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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

the update was just soo amazing!!

continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Awesome Awesome update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting Plot :] 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow yaar surepb I came here today to see your update only...and waiting for the next past yaar...thanks...now the real story begins ha...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 13:

The road doesn't seem very busy...known as the most famous gathering places of thugs, very few local consumers were there to purchase their daily basic needs in the market...as the car halted to a stop inches away from the corner of the road, Aman looked back at his wife, "...welcome back to hell honey!!!...where is the list?..."...handing him a piece of paper, she made a request, "...Please make it fast yaar...I am going crazyyy here.."...observing the surrounding, he wanted to ask for a second thought, "..this place is creepy man...why do you want all these sweets from this market??...Lets go to some decent mall...then you can have al..." cutting him in the middle, she almost cried out, "...It's gonna take 2 hours to find your decent mall...but I want my vanilla-bean-hot-chocolate with whipped cream and chocolate sprinkles on top of it RIGHT NOW!!!!..."...feeling all helpless before the mother of his child...what can she do as it's a part of the pregnancy, 'CRAVINGS'...wait...'MOOD SWINGS' is another part of it...and if the 'mood swing' takes over her 'cravings' then he will have to face a hard time controlling her...smiling at her pouted face, he assured her before getting off the car, "...aww...only 10 mins...I will be right back before you know it..".

Still sitting on the driver seat, Arnav looked at her through the looking glass, "...mark my words, atleast one hour...if he comes back before then, change my name from Arnav to whatever!!!.." laughing at her friend, both shared a high five with each other..."..Hey!! wanna go for some ice-cream?? " she offered..."what??...didn't you just order him for a hot-chocolate??" Arnav asked, not getting any head or tail of this lady's desire...making a puppy face, she justified, "well...you said, it's gonna take him atleast an hour, so by the time he comes back I can have an ice-cream naa...see it's not my fault, your niece is being so demanding"...now how could he refuse his unborn niece's demand???...shaking his head in disbelief while smiling, Arnav got off from the car to help her out...

Placing two cups of strawberry ice-creams with strawberry sauce and chopped hazelnuts on the table, he folded up his pale-green shirt half way upto his elbows then loosening the navy blue/green striped silk tie, Arnav complained, "..Gosh!!!...why don't they have the facility of generator...It's freaking hot in here...do you wanna go inside the car??"...hearing the best option, she couldn't refuse, as Anjali got up from her seat holding the cups while Arnav held the door for her to get out of the little ice-cream shop...

Opening the door of the passenger seat, he waited for her to get in, when he heard the whistle...before he could give them a look, she gently tapped his hand to ignore them...obeying her gesture, he closed the door after her and took his position back to the driving seat to turn on the AC..."Let them bark yaar...who cares??!!!" Anjali stated as she took a spoon full of her ice-cream...turning back to her, Arnav confronted, "But they should be taught a lesson so that next time they atleast think a thousand times before barking"...."...Arnav!!..."...before he could take the first taste of his ice-cream, her dazed voice made him look at the direction where she was pointing at...completely stunned by the scene as his eyes fell on the back of her figure in a baby pink colored saari, semi-surrounded by three men across the street... "...Khushi?!?!.." came out from his soft voice...

Placing the cup on the adjacent seat, he immediately got out of the car...carefully crossing the street he was all ready to give those rasc*ls a treat when the sudden appearance of his little innocent face over her shoulder had compelled him to change his mind...

It wasn't a new issue for her as she had always been ignoring them since last three months when she moved in to this city from Delhi...the market being convenient for her, she decided to buy the baby food and milk...but today was the worst...they are crossing all the limits...'please God!! only for the sake of my son...please have mercy on us' she quietly requested from her heart when suddenly got surrounded by them...holding Aryan tightly close to her heart, she was constantly looking at her right and left for some help...feeling disguested to even look at them after listenning to their blabbering...

"Do you need help ma'am??" laughed the middle one when the right one threw a disrespectful offer to him, "...yeah sure!!...why don't you take care of the little baby"...taking the opportunity for himself, the left one shared his offer to the right one, "...and you take care of her grocery while I can take in charge of the mommy..."...feeling proud of their cheapest joke, all three shared a pathetic laugh...unable to hold him in the cradle position with the plastic bag being in the left hand, she held Aryan up with her right arm circled around him making him survey the world over her shoulder, that's when he smiled at the person behind his mommy...

His smile had the impact on him, as Arnav didn't feel to remove that smile from his cute tiny lips...as he didn't want to scare the baby by exploring his violent side...or rather, he didn't want to create a horrifying impression on him...on his son...

Responding the little man's smile with a wink, he instantly turned to his right as soon as he reached her spot, to share an unexpected yet a pleasent hug...not giving her a chance to react...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok guyz...i never ask for it but this is special one n i want loads and loads of comments from now on b/c i know u guyz want load and loads of arhi moment which are coming up and to get them out sooner u need to work some too and motivate me by commenting...enjoy.
Part 14:

Responding the little man's smile with a wink, he instantly turned to his right as soon as he reached her spot, to share an unexpected yet a pleasent hug...not giving her a chance to react...

Same warmth even after 2 years...same effect of his touch...as if a sudden current has passed through her every single nerve...tingling her entire body...making her go weak on her knees, even after 'hating' him from all her heart...wait then why is she feeling love again??!!!...why isn't she protesting?!?!...does that imply she still l-o-v...NO!!...unable to control all the mix emotions, in order to justify her heart to her mind, she decided to keep a distance between them by placing her left hand on his chest, 'unwilling' pushing him away from her...

Now if the world could stop right here right now...with the two precious people being in his arms...how he wished he could keep them in his love shell for eternity... coming out his thought as he felt being pushed back, Arnav deliberately tightened his embrace...then moving his face close to her ear, he whispered, "...just stay where you are with your mouth shut...and lemme handle the situation..."...not caring about her consent, he proceeded in an exciting noticeable voice, "...there you are sweetie!!!..."...pulling himself back, he flashed a smile to continue, "...I've parked the car over there..." pointing at the brand new pale green Toyota-Prius across the street, he took the chance to hold Aryan in his arms while asking her to follow "...lets go!!..."...

Before she could say anything, one of the rowdies decided to make an interference, "...oyee!!...Boss!!!...who the hell are you????...never seen you with her before..." exchanging looks with his partners he smirked, "neither did she mention that you are her brother, then where are you taking her???..."...controlling his clenched fist, Arnav turned back to reply, still trying to keep himself calm..."...Exactly!!!...that's because I am NOT her brother but if you guys are interested to tie rakhis from her then you all are most welcome to do so...khushi!!...ready to tie three more rakhis??..." he asked while winking at the young lady next to him, who bit her lips to control the laughter...

Three MORE rakhis???...now what the hell was that supposed to mean???...she was never seen with any man then what brother he is talking about??...are they being tricked???...Feeling insulted as well as confused, the middle person opened his mouth to clear out the confusion, "...heyy!! watch your mouth...and what brother are you talking about???..." when suddenly he felt heavy on his right shoulder...

"Here is your hon...what happened??" asked Aman, noticing her tensed face..."...Aman please go there...those creeps were misbehaving with Khushi...I hope Arnav doesn't get hyper and make things worse..." very well aware of the short-tempered personality of her dear friend, Anjali alerted him...

Almost listenning to their conversations, Aman decided to butt in right on time to play a part of the act...resting his strong arm on his shoulder, he declared, "It's me dude!!!...The Great Aman!!..."...pulling the sleeves of his full-sleeved red-black T-shirt, then pointing at Khushi, he confessed, "...and she is my sister...you got a problem with that???...huh!!!..."...

Not liking the direction, the situation is changing into, she unawarily grabbed Arnav's right arm to stop Aman before, the situation gets worse...not realising her sharp nails piercing through his skin...

Her touch...that's all it mattered to him...as he didn't feel the pain by her sudden nip...however that was the last thing he would never like to see in his life and that was her tensed face...but yet he didn't stop Aman, considering themselves being black belt holders in Judo, he knew the idiots are digging their own graves...in stead Arnav provoked him, sensing that once they get to know with whom they are messing with, these dogs will run away, "...Hey Aman!!...why don't you celebrate your black belt achievement??..." making the poor girl tightening her grip on his arm...

Hearing of the best opportunity to show his talent, he excitedly agreed, "...not a bad idea man...rig..." before he could finish his sentence, one of them stammered in defence, "...I--just--got-- a call from Boss...so see ya guy..." waving at his two other mates, he vanished from the scene, making the other two just leave from there without even bothering to open their mouths...

"What the...??!!...I was serious yaar!!..." noticing Arnav's smirk, Aman understood his intention of the provocation..."sh*t!!!...you knew it man that they will just...forget it..."...now turning his attention to her, he felt bad for the poor girl when he noticed her stressed face, "...hey!!!...relax yaar...let's go...we will drop you off..."

Living in a society where people just need an excuse to start talking rubbish about anyone, she didn't want to go with these men, even having trust on them...now how can she refuse them??...how can she explain her helplessness that seeing a single mother with two strange men is not acceptable in her society...Sensing her awkwardness, Aman decided to break the ice, "...lets go yaar...Anjali is waiting in the car"...then looking at her direction, he mumbled, "...and she is already giving me a killing look...chalo chalo!!!..."

Hearing her name, she decided to go with them when she realized what she was doing...as her eyes fell on her hand that was holding his arm...quickly releasing his arm, she tried to take her son back in her arms and before she could do so Aman quickly grabbed her right wrist, almost pulling her to cross the street to their car...

He saw the happiness in his friend's eyes, and he knew it was because of the little man in his arms...before this happiness gets snatched from him again, he decided to stop her, that's when he decided to help her to cross the street safely.

Edited by angel_60107 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey yaar what a treat today 3 updates wow...yaar thanks
and can't wait for the next part but waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu17

hey yaar what a treat today 3 updates wow...yaar thanks
and can't wait for the next part but waiting ...

thanks hon i will update more when people will keep commenting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonu10

[what an update yaar suberb

thank you i like it when people comment i just motivates me to update faster because even i don't like it when people take forever to update and by the time people start forgetting what the story was about so. thanks for the lovely comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my gosh part 12 , 13 , and 14 were just amazing and Adorable !! :) loved the little winking scene, thanxx for the pm , continue soon and I can't wait !! :)

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