AGlimpseOfHeaven In YourEyes-ARMiniFF-Upt pg19

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A Glimpse of Heaven in Your eyes



Prelude ...

Having grown in a very close family, it was only me, my parents, my di and my close friends, in my world, no one else ...until i met you!

Call it either destiny, that has made us meet or maybe it was us who made this happened...it was so sudden yet every moment seemed an eternity, it felt confusing, at the same time like bliss...

I never knew when it happened or how it happened, but it did and here today in my world with you, i'm feeling at the top of the world...

This is me, Riddhima and my life...my love!

Flashback...

Crash Into You...

Everything went still...Like someone had stop the flow of wind; everyone around seemed fading away, leaving only him and me staring at each other...with me in his arms, where i don't know but feeling like i always meant to be there and his eyes...those blue eyes, so mesmerising making me lost in them, drowning and at the same time, confused with all these emotions flickering in them which i was not able to decipher...

"Riddhima..." came a voice from nowhere...no wait, it's from behind me ...Muski!!! Oh no i forgot her...

"Sorry..." I whispered to the angel in front of me, my angel...Wait.. "My Angel????"...but he's sure quite good looking and saved me from falling so he's quite nice, angel..just a slip of the tongue..hehe!! ...thought Riddhima freeing herself from her saviour's arm!!

"Riddhima,let's go, we're getting late"...Muski calling from the entrance of Sanjeevani...Oh again forgot her..."Sorry Muski, coming..."...turning around to thank...where's he??Turning again, Riddhima saw him with that stupid grin on his face, talking to that mini skirt girl, standing against a grey car, which seemed to be his...not a bad choice, a Bugatti veyron ...but this aside...he didn't let me thank him...well you should have thank him instead of thinking i don't know what... a voice came into her mind!

Uff let it be now, he's not interested in my thank you, instead in that girl...

Murmuring this, Riddhima and walked till the entrance where Muskaan was...

"Let's go, Muski..."..."where were u lost??...apparently Muski didn't see me with that stranger...again him!!!

"So what was i saying, without listening to what i had to say,..."yeah it was so great nah the other day with Anjie di,...Riddhima, are you listening...??" "yeah what? Yeah, yeah Muski..."..." It was so great nah, we enjoyed so much!" " Yeah it was one of the greatest day, we've had a blast..." Riddhima forgetting what just happened in the car park ...for now!!

To Be Continued...

Hope u guys liked it...please like/leave ur comments...

Loads Of Love,

Pranishta

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Guys hi...This is my first FF on IF...Well let me introduce myself, I'm Pranishta , some might know me...
Well i've read so many beautiful FFs here , all among the best!!! Love all the AR ffs, well considering i'm a total AR fan!!!
So, i'm feeling so nervous, as i said, it's my first one...so please guys, tell me if u like it...then i'll continue!!!

There's so many talented and brilliant writers over and i've made so many friends over here, met so many nice people over here, awesome writers...Geet, Ish, Asma, Amal, Sanaa, Shrutika, Aanya, Medzi, Maitree, Rachna di, Ankita di, Niki,Maha, Jannat di...sorry if i've forgotten someone, but u're all wonderful!! n special thanks to Liashna,...thank u princess!! ILY...*i know gonna get beaten later...lol!!!* Geet, I love you too!!!!!!!!!Thank u...Gyanvi, Shona...Love u guys!!!

Well i'm posting this today, cuz it is a really very special day...it's been 1 year since DMG ended but at the same time, we'd got our AR back!!!!! Love them!!!!!!

Your responses mean a lot...please like/comment...really hope u like it!!!

Love,
Pranishta

Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago
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Everything In Its Right Place

Today is a very special day in these 6 people's lives who are going to join Sanjeevani for their internship...

Everyone's life is going to change...change for good?? Maybe...but who knows what destiny has planned for those people!

They say a doctor is the saviour, giver and even God to some...it's a really difficult place to be in, to shoulder all the responsibilities that came with it is scary, will i be able to handle all these???

I know there are others like me right now...who's going to be interns in Sanjeevani and they must be feeling this fear also...

Dad ,mom Nani, always tells me to have faith in myself and my capabilities ..but i can't help it...i think it comes automatically when a person, especially a girl has to enter a new phase of her life...hmm ...as Anjie di says 'Let's face what comes and win the battle'... and yesterday when she told me the same thing how Atul jij said 'No... not that again' and got a good lecture on that...poor jij.. but they both love each other a lot...like mom-dad...though theirs has a lot more of understanding and stability with the experience and the long way through life, they've lived so far...

Thanking all these Riddhima's eyes fell on the clock on her bed's side..omg 6:00 PM , i've to get ready...she said panic-stricken...warna mein pakka mar jaougi...rushing to the bathroom with the clothes she'd already decided to wear for her first day since last night, she began to prepare herself for the day...

After 1 hour...

'Good morning Nani', Riddhima wished Nani with a sweet kiss as she has been doing since she was a kid and missed it so much in these 5 years she'd been away for her medical studies. 'Good morning beta'.. Nani replied enthusiastically her grand-daughter as she also missed her a lot during these 5 years!

Riddhima had gone to University Of Liverpool, where her Dad and her di also went for their studies...it was like a tradition.. speaking of, Riddhima giggled at that thought...Her mom and Nani who were so much believers of family's traditions were shockingly against this one...They were not with the idea of Riddhima going to UK for her studies and argued at that time that there were universities among the best in India..well it's not that but the 'tradition' had to be followed...

How Anjie, Riddhima, who was reluctance to go away at first and shocking Shashank threw tantrums at Padma and Nani at that time, now Riddhima and Nani giggled thinking of that...

How she missed her princess...but she knew it was for her good and today, she was going, for the fiorst time, in the hospital not as Dr Shashank Gupta's daughter, Riddhima but Dr Riddhima Gupta...

'Kissi ki nazar na lagey meri bachi ko.'

'Oh ho, Nani, apki aur mere rehte Ridzi par kissi ki nazar par sakti hai...ya phir parey bhi , to yeh apne darawni glare se bhaga degi...both laughing at Muski's joke whereby Riddhima's glaring at them...not for long as they were her sweethearts...

'Good morning beta', 'Good morning Nani...'Muski also came kissing Nani as always...'Good morning Ridzi , Good morning Muski Hugging each other, Riddhima forgetting about Muski's joke as she was so used and well she loved her. Muski was her cousin/best friend/ roommate/ class mate (since kindergarten i think)...they were inseparable...Anjie was also in their group..like the threesome!!! Even this weekend was superb, after such a long time...

'So kaisi hai tayar ho gayi??' Muski interrupted the trail of thoughts of Riddhima...'Yeh to subah ke 6 baje se tayar ho gayi...'.said Padma coming in the kitchen with Shashank.

'Kyun Riddhima beti, itni jaldi se tayar ho gayi thi?, aaj to tumhe 8 baje jana hai nah?'

Ha par papa..

Ha Ridzi 6 baje se!!...bus chootne wali nahi hai u know...tumhare paas car hain...said Muskaan making an innocent face...

aur bar bar niche se upar , aur clock se nazar to hath nahi rahi...aur shayad 10 bar mujhse puch chuki ki clock thik to hai nah!! Padma added to that!

Everyone was stiffing their laughter and Riddhima didn't miss that!

Nani aap bhi...nahi mere bache...Shashank, padma, muskaan , kyun sata rahe mere Riddhima ko??

Kaun meri pyari si behna ko sata rahe hai?? Anjie said coming with Atul...Di...they both engulfed each other in a tight hug...n me...asked sadly Muski...oyye nautanki , come here...said Riddhima!

Everyone there kept admiring the beautiful bond they had...Good morning Atul..Good morning he said, seeking ashirwaad from Padma, Shashank and Nani...hi Ridzi n Muski...so all set for today..all burst in a laugh...kya hua...Anjie n Atul asked...kuch nahi n they told them about Riddhima...they also tried to stiff their laughter but couldn't!

Riddhima wasn't minding all that at all...she was standing there watching all her loved ones...she was feeling so lucky to have such an awesome family and friend and all together after so long...

After breakfast...

Everyone was here today as it was the first day of Riddhima and Muskaan... though Muskaan is Padma's brother daughter; she was always more attached to the Guptas as they lived nearby as in neighbours!!

Ok dad, mom, nani hum chalte hai...hospital mein bahut kam hai...naye interns jo aane wale hai...Anjie said...Atul and Anjali were the new senior doctors alongside with Dr Kirti and Dr Shubhankar...

Bye beta, apna khayal rakhna, said Padma..tum bhi Atul..ok mom!

Ok Ridzy , Muski hum chalte hain ...8 baje milege! Bye...

C ya di...both replied...

Chalo mein bhi chalta hoon, mujhe meeting attend karni hai!! Bye Riddhima and Muskaan ...meet u alter in the hospital and all the very best to both of you beta!!

Thank u Dad ...Thank u uncle...

Bye Padma... Bye Ma', saying that Anjie, Atul and Dr Shashank left...

After taking all that she'll need, Riddhima said bye to her mom n Nani and sought their blessings with Muskaan as they're going to take a new step in their life...along with nervousness, there's happiness and their family's pride!!

Reaching the car park of Sanjeevani...

Muskaan and Riddhima still in conversation through the whole way to the hospital about their mini holiday just 2 days ago in Goa...they've enjoyed a lot with Anjie and Atul!

They've got out of the car and Muski went ahead, talking while Riddhima car key was stuck in the door lock...

'Excuse me, may i help u?'...came a voice from behind Riddhima!

Riddhima turned, startled and collide with that person behind her...she lost her balance, closed her eyes in the fear of landing on the ground...but she felt herself still...with two arms securing her...opening her eyes, she found herself looking in those mesmerising blue eyes...

Everything In Its Right Place till...now as something seems to have change in that one moment...


Hey sweeties...Hi!!! so posted a part, i don't know how it came out...sorry for any mistake...please comment/like, it means a lot!!

Take care

Muahhh

🤗

Pranishta


Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago
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..Resss

PS: I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH ...🤗

EDITED...

Heyyy Priii My Love🤗...First of all toh a very very very HUGE CONGRATULATIONS for your new FF...I am o so so excited yaar...yeepieee...and you were Nervous😲?...for what my jaan?...If you have Such a piece of work toh nervous hone ki kya baat hai..?...Gosh my crime partner you are so freaking awesome in writing...Kahaan chupa ke rakhs tha ye talent😛...Lets Start from the title..A Glimpse Of Heaven In Your Eyes😃....oyee hoyee...Superb...The intro is so good that now I so want to read more...So plzz plzz plzz update soon...And hey have you send PM's for this because I don't get any😕...I love you so much Prii...keep it up the good work...Muuaahhh...take care

Lots of Love

GEET

(Your MODEST Crime Partner) 😆

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Wow Geet Di, you've beaten me😳

Hey My angel... 😃
First of all congrats on your first ff thread... You know how much I love you for actually posting this... You made one of my dreams come true.. Having a conversation with a marvelous writer like you... I feel on the seven's sky... 👏

The part where you wrote, "call it destiny. uptil feeling at the top of the world" completely describes what i feel for you.. Bravo to that...

You were actually nervous?? My my, girl, you have a hidden talent... I just love AR for bringing it out of your fingers and brain... Am surprised, the best title..

Princess, you made me imagine that scene... Aww, just too beautiful... Now who's the girl with Armaan? And bugatti Veyron😭 I want one since ages😆
So short update.. but not your fault, i know..

Tch, update soon yaar.. U'll make me dream about AR tonight.. Soo magical.

Ur highness, am honoured to have my name up there, thank you...

I know, i never mobilized courage to tell you but. Mat jaao na, i'll miss you a lot... more than i thought I would.. Take Care



With Love,
Liashna🤗
Edited by Liashna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept

add me to ur pm list
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Edited...
Well the prelude is very much interesting.
I'm missing DMG sooo much...
I really like the concept.

AR's first meeting was just like the typical AR style..
Ridz called Armaan her angel.That was sooo cute.
Looking forward to the next updated eagerly.
You need not be nervous yaar.
You have written so well and I've already become your fan...
Now give the update quickly else we will give a dharna here itself samjhi...
love u jana
muah!!
Take care
Asma..
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 13 years ago
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reserved for now jaani. :) <3
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:'( Princess, I feel like crying... Thanks for making me feel so special, though I messed up today... But you'll always be the most special person to me. And am gonna miss you... loadzzz...
Editing my post on page 1.

Love you always,
Liashna
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Reserved post edited on page 2..

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