok, I am continuing it.

Naina as Mrs KP

In the office Daksh thinks abt his anger on Naina he showed last night. he feels Naina might have felt too bad. he plans to come home early and plans to take her for an outing. Meanwhile Naina is also pondering that last night how much Daksh worried. Just because of her carelessness. She plans to call Daksh and takes the mobile. she sees Daksh is calling. She takes the call and tell: Oh.. KP... mein tumhe call karnewali thi. teek hai.. tum batavo.. kya huva?
D: Oh really? kya baat hai... abhi muje yaad karne ka...
N: ofo..Daksh tum bhi na... teek hai... kya aaj tum bohot busy ho?
D: Kyu? kuch kaam tha?
N: Ha.. shamko jaldi aavoge?
D: Ha.. mein dopahar se aavoonga... kya tum busy nahi ho to hum bahar chale?
N happily. : oh.. Daksh? mein yehi kehnewali thi.. ?
D: accha? ab tumhe pata chala... muje tumhara dil padna bhi ata hai..? (laughs)
N: ok ok.. to ab phone rakhti hoo...
D; Bye..

In the after noon Naina happily getting ready to go with Daksh. she looks at the clock. it is 3 O clk. oh... stil Daksh has not come. Naina feels a bit impatient. she takes the phone and looks . "Daksh tum kaha ho..?". Meanwhile Daksh stuck with an irritated client. he is also looking at the clock and tries to console the client that he can help him/her. But the client is too worried. what to say... he is also feeling impatient. At last Naina calls him, but he cannot attend the call. she tries again but no hope. Naina is Mrs KP now... "no, i won't call u agian.." and looks at the phone and throw it on the bed.. and goes from there. very diappointed and angry now. "aajkal tumhe kaam ke alava kuch bhi yaad nahi hai.." oh.. at last Daksh could convince that client and send him/her back. he hurrily takes the phone and calls Naina.. but nobody attends.. then he takes his bag and comes hurrily.

Naina is sitting on the couch with the files and laptop. Daksh comes.. Naina looks at Daksh and does not respond.. she gets up and goes to room. Daksh understood she is angry now. "oh.. muje use manana hoga..." Daksh follows her. Reaching room he says Naina.. "sorry naina .. ek irritated client tha.. tum to ready ho na.. tho hum chale?" naina looks at him and syas: "mein nahi ati..." daksh feels a little bit hurt.. "muje pata hai tum gusse mei ho.. samajene ka,.." Naina does not want to listen and goes angrily.. [she is now full of Mrs kp ;) ] D: Naina.. meri bat tho suno...
N: meine kaha na.. muje kahi nahi jana hai.. muje ab kuch kaam hai.. [goes taking her file]
D self: accha mein sare kaam chodkar ata hoo.. tho tum kaam par pad gayi hai.. ? [now Daksh also is in KP mood]
D: teek hai.. to muje bhi nahi jaana hai..
he takes his laptop and goes downstais.. in the hall, he sees Naina sitting with her laptop and he also sits in another sofa and starts his works. [both of them do not get concentration]

Ayi comes and sees both of them are in their work. she thinks "aajkal in dono kaam main bohot busy hai.. kabhi Daksh late ata hai... kabhi naina.. " she thinks abt how Naina see off him in the morning and he kissed her. "aaj in dono jaldi aaye to kuch time apas mein rah sakte hai na...?" eventhough she does not know abt their plan, she plans to send them for an outing.
A: chintu...? aaj tum jaldi aagaya..?
D: ha ayi... kaam jaldi khatam ho gayi.. bas.. isliye...
A: accha huva aaj thum jaldi aagaya.. naina bhi jaldi ayi hai na? beta tum ek kaam karo.. Naina ko lekar kahi bahar goomkar avo .. tumhe sirf kaam kaam kaam..? tum dono ko accha lagega.. chal...
Daksh looks at Naina.. Naina also looks at Daksh but she does not tell anyhting.
A: Naina beta.. baki ka kaam bad mein karo.. ab tum chintu ke sath javo..
N: teek hai.. ayi..
[Daksh really feels happy.. and nods head to ayi.]
N: mein abhi aati hoo... [she comes back with her mobile and purse]

They are abt to leave then calling bell rings.

Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago

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