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Posted: 13 years ago
Y Lucky y itne kabab main haddi kyu hai Dakshna ke liye.... phele phone kya kam tha ki aab ye calling bell.😆... aur farm house pe kaun tapag gaya yaar disturb karne.😡... woh bhi jab Naina ne premission di kuch bhi karne ke liye...😳

Daksh; smiles;😛 movie ko pause kar diya; lifts her face upholding chin😳.; pata. hain poore 5 min 6 sec tum mujhse door rahi..pagli..tumhe kya laga main rehsakta hoon. tumhare baigair.aur tumse door...tumhare saath ke bina tho mujhe kuch bhi acha nahi lagta.,..(. kiss on fore head)😳.Lekin tum kuch jyada nakare kar rahithina..iss liye..😉

ohho... poore 5 mins 6 secs... bahut jaada hai na apne Dakshna ke liye...😆 loved the dialogues...😳
Superb as usual👏👏 Loved it to infinity...😛
Thank u dear 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗



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Posted: 13 years ago
@rupu and aish

Dnt wry yaar..lagta hain dakshu se jyada tum logon ko chinta ho rahi hain calling bell ki!😆😆

Thnak u thank u for lovely comments.🤗.🤗wait till tommorow.. u will know ki who is that kabab main haddi?😡😉 aur kyu aaya?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

Surprise surprise...😛😛

Dakshna are busy in giving and taking xoxo...just then callng bell bajta hain...they giv a brk to their romance😳..😳.Naina goes to open the door...door open kiya

A guy standing with a big parcel and flowers

Naina;yes..
Guy; mrs naina patwardan? naina nods her head
Guy;, maam , ye aap ke liye.parcel hain...
Naina; mere liye?? kisne beja?😲
Guy; sorry maam..lekin main bata nahi sakta..unho ne mana kiya...😉
Naina;kya? Teek hain..pls wapas le jayiye, mujhe nahi chahiye

Just then daksh makes an entry;; kya hua naina?.Naina explains him the situation

Daksh; naina ..lona..dekhte hain kisne beja...😉
Naina; daksh aise kaise? daksh puts his hand on naina's shoulder assuring her😊...Naina signs and takes the parcel..

They both come inside...daksh asks naina to open the parcel and see..naina unwillingly starts opening...daksh sits besides her...

Parcel is opened and naina is shocked and surprised to see.😛. 😛a white teddy bear holding hrt with words I love u...a greeting card , choclates and flowers...




Naina looks at daksh,😛

Daksh; wow..kitna acha teddy hain..kisne beja??😆.aur ye choclates..card..flowers..wah naina.👏..(looks at naina)..aisa kya dekh rahi ho? maina nahi beja😉

Naina understands ki daksh natak kar raha hain..so she decides to pull his leg😉

Contd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky...pata tha😃...courier...oh man...dat card😍...nd teddy...choclates tho bas dakshu aur naina ne dekhe he abhi tho, maine nai😛...fida yar...totali fida😍...lucky...ilu my darlin🤗🤗🤗...ek calling bell maaf😛...itna cute surprise...thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗
ps : dekh li...choclats i mean😛...bas abhi load hua😊...
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

Naina pulls daksh's leg on surprise!

Naina;Maine kab kaha ki tumne beja.😉. Ye jaroor.usi ne bejha hoga..kitna sweet hain woh?.aur .😉
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Daksh; usi ne matlab? kisne?( question mark face)😡😲
Naina; usi ne jo mujh se bahut pyar karta hain.😆😆.jo mera bhaut khayal rakhtha hain...
Daksh; wahi pooch raha hoon, kisne?😡( semi kp mood)
Naina; secret hain.😉.main nahi batavungi?maina bahi usse call karke thank u kehdungi...

She takes up her mobile and goes into balcony..daksh is confused ki ye naya character kaun hai uski love story main...🤣.. secretly uska peecha karta hain..naina notices this...she acts as if speaking on mobile😉

Naina; mujhe pata hain tumhi beja woh parcel..so sweet of u..tum kitne ache ho..kitna pyar karte ho mujhse..main..main bhi tumse bahut...

Daksh kp bangaya( gets mad with angry)😡..aur woh aake snatches phone from naina's hand...😡

Naina; daksh kya kar rahe ho?😲
Daksh; kya kar raha hoon? FYI woh parcel maine beja hain..woh nahi jise tum phone pe baat kar rahe ho..waise kaun hai phone par...😲

Daksh looks at phone and realises he is fooled..😆😆
Naina starts laughing,; daksh...mujhe pata tha ki tumhine beja hain...tumhe kya laga sirf tum act karsakte ho? ( continues to laugh).😆..aur itna jalan..bapre...😆

Daksh;( Pointing a finger) naina bas karo ab bahut hogaya..hasna bandh karo..(but no.).naina haso mat warna...( issuing a warning)

Naina ; haan warna..daksh tries to get hold of her...and naina runs away...thoda bahagm bhag in room...daksh gets hold of naina

Naina;; daksh chodo mujhe..sry ab nahi hasungi? chodona...😳
Daksh; bahut has rahithi..😉.ab haso ..haso😉
Lost in each others eyes😍😍

Daksh; kaisa laga surprise?😛
Naina; hugs him tightly.🤗.bahut jyada cute..bilkul tumhari tarah.(pulls his cheeks)..lekin teek se dekhne nahi diya..😕.( leaves daksh and goes near bed..and starts looking at card..


Daksh hugs from back and whispers; I love u😛❤️
Naina turns back...and says; luv u too❤️..daksh pulls her closer..😳

Contd....

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...jealous dakshu😛...lucky ab tho KP ke sare avtar dikha diye tune hame...sweetie cutie naughty...ab tho jealous KP ke bhi darshan ho gaye😛...looove KP🤗...nd uski Naina🤗...nd u 2.🤗🤗🤗...ha, pata hai, roz kehti hu aj bhi kahungi😛...
thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lucky such a sweet scene 😛 itna cute cute jealous Dakshu... Wow loved it dear 👏 u again bought a big smile on my face 😃 Thank u dear 🤗 🤗 hatts off to u bud 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ aish & rupu

Ohh..padliya tum logon ne..wow😛..I thought u both logged out..but I am damn damn happy 🤗 u didnt miss out till mrng

Thank u thank u buddies.*.two low bows*( aish ke stlye main)🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys🤗...sry ye wala thoda late ho gaya...dakshna ke flat me set kiya tha😛...waha kuch masti kam thi na isliye...njoy😉
FLAT ME MASTI...😉

Dakshna are in their flat. Post dinner, doing the dishes, cleaning up, that kinda thing...

Naina is doing the dishes. Halfway through, Dakshu offers to swap jobs. So now he's doing the dishes, and she's sorting the place out(dono bahot experienced hai na...kitchen s a mess😆)...

D : Garmi bahot hai yaha pe... (u've gotta bliev me...mumbai ka heat wave sachi me killer heat wave hai😛)
Naina turns (daksh has his back to her) , sees him fidgeting. He's trying to losen his shirt ka collar lekin his hands are damp...
N : Daksh...?
D : (turns) Hmm...
She walks up to him, smiles and very matter-of-factly opens the top button of his shirt. Dakshu s like, whoa😆...
Eye-speak, eye-speak😍...
N : bas?
D : nahi...
She opens one more.
N : ab?
He shakes his head, no.
Ek aur button khulta hai😳...
No more questions now...her hands are now on his chest, buttons forgotten, and his eyes are on hers, mirroring hers, a hundred smiles, a thousand whispers and a million-a-minute heart beats...

He remembers his damp hands then...

D : (softly) Naina...

She snaps out of the trance, takes a step back. It had started out pretty much innocently (innocent my foot😆...ha, pata hai...bas likhte likhte wo bhi aa gaya tha😛)...she looks up...and its eye-speak again...

D : (looks at his hands, then back at her) this s why...

N : (nods) i know...

D : (ekdam heated glance) baad mein...

Naina blushes, gets back to whatever she was doing before at the kitchen counter...

N : (pretending ki kuch nai hua) Sach me garmi bahot hai...

D : (smiles to himself) Ha, hai.

She steals a glance beech me😳, and he catches her.

N : (gets a glass of water) Fan lagvado yaha bhi. Tumhe chahiye?

Dakshu s done, leans back on against the counter...(u guys kno na ki uski nazre kis par hogi😉)

Naina turns with a glass for him, and this time catches HIM checking HER out...

N : Kya hua?

D : (shakes his head with a knowing smile) Kuch nai. Bas soch raha tha ki achanak sab kuch pehle se zyada hot kyu lag raha he...

N : Ha, ha DP...tum tho ho hi itne hot. Ab lo...(hands him the glass)

D : (takes a sip, husky tone) Hmm, aur tum bilkul nahi... (kehta bhi aise hai ki u wud bliev😛).

Naina moves to fill a jug, choosing not to respond...Dakshu thinks for half a minute, smiles (naughty smile)...Tap kholta hai, nd Naina pe pani chidakta hai...

N : Daksh...(puts up her hands) Kya kar rahe ho tum...

D : (splashes some more on her) Cool kar raha hu tumhe...itna hot mujse handle nahi kiya jata😆...

N : Daksh...Daksh bas bhi karo ab...

D : rok lo mujhe...

Naina, still busy shielding herself, looks around and spots the jug...

Dakshu grabs a water bottle from the counter for himself ...

Pehla war Dakshu ka...Naina pe...He starts laughing.

N : 😲Daksh...tumhe tho me...

Phir kya...splash😲, splash😆, splash😆😆😆...

Dono ke hathiyar rendered empty😛...

Daksh is laughing, doubled over...

N : Daksh...(laughing herself) tumhe tho...dekho kya kar diya...poora kitchen...

He looks up now, laughing still, and dheere dheere the laughter dies... Cos Naina s much, much more drenched than he is...

She interprets the look correctly, and takes a step back.

he smiles his nahi-chodunga smile and takes a step forward... Game on again...

But of course, floor pe are the puddles of water, and she is about to step on one...

D : Naina sambhal ke-

Yes, she slips, she falls (slow motion ok)...but don wori...right into dakshu's arms...(kaha na slow motion...he rushed over nd caught her...dekho aise : http://www.independentarts.net/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/salsa_dance.jpg😉)

D : Tum theek ho...

She slowly nods her head, no.

Concerned, he straightens up immediately and pulls her up too.

D : Mene kaha tha sambhal ke...

N : Buddhu KP...(starts playing with the fourth button; anybody counting...😛) Mera wo Matlab nahi tha...

D : (smiles) Par mera tha...(strokes her cheek) Mazaq mazaq he par tumhe kuch ho jata tho...

N : Kuch nahi hoga mujhe... (skims a fingertip down his nose, laughing) Tum jo ho...

He gives an indulgent smile. " Sab tumhari galti hai vaise..."

N : (guys...i lost count of buttons😆) Meri...? garmi tho apko lag rahi thi vakil saheb...

D : (shakes his head) Shuru tumne kiya tha...(catches her hand and lifts it to his lips)

N : Acha... (her other hand snakes up his shoulder, goes around his neck...bas, bas...it stays there...iske aage nahi😆)

He looks at her then, gives her a two-can-play-this-game look...

He starts trailing gossamer kisses, working down each fingertip, taking his time.

N : (ekdam husky) Daksh...

D : (busy elsewhere😉) Hmm...?

N : Khatam tum kar do😳...

He looks up at that, smiles into her eyes. "Hisab barabar..." laces his fingers with hers, pulls her closer...

ohk...ho gaya, baki ka imagin kar lena😉...sry late ho gaya, par mujhe kya pata tha ki dakshna P-zoo ki diwali party me itni jaldi gate-crash kar denge😆 hop u guys had fun😊
aish
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fun? fun?

Its damn fun dear... diwali dhamaka hain ek dum dhamaka...👏👏👏 FF

Falt main masti..woh bhi water ke saath😍😍.what an idea mam ji.👍🏼.aur title bhi mast hain..😉

Loved it 🤗and picture makes this FF perfect😛.Thanks for this hot & cool FF😉 Buddy

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