-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF THREAD 2 - Page 53

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Dhundhlae aks
part 24

Maan grinned ' I couldn't solve that..
umm
tum ussen option main chod sakti ho
prachi ' ok..
they probably stood their for ever discussing the questions.

After reaching home prachi immediately called Geet & told wat discussion she had with Maan. Prachi was super excited that Maan didn't misunderstand her & took things positively.
Geet smiled ' I told u
prachi ' haan yaar.. u won't believe he said exactly the same words as u
he said if ur conscious is clear then why to worry
she giggled he even gave his hanky to wipe my tears
Geet giggled
both the girls giggled cutely feeling the new new feelings..
prachi - Maan ne maths exams ke questions bhi batayen
Geet ' ussen sab pata hain
prachi ' he is the topper in his batch
Geet - really
prachi ' last 2 sems he topped.. he is very intelligent
Geet smiled
prachi shared every small detail... they couldn't stop going gaga abt Maan

Next week was exams. Every one was working hard. Geet does good but she worked harder this time to keep her job with Khurana's
Khurana Mansion.
Maan was sitting in the hall & watching cricket Match. It was finals today.. he had his soft drink & chips.. he was really excited... the match was also in a nail biting point when dad & Dev walked in. Maan greeted them & continued to watch his match.
Dad ' score kya hain
Maan ' last 5 over hain dad
Dev folded his sleeves & excitedly sat next to him ' kitne runs chayien
Maan ' 50 runs
Dev ' thats not possible
Maan ' nahi bro be positive.. 10 per over se hojayega
each ball.. Maan was inching closer to the TV.. & almost holding his breath...
dad ' agle week se tumhare internals hain na
Maan gulped his saliva & looked down wondering how the hell does dad know abt his exam scheudle.
dad ' India jeeta yah na jeeta but I am sure how u will do ur internal .
Maan dipped his head & just left from there. His whole concentration in the scores till the very last min. he took his books & drew out. He was so so so frustrated & irritated.. he probably would have screamed his head out... had he stayed there a min more. He drew out rashly to a far lonely hill top. He stopped his car..& slammed the door & walked to the edge..pushed his hair behind.. & screamed.. before his voice came out.. he heard her scream.. yes. .. common.. one more run... just one more..
he followed the voice .. he was shocked to see a girl dress that seemed like a cricket player ..it was pitch dark.. he assumed it was Indian cricket team's attire..wearing all the gears.. helmet.. gloves.. & watching the match on the rock.. where she projected it using her wat ever kit she had.
It was pitch dark..10 may be 11pm... & she was watching the match all alone.. screaming.. he looked around & then looked at her again to be doubly sure wat he was seeing.
Before he could digest wat he was seeing... the match turned to an interesting point.. dhooni... hit 6 again..& again & the next ball.. he was out.. the girl was so frustrated she hit the bat that was in her hand on the rock beside her.. dam.. dam dam dam.. she was so frustrated...
ndon't worry next Gambhir hain Maan said
Geet turned immediately to the source of the voice.. it was dark she couldn't see his face..
she made cute face..Gambhir hain?.. like she wanted to be reassured
uski baad Patan bhi hain
she sniffed her nose & offered him the spare helmet she had...
he smiled & took it ' may I
2-3 rule hain
he laughed
no its serious
ok ok.. bolo
favor only my Indian team

I bet '
no phone
he lifted his brows
no disturbance plz
aur kuch

she thought & cutely shook her head..
he plunged next to her wearing the helmet.

then came the add break.. she offered the chips she was nibbling.
Maan ' tum aisen match dehk thi ho
Geet ' koi problem hain
Maan ' haan bilkul hain
she shot an irritating look .. before she could ask him to leave
dammit why didn't u tell me abt this before
oh I am so sorry .. wo kya huwa na .. mujhe aapka number nahi pata tha
actually think abt it.. I don't even KNOW U
she snapped cutely & started to laugh
he laughed loud..
their voice was echoing all over.. & then suddenly both of them went silent ..& watching the match curiously the next ball.
Each ball was thrilling & more exciting.. both of them jumped & screamed loud.. for ever run.
She would bully the opponent player.. even throw stones at them.. thank god she was projecting it on the rock..
Maan couldn't stop laughing at the antics she put with every run. He thought he was a serious fan of cricket.. here she was a total maniac..
last ball she held his arm tightly.. he held her hand that rested on his. As the baller ran .. she pressed his arm harder & harder.. she cutely..was shooting a prayer.. plz plz plz babaji.. 6 6 6 '.
& it was a 6.. she jumped & screamed.. yeh jeet gayen.. yeppy...
jeet gayen jeet gayen..
oye oye oye.. hum jeet gayen..
she did her cute little dance
yeppy..
he excitedly raised his hand & jumped alng with her.. jeet gayen..
she screamed yet again..
Maan was abt to remove the helmet
rahk lo.. its for u
thanks
aap tho aisen bol rahen ho jaisen main ne match jeeta..
she ran to the rock.. where the projection was still on.. dhooni receiving the trophy. .. she kissed him.. match tho issne jeeta.. umma
Maan laughed.. dhooni ki fan ho
actually puren team ki
..she kissed them all..
she slowly turned off the whole thing.. it was darker now.. & completely silent.
U want me to drop u some where
nahi I have my frd
Maan was little taken a back & looked around
no no.. he will come to pick me
he smiled.. very reluctantly asked.. tumhare frd match nahi dekta
she lifted the whole kit & walked towards the leveled ground where vehicles could reach..
he held the other end & walked along with her...
nahi ussen criket nahi pasand.. can u believe it he doesn't like cricket.. thats why i call him gay
maan laughed at her fundae
nahi yaar seriously how can guy not like criket
maan just continued to laugh
aap thanks kyun kah rahen the.. she asked curiously
actually I wanted to watch the match
aap ke ghar main light challi gayen thi kya
he modestly accepted.. I was not allowed to
exams hain kya
its only internals yaar
parents ko thodi pata hota hain.. for them exam is an exam..
tell me abt it
he sighed.. common yaar .. finals tha
issen liyen tho I always watch my match like this
suno..
umm
kisi ko batana mat.. let it be our little secret
no way.. this is the bestest thing ever happened to me I never thought I will be able to watch the match today.
No ways.. its the finals..how can u miss
exactly my point
Jab tak main hoon.. u will not miss a single match.. I can promise that..

they hear a vehicle coming towards them,..
Geet ' thats my friend
Maan ' not bad perfect timing
Geet ' he better be
Maan walks towards his car.. she laughs & removes her helmet.. waving bye
Maan removes his helmet & throws inside the car.. he looks at her.. jumping & screaming again to her friend.. maine kaha tha na India jeetaga
armaan ' wo kaun hain
geet - match buddy
armaan - do u know him
she lifts her shoulders & drops.. I don't know
we were just watching the match together
Maan waves at her.. she waves back..
armaan ' u can't be watching a match with a stranger Geet
Geet ' tho kya stadium sab log ek dorse ka naam pata puch ke jaathen hain
armaan ' Geet yeh stadium nahi hain
its not safe.. kitne search karne ke baad hume se jagha milli hain
Geet ' he won't tell any one
Maan's car pulls out backward.. turns & leaves from there..
armaan ' we will change the place for the next match
Geet ' arren I have promised him
armaan looked at him in shock
she made a cute face ' if u r so concerned then why don't u watch the match with me
armaan ' no ways.. u know how much I hate that crap
she waked him ' its not crap
its far better than ur Wimbledon
armaan ' don't start that now
Maan reaches home calls Raj
raj ' wat a match
why the hell was ur phone swticted off
Maan started to laugh... he couldn't believe.. he actually swtiched off his phone because she said..
he shook hi shead & laughed .. & laughed
raj ' bhootni se mil kar aa raha hain kya
Maan laughed louder
raj ' pagli se?
Maan couldn't control himself
raj ' Maan...MAAN...
Maan ' deewani se..
raj ' kiski .. teri??
Maan ' how I wish..
raj ' wat ???
Maan ' nahi yaar cricket ki deewani se..
he couldn't stop himself blurting out the whole episode..
raj ' ek min.. u saw last 4 overs with a girl alone in a hill top.. & u don't know wats her name.. how she looks..
Maan ' how does it matter..
moreover she was wearing a helmet..
raj ' r u crazy
he let a hearty boisterous burst of laughter ' not as much as her
raj ' u have totally lost it
Maan stood guffawing as he spoke.
MAAN & GEET have not seen each other as an admirer..
not even when they watched the match.. she couldn't recognize his voice.. because he was not shouting like he does otherwise at her..
interview time. too . they never saw eachothers face

precap
holidays & next sem
-PREV PART 23 NEXT PART 25-
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF thread
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow di..this is the first time am reading the update as soon as you posted.Thank god I didnt sign out earlier.

Coming to the update,it was fun.I couldnt imagine how Geet has this courage watching a match all alone with a stranger.loved that whole part.but why do you always put them in a situation where they cant recognize each other.chalo achcha hi hua.else woh log ki jhagda shuru hota.hehe

continue soon dear
Edited by Saams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
What an awesome update dear...
loved this Deewani Geet Cricket Maniac lol
"khoob guzray gi jub mil baitay gay deewanay Cricket kay DO"
I loved the Game watching with full cricket gear at hill top... very different and unique
I have never read this concept before ...
Muaaah to ya dear for bringing versatility and uniqueness in ur writing...
Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago
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Loved the update...!!
loved the convo btn maan n geet...
geet was hilarious here...she wore the helmet n was watching the match...🤣
ssly...maan also just laughed at her antics n way of watching the match...
totally loved the update di...!!
cont soon...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww that was so cute!
can't wait till when maan comes to know that the bhootni sexy pagli and deewani are all the same and no one but geet!
i'm sooo loving this!
and INDIA won!😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just love them...

It was a brilliant rocking update...

Felt like i was seeing the match with them... total craziness.. but loved that... but still they didnt see each other... uff still hazy image...

but i loved it... love the attitude of cool Geet and the way maan was just going gaga about her to raj...

I cant wait for the next update... thanks for updating today...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i cant believe it!
still dey dint see!!
oh muski pls ek baar mila do na..as an admirer..
pls..pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago

edited my post on page 96

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Posted: 13 years ago
kya kahu muski , mein geet ke ajooba antic ko digest karte tak geet kuch naya kar deti hai . imagine geet watching match in full attire in hilltop woh bhi akele,hai allah , babji aur geet kya karegi, waiting for more . loved it .

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