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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Waiting Dear...
missing you and your update...
kahaaan hooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waw!congrats on the new thread!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
hope yr presentation went well..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you friends for your patience and wishes for my presentation. I had a long day but still doing the update. Please excuse any mistakes as I am really tired and my focus is missing.

Chapter 88 – Dusht Danav ka Pyaar

Geet – "Babaji…kuch karo inka…"

"main kuch karta hoon" mimicked Geet in Maan's voice

"kya karenge yeh….this resort is 2 hrs away from Delhi….even nearest city will be 30 minutes away….raat ke 9:00 baje kya karne wale hain…Dusht Danav kahin ke?"

Nisha just tried to calm her down.

Meanwhile Maan went to the manager and requested him to open the in-house saree shop in the resort (it is a 5 star Oberoi resort with in house restaurants, bakery and other shops)

Manager- "Sorry Sir, I really want to help you….as a matter of fact I am embarrassed that Dr Khurana is asking me for help but I can't do anything. Security of this resort is centralized and if I open the shop, it will trigger alarms and there will be immense chaos"

Maan just nodded - "I understand…that's ok…by the way this resort is part of Oberoi group directly….right"

Manager – "Yes Sir"

Maan thanked him and walked a little away and called someone.

Maan – "Good Evening Sir, this is Dr Khurana here….Sorry to disturb you so late in the night"

OP – "Dr Khurana…what a surprise….it's ok….but you calling me at this time…I hope everything is ok"

Man – "Actually Sir….I needed a small help from you"

He summarized his problem.

OP – "Don't worry Maan…give me 15 minutes and shop will be open for you"

Maan thanked him and left for the shop.

After 15 minutes manager came and apologized profusely. He got the shop opened.

Maan – "Please show me something in red"

But after seeing the sarees Maan got confused to the actual shade of red. He tried to picture Geet's blouse but to no avail.

He finally sighed and looked around the shop. He noticed a black saree with red diamantes. He loved it in first instance and bought the same.

Manager – "Sir, I can't take money from you…consider it as a gift"

But Maan did not agree and paid for the saree and sprinted to the room where Geet sat impatiently and angry. Nisha had left and only Juhi sat there equally angry at her stubborn son.

They both pounced on him as he entered.

Juhi – "Had hoti hai kisi cheez ki Maan….humne saree dryer se sukha di hai and we are going down"

Maan – "Sorry Mom, but there is no way Geet is going down in that saree."

Saying this he gave the package to Geet which they had failed to notice. Geet tentatively took the package and gasped at the beautiful saree.

"I hope it will go with your blouse…err…I mean accessories" Maan added embarrassed to talk about her blouse in front of his mom.

Juhi – "Wow!!! How the hell did you manage it"

Maan – "I got it from hotel shop"

Geet – "But manager refused when dad asked him"

Maan- "I know, but I had operated Mr Oberoi's son few months back and happened to store his number in my phone"

Tears welled in Geet's eyes – "But you never ask for favors from your patients"

Maan shrugged – "Yes….but this was an emergency and it's not like I asked for any materialistic favor"

Geet hugged Maan as she was overwhelmed. She knew he bent his principles just for her.

Juhi patted her to calm her down. "Good Job Maan…ab tu ise tayiar karke niche lekar aa….main chalti hoon"

Saying this Juhi left giving them some privacy. She knew Geet was getting emotional and on top of it, fact was that it was Naintara's wedding.

Maan wiped her tears – "Tumhein kya hua hai Mishti….pregnant to Pari hai….aaj kal kuch zayda nahin rone lagi ho tum"

Geet hit his arm playfully – "It's not my fault….aap kuch zayda hi pyaar karne lag pade ho"

Maan cupped her face –"Tayiaar ho jao Geet…nahin to main kar doon….waise I don't mind…I am sure your dad and bro are quite busy right now"

Geet's cheeks burned as Maan winked finishing the sentence.

Geet – "Behave Dr Khurana….I will go and change"

Saying this Geet started to go to bathroom but Maan kept his hand on her waist and pulled her back.

Maan – "Mat jao na Jaan…main help karta hoon"

Saying this he nuzzled her neck from behind where as the hand on her waist pulled out her soiled saree. Geet arched back into him as she felt his fingers caressing her skin just above the skirt. Maan angled in further and kissed her while tracing her belly chain.

Geet felt in heaven as his fingers played her like an instrument. Maan left her and sat down on his knees turning her around to face her front. He placed butterfly kisses on navel – "Geet….37 days to our marriage….promise me that you will let me do anything I want for the first night and honeymoon as after that anyways I will be pakka joru ka gulam"

He looked up and Geet saw mischief in his eyes. She just nodded incapacitated by sweet torture dished out by her darling fianc.

Maan took the saree and put an end on the side. Geet gaped as she felt his finger dipping slightly inside. He wrapped the saree once and then gave another end to Geet to size up pallu. He then made pleats with the remaining fabric and tucked it in. Geet again held her breath as she felt his hot breath and warm fingers playing havoc with her senses. He then got up and wrapped the pallu properly. Geet closed her eyes feeling his each and every movement.

Maan kissed his cheek and breathed in – 'You look amazingly sexy…aaj to lagta hai Dr Khurana gaya"

Geet hugged him tight hiding herself in his arms. Maan laughed –"Meri Mishti mujhse sharmake mujh mein hi chup rahi hai"

Geet smiled shyly and started to touch up her makeup. Maan stopped her hand as she took the lipper. He kissed her gingerly squeezing her into himself. Geet rested her head on his chest when they parted for air. She was worried about him facing Naintara.

Geet asked tentatively- "Maan…aap thik ho na?"

Maan smiled – "Mishti….I am happy and a contented man as my love is in my arm…I really give a damn about anything else…ab is se pehle ki meri niyat badle….tum jaldi tayaar ho jao"

Geet nodded and placed a kiss on his cheek. She applied her makeup and left to the hall linking her arms with the man who was her God.

As they entered the hall, Nisha and Juhi came closer to her. Nisha –"Acha ho gaya Beta tum aa gaye….time ho gaya hai" She stopped in front of Geet who was blushing hard. Geet looked elegant and beautiful and no body could make out that the blouse was not designed for this saree.

Juhi came closer and patted her head lovingly – "Bahut sundar lag rahi hai"

Rest of the evening passed uneventfully and somewhere everyone was glad that this chapter was over from their lives.

Precap1 – Crashing World

Precap2 - "I am not getting married….call this marriage off….I don't want to"

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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Yay!!! I'm first!!!!! 😆😆😆
Awesome update!!!!
Maan is sooo sweet... precaps look interesting
Continue soon and thanxs for the pm
Saba xxx
Edited by Maaneet4everXxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Please don't give us shocks :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Nice update
Loved Maan's love
Precap look lik its for NT
I dnt want her to seprate them agn
Abhi toh mile hai dono😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Superb update
But the Precap's really scary
What twists are you planning now?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Oh, from ur update I feel NT is again going to try her luck to seperate Maaneet and marry him. But it may also be a leap and this si Geet talking. Whatever happens, plz don't let NT succeed (as if I need to tell you this😉)
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
precap kinda scares mee =/
hope nothin bad happes! :(
continue soon
xx

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