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Posted: 13 years ago
again sorry for replying late😭 actually mera net bhaut promblem kar raha hai conect hi ahi hota isliye and about ue update it was just 👏👏👏👏👏👏 plz tell me the raj of ur writing that how could u write so mindblowig plz maf kar dena annd pm me next time also😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
very...nice... i am not tired if... commenting again and again...
soon they will become do dil ek jaan???

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so much people .. 🤗
okay so i KNOW that the length is very short, but i didn't want to break my pattern on alternative day updates, it actually makes me restless and i hate disorganized schedule 😕 .. and for a week or so u'll be getting short updates bcz i have my mid terms coming up .. hope u all co operate ..

and lastly i want to say something to my NMG!! .. i miss you jigers .. ❤️


Chapter # 11

The song, lyrics, aura and her tangled thoughts made nupur much more intimate that night. Her nearness, closeness, touch and feel had turned vulnerable all of a sudden. Mayank didn't fail to notice that unlike every other night, it was not love making ' it felt like making of love.

Nupur actually wanted to achieve something more than carnal pleasures, something near the spiritual completeness from mayank.

"You don't seem my nupur", mayank whispered, playing with her messed up hair, and smiling she cuddled more to him, "hmm, will u kindly explain YOUR nupur", she asked, placing arms around his neck and mayank leaned on her ear, "my nupur doesn't has a beating heart.

His voice penetrated in the deepest chamber of her heart and she moved a bit away with amazed expressions, waiting for him to elaborate, "I actually feel your heart beat tonight", he softly caressed her cheek and with a displaced breath she closed her eyes, "something happened right?", he asked planting feather kisses on her eyes and nupur slowly moved away, 'yes!, you seem lovable to me tonight", she said slowly, chewing her words and mayank smiled wider, now it was his turn to wait for elaborations.

"today u felt like something maybe my heart secretly desired, I actually wanted to love you for a moment", she said, with their eyes locked and mayank leaned further, "and that moment ended?'

"yes", she said plainly and observed the twinkle fading in his eyes, "but it left marks", she added with the same sincerity and saw the sparkle returning, "and you think the moment will come back?', he asked.

"it will, I know, and what I fear is that it will come with much more intensity and will come never to leave again", she breathed deep and closed her eyes, "you are afraid from the beauty of life", he outlined her collar bone and she opened her eyes, "because I have witnessed the worst of life"

"nothing is worst in life, those are just phases, they come and go", he said politely, but with determination.

"yeah", she broke in a little laugh, "a 20 year phase in an orphanage was a bit too long, what say?", she asked with bitter eyes and sighing mayank pulled her close, "I don't think so!, some girls spent their whole lives in brothels, compared to them your phase in a respectable orphanage was nothing", he said plainly and nupur raised her brows, "hmm, alright, agreed my lord, would you like commenting on those girls who live a never ending comforting phase in mansions?", she passed him a crook smile and he smiled back affectingly, "you also lived in a mansion right?, were u happy?

No doubt he is the best goddamn lawyer of the city. He leaves you speechless. Nupur lowered her eyes and was thinking about what to speak, when he was kissed on the cheek, "I got the answer, moving further,,

"mayank..", she placed her fingers on his lips, "can we postpone this whole moralistic talk till morning, it's quite uncool to discuss ethics in this environment", she winked and smiling mayank kissed her.

Although, he wanted to talk, he wanted to make her realize how complicated she was, how evasive she was, and most importantly, how wrong she was, but for the time being he agreed to her and showered his soft tender love physically, because this was the only medium through which she was accepting love currently.

**

Nupur had downloaded the last night song in her cell and was constantly smiling at the mobile screen, "I have fallen in love with this song, isn't it beautiful", she asked excitedly and mayank chuckled, "the song is beautiful or the lines are beautiful?"

"lines are a part of the song", she glared.

"maybe, but these lines seem to be a part of your heart", he sighed and nupur just shrugged her shoulders, "stop throwing pick up lines mayank", she huffed and holding her from her wrists he pinned her against the kitchen door, "what the ..", she was left breathless with this sudden act, "first you stop passing me those love filled looks", he smiled mischievously and nupur felt her cheeks boiling up.

It was the first time she couldn't decide upon an equally witty remark to his answer, and what was alarming was her cheeks were turning pink and she could feel heat emitting out from them, "my breakfast will burn, leave me", she replied lowering her head and the grip turned strong, "and what about my heart, which will turn to ashes if you move away", he sighed and nupur giggled on his dramatic sigh, "you have turned quite filmy", she said, resuming her style,

'and you have turned quite beautiful", he moved closer and nupur closed her eyes in anticipation of the kiss but they were interrupted with a mobile ring.

"what timings!", mayank huffed and nupur also frowned, 'let me disconnect ..", he said taking out his mobile but his words fell short seeing the name flashing on the screen.

ISHITA.

Umm, nupur I guess it's important ..", he was about to attend the call when nupur held his hands, "you were supposed to disconnect mayank", her voice was demanding.

Mayank looked in his eyes and smiled, "I was, but we can carry on later, ishita always calls when it's something important', he kissed her cheek and went outside but his affectionate "hello ishita", did reach her ears.

She clenched her fists and took a deep breath, she could sniff her toasts almost on the verge on burning, but she didn't feel like turning them. She went to the stove and instead of lowering; she switched the flames to full, until the toasts became doppelgangers to pieces of coal.

"nupur I .. ", mayank came back but stopped short in her tracks seeing the fumes filing up the kictehn, "nupur what the hell!!", he shouted and switched off the flames and turned on the exhaust, 'have u lost it!, what were u doing?"

"my heart turned to a block of coal seeing you talk to ishita", she said slowly and inspte of being so used to her honesty and bluntness, mayank was lost, mostly not because what she said, but because her eyes were brimming with tears.

"the moment came again, not as before, but in a different form, I am jealous mayank, I can't see u with any other girl"

Chapter 12 - Page 64

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😃
we miss u too🤗
Edit:

WOW Fantu Nupz let out her feelings so sweetly n cutely wid the hint of a little disappointment in her voice, maybe coz she had a control over herself not to go for all this love thing n found losing it for Mayank😳

i think Nupz is getting her everything in Mayank...they deserve each other, though selfish, Nupur is not bad at all...rather she is trying hard to be😆

n Mayank BYGOD...the way u described Nupz noticing him in the last update n the song n the whole aura n Nupz realisation slowly...that was a PERFECT update👏⭐️

am Loving it! "Mc Donald's style"😆

all the best for ur papers😃🤗
Edited by Payal-15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just love this update..
thnks for giving it...short or long an update is require u know ur an addiction...ur words are
amzing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just love nupurs honesty. she can express so easily! its a blessing actually. cause when you are complicated, it gets almost impossible to express the things that actually matters to you though you can be total honest about everything else.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update API...
i loved it lodsss...
beautifully written as usual...
i sooo loved d way Nupur expressed her feelings easily...
dat was a cute n ROMANTIC part...
evn i was lil sad wen she said dat moment ended...
bt m glad dat she admitted dat it will come back nvr to leave...
i love her straight forwardness...
n i sooo loved d last part...
it was awesome...
i loved it to d core...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗


ps: ALL THE BEST to my both APIs...👍🏼
i know U n my Mehak Api will rock...😳
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

nic update truly awesum ..

nupur infact also don't knw wat she actually feels 4 mayanks
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update kinza-
NUps is changing and im loving it

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Posted: 13 years ago
Express.. Finally the truth is out.. and Nupur's feelings are coming out.. U know wht I loved a few sentences a lot in the update.. They conveyed so much.. it felt like making of love .. this sentence has a very deep meaning
And I toltally loved the small talk MN had..
Overall update is FAB Expresss.. you are missed equally perhaps more 😊

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