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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

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Thanks Di u included my poetry in this beautiful update
Hmm... I like brij he is a good bro he understands that his sis is actually wasting her life due to that jerk..yes piggy does not like this Maan he is a coward what does he want from geet
he thinks that he hates her...he does not like her presence then fine na let her get settled with someone who will realize her importance in his life why r u getting so restless...
poor geet...maan bechain hai sunkar khud pareshan baithi hai
Piggy ka suggession sunlo geet maan does not deserve u... u r a gem listen to your family forget that stupid
A poem for explaining Maan's restlessness
" Nafrat k aag mein jal raha hoon
Har jazbaat kar ehsaas ko bhula chuka hoon
Uski jhalak se bhi takleef hothi hai
Har hawa ka jhoka jo usse chukar gusre uss jhoke se bhi nafrat hothi hai
Barso ki khwahish thi k wo mujhse dur ho jaaye
Toh phir kyun uske mehez dur hojaane k baat se dil se aah nikal rahi hai
Ek aawaz chheek cheek kar keh rahi hai rok lo usse rok lo usse
Aakhir kya lagthi hai wo meri...humare beech ye kaunsa anjaana rishta hai
Kaash main kabhi ye samaj paata toh shayad zindagi ki iss uljan ko suljha pata"
love u Di
urs -Piya (Piggy)

Hi Dear Piggy,
Thanks again for a wonderful analysis dear...
Many more sentiments still to come in this FF
Also Dear again so so many thaks for wonderful poem...
Beautifull poem... very apt...
Love U
urs Sheru
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ana56

the update was awesome dear

and wht the hell is wrong with maaan
can't he differentiate the difference between hate and love?

continue soon dear

and let me say u r going pretty well
all the best for the rest of the story dear

Thanks Dear for liking it...
Maan doesn't hate her but 1st it was his need to stay away from he now his ego that why he gets affected from her... makes his restless and it comes out from his mouth that he hate her... he hates her for affecting him
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Posted: 13 years ago
anu,
amazing, simply amazing...
update soon, please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update luvd it
y cnt maan jus accept is feelins
fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
waiting for next update
plz pm me
tellyme thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet mamtha

wonderful update

hope now atleast maan undersatnd his feeling
pls continue can't wait for next part

Thanks Dear...
Yeah Maan will be a jerk unless he realises hs feelings... he is strugling between his feelings and his Ego
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

lovely part dear

so maan still hate her
cant he think about his feelings
hope in next update
dadimaa say about his feelings to her

No Dear... he actually does't hate her but he becomes helpless infront of her which he can't bear and it comes out as Hate...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di not fair aapne mere comment ka reply nahi diya
Piggy is 😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Di not fair aapne mere comment ka reply nahi diya

Piggy is 😭😭😭😭😭

aisa Kabhi ho sakta hai...
Can I dare do that... Itni himmat meri
See here
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear...waitin 4 next part...

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