MN-FF 4th update*Usey Dhundti Rehti Hun* part: 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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IN A PARK, NUPUR IS SITTING IN A BENCH...ALL ALONE... N THINKING ABOUT DAT
PASSED TIME... SEARCHING DAT PART OF HER LIFE, WHICH SUDDEN DISAPPEARED N MADE HER INCOMPLETE...! ABOUT DAT OLD DAyS WHICH CAN'T COME AGAIN...! NEVER...!

FLASH BACK
NUPUR TAKES AN ADMISSION IN *EXCEL COLLEGE*..SHE WASN'T ALL ALONE THERE... SHE HAS A CHILDHOOD FRIEND *GUNJAN* WITH HER...BOTH SHARES ALMOST EVERYTHING ABOUT THEMSELVES...NO MATTER WHAT...!
THERE SHE MEETS A GUY... A VERY LIVELY, FUN LOVING N HANDSOME, NAMED *MAYANK*... WHEN MAYANK LOOKS HER, HE FINDS SOME ATTRACTION IN HER... AS SHE IS ONE OF THE BEAUTIFUL GIRL IN THE COLLEGE... UNLIKE OTHER GIRLS WHO R NOT DAT MUCH DECENT LIKE HER... SHE WAS TACITURN, DECENT N INNOCENT...!
MAYANK GOES TO HER N STARTS CONVO:

MAYANK: UMMM... EXCUSE ME...
NUPUR: YES...
M: TM YAHAN NAEE AAYEE HO?
N: JEE
M: IN SECTION A...?
N: JEE
M: KIA YES-JEE???? AUR KUCH BOLNA NAI AATA TMHE?
N: EXCUSE ME... MAI APKO JAANTI TAK NAI UPPER SE BILAWAJA BAT KARHE HO, SHUKER MANAO ITNA BHI JAWAB DEDIA WARNA IRADA TOH AP K EXCUSE KO REJECT KER K CHALE JANE KA THA...
M: 😆BAAP REY...! I WAS WRONG.. TMHE TOH YES-JEE K ELAWA BHI BOHOttt KUCH BOLNA AATA HAI...! HAAYYYEEE... 😊
NUPUR'S ANGER JUST GONE IN A MOMENT, N A SWEET SMILE COMES ON HER FACE... SHE WALKED OUT...
MAYANK 2 HIMSELF: KOI ITNA PYAARA KAISE HOSAKTA HAI...NOT LIKE OTHER GIRLS JO LARKON SE HI CHIPKII REHTI HAIN N UN K PEECHE PAGAL HOTI HAIN... SHE IS JUST PERFECT...!
NUPUR N GUNJAN R NEIGHBOURS AS WELL... NUPUR GOES AT GUNJAN'S PLACE ALMOST EVERYDAY...! ONE DAY, SHE SAW MAYANK THERE...!

GUNJAN: HEY NUPUR... TM YAHAN... MEET HIM... HE IS MY COUSIN *MAYANK*...
NUPUR: HMMM... HI 😊 (DONT WANNA LET GUNJAN KNOWS DAT SHE ALREADY MET HIM IN COLLEGE)
MAYANK: HEY NUPUR... MUJHE NAI PATA THA TM YAHAN AJAOPGI MERA PEECHA KARTE HUE... ITNA ACHA LAG GAYA THA TMHE MAI COLLEGE MAI... 😉 (TEASING HER)
G: TM AIK DUSRE SE MIL CHUKE HO...???😊
N TO M: EXCUSE ME MR... YEH MERI FRIEND KA GHAR HAI N MAI YAHAN ALMOST ROZ HI AATI HN... PATA NAI APNE APKO KAHAN KA HERO SAMAJHTE HO...
M: AREY...AREY... MADAM JEE I WAS JUST KIDDING... OR TM TOH KHAANE KO HI PARDH GAIII MUJHE... BEECHAARA MAI... 😆
MAYANK N GUNJAN STARTS LAUGHING ON THIS...NUPUR COULDN'T MAINTAIN HER ANGER N ATTITUDE...N STARTS SMILING TOO... N MAYANK...??? FORGET 2 LAUGH... N JUST LUKING DAT BEAUTIFUL ANGEL SMILING...!


WILL CONTINUE SOON...!
NEED UR FEEDBACKS...! 😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful start dear
loved amaynk nupur convo
very sweet.
keep it up
and pl try to use small latter
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice strt
do write soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good start dear would love to read plzz do pme
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sorry the double post

Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice dear...

please do pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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2nd episode...!

At gunjan's place, they r sitting 2gether n taking tea... gunjan n mayank both r very talkative...
they r jus talkng n nupur is listening them n there is a smile in her face...!
G: mayank aj itne time bad tu mere ghar aya n wo b itne ache maukey per jab nupur b agai...
chalo isi bahane tm logon ko interact hone ka mauka milgaya... she is my dearest frnd as u r my
dearest cousin...!
M: han bas aj meri kismat achi thi jO mai agaya, pata nai kia sochker... warna tere ghar ana...
impossible... bht pakati hai tu 😆 (ws teasing her)
G: awww :O dekh toh kaisa hai... aik toh itna acha acha bola tere bare mai upper se... jaO mai kattiii (wd fake sad face)
M: are meriii shweet c sis mai toh mazaaak karha tha na...samajhti nai gadhi
(nupur was watching them... n after 2 convo wd him, she finds him really good nOw, atlast... clean hearted n sweet)
G to M: han han bas rehne dey... 😛 (then she luks at nupur n say) nupur tm yahan bas hame
dekhne ayee ho...? wese toh itna bolti ho aj mayank k samne kia hgaya...
N: ummm... nai toh... mjhe kia hga... tm lOgon ki batein hi itni achi then k samajh nai arha k mai
kia bolun beech mai... 😊
Mayank ws smiling... n jus luking at her... then starts talkng 2 gunjan while luking at nupur's face...
M: wese gunjan apni dost kO bolo k wo achi lagre hain...! 😉
Nupur starts blushing... but cudnt say anythng...
G: ahem ahem nupurrr sunlia?aj ap achi lagre hain... tmhe pata hai isne pehli baar kisi larki ki tareef kari... kia jadu kardia tmne han :P
N: tm bhi na gunjan... tmhe toh mai baad mai dekhti hn... or apne cousin ko kaho k thanks...😊
Mayank 2 gunjan: nai nai gunjan abhi mat btana.. jab mai ghar chala jaun apne tab hi btana phone kar k
coz mai toh abhi jaise hun hi nai na yahan jO tmari dost ne direct mujhe nai kaha...😛
N: gunjan phir toh tmhe bhi mujhe yeh call pe btana chahie tha k mai achi lagre hn... start tmare cousin ne hi kia tha...
G: ohoo... tm logon ne kia mujhe postwoman bnadia hai...khudi karlo bat n em jus comng thori dair mai...
N: kahan jarhi ho?
G: are jus shower lene... but tm dono batein kro i'll be bck in 15 mins...
N: nai nai andhera hora hai mai chalti hun...! college mai milte hain...
M: han gunjan mai b chalta hun...!
G: chalo theek college mai milte hain...!
nupur leaves first...! mayank is also cming behind her...!
M: nupurrr... nupurrr (running 2wards her, while she is wlkng fstly) arey suno toh baba...
N: oh.. tm... kia hua?
M: are kuch nai hua... aise hi sth sth chalte hain tmara ghr ajaega toh tm chali jana then thora agey
kar k maine car b park ki thi apni...!
N: yeh tm permission lerhe ho sth chalne ki ya batarhe ho k sath chaloge...???
M: ummm... tm kaise maaanogi ?
N: main... hmm permission... (wd cute smile)
M: han toh bas permission lerha hn 😉
N: :)
M: u know tm mujhe bht different lgti ho... u r too good... meri dost banogi?
N: hmm...sochungi....(wd naughty smile)
M: haayyyeee... (ws jus lovng her dat naughty smile) or kitna time lengi madam sochne mai?
N: dekhte hain... jab time mila toh sochlungi 😛 now bye mera ghar agaya...
M: are wah... chalo phr chaii paani nai puchogi??? 😛
N: mayaaankkk....(wd cute fake anger)
M: acha baba jarha hn jarha hn...! (then tlkng 2 himself) kia zamana agaya hai log toh ghar se ultey
paun wapisi kardete hain bandey ki...
nupur ws standing there n watchng him... wd a smile on her face... n wd glowng eyes)

PRECAP:
M: whts this???(wd full anger)
N: kia hua mayank?
M: how cud u do dat... mujhe tmse yeh umeed nai thi...!
nupur ws jus about to cry...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update...
loved it lodsss...
thanks for d pm...
love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part.
i liked mayur conversation.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start
nice updates.
awesome.
continue soon.
plz add me in ur pm list.

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