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Posted: 19 years ago
Suri kya part likha hai 👏 sach maza aagaya 👏
u just rox 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
achcha R.S no thanks.....main bhool gayi thi i shouldn't thank u... 😃
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👏 Suri u rock..woh kya kehtay hai ek dum jhakhas part tha😉
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Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
adi no shukriya for ur comments.... tumhare comments mere liye bohat zaroori hain it motivates me to write the story in a better way........ 😃
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RECAP:Angad invites every1 to his bahbhi's god bhari ceremony. Kripa breaks up with ANGAD.

TODAY"S UPDATE:

Kashish has meanwhile heard every thing… she was in the adjacent changing room trying some dresses… she remembered the time when she had a fight with him

FLASHBACK:
Kashish had been waiting 4 him at the mall… they had to go shopping 4 his brother at it was the 1st time she would meet his brother… she was waiting 4 him 4 about 3hrs… still he had not come… she was trying his cell but it was not reachable… finally she took a taxi home…
She had come home & told Vicky everything… she had told Vicky that she would never talk to him… Vicky had immediately called him up & told him the situation…
From that moment she started receiving messages saying "I AM SORRY" from him… in about an hour she had received about a 100 messages from him… also she had been receiving iliac roses (her favorite) from him every half an hr… he had been calling her but she was not picking up his phone…
Vicky had been trying to cool her down… but no profit… finally he came to the house after 2hrs…
Vicky had asked him to come quietly as he knew Kashish was very angry… Vicky had bought him to Kashish's room & left the house… Kashish was very angry on seeing him… she started throwing all the things she could reach 4 on him…
PERSON: I am sorry I couldn't make it…
KASHISH: u should be…
PERSON: I had to go 4 an assignment…
KASHISH: u could have told me….
PERSON: going out with u just slipped out of my mind…
KASHISH: u know I think I am of no importance in ur life…
PERSON: that's not true… listen… I love u… a lot… I cant imagine myself without u… I promise I will never do that again… please forgive me now…
He gives her a cute looking tedy bear. He held his ears…
KASHISH: its ok 4 now but u will never repeat this again…
PERSON: love u…
KASHISH: love u 2…
FLASHBACK ENDS

It was the day of Godh –bhari… the guys (including Sujal) were the 1st to arrive at Angad's place to give him a hand … while the girls had taken his bhabhi (Kasak) to the beauty parlor…
The guys were wearing Sherwanis…
In the evening the girls came back… they all had Mehandi on their hands…
Gauri comes wearing:



Mukti comes in wearing:



Kashish is wearing:


Kripa is wearing:

The guys cant take their eyes off girls… but the girls pay no attention to them…they stay with Kasak only…
Angad is trying to talk to Kripa but she is paying to attention to him… Kashish notices this & goes to talk to him…
KASHISH: Angad do u love her?
ANGAD: who???
KASHISH: Kripa? Do u love her?
ANGAD: well…
KASHISH: I heard u 2 at the mall that day…
ANGAD: yes I do…
KASHISH: then talk to her…
ANGAD: she doesn't want to see my face…
KASHISH: that's because she is angry with u…
ANGAD: but it is not my fault…
KASHISH: not even her…
ANGAD: but she doesn't trust me…
KASHISH: both of u r at fault 4 this…
ANGAD: but how?
KASHISH: trust is something u built up over a period if time… u have to make her trust u…
ANGAD: but how…
KASHISH: u know she doesn't trust ur flirting habit…
ANGAD: yes that's the problem…
KASHISH: try to change it… it will help u 2 a lot…
ANGAD: do u think it will work…
KASHISH: yes… only if u r sure u love her…
ANGAD: I am +ve…
KASHISH: Angad trust is the basis of all the relationship… if u loose trust in a relationship u loose everything in that relationship… keep it in mind…
ANGAD: thanks…
KASHISH: send her some flowers she will like it…
ANGAD: anything else…
KASHISH: some card with apology… will also be good…
ANGAD: thanks…
KASHISH: u r welcome… now go & talk to her…
Angad goes from the place when Sujal come there… he has been listening everything… he came near her…
SUJAL: it was nice of u to talk to Angad…
KASHISH: I think so no misunderstanding should be there between two people who love…
SUJAL: what about u?
KASHISH: the person whom I loved is no longer with me…
SUJAL: meaning…
Kashish was teary…
KASHISH: leave it… I don't want to talk about it…
SUJAL: ok lets talk some thing else…
KASHISH: like…
SUJAL: like will Angad succeed?
KASHISH: if he loves her truly… and also follows my advice…
SUJAL: I will love to see it…
KASHISH: so let us go & see…

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

kriti very nice part.. 😃 but me sad because no sujal in it.. 😭 aur yeh kya sab ki love stories mein problem chal rahi hain.. ek taraf gauri pratham ko jawaab nahi de rahi hain kahiin pratham sujal aur gauri ke rishthe ko ghalat na samajle.. 🤢 aur dusari aur yeh kripa aur angad ke life ke tension.. 😭 plz in tensions ko solve karo.. 😊
plz continue soon........ 😃


with out any tension in their lives their will be no fan fic.
dont worry, their probs will b solved soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
KYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJHSE
RECAP: cant remember....personal probs piling up
kashish after getting out of the hospital.....goes to her office for a change
KASH- haan toh mr khanna wat abt the US deal.........
KHANNA- maam that deal has made us one of the top enterprises and our financial level has enormously increased......
KASH- gr88 news............thankz mr khanna u may leave and yes plz bring this deal's file
he goes.....and kashish sits on her chair and starts thinking
KASH- jabse main is kursi par baithi hoon tabse pehli baar meri company profit mein hai.....dad ke liye pata nahin but mere liye yeh definatly ek party ki call hai............yipeee haan ek party....hmmmm agle hafteee....yes next week tab tak sujal bhi theek ho jaayega....ek min uski prob toh kuch aur hai....hmmm lets seee wat can he do and wat can i do
meanwhile vroom krish and viz are sitting in the hospital's canteen and vroom is obviously very upset
KRISH- isee kyaa huaa
VIZ(laughs)- devdas bana hua hai....and explains the whole thing...
krish laughss
VROOM- hansloo iske alwa kuch aur aata hai har baat mein mazak
KRISH- ok ok meri baat sun....vroom mujhe lagta hai ki tu pagal ho gaya hai........arre yaar woh dono forest mein gum ho gaye the 1 din ek saath rahe hain aur sujal kashish ke saamne pita tha....toh tujhe kya lagta hai ki woh teri aankhon mein dekhkar romantic baatien karegi......abee naa toh tu usse zyada baat karta hai naa tu uske kareeb jaana chahta hai...jaise use sapne aayenge ki tu usse pyaar karta hai...thodi si akal use karlee
VROOM- oyee main bhi pagal nahi hoon but yaar jis tarah woh uske baare mein baat kar rahi thi i mean kuch toh haii
KRISH- pagalon waali baatien mat kar...yaar hum sab ne un dono ko ek saath dekha hai they hate each other..aur hate naa bhi ho toh inka rishta agar dosti tak bhi pahunch jaaye toh hi kaafi hai un dono ka joh bhi relation hai woh itna week hai ki woh kabhi bhi toot sakta hai dumboo aur phir tu toh aise dikha raha hai ki tu sujal ko jaanta nahin hai.........comeon be an optimistic in life.....aur waise bhi kashish jaisi ladki uski pasand sujal jaisa ladka kabhi nahin ho sakta and that toh u also know.....and if u love kashish go after her get her.....kyuki woh tere paas kabhi nahin aayegi tujhe uske paas jaana hogaa dufferrr.......in love u hav to try till the very end buddy c'mon now cheer up.....
VIZ- kyaa lecture diya hai......kasak se hi sikha hoga woh hi toh hai non stop radio
KRISH- bakwaas mat kar chal sujal ke paas chalte hain bechara akela bore ho raha hoga.....aur hume kose raha hoga
NEXT MORNING.........8am
kashish was still sleeping when her phone rings
KASH- he...llo
SUJAL- kashishhhh abhi tak so rahi ho plzz plzz abhi aur isi waqt hospital aao
KASH- ab kya ho gaya chat gir gayi kyaa
SUJAL- yaar plzz i am serious ok come fast
KASH- lekin yaar pata nahin kyu tumse baat karte waqt yaa tumhe dekhte hi mujhe toh mazaq hi sujta hai
SUJAL- ha haa haa ab tum jaldi aaogi
KASH- ok ok i am coming be patient
kashish reaches the hospital in 2 hrs
and opens the door of sujal's room and sees sujal standing besides a wall
KASH- hmmm main aagayi now wat....and plzz stop standing like a loser
sujal turns back and kashish sits on the sofa and kashish also joins him....after a silence of 3-4 mins kashish asks
KASH- sujal mujhe tumse kuch poochna ha...ii............(and sujal starts talking)
SUJAL- main 19 saal ka tha jab maine drugs lene shuru kiye.......(leans bac on the sofa)mere saare dost lete the aur jab maine pehli baari liye i enjoyed the every bit of that illusion.....us din drugs lene ke baad mujhe itna acha laga ki main dooosri baari ke liye tarsne laga....and slowly slowly i became addicted to drugs......mujhe pata tha ki main apne aap ko ek aise raaste par dhakel raha hoon joh mujhe sirf meri barbaadi ki oor le jaa raha hai par tab bhi.......i didnt stop......kyuki main apni zindagi se is hadd tak frustate ho gaya tha ki mujhe kuch bhi nahin acha lagta tha joh acha lagna chahiye tha woh bhi nahin i became a pessimistic thinker aur drugs lene ki baad ki state was the best kyuki.....kyuki main reality se pare ho jaata tha main is duniya se alag ho jaata tha aur ek apne hi jahan mein kho jaata tha.......i became frustated with myself with the world with everything....i started seeing myself as a wrothless human.....(laughs) maine aajtak yeh baatien kisi se share nahin ki isiliye mujhe samjh nahin aa raha ki kaise kis tarah kin shabdon mein apni zindagi bayaan karun........kashish bas itna samjhlo ki meri zindagi ek andhe kuen ke saaman hai mat kudo.....doob jaaogi.....(pauses and then takes a long breathe)as i said that i became habitual to the illusion....but i became scared of the reality and i didnt want to face it at any time......meri sachai...meri zindagi...koi mujhse pyaar nahin karta.....koi meri parwaah nahin karta aur yeh baatien soch soch kar main ek emotionless insaan mein badal gaya jismein naa hi koi feeling hain naa hi koi zasbaat hain nothingg i am a stone which is accidently corriered down as a homo sapien.......crap
KASH- but tumari family tumhare dost they love u yaar
SUJAL-(smiles) sab ek........ek dikhawaa hai koi bhi mujhe pyaar nahin karta.....mere hone naa hone se kisi ko koi farak nahin padega kisi ki life nahin effect hogi.......bachpann se lekar aajtak mujhe kisi ne samjhne ki koshish nahin ki.........main hamesha hi akela hi reh gaya.....is zindagi mein agar main peeche mud kar dekhunga....toh mujhe koi bhi nahin dikhega.....aur phir maine bhi yeh faisla kar liya jab koi mujhe nahin samjhta jab koi meri parwah nahin karta toh main bhi kisii ki bhi parwah nahin karunga main bhi kisi ki baat nahin sunuga aur apni zindagi apne raahon par chalunga
KASH- aur drugs lunga.....
SUJAL- aise bolna...(interupted by kashish)
KASH- aise bolna bahut aasaan hai lekin agar tum meri jagah hoti tab tum samjhti kashish.........kyu yehi kehna chahte the naa....
SUJAL- haan.....aur yeh baat sahi bhi hai.......meri zindagi...meri duniyaa aisi hai joh door se toh bahut achi lagegi.......lekin jitna paas aaoge tab pata chalega ki narak kya hota hai....i completly agree that heaven and hell are here on the earth.....(deepens his voice and sees kashish with determined eyes) my life is heaven when i take drugs and as soon as i come to reality that same heaven becomes hell.......meri zindagi ek dikhawa hai.....asli sujal ko toh kisi ne dekha hi nahin hai aur na hi kisi ne dekhne ki koshish ki sirf tumahre woh bhi isiliye kyuki maine hi tumhe sab kuch batayaa........
there was a silense for a min or so
KASH- sujal i know ki main tumhari zindagi ko us tarah nahin dekh sakti jis tarah tum dekhte ho....aur main yeh nahin kahungi ki tumhe doosron ki sunani chahiye apne raaston par chalo no probs main bhi wohi karti hun but sujal raaste wohi banao joh tumhe kahin le jaaye....woh nahin joh tumhe kahin ka naa chode....us jannat ka kya faida joh asli naa ho aur tum yeh khud jaante ho ki that is all illusion....that is not permenent.....(pauses) sujal drugs choddo (and sujal looks at her as to clearify wat he juzz heard) yes leave them i know that is a way too difficult....but u hav to....
SUJAL- nahin i hav walked soo far from this world that ab main chahkar bhi wapas nahin jaa sakta
KASH- look !! i dont know how to loose aur agar tumne drugs nahin chode toh woh meri defeat hogi aur yeh main bardaasht nahin kar sakti ok.....u have to leave them
sujal was abt to get up from the sofa in order to show his refusal on the whole matter but kashish holds his hand and make him sit down
KASH- (smiles) sujal u are not being yourself....apni reality face karo...tumhe yeh life mili jeene ke liye.......tumhe yeh life bhagwan ne di ise ache kaamon mein zayar karo aise drugs lekar yaa mar mar ke jikar us creator ki insult toh mat karo....ek dost ke naate main tumhe kisi bhi cheez par relible nahin dekh sakti...is duniya is life ko apni ankhon se dekho......drugs toh 80% log lete hain toh kya sujal grewal the rockstar bhi un 80% logon mein se ek banna chahega.....apni raah banao jin par doosre chalen doosron ki raah par mat chaloo............sujal tumhe log kyu pasand karte hain kyuki tum unique ho....tum koi copy cat nahin ho.....that is why they love you they like to see you.....they want to become like u........isiliye personal life mein bhi unique bano.....dont be a stupid copy cat...
SUJAL(irritated)- cat mat bolo i hate them mujhe unse allergy hai
KASH- ok fine!!!!
she was abt to say something but sees sujal's confused face and takes a long breathe
KASH- huh !! main chalti hoon main bhi deewar par sar maar rahi hoon byee
and she gets up.....but suja holds her hand and makes her sit down besides him....and looks at her
SUJAL- but kashish mujhe darr lagta hai
KASH- jeene se !!
SUJAL- nahin drugs chodne se i mean........unke bina kahin main jee paunga bhi yaa nahin
KASH- joh cheez tumne ab tak ki hi nahin hai........usse tume dar kaise lag sakta hai....tumhe pata hai ki ek chote se bache ko apna haath aag mein daalne se darr nahin lagega kyuki woh nahin jaata ki aag use jala degi.......its only then when ppl tell him that fire will burn him he realizes that..........sujal tume try toh karna hi hoga joh cheez tumne ab tak ari hi nahin hai how can u be afraid of that
sujal makes a thinking expression
SUJAL- bolte hue toh bahut bura lag raha hai but i think u r ri....r....ritee...
KASH- hmm kitna difficult tha naa woh bolna newayz matlab
SUJAL(smiles)- i'll try
kashish smiles and keeps her hand on sujal's hand
KASH- thats terrific
SUJAL- but itna aasaan nahin hoga....i wud say it is impossible
KASH- but even impossible say I M POSSIBLE
SUJAL- tumse koi nahi jeet sakta buttt
SUJAL- ek prob hai
KASH- kyaa
SUJAL- 2cr 75lacs
KASH- not a prob kab dena chahoge
SUJAL- aaj hi aaj raat ko mujhe bilkul theek lag raha hai aaj raat 10 baje but paise kahan hai
KASH- haan woh i will give
SUJAL- but why ??
KASH- ohh juzz shut up tumara top floor khali hai kyaa
KASH- and i'll come around 9pm ok
SUJAL- thankz yaar tumne meri kaafi probs solve kar di....i am really thankful to u
KASH- dont be.........oh god i have to rush.....
SUJAL- kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
KASH- becoz sweety i have to eat my breakfast also and meri ek bahut imp meeting hai........tumahri tarah main bimaar toh hoon nahin ok byeee and take care
SUJAL- byee....
kashish comes out and sees prerna prem kripa kasak and vroom.....and she collides with prem
KASH- oh good morning prem (and then sees others and is a bit embarrased) good morning...ahh...everybody
PRERNA- beta tum yahan..........
PREM- woh bhi itni subhah subhah
KASAK- yeh toh aapke sone ka waqt hai
KRIPA- waise aap yahan kya kar rahi hai
KASH- yeh aap aap kya hai.....
PREM- well aap itni bewakoof nahin hain ki aap samjh naa paaye
KASH- main nahin tum sab kuch zyada hi samjh rahe ho.....and aunty main yahan sujal se milne aayi thi
KRIPA- itni subhah subhah chooo chhweeeeettt
PREM- toh ab aap jaa kyu rahi hain hum hi chale jaate hain
KASAK- haan agar aap unke saath hain toh phir hamari kya zaroorat hai
KASH- kooooi zaroorat nahin hai lekin lekin aapke bhaiya wahan ek bhooke sher ki tarah beithe hain toh woh mujhe toh nahin khayenge naa.....tum dono apna mun band karo aur andar jao byeeee
VROOM- hi kashish
kashish turns left and see vroom with a big smile on his face
KASH- hiiii vroom itneeee khush kyu nazar aa rahe ho
and every1 goes inside except vroom
VROOM- bas aise hi....newayz tum jaa rahi thi
KASH- yeah (and they both start walking towards the exit)
KASH- actually office mein for a change mujhe kuch kaam karne ka mann kar raha hai
VROOM- toh chalo main chod dunga
KASH- ok
VROOM- haan tumhari car prem ghar mein pahuncha dega
KASH- fine
they both sit in the car and vroom starts driving.....and kashish's cell rings
KASH- hello
PERSONAL ASISSTANT- maam
KASH- yeah bolo
PA- maam party kaunse hotel mei deni hai.......u decide the venue
KASH- hmmm hey vroom do u know ne cool hotel for partying
VROOM- yeah hotel park
KASH- ok hello.....hotel park........1 min vroom woh toh tumahra hotel hai na
VROOM- haan wahi de do party
KASH- thats gr88
PA- soo maam hotel park
KASH- yeah....bye
KASH- thankz yaar u r a darling.....
VROOM- nething....for u newayz yelo tumahra office aa gaya
KASH- ohh byeee see yaa

finally posted....wrote it in gr888 haste...
HEREZ THE NEXT PART.....HOPE U LIKED IT....PLZZZ PLZZZ COMMENT....DO COMMENT
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Posted: 19 years ago
kirti a very good part.. 👏 kashish ne angad ko kitne achche se samjhaya then the talk between sujal & kashish was soooo sweettttttttt.......... 😳
plz continue soonnnn......... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks kriti for ur comments...... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
surbhi dear no thanku ki tumne tumhari story post kar dii.. 😃 dear main tujhse ek baat boloon tu apna har ek part haste mein likha kar wah yaar tu toh bikul mast zabardast parts likhthi hain... 😆 i liked the part very much sujal ne pehli baar dil khol ke dil ki baatein kashish se share ki kashish ne bhi kitne pyaare se tarike se sujal ko samjhaya sooooooooo sweetttttttttt... 😳 ab yeh vroom itna kyun khush hain koi baat nahi uski khushi bohat jald cheen jayegi.. 😊 😛 😃 kyunke kashish party mein sujal ki date hi tho banegi na..... mazaa aayega jab vroom sujal kashish ko saath dekhkhar jalega.......... 😆
ab chal jaldi se continue kar de..... 😛
love u chotu dumbo........ 😳 😳

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