MG OS: A Bittersweet, Beach Goodbye

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hope yah will like my long comment will edit whn I'm on lappie :) x

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Very detailed. ☺️ I even had problem reading certain parts because I have seriously vivid imagination and it was like watching a film. ☺️ But the OS is very well written Hetu.

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Hetu dear..I thought you were busy with xams..haha..

I couldnt stop myself from turning red reading this..
it was fantabulous..hehe

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Damn hetu☺️☺️
i didnt read coz u know its for over 18
but i can feel the hotness🤣

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Hi hetu
dear u posted it here
it's awesome, brilliant, beautiful, romantic, hot, passionate part
loved it
I loved this part and original one also
both r my fav
love u lots
rakhi

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

...😊

4 pm me dear..😃

4 ur new os...🥳

...👍🏼 4

ur those

updates...👏👏.. this updates really... me ... ⭐️⭐️ lots of ...🤗 lov,❤️ Tama P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕me also want encougement & appreciation dears... Note: guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕 me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update... but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Hello Dear ,

India-forums have always appreciated its fanfic writers and their various creations but there are certain terms and conditions that a public forum has to follow as per its code of conduct and this fanfic unfortunately does not fits to that code of conduct as its got some real adult content which is not suitable for a public forum ..

So as per rules ,we are extremely sorry but will hv to close this Fanfic ..hope u understand

Geet DT

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