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Posted: 13 years ago


CHAPTER 8



"kon hai"
he asked but no response in reply.
His self." shayad mujhe wehem hoa hai"
he leave from his room for join party dinner.
On other hand
heer read mail which send by soulmate.


''Why Do I Still Love You

Everything's so silent
I can't hear a voice
So many feelings
I don't have a choice

Crying so softly
So I can't be heard
Everything's so confusing
Every little word

So many nights
Where I can't sleep
Dreaming of how much
You mean to me

Asking myself
Is this how I feel
Closing my eyes
On everything real

Wishing and praying
Wanting to know
Why I care for you
Why can't I let go?

Eyes filled with the tears
Heart filled with the fears
Mind so confused
Why do I still love you?''




Heer: kal sanskriti se is problem ko share karun gi.
She leave for party.

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Dinner was superb, everyone enjoy, no one felt absence of shub.

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Next day:


Heer share her problem wid sanskriti.
Sansk: tou teri actual problem kiya hai shub ya wo unknown sender?
Heer: shub ka masla meri samajh nahi arahi. Why his behavior became so weird?
Sans: goli maro shub ko. Acha ghoro mat ye btao wo unknown sender kon hai?
Heer: pata nahi kon hai. Lekin jo bhi hai poems bari zabardast bhejta hai.
Sans: tum or poems? Wel hosakta hai us k paas i.d galat ho.
Heer: means?
Sans: arey yar i.d main koi mistake ho is liye kisi or k pas janay k bajae wo mails tere i.d pe arahi hon. Waise bhi teri is i.d k bare main tere mere or anmol bhaiyya k or koi nahi janta.
Heer: yah! Ye meri persnal i.d hai. Dosri wali sab k pas hai, mujhe ek pal k liye laga k ye shararat preet ki hai.
Sans: sweeti wo tmhe face 2 face tease karta hai. Ab Chalen ? college ka princi hamara rishtedar nahi hai. Exam main enter nahi honay denge.
Heer: han aisa lag raha hai k aaj mera college main pehla din hai.
Sans: or shayad akhri bhi, kyn k madam ki baaten khatam jo nahi ho rahi.
Heer halke halke gungu nanay lagi:
"aaj main uper asman neechay".


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Shub: meri ab tak samajh nahi aya k mere objection ka koi notice kyn nahi lia kisi ney?
Anil: arey yar tu kyn kisi larki ko tamasha bana raha hai just say her k tu kisi or se shaadi karna chahta hai. Simple.
Shub angry: go to hell.
And disconnect call.


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Heer and sanskriti exit from lounge and enter in open area of house (garden). Prem came towards them.
Prem: Good Morning! Just wait main araha hun.
Prem enter in living area. On other hand,
Sanskriti: why waiting yar?
Heer: kyun k aaj se prem mujhe college drop kar k university jaen ge Or wapsi main agar wo free ho jaenge tou unhi k saath aon gi nahi tou preet ya taj lene ayenge.
Sans: wow or ye sab kis khushi main?
Heer: takay kal kisi ko bhi mere akele college janay pe objection na ho.
Sans in head: i know ye sab shub ki wajah se ho raha hai. Wel jo hota hai achay k liye hota hai.
Heer in head: hope shub ko is baat pe objection na ho. Thanks to bhai.
On other hand
Prem to anmol: bhai key chahiye.
Anmol: ye le or han aj shaam ko mere saath chalna teri car leney.
Prem: no bhai iski koi zarurat nahi hai.
Anmol: just shut up. Chal ja.
Prem: o.k best of luck tou bol den.
Anmol naughty smile: kis k liye?
Prem: Bhai!! Bye. Hmmm.
Prem leaving.
Anmol: bye (smile).
Prem starting car heer want to sit back seat but prem stop her.
Prem: heer agay betho.
Heer: but.
Sans: han yar tum agay betho. Main agay beth jati but i think prem ji or main dono easy feel nahi karenge.
Heer sit wid prem. Prem race accelator and car run toward heer's college.


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At noon:




Prem: mujhe anay main der tou nahi hui? sanskriti kahan hai?
Heer: nahi, aapka university ka pehla din kaisa guzra? wo apni couzin k sath chali gai.
Prem: madam aj main admission form lene gaya tha. Phir submit karwaon ga, us k baad university ka pehla din ayega.
Heer embarrased: sorry mujhe pata nahi tha.
Prem chearing her: saza tou milegi tumhe.
Heer: what? Oh no.
Prem: oh yes! Chalo koi achi si kavita sunao.
Heer quickly: haye mai mar gayi.
Prem: ye kia tha?
Heer ko yad aya k first meet main us k hath main framed poetry thi. (Heer in head) oh no ye mujhe apni tarah poetry craz samajh rahe hain.
Prem: thank God tum main or mujh main koi similarity tou hai.
Heer forcely smile.
Prem: arey sunao.
Heer: mujhe bohat zoron ki bhok lag rahi hai.
Prem: O! Sorry. Chalo ghar chalte hain but ye saza deu rahi. O.k?
Heer: O.K (in head) bach gai yaar.

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Shaam ko anmol prem ko zabardasti le gaya or ek new latest car dilwa di.
Prem look happy for his brother love and care. Preet want treat from him. Purva smile and saw them with love.
P.papa enter. Preet apne papa ko dekh kar khisak liya.
Prem: papa apko pata hai mujhe bhai ne new car gift ki hai.
P.papa angrily: usay tou beemari hai apna sab kuch dusron ko dene ki, aaj khush hota apni zindagi main lekin nahi dayalu jo bana rehta hai. Or tum tmhe car ki kiya zarurat hai? ghar main itni gariyan hain koi si bhi use karlo or anmol ki gifted car wapis karo. Samjhe?
Prem apne papa ki pehli baat pe atka hua tha, bina unki baat sunay sir hila k han kardi. P.papa chale gae. Prem ne khoye hue andaz main purva ko dekha.
Prem: di papa kya keh rahe thay.
Purva: dn't worry anmol bhaiya khud papa se baat kar lengay phir papa ko os car ko le kar koi objection nahi hoga.
Purva foran chali gai k kahin prem us say kuch aisa na puch lay jis ka jawab prem ko tor k rakh day, Wo janti thi prem k liye uske kuch log zindagi se zayada important hain or un main ek anmol bhai bhi hain.


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Agni villa k do rooms ko set karne k liye wahan se samaan shift karna tha. So all r helping. Ek room main sab ghusay hue hain or samaan dusri jagah shift kar rahe hain. Preet or kunal shelfs khali kar rahe hain. Kali saray vase main se flowers nikal rahi hai. Sanskriti bikhra hua samaan samet rahi hai. Heer chotay show pices ek box main rakh rahi hai usi waqt prem enter hua. Sanskriti ne ek phool heer ko dia.
Sansk: ye le. Sirf yehi rose bohat khubsurat hai, tu rakh.
Heer: thanx madam.
Heer ne box uthaya or janay lagi phool uske haath se phisal raha tha so us ne wo phol samnay se atay prem ko pakra dia.
Heer: ye len main abhi ati hun.
She left and prem...



Precap:




Heer felt someone follow her...😲





Note:
Shub track end honay main thora sa waqt lagay ga. minimum 3 or 4 more updates.


SORRY FOR MISTAKE IF ANY...😆.

READ HIT LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT PLZ.😊

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

The part was really really awesome...




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Posted: 13 years ago
the update was koolll👏!!!

loved prem n heer scenesss⭐️!!!

the ending was superbbb...heer give the flower to prem n left...now wht will our prem will be thinkinggg😉😆!!!

loved it...waiting eagerly...

now who is folowing heer...i hope not tat shubhhh😡!!!
aur plz yarr jaldi khatam karo shubh ka characterr...i don't likes himmm😡!!!

superb update n update soon!!!!

thnx for the pm!
Edited by repunzell - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update yaar
luv premeer scenes
or ye shub ka track jaldi khatam ho jae
nd intrstng precap yaar
eagerly waiting 4 next chapter
pls update soon
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update di
it was awesome
enjoyed the full update..
everythng was so cute...
especially premeer
i loved it
i thnk prem becoming possesive about heer...
hmm...
i mean gng 2 drop in collage and all...
vah vah!!!
great idea..
and he got a new car also..that's great...
but his dad????
forget him..i knw all will be well..
and him i m gng 2 kill..
i suppose whm i m talking abt
hope his and heer's marriage breaks off..
and prem wont let anythng 2 happen to his heer..
loved the update di..
it was
plz update soon cant wait..
love u di
thanks fr pm and update..
love ya
take care
love
vrushika



Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi


The part was really really awesome...




thanks alot sadi. can you plz tell me k without border pic kaise post karte hain i mean main jo bhi pic post karti hun us main border or width likhi ati hai plz help me naa.
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Posted: 13 years ago

i want to ask u something guys plz told me that u want


(1) serious story with critical situation,

(2) sazish sazish or sazish,

(3) cute, simple & funny.

u guys accept funny tarka or not.


just select i type which u want 1,2 or 3

and also told me u like funny thing or not?

THANKS😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annokhi

i want to ask u something guys plz told me that u want


(1) serious story with critical situation,

(2) sazish sazish or sazish,

(3) cute, simple & funny.

u guys accept funny tarka or not.


just select i type which u want 1,2 or 3

and also told me u like funny thing or not?

THANKS😃

i'l go wid number 3
and ido like funny n cute scenes b/w premeer😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
dii dii dii 333i would go with 3.. and i loe funny thngs..
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Posted: 13 years ago

vrush u know wat i think i can wrote funny things better than saazishi ideas,😆

(KIRAN, VRUSH AND REPUNZEL)

i'll update on monday . INSHAALLAH😊

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