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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: anita_21492

That was awesome!!! It seems JP and OP are not scared of arnav anymore!!!!



Thanks! Haha why should they be scared since they're already friends with the future Mrs ASR, He can't do anything to them once he's married he'll be a Joru Ka Ghulam :P

Originally posted by: malluangel

k. so. OP and JP are officially my mostest favoritest peoples rights nows. :P



I love them too!

Originally posted by: sarach

wowww..just woww.omg...loved it..amart op and jp..its so goood and different.would love to c them as cupid



Thanks.

Originally posted by: -Gautami

awsum👏..luvd it..plz continue dis..n write more OS..ur excellent writer..n tanx 4 d pm!!😊



Aww thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

wow, what brains JP and OP have...they understood what Arnav and Khushi could not make sense of...loved the OS very much...thanks for the pm



Anybody with half a brain (ie not Anjali!) would be able to figure it out once they've seen the two of them together.

Originally posted by: _mahi_

oh my god😲.. that was brilliant nayika👏👏.. the best OS i have ever read👍🏼.. seriously😉.. kudos to you for your creativity⭐️.. excellent description sweety😳.. i so want you to continue on with this😛.. but its upto you ofcourse hehe😆.. keep it up dear😃.. n thanks for the pm sweetness...😛



Oh wow thank you so much, that really means a lot :D!

Originally posted by: aadyakali

What a refreshing os, zillion thanks for bringn' a smile on my face...



Thank you, I'm glad I could make you smile!

Originally posted by: mrs.luvjaysean

o h m y g o d :| YOU should be the writer of this show! goshh, this is excellence! :$ i love it i love it & I LOVE IT! can you pretty please with a cherry on top write more?! i love your writing man.. absoltely brilliant. 😳 btww i am shilpa!



Haha, i wish they would hire me, I'd get to meet Barun and stare at him in person rather than through my TV and laptop! I'm Shuheda! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
😆😆😆😆 I just love OP and JP! They're so funny and smart, especially at the end

This is one of the cutest os's I've ever read! Please do continue! Loved this line: When Khushi didn't move he added guiltily 'I promise I won't break this one.'
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: pri12

niceee...2nd part v updte kr do...aapki imagination ki to kya baat hai...good one



Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: Shina_srkfan

hey wow!! dis is chwo chweet :) pl continue!



Thank you :)



Thanks

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

OMG this is genius 🤣


Is there an OP-JP appreciation thread, anyone? 😆

Brilliant :)

xoxo
Aanya



Haha, if there isn't there should be one! Thanks

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Nayika.. Amazing OS.. You should continue this..😊


Seriously it is good and funny to see Om and Jai Prakash in full action..
Their conversation was so true - "They would have been shouting if they hate each other"😆

Arnav and Kushi's part was so perfect.. Awww.. Both in single dark room.. 😍

Thanks for the PM dear!!



Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! I will definitely be writing at least one more part :)

Originally posted by: dyhardfan

lol this is great... OP and JP playing match-making👏 thanks swti😊



Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: appy2011

very nice nayika...thoroughly enjoyed reading it 😊



Thanks!

Originally posted by: monsi08

Ha ha ... funny and cute... 😆 you have great imagination Nayika 😃

Cheers,
Monsi



Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
Edited by nayika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

😆 I just love OP and JP! They're so funny and smart, especially at the end

This is one of the cutest os's I've ever read! Please do continue! Loved this line: When Khushi didn't move he added guiltily 'I promise I won't break this one.'



Aww thank you so much :D! And yes Arnav should feel guilty for breaking her phone! We could have had so many amazingly cute phone conversations by now if he hadn't.

Originally posted by: Haniibee

Man!

Please continue!!
I LOVE OM AND JAI PRAKASH!!!
What a mast idea!!!!
If only...we could actually see this happen!
You know what! I was thiking just now that what if there us an epi where Khushi and Arnav are sitting next to each other with everyone else eating dinner and something touches Khushi's foot so she whispers to Arnav to stop and we get Arnav's trademark W*F expression!
And then everyone looks at the two because they are having a silent argument and then Khushi looks under the table to realise it is actually a mouse so she jumps onto Arnav's lap!
Hai!!!! If only...
BTW! You may write an OS on this idea *wink wink*
Thanks for the PM!



Aww thank you so much! :D I think once everything in the show goes serious we'll need them for comedy purposes rather than Mamiji's brand of comedy :P

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Ah Nayika!!!

I'm loving OP and JP for this!!!
Fantastic hun...I loved the storeroom setting. It may sound strange, but I found it kind of romantic!!
Thanks for the PM deary.
😊



Thanks! Well you know Khushi and Arnav in the dark, only moonlight... and onions and mice. Yep definitely romantic :P

Originally posted by: Juicee_Sushie

Fantastic start 👏!!!!!!

Loved it, I really hope you continue with it especially as it has started straight away with a scene of them becoming close!!!!
Please update soon!!



Thank you so much! Hope you like the next part too!

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

That was amazing!!

You are going to continue, right?



Thank you! I am indeed :)

Originally posted by: win7

Love it. Love the idea of the servants machinatinc.



Haha, thanks!

Originally posted by: Zbegum

WOW!! brill part! woo arnav and khushi are on the move, lololol



Thanks, glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: luvU2

wow you people here write alot.i am surely reading this one only because the title caught my attention.keep it up👍🏼



It's the magic of Arnav/Khushi we all want to write stories about them! Thanks



Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
So glad you all liked Part 1. Hope you like this part just as much! Make sure to comment and like :D

Part 2


Arnav suddenly realised exactly where his hand was and where they were. He pulled his hand back at the exact same time that Khushi moved away from him obviously having come to her own realisation about the situation.


He stood up abruptly and tried the door again as if it would have somehow magically unlocked itself in the past 10 minutes. 'OP! JP! Where is everyone?'


'Om, I don't care what you say, I'm opening it!' Jai Prakash struggled with Om Prakash who was holding on to his arm and unlocked the door. 'Sorry, Chote Sahib, we didn't know you were inside.'


'Where the hell were you? We've been locked in there so long and now you come? Don't think that...' Arnav stopped as Khushi practically ran past looking at the floor and went out of the kitchen.


He gave OP and JP a severe look before storming out of the kitchen himself making sure to go in the opposite direction to Khushi.


'See look what you've done. You've just made things worse Om!'


Om Prakash thought for a second before speaking, 'no, I'm not wrong. I know what I saw. We just have to try again'


'What? No! Please, don't do anything else. You're going to get us fired for certain.' Jai Prakash pleaded although he could see a familiar smile on Om's face that he recognised as a bad omen for himself.


'Look Jai Prakash, do you want Chote Sahib to marry Lavanyaji? No, right? So you have to help me!'


***


Arnav sat up in bed, finally accepting that he wouldn't be able to sleep any time soon. He kept thinking about Khushi and the storeroom. He couldn't understand exactly what had happened. What had he been thinking, telling her about his heartbeats like that? What had he meant? And what did she think he'd meant? And then running off like that. Was she embarrassed? Angry? What?


***


'Finally. I think that's perfect' Om Prakash smiled as he admired his handiwork. It had taken him and Jai Prakash three hours but he was finally satisfied with the result.


Jai Prakash only looked on grumpily, 'does this mean I can go to sleep now?'


***


Khushi waited at the door nervously. She didn't know what to expect today, she wasn't completely sure she understood the events of yesterday. Arnav had first taken blame for the vase she broke, then he'd given her the silver coins she'd wanted and then he'd held her hand and asked if she felt the same 'dhak dhak' he did. Of course she did, was that even a question he had to ask? Couldn't he hear it every time she went near him. But then... she'd never been able to hear his heart. Why would his heart beat faster when she was around?


'Khushiji!' Om Prakash smiled widely as he opened the door. Arnav had just cornered him and asked him about telling Khushi about the coins when he'd heard the door and made his escape. Now he'd just have to avoid Arnav for a couple more hours and everything would be fine. 'We're so glad you're here early, we need you to make Jalebis for Diwali.'


Khushi nodded and plastered a fake smile on her face. 'Please, please make Arnavji go to work today please,' she made a silent prayer as she followed Om Prakash to the kitchen.


***


'Jai Prakash, take these upstairs to Chote Sahib's room. And make sure to say Khushiji sent it.' Om Prakash handed the tray to Jai Prakash ignoring the apprehensive look on the other man's face.


'You're going to get us both killed or fired, you know that right?' Jai Prakash however took the tray. He did want the same outcome as Om Prakash however he wasn't convinced about his methods.


***


Arnav knew Khushi was avoiding him but he was glad for once. He wasn't sure what he would say to her if he did see her, what was she expecting? Was she even expecting anything?


'Khushiji sent this for you.'


Arnav turned his head automatically but he waited until Jai Prakash had gone before examining the contents on the tray. His vase had been fixed. Sure there were a few places where you could see the joins but it was practically as it had been before. Arnav instinctively picked up one of the jalebis that were also on the tray and bit into it as he tried to figure out what Khushi had meant by fixing his vase for him.


Khushi knocked timidly at the door and waited for it to open. Om Prakash had told her Arnav was calling her in his room and she bit her nails in nervousness and anticipation of what he might have to say to her. He opened the door and Khushi just stared. Arnav was munching on a jalebi with an anxious expression on his face which she imagined to be similar to the one she always wore when eating jalebis to clear her mind.


'Khushi? What are you doing here?' He looked confused but he still moved aside to allow her to come into the room and closed the door behind them.


Khushi saw the vase immediately along with the plate of jalebis next to it and went over to look at the vase. 'You fixed it? Oh my god, I'm so glad! I was so worried that I broke it and you didn't even say anything. Why did you tell Anjaliji that you broke it? You know you should have just shouted at me because then it would be over, rather than me spending all night thinking about it.'


Arnav almost choked on the jalebi he was eating, 'you spent all night thinking about a vase? I couldn't sleep because of you and you spend all night thinking about a stupid vase?!' He hadn't planned on shouting at her and immediately regretted it as she started to look scared and nervous. He was about to apologise when she picked up one of the jalebis herself and began biting into it in the same way she always bit her nails.


He suppressed the urge to laugh at her cuteness and adopted a straight face before asking 'you mean you didn't fix my vase? But Jai Prakash said...and yesterday... the letter... and you knew about the coins... What the? Oh someone is getting fired today!'


Khushi swallowed down the jalebi as she heard him speak and stepped closer to Arnav, 'fired? You're firing me because you couldn't sleep? That's not my fault! Why were you even thinking about me?'


'What? Khushi I'm not going to fire you. And I didn't spend all night thinking about you!'


***


'See, I told you! He's going to fire us!' Jai Prakash put his head into his hands. They were sitting on the stairs above the poolside and with the French doors open could just about hear everything that was being said. Especially when Arnav was shouting.


'That's what you're concentrating on? Didn't you hear? He said he thought about her all night!' Om Prakash would have jumped for joy if there had been any space and also if there wasn't the very real danger of tumbling down the stairs and ruining all his hard work.


Part 3: Here

Edited by nayika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Hahahahah!!!!!
Great update!
I loved OmPrakash and Jai Prakash today! It seems that Om Prakash is th brave one and Jai Prakash is the futoo types!!
I loved the way both Arnav and Khushi were munching on the jalebis and hahahaha the way that Arnav revealed to Khushi that he couldn't sleep because he was thinking about her!!!
If your going to continue this please do!!!
I LOVE IT!
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
omg awesome job!!!
the update was fabulous!!
thank you so much for the pm!!
really enjoyed reading it!!
update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Haniibee

Hahahahah!!!!!

Great update!
I loved OmPrakash and Jai Prakash today! It seems that Om Prakash is th brave one and Jai Prakash is the futoo types!!
I loved the way both Arnav and Khushi were munching on the jalebis and hahahaha the way that Arnav revealed to Khushi that he couldn't sleep because he was thinking about her!!!
If your going to continue this please do!!!
I LOVE IT!
Thanks for the PM!



Thanks! Glad you liked it. Personally I like to think of JP as sensible and OP as more reckless rather than brave :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: littlemoi

omg awesome job!!!

the update was fabulous!!
thank you so much for the pm!!
really enjoyed reading it!!
update soon!!



Yay! I'm glad you liked it. It felt a bit short and lacking in action to me, but I hope everyone else will like it too :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

yayyy another part.. m happpy😃... as sooon as i saw your pm .. i started grinning😃 lol😆

it was great nayika👏👏.. i loved the update😊... haha om prakash is really clever😉.. isnt he?😆 doing all he can by putting his job at the stake to make Arnav's life beautiful⭐️.. awww😛.. n our jai prakash is sooo cute😳.. haha he was like😆.. can i go to sleep now hhaha.. 😆awesome update dear👏👏
keep it up n thanks for the pm..😳

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