MG/Arhi FF-Suffocation Part 22 UPDT! pg31/ DEC 27 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
waiting to know more abt their past...

seems like arnav is lost in her only...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well written and a nice concept!!!
Keep going...
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Part 14

Location: Khurana Mansion; Time: 7:30 am;

Maan sat on the dining table waiting for his breakfast.
Maan: Chameli! Chameli mera nashta kahan hai?

Chameli ran out of the kitchen holding a tray of freshly cut fruits and a glass of juice. Her payal making enough noise for anyone to guess that she was nearby.

Chameli: Sorry Bhaiji! Woh aaj phir Arnav Bhaiji ke chakar mein der hogayi. She said so making a sorry face scared of what was coming next.

Maan: uthgaya?
Chameli: Ji nahi! She almost whispered barely audible.

Maan: Kitne baje lauta tha?
Chameli: aahhh….
Maan: Kitne baje chameli? 😡He said in a deep voice making sure he doesn't shout.
Chameli: 3:30 baje… She blabbered with her eyes tightly closed and her fingers diging in her hands.

She slowly opened her left eye to see Maan's expressions and swallowed in seeing him easy.

SD: Maan ab bhi waqt hai. Hamari baat maan lijiye. Aur kisikeliye nahi toh Arnav keliye sahi.
Daadi entered the dining hall and asked Chameli to leave.

SD: Kab tak tum dono is ghuttan mein jeete rahoge? Ab tumhe apni zindagi mein aage barhna chahiye. Maan hamme aaj aapka jawab dena hai. Panditji seedhe Handa Haveli hi jaayenge.
Daadi waited for him to say something but his lips were sealed.

Daadi sighed and continued: Theek hai! Hum pandit ji ko keh dete hain ki aapne shaadi ke liye mana kar diya hai. Woh hamra jawab Handa sahab ko bata denge.

He still didn't say a word.

Daadi got up and left to call Panditji.

***

Location: Handa Haveli; Time: 9:00 a.m;

Geet walked down the stairs elegantly wearing an emerald green formal blouse tucked in her black formal skirt with high heels. Her hair tied up in a high pony as usual, ready to leave for office. But one thing different about today was that she wasn't the only one coming down. She was followed by a running and out of breath Khushi. Khushi wore a pair of blue jeans and a white tube top with white flats and her hair open. She had long silver earings twinkling along her hair as she ran down the stairs.

Khushi: Di…di…Di !!! Ruko, ruko ruko…

Geet: Kya hai Khushi?

Khushi: Woh Di, main pucchna chahti thi kya main aapke saath aajse office join kar sakti hoon?

Geet: par Khushi, tum toh pehle college join karke apna last year complete karna chati thi na?

Khushi: Haan Di! Main School of Architecture, Delhi join kar rahi hoon par saath hi internship bhi karna chahti thi. Appke saath …, atleast for the evenings? She added.

Geet: Sure. Ah! Aaj kya kar rahi ho tum?

Khushi: Di aaj toh main admission formalities complete karne ke liye ja rahi hoon. Par 3:00 p.m. tak free ho jaungi.

Geet: theek hai. Main tujhe wahan se pick up kar loongi. Phir H & G studios challenge. She said smilingly.

Rano walked in diverting their attention. Rano: woh sab toh theek hai par tum dono 6:00 baje tak ghar aajana. Panditji aa rahe hain.

Khushi seemed confused while Rano and Geet exchanged a look.
Khushi: Panditji Kyun? 😕She asked innocently.

Rano: Beta woh navratre chal rahe hain toh puja ke bare mein bataane aa rahe hain.
Khushi smiled 😊 giving a nod while Geet looked irritated.🥱

Geet: Mujhe der ho rahi hai. Bye. She left for office.

***

Location: School of Architecture; Time: 12 noon;

Watch this vedio for the first scene in School of architecture sports ground.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vxtc9F6vWo0

Continued after the end of the video.

Arnav: Dar lagta hai?

Bunty: Dar lagta hai! Arnav tu pagal hogaya hai. Understand.

Arnav: chhor na! Chal canteen mein chalte hain. Actually, tum log chalo mein change karke aata hoon.

Rajeev: Ok! Akaash bhi class ke baad canteen mein hi milne wala hai. Tu jaldi aana.

Arnav: Hmm.

Akaash, Rajeev and Bunty were Arnav's best friends. Almost like family. They knew everything about him even about his family. They could tell about his mood just by looking at him once and therefore hardly had any kind of fight with him. They knew Maan's importance in Arnav's life and respected him equally.

***

Khushi walked in the campus but could hardly understand which way to go😕. There were a couple of students sitting on the front staircase. Although they didn't look quite helpful she thought of giving it a try and to ask them the way. She walked towards one of the guys.

Khushi: excuse me? Could you please tell me the way to the registrar's office?

The guy looked at her from head to toe and then smirked a bit. Khushi found it odd.
Khushi (self thought): Khushi raaste puchh aur nikal yahan se.

Guy: Sure, why not? Aap yahan se upar chali jayiye. It's on the second floor, first door on your left.

Khushi: Thank you. She rushed upstairs away from those guys.

Khushi paced as fast as possible wanting to get rid of the looks she was getting from those boys. The first floor was quite a lively one considering the Architecture design studio was situated on it. But when she reached the second floor it was much calmer and there weren't a lot of people to be seen. She thought it to be because of the offices to be situated on the floor. Any how she remembered what the guy downstairs had told her and entered the first door on the left. As she entered the room she realized that it was no where close to being like a registrar's office. It had blue colored lockers and some benches lying systematically on the floor. To her luck the room was empty.

Khushi: Oh God! Yeh toh locker room hai. Logon ke mazak karne ka standard kitna gir gaya hai yaar.
She slapped her forehead to have listened to that stupid boy and followed his directions without using her brain. She turned around to leave but found the door LOCKED!!!

Khushi: Yeh… Yeh bandh kaise hogaya?
Koi hai? Hello… Please Darwaza kholo.
She shouted banging the door.

Khushi: Koi hai bahar??

A sweeper at the same time was on his regular rounds on the second floor when he heard somebody shouting from the boys' locker room. He went towards the room only to find it locked from outside.The door was not just bolted but had a lock on it. Just to make sure that he heard it right he knocked on the door to ask if anyone was inside. The moment Khushi heard the sweeper's voice; she opened her mouth to reply back. But before she could, a hand covered her mouth and she was unable to say even a word.

The sweeper thought, it was best to get the higher authorities know and get the locker room opened. He went downstairs to let the dean of the college know.

***

Khushi struggled to get out of the hold of the hand on her mouth by trying to bite it and remove it from her face using her hands. But nothing helped. Suddenly she felt his other hand on her tummy and recognized the tight hold immediately. It was him. The man who had occupied major part of her brain from last 24 hours. She stopped struggling and relaxed in his arms. Arnav slowly removed his hand from her mouth and turned her around facing him.

Khushi's eyes popped out the moment she looked at him. It was really him. She wasn't hallucinating, was she?

Khushi: Tum?
But before she could say anything more he put his finger on her lips in order to stop her from talking.

Arnav: Shhh! Maine tumhare mooh se haath issliye hataya hai taaki tum kal ki tarah behosh na ho jau. Na ki issliye ki tum zor zor se cheekhon.

Khushi made a baby like face looking down. She didn't even realize that she was still in his arms. There was a sudden knock on the door and they realized that someone is trying to open the door. They looked at each other realizing what a big problem they both have ended in.

***

Next: Arnav Khushi in boyz locker room😉cont...
Geet in Khurana Mansion 😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awesome update...waiitng for more of Maaneet past to unfold
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
arnav and khushi too cute 2nd meeting. *sigh*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Shopau...am really getting into this FF of urs...it gripping and u really are teasing us with ur cliffhanger endings!!!
Many thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
part 14 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what a wonderful FF dear👏👏

it is one of the best FF's I have ever read⭐️

just coz its MaanEet and ArHi😳

do continue and accept my buddy req😃

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Part 15

Location: School Of Architecture, Delhi; Time: 12: 45 pm;

There was a sudden knock on the door and they realized that someone is trying to open the door. Khushi smiled thinking finally she would be out of the locker room. She was about to respond and let the authorities know about her presence when she felt a sudden pull in the other direction. Arnav dragged her in the shower and closed the curtains.

Khushi: Kya kar rahe ho? She said so in a high pitch, astonished by his behavior.

Arnav: Shhh! Apna mooh band rakho. Khud toh college join karne se pehle hi nakali jaogi, saath hi mujhe bhi nikalvaogi.

Khushi: sorry! She pouted like a little cute baby.

***

Sweeper: sirji, yahin se awaaz aarahi thi.

Dean: par yahan toh koi nahi hai.

Sweeper: main sach keh raha hoon sir' kissi ladki ki awaaz thi.

Dean: tumhare kaan baj rahe hain. Boys locker room mein se ladki ki aawaz kaise aayigi?

Sweeper: Sir, kahin bhoot-pret ka chakkar toh nahi?

Khushi couldn't control her laughter and burst into a laugh. But just then Arnav kept his hand on her mouth. But the dean and the sweeper were able to hear the sound of her laugh.

Sweeper: sssiiirr, mm..main keh rr..raha tha na bbb'bhut'bhutani.😆

Dean: Shutup! Aur jao woh shower room mein chek karo koi hai toh nahi.

Arnav and Khushi stared at each other hearing this. The sweeper was approaching them and they had to think quickly. Khushi's mind was blank. Fear was visible on her face. What if the Dean finds her here in the boys room. She was not getting this admission for sure. Her dreams, career, reputation ' everything was at stake.

The sweeper started opening the curtains. Khushi closed her eyes tightly. Just then she felt all of Arnav's body weight on to her self. Her back pushed further into the wall with Arnav towering on to her. He pressed himself further onto her in order to hide himself along with Khushi as much as possible. Khushi felt something on her belly. It didn't took her long to figure out it was his manhood. She fisted on to his black and red jersey feeling shy. Her breath was uneven and even her best try of not blushing could not hide the tomato red colour on her cheeks.

The sweeper (shopau names him "kabab mein haddi") was too scared of opening the curtain. He opened it half and then just left it the way. He ran back to the locker room door and told the dean that no body was there. The dean and the sweeper left unlocking the locker room door.

Arnav slowly moved away from her and noticed how she still clutched on to his t-shirt, her eyes closed and her rosy cheeks. Wait a minute! Was she blushing?😳 He couldn't help but smile. Everytime he noticed his affect on her she looked too cute. But he liked to tease her more. She looked even cuter with her cute pout that she made when annoyed with him.

Arnav: Ajeeb ho yaar tum?

Khushi snapped open her eyes and left his t-shirt immediately. Khushi: Kya?

Arnav: Aur nahi toh kya? Tum do dino mein mujhe do baar mil chuki ho par dono baar galat jagah par.

Khushi: excuse me? She said so frowning with her eyebrows shooting up.

Arnav: Kabhi tum mujhe kissi aur ke 'bedroom' milti ho toh kabhi kissi ke 'shower room' mein!

Khushi looked down embaressed.
Arnav: I wonder tum agli baar mujhe kahan milogi? He said so smirking at her. Khushi was too surprised at his question.

Khushi: Shutup! She pushed him away and walked outside away from him hiding herself. Or should I say hiding her 'blushing' self.

***

Khushi reached the registrar's office and completed her formalities. She then called Geet to ask her till what time would she be free?

Geet: Khushi I'll reach there in like 10 min. tu mujhe gate par hi milna.

Khushi: ok Di. Bye!

Geet: bye!

***

Location: Khurana Mansion; Time: 3:30 p.m;

Arnav returned to the mansion all geared up to get everything finalized. According to Daadi and his plan, they were to leave for the Handa haveli in the evening for the wedding date to be fixed. But nothing at home seemed to be a house where a wedding was to take place. He saw Maan sitting on the sofa reading a business magazine. He went towards him.

Arnav: Hi Bhai, how was your day?

Maan: Good! He said so still looking in the magazine.

Arnav: Aaj hum teeno saath mein lunch karne wale the na? toh Daadi aur aapne lunch kar liya kya?

Nakul came out with a glass of water for Arnav.
Nakul: Maan sir ne toh kar liya' par Daadima mana kar rahi hain.

Arnav: Kyun? 😕
Maan turned the page of the magazine behaving as if nothing of his concern was being talked about.🥱

Nakul: Woh Maan sir ne sham ko Handas ke yahan jaane se mana kar diya hai.
Arnav shocked looked from Nakul to Maan and literally shouted Kyaaa????😲😲

Maan looked up at Arnav and Arnav swallowed and gave a cheeky smile to him.😃
Arnav (self thought whispering with frown on his face): Gayi bhais pani mein!!!

Maan: Kuchh kaha tumne?🤢

Arnav: Nahi Bhai, I mean haan bhai. Woh main keh raha tha ki main Daadi ko khana khilakar aata hoon. I mean, mein koshish karta hoon.

Maan: Hmm. (Looking back at his magazine.)

***

Arnav entered Daadi's room which tray of food and a glass of juice. Daadi sat on the bed wearing a offwhite saree with all her jewels removed. She looked extremely sad. Arnav bent down and looked at her face.

Arnav: Daadi?
Savitri Devi looked up at him and asked: oh ho! Tu hai?

Arnav: Haan toh aapko kiska intezaar tha?

Daadi: Maine socha Maan hai.

Arnav: uh hun' bhool jau. Hitler ko kisiki bhook pyaas se koi matlab nahi. Aur aapko koi naya idea nahi aata?😆 Ab toh Hitler ko bhi pata hai ki aap natak kar rahi ho. Issiliye nahi aaye aapko khana khilane ke liye.

Daadi looked the other way in attitude.

Arnav: toh ab uss kathor dil hitler ko chhoro aur iss bhavuk hriday(dil) wale pote ke saath khana khao.😃

Daadi: Mujhe nahi khana!

Arnav: oh ho! Daadi'
He sat down on the bed and started feeding daadi. Though Daadi tried avoiding, she finally started eating.

Maan came in and saw them both eating happily. He stood at the door and smiled while observing them both. Suddenly Daadi saw him standing there. She immediately tried to cover up.

Daadi: woh toh tu itni zid kar raha haina, issiliye main kha rahi hoon.
Arnav smiled. Daadi: Agar tu yeh na kehta na ki mere bina tu nahi khayega, toh main kabhi na khaati. Arnav gave a confused look.😕

Arnav: Huh? Maine aisa kab kaha?😆
Maan smiled further more understanding their drama.😊

Daadi whispered to Arnav: Maan dekh raha hai iss taraf.
Arnav: Oh shoot!

Maan sighed and went off. Arnav noticing it sighed a relief. He turned back to Daadi and continued.

Arnav: Dar ti ho? Aap bhi?😆

Daadi: tu nahi darta?

Arnav: main toh chhota bhai hoon par aap toh Daadi ho?

Daadi: Arre uss Hitler se kaun nahi darta? Arnav: ha ha! Daadi aapne Bhai ko hitler bola.

Daadi: Filhal yeh socho ki usse shaadi ke liye manaye kaise? Shaam ko shagun lekar jaana hai Handa haveli. Kare toh kya kare?

Maan: Kuchh karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.🤢
He stood at the door with straight face and arms crossed across his chest.

Next:Maan's final decision & Geet in KM plz press the like button and do comment. Note: Maaneet's past will take some time to be revealed so that the FF moves at a fast pace. please wait for just some more updates 😊
Edited by Shopau - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved this arhi part! lololol
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