MN FF-Silent Talking || Suspended Note Page-8

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Hello All.!! 🤗

Okey. I m here with a MN FF , all thanks to my kheya!..😳..And obviously my first ff is dedicated to her only! ..😳..Guys , this is my first ff and I m very bad at expressing..so kindly bear with me. Please overlook my mistakes.

And kheya , as I promised you I m here with FF..😳..dedicated to you only! Hope you like it..😳..I m sorry and I love you.

thank you guys. 🤗

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Silent Talking

INDEX.

Chapter 1

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Chapter 1


It was 7 pm. I was sitting ALONE on footpath on busy road trying to share my sorrows and guilt with vehicles going with speed. But the speed of my tears were double than the cars! The cold wind was touching my tears weeping them away, spreading them on my cheeks. My spaces were going to fall down but who cares! I woke up from my dreamland by the sound of the vehicles on the road.

Again glancing around, I saw the sun setting. I laughed upon myself, "See, THE SUN OF MY LIFE is setting!" And now , my tears started flowing down with double speed. And the wind, the wind was playing with them!! " Awwwh..Seems like wind was making fun of me for not realizing earlier what she means to me! And now I m thinking about her when she has gone away from me, far away! "

Wiping them away, my heart asked the most confusing question ever " r u sure it is just a CRUSH!?? And the two enemies -heart and mind started fighting upon this question, thinking about my SPECIAL SOMEONE! THE ONE!

My whole body was shivering! I Caressed my one arm with other hand, in order to press on some warmth into my body, but alas! It was just NOT working! The one who was giving him warmth, just through her deep eyes only! And you just LOVE to feel the special warmth.

The one who make him feel confident just with flipping her long black eye-lashes ONCE in assuring way whenever he was nervous. And you just LOVE to have those glances.

The one whose love filled glances made his day! And you just LOVE to catch those whenever she threw upon you. The one whose sparkling eyes made him feel happy! And you just LOVE to be happy in her happiness.

The one whose teary eyes made his heart broken into million pieces! And you just LOVE to wipe those from her beautiful eyes.

The one whose dreamy eyes made him dream! And you LOVE to live her dreams.

The teasing eyes made him feel naughty! And you just LOVE to pass those smiles to her.

The one whose dove-shaped eyes always saying that I-M-THERE-FOR-YOU-FOREVER! And you just LOVE to see those wonderful pair of eyes, which always spoke volumes. Maybe you like them, may be you enjoy them, may be you adore them, may be you LOVE them.

Finally, the two enemies i.e. my heart and mind ended up being friends. Sigh. I LOVE HER.

Edited by -pearlyy- - 13 years ago
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NOTE :

i know guys , again a small part. but got time in busy schedule and thinking of starting it on diwali only. wishing you a very happy and sparkling diwali guys. stay safe.

p.s.- comments and criticism are most welcome.
Edited by -pearlyy- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow payal finally u started an ff...
luved it...🤗
*hugs*
congrats and continue soon...
m waiting for next part,..

luv
khushi...
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happy diwali
congrats for ur first ff
really beautifully written
thanks for the pm
do continue soon
waiting to read the next part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy diwali...congrats 4 ur ff...and realy thankz 4 d pm
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prnces thank u so much. I love u very much. *tight hug*
ff is mindblowing. I knew my prnces is best. Suru mein sad update? But i know u wil write happy moments too. Bcz my prncess cant see her kheya in tears. This is the 1st time someone do this for me. I love u prnces
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**Awesome...dii..😃 like it sooo much!!😃 luv u..🤗❤️**
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hey payal
congrats hun and Happy Diwali
wow beautiful start
lovelyyy
plz do cont it
thanx 4 PM
take care

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