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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful wonderful update!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. dis is interestin!
nups is changing!!!!
feelin jealous n all... gr8!!! sahi track pakda hai ji!!!😳
terrific writin kinzu!!!👏
Best of Luck 4 ur exms!👍🏼
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!nupur already accepted that she is falling for mayank...i liked this straight forwardness of their relationship...
i loved the jealous nupur!! ;)
cont soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ye tumhari meri baatein
Hamesha yun hi chalti rahe
Ye humari mulakatein
Hamesha yun hi chalti rahe
Beetein yun hi apne saare, din raat
Baaton se nikalthi rahe, naye baat
Phir wahi baatein le ke
Geet koi hum likhe
Jo dil ko, han sab ke dil ko choolein
Baatein suro mein yun hi pigalthi rahein
Baatein geetho mein yun hi dhalthi rahein

Ooo…ooo…ooo…
Na na na na..nana na na.. ooo…
Geethon mein huh humko
Khushi on se hum sajaade
Jo sune kahe woh hum se, gaana

Ye tumhari meri baatein
Hamesha yun hi chalti rahe
Ye humari mulakatein
Hamesha yun hi chalti rahe
Beetein yun hi apne saare, din raat
Baaton se nikalthi rahe, naye baat
Phir wahi baatein le ke
Geet koi hum likhe
Jo dil ko, han sab ke dil ko choolein
Baatein suro mein yun hi pigalthi rahein
Baatein geetho mein yun hi dhalthi rahein

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Posted: 13 years ago

hay...sry for my late late comment...

bt life is such a hell😡...cant take out a time for the forume...

and the concept ...n ...the fiction was tooo goood👏...

very diff from your other works 👍🏼...

n thanks for ur pms🤗 even if im not commenting regularly 😔...

~AmritaVasireddy😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
i lovd d update...
do cnt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Perfect update loved Nuour's honesty
verry good luck with ur terms
u'll do the best insha-ALLAH
thnx for the pm sis
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Posted: 13 years ago
im abs. loving this story kinza ! You seem like a student of english literature. Ur such a gifted writer. I love how vulnerable nupur is when all she really tries to do is build this outer shell that she knows breaks through when Mayank is around. Im loving ur ever so dynamic characters and im jumping with joy bc according to ur schedule, ur gonna update today. yayy ! haha, alritey its like 1 am in new york so im gonna go to bed. goodnight ! or rather, good morning for when you read this comment lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing

Totally hot n passionate

Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
short part again i know!! sorry guys

anyways, this update is a special dedication for my jiger .. annu ..
Happy birthday jiger.
Love uu!!


Chapter # 12

"the moment came again, not as before, but in a different form, I am jealous mayank, I can't see u with any other girl", nupur completed her sentence with a long tear flowing down her cheek and mayank held her arm and pulled her in a tight hug, "why do you always give her more importance then me", she sobbed and whispered lightly while mayank was rubbing her back, "I know it's stupid but I can't help mayank .. I seriously can't help .. ", she moved away, looking in his eyes, "I am heading towards dead ends .. right mayank?", she asked with horrified eyes and mayank just leaned to capture her lips in a soft kiss.

"you are heading towards open ways ..", he said, with a displaced breath and nupur closed her eyes and all the tears flowed down to drown in her lips.

She had almost forgotten the taste of these tears, last time she cried was maybe when she was in her 5th standard, when her orphanage warden had eaten her dinner and she had to sleep hungry.

"u trust me nupur?", mayank's voice brought her back from the trance. , "yes", she whispered and nodded slightly.

"then believe me that whatever you are doing leads to bliss", he pulled her close and rubbed her wet cheeks, "aur waise bhi, you are my wife, you have full right to be jealous of any other girl I talk with", chuckling, he kissed her cheek and nupur smiled slightly, "what was she saying?", she raised her eyes, and her voice started to fill with bitterness.

"she was just asking some academic help, I need to go the main city library with her in an hour", he said and nupur's eyes widened, "you are not going anywhere!", declaring it in a stubborn voice, she hugged him, hiding her face in his shoulder and mayank hugged back tight.

'I need to go sweetheart, she needs help"

'and I need you!", she raised her head and glared while mayank smiled, "I know you need me, but I am waiting for the moment when you'll want me"

"it's one and the same thing mayank!"

"no it isn't", he pulled her close, "zarorat aur khwaish alag hoti hain nupur, need is of something which removes the gaps of life, but want is for something which enhances life", he smiled and confused, nupur just stared.

"don't look so confused", he chuckled and kissed her cheek, "it's simple logic, right now you just need me, just like ishita cannot choose a suitable book for her exam preparation without my help, similarly you can't smile until I am around, but I am waiting for the moment when you'll wait for me and think that now your smile is worth and complete"., he kissed her lightly again and nupur sighed,

"whatever mayank!, I don't understand all of this", she opened his grip, "I am coming with you and this is it", she was about to turn when mayank pulled her back and hugged her from back, crawling his arms around her waist, "you are NOT coming with me", he kissed her ear and nupur frowned, "kyun mayank?, I need to ..

"shsshhh" ,he whispered huskily and nupur felt all her protests going weak when his lips started showering kisses on her neck, " you are going to wait for me at home like a good girl and then when I return after meeting ishita and my other clients, we will spend some quality , typical hubby ' wifey type times", he nipped her neck and sighing nupur turned in his arms, "this is not fair mayank, " she pouted with her huge eyes starting to moisten again.

"this is completely fair princess, I don't want you to develop an obsession for me", he leaned on her ear and bit it lightly, "I want you to love me .. I want you to want me", he whispered, kissing her ear and nupur closed her eyes, but the very next moment, mayank's grip over her waist vanished and on opening her eyes she saw him heading towards the main door and just before going outside, he turned and passed her a smile, a smile which told re enforced his words, his sentence started echoing in her mind,

"I want you to love me, I want you want me", but this time his eyes said this with an addition, "just like me .."

Chapter 13 - Page 71

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago

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